RaYa OS: Being With you Part - 2 on page 8 24-9-2014 - Page 8

Fantastic... it was mindblowing chapter... Ram and Priya were oozing with romance and love. Peehu was really cute. Her demand for a new sibling was really awww. Even I also think that why CV showed him not to get succeeded in his small business in Jaipur. Infact I eas expecting him to take over Kapoor Industries and show Ayesha and her team that no matter how much he lost but he still has that power to get it back as Ayesha took the business from him not his brain. But alas CV really ruined it.

awesome update

Originally posted by: armanz

Howw beautiful the first part was.. Loved it to bits.. Jut waiting for second part and dont want that part to be sad or something.. So make him succeed in this deal and let them start their life afresh with success and happiness without any adjustments.
Haan Ram Ka bday hain aaj.. dint wish him till now.
Your Os was one perfect way to dedicate for his bday and you have done a perfect job. I loved reading the Os and the way Peehu was eating out everyday and happily reminding her what she ate the previous days was so fun. But meri beti aise karegi toh I will go beserk I think. 😆
And Oh my you wrote romance even like this kya..bacchi hain yaar next room mein.. be careful 😆
I am very much missing SMH. Thanks for giving atleast this Os.
Huggsss tight wali to Giri for writing even in busy and Neel for updating haan dedication list mein mera naam nahi hain phir bhi thanks a tonne.

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

SORRY DI couldnt reply pms but have read all ur updates👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

continue soon and thanks 4 pms

Originally posted by: priyajan12

Cuteee but so chotu sa update

Originally posted by: jodude

short n sweet OS

waiting for the next part..

continue soon..

thnks for the pm...😊

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Aww Before Ram come to Room, Priya leaves so sad
But Ram is always brilliant, He called her
They have some beautiful private moments 😉
At last Ram allowed to go 😆
Very beautiful Father & Daughter scenes 👏
Sweet Name " her "Pumpkins "
Ram & Priya sacrifice lots & living very happy life
You written very well those scenes

This love dialogues & Scenes very much " "I know Mr.Kapoor you cannot refuse your darling daughter , but what is this today pani puri, yesterday vadapav the day before yesterday chicken noodles and the day before ...[as Priya forgot what they both ate ]
Peehu quipped in saying "gobi manchuria ""Peehu .. Hug karo papa , our manao mamma ko .. "
""aapko kya , mere hubby mujhe hug kiya toh " "Peehu: Hug karo ya kiss karo"
"Yes we are not pumpkins" "If anyone or anything looks like Golu we can tease them calling pumpkin , showing with her hands round round "

Wow! what a scenes!! lots of teasing & fun, Tom& Jerry Fight. This is i expect from you Giri. Thank u Thank u 🤗

Before dinner scenes are very romantic 😳

Beautiful Dinning table scenes

" "my dear husband , I think you have forgotten that I had bear your torture and the proof is sleeping now" indicating Peehu's room." 😳😳

" ummm delicious Ram, thank you so much , you know I'm soo missing this , but I forgot myself in work wasn't able to ask you and I love you for this" 😳😳😳

Last All scenes are fully of RaYa magical 😃

I love this OS ❤️

Totally Mind-blowing & I am jumping in the joy

Please please continue soon Giri

Thanks Neel Baby 😊🤗

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

continue soon
thnks fr pm

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Thank u so much Giri For accept my request & Given a beautiful OS. I am saying thank u from my bottom of my heart 🤗

Rosi di [Jaipur track ,hope you love it the way i have written , and your wish got fulfilled ]

Yes i really love the way you written the OS & you fulfilled my wish. Thank u & Love u 🤗

Special thanks to My Darling, My Love & My Sweet Heart Neel 🤗❤️


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Beautiful & lovely Staring scenes
Ram is running Small business
Priya is working & taking tutions to kids
Aww Ram forgot his pain when he remember Priya & Peehu's Smile
Wow! Ram got big deal & want to discuss with Priya about Peehu's birthday Plan, Lovely
I love Ram & Peehu scenes very much
Totally Short & Very Very Awesome OS👏
Please continue soon
Thanks for the PM😊