OS - Is it ever too late? last part pg5 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

50

Views

11.9k

Users

18

Likes

167

Frequent Posters

LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#31
You have written very good
Edited by aanchaltulshan - 11 years ago
DiehardRaYafan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


Ahhh
as i guessed they are wife and hubby only
Loved the whole concept
so they ended up their way leads to pinnacle of their satifaction
Its just fantastic the way you brought up the reality of Ram
yes we have to live the moments ..

P.s:I too love that song .. 😉Its one of my fav


Thanks for commenting! I wouldn't dream of separating our RaYa😉 writing this short story was an extremely awesome experience as I had to step out of my comfort zone. Now I have tremendous respect for all the wonderful writers here who try to keep us entertained with their imagination👏
DiehardRaYafan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Thank you😳
DiehardRaYafan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

The brushes of skin iginite the fire within them which ended with the kisses and lead to a romantic nite in which they are completing themselves.
Ram and Priya was lost in their dreamland of passion.
Till the end their was suspense till Ram said Priya and comes to the reality that he want to spend each moment with his family his wife Priya and his little girl Pihu...


Thanks for your lovely comments! Even though it was pretty obvious that RaYa were husband and wife...I am glad that I was able to keep some level of suspense😃
DiehardRaYafan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Thanks for reading and commenting!😃
DiehardRaYafan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Happy ending.

Finally Ram realized what he want in life and priya is so happy by his decision.
Life is not about just earning money, making name , fame but to cherish and enjoy what god has given to us with our loved ones. At the end of the day these bring smile on our face nothing else.

Truly fabulous writing, enjoyed thoroughly.

Yes, I truly believe in spending time with the family too. We can live with spending or making a little less but our true happiness comes from the ones we love😃
jodude thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#37
very nice OS...
pls write more...
thnks for the pm...😊
LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#38
do continue writing the awewome stories on Raya
Edited by aanchaltulshan - 11 years ago
LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#39
i loved every bit of the story
Edited by aanchaltulshan - 11 years ago
LovingRaYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan



Thanks for your lovely comments! Even though it was pretty obvious that RaYa were husband and wife...I am glad that I was able to keep some level of suspense😃


Yeah it was pretty obvious
but you have presented the story with so much suspense that it seems both Raya are unknow to each other and living separate life with their family

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".