If You Were to be the storywriter......

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OIT6kBTFzAQ[/youtube]

Guys, I have a question for you all...
Just imagine that you were given a chance to change the story from the lift scene onwards in this episode...

1)What would you change & why?

Waiting for your replies...😊


Btw if you guys want you can even frame a story starting from the point where the lift gets struck...

Why is the video not to be seen?😕, anyways...

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OIT6kBTFzAQ[/youtube]


If i were allowed to change the story then what i would do is this, jokes apart...

When Ram starts hyperventilating & Priya tries to wipe the sweat beads on his forehead with her pallu then Ram should have grabbed it & pulled her closer, then he should have told her he is very angry on her coz she didn't offer him her world famous parantha...but since she didn't do that, she will have to pay the penalty i.e, She should kiss him right here right now in the lift & then he will listen to her reason for objecting to Sammy & Pihu's wedding...

He also says ki he too feels that they are acting as the perfect couple, which they actually aren't...

Good imagination by you
hope they should have shown like this only in Balh

Both hug...

Originally posted by: zeenathsheikh8

Both hug...

Then Ram complaines that though Priya had promised she will never leave him ever...she broke her promise. He apologizes & says he tried many times to call her & ask her haal chaal but his ego didn't allow him to do so...

Priya apologizes too saying even her ego had clouded her thinking.She says she didn't want to see her daughter face the consequences of her one sided paagalpan...which she assumes to be love. She shows the video of Sammy & Pihu fighting at the travel agent office...

Ram says his daughter, who he trusted more than anyone has betrayed his trust & also seperated her own parents. He apologizes to her saying that always he supports the wrong people & ends up getting hurt himself.Priya's eyes are brimming with tears...

But Ram says what if she tries to commit suicide again if i confront her about this? Priya says their daughter is being misguided by someone...She says she doubts Juhi. Ram says i will look into this matter personally & if i find out that it really is Juhi then Juhi will regret the day she walked into my house...he tells her to come home but Priya denies saying it will be unfair to Suhaani & Khush.

Ram says i will see to everything perfectly madam & pulls her closer to himself, nuzzling her neck. Priya blushes & stammers Mr.Kapoor koi dekhlega...😳, Ram asks her whether she has a problem with him doing anything or with someone coming...suddenly the lift gives a jerk & starts working again. Both heave a sigh of relief & in their hearts thank the lift for clearing the misunderstandings between them😳😆😉

Ram tells Priya he will call her & asks her to wait for his call, Priya smiles & leaves😳

Originally posted by: OrangeBlossoms

Why is the video not to be seen?😕, anyways...

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OIT6kBTFzAQ[/youtube]


If i were allowed to change the story then what i would do is this, jokes apart...

When Ram starts hyperventilating & Priya tries to wipe the sweat beads on his forehead with her pallu then Ram should have grabbed it & pulled her closer, then he should have told her he is very angry on her coz she didn't offer him her world famous parantha...but since she didn't do that, she will have to pay the penalty i.e, She should kiss him right here right now in the lift & then he will listen to her reason for objecting to Sammy & Pihu's wedding...

He also says ki he too feels that they are acting as the perfect couple, which they actually aren't...

Originally posted by: RaShi4ever

Wow Zeenath!! What an imagination!!

You should certainly write some more stories[& complete your ongoing stories😉] jokes apart, i know you are busy with your course but please swalpa samaya namgu kodi...namge entertain maadi, neevu swalpa studies inda break tagoli...😉.

Yen heltira?

Yenaamma, ille kannadadalli shuru aagbittidiya??You were feeling very shy na?anyways good!!

Orange n.zeenath too gud yar
Kannada'?
I only know one word NODI

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

Orange n.zeenath too gud yar
Kannada'?
I only know one word NODI

😆 yup!! The three of us are kannadigaas na...

Originally posted by: OrangeBlossoms

😆 yup!! The three of us are kannadigaas na...

& thanks:-)

I was telling zeenath she should write more frequently..& shd also complete her ongoing stories, par woh hai ki likhne se katrati hai...😡

haan, how much ever we force she just doesn't listen!! Just had a chat with her now...she was saying ki she will definitely complete all the stories but needs some time as she's busy with her course & assignments...