RaYa SS : Destined to Marry *PART-13 on PAGE-137 on PREVIW ON PAGE-145 - Page 50

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the pm neel.
doc kitne twist n kaisa duadati ho apna dimag, priya feeling him as papa 😆 she felt secured being in his arms, so onestep Iin the battle is won, the major one. Twist twist lolz and the scene creation was just fab, getting up n syaring her hubby, n the MS entangled with his kurta button its like characters acting alive.
ram kapoor toh apni vpbiwi se hi flirt karsakta hai na 😉 priya is not less she is flirting him too 😆 beautifully projected, priya'scondition while the senior doc was advising her to behave prpperly with him so funny n beautiful, bechara raya k beech fasgya 😆

hui na shuru ladkiyoan ki gossiping, priya getting uncomfortable girls praising his looks , awww priya is surely a kiddo who doesn't know whi ram kapoor us n got surprised to know that he owns phace hospitals.

I loved the whole convo of amarnathji n all family members reaction, n amarji was wondering howcome every other person is against his views, superb loved it n I can visualize each ones expression here lovely scene.


Thank you so much for the lovely comment ..
haha twist oe twist achha hai na
haha priya felt its her papa 😆 .. aww glad that you imagined the scenes ..

Ram kapoor can flirt with his biwi and priya also can blush seeing his flirt ..
And girls gossiping pucho math .lol eveytime someone or other has to face this..
haha priya didnt knw about Ram much and confused while saying to freinds..

Thank you so much will try to update soon ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
PREVIEW

Priya's curiosity increased ON Ram and his whereabouts she isn't able to understanding her feelings towards him .at the same time she wants to know so much about him , when ever she listens about himfrom Reetha , she so wanted to see him in that raging avatar in the hospital .

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Jayesh: priya , her BP Is fluctuating .You tell her to take some rest don't take much stress .

Priya : what is this aunty , you should take care of yourself na .

Mrs.Bhandari : when my both kids are not there in this world what I should do priya by taking care of myself .

Priya went numb for sometime she don't know what to speak further .

Jayesh : Priya , I told them to go and visit "Balanand " for sometime , so they could feel better

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She muttered under her breath , I m teling sorry phir bhi he is showing his attitude .

"I heard it " Ram growled

"Thanks for your ears for hearing it " saying this she bites her tongue and ran off to washroom , she took bath , wore a silky simple kurthi , she glanced at Ram once who was deeply involved in his work . she escaped from the room to kitchen room .

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Ram: a slight sly smile played on his lips , That's like my girl so you know why im angry , but I can't accept your sorry I want more than this .

She baffeled asked him "means "

Showing his forehead I want a kiss here ... He held his hair back with his hand .

She gasped , You are so shameless, and sorry you are not going to get what you wanted

Ram :than im not coming for dinner

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What the hell you are trying to do >?? Oh god how di teased us , and you are enjoying it na , she was pushing him back saying all these .Ram held her hand pausing her attack on his chest , he inched her to him , Priya felt breathless by his presence , His lips merely maintain the gap between her cheek ,he whispered in her ears


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Oh My Priya ..So love is blossoming in you ,, I will wait until you fall in headover heels love with Ram than I can take sweet revenge on you .. Hearing his laugh the trees shivered .

He dialled a number , Hello bosss .. what are you doing , Soon Im going to plan Priya's murder too , what about the Money

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww...

What a preview yaar.. superb simply superb..
So Kiddo aka Priya 😉 is developing feelings on Ram.. she wanna see him raging avatar kya. he he.. she wil soon get to see all his avatars I hope.. 😉😆
And how he was teasing her..so he is angry wid her.. hmmm
and madam is pleading him to have dinner and he is showing his antics.. interesting turn out of their relation..
Nih's teasing really was funny.. Even Nih is teasing RaYa where as original Nih taunts RaYa..
Uff.. Sruthi's mom.. 😭 she lost her boh kids.. I can undrstand her condition..
Nad what was that last para.. sweet revenge?? So he knows every daily routine of Priya?? Who the h**l is he.. It was scary yaar..
So now want an update asap darling..
Edited by armanz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg what a prew
Romantic and suspense
Ufff
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb preview. romance alongwith threat to priyas life. pl priya ko kuch hone mat dena. continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
My god.. loved d story so far. . How well u r writing.. awesome wrk... keep going. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god... Threat for priya's life...
Romance bhi hai aur thriller bhi hai... Nice preview...
Please continue soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Alag preview it was plsss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome preview. My heart beats are racing up. Now want update asap plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update dii!!
Plzz continue soon!!
WAITING!!!

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