RaYa FF P12: Addictedly Yours (by Sampa, Shipcy n TheFatWritr) on Pg29 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellently penned down girls!
The way you weave scenes around simple, every-day situations is amazing! I really love how your Ram & Priya act - opinionated but sensitive, still discovering love yet straightforward.
Please continue soon. Really want to know how they explore their relationship ahead.
Cheers!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very Beautiful Update
I loved it
Very well written
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was so right Ram came to meet Priya for Nuts Kartik marriage and with patience he explained her all the three points and happy that without saying anything she herself said that she ready for the marriage of her and Ram. Shipra is really a DQ but Sudhirji was seems very calm person...
Priya was super angry with him about the dukhiram thing but soon forgave him also aww they still didn't say that they love each other but can understand the feelings. Continue soon and thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
another beautiful update Girls
cheers to you

i loved their sweet unknowing confession from both of them 😉

loved the "DukhiRam " confession ..

waiting for more
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the chapters are very well written. Just loved the story.
Pl. continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok noe getting interested update by udpate
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Edited by bpatil3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi friends...thanku so much for your encouragement...your likes and comemnts...buht accha laga wo sab pdke. 👏

Here is the next part...hope ye bhi accha lage apko...pls read and let us know 😊

Part 9:

It was 9.30PM. Priya was getting ready to wind up the memorable day. Utne me call

aaya. Obviously Ram ka hi tha...

Priya smiled: "Soye nahi aap?"

Ram smiled back: "Soya hun ya jag raha hun, ab farq nahi pdega"

Priya giggled: "Matlab?"

Ram: "Matlab jab jaagta hun to aapka khayal...aur so jau to aapke sapne."

Priya laghed: "Pata nahi tha ki Ram Kapoor itni filmy baatein karte hain."

Ram: "hahaha...hmm jo hua hamare beech wo bhi filmy type hi hai na! Kisne socha

tha ki school donation ke chakkar me jeevansathi milega?"

Priya blushed...after a brief silence

she spoke: "Dekhiye...abhi to na apke ghar me kuch pata hai na mere ghar me. To

please... abhi se aise baatein karna..."

Ram smiled: "I see...actually mere ghar walon ke taraf se ye rishta pakka

samjhiye. Aur apke parents ko bhi ladka pasand aaya hoga...aakhir mujme kya kami

hai?"

Priya teased: "Theek kaha aapne...kami kaha hai...wazan se lekar aapke pas sab kuch

zyada hi to hai"

Ram made a face: "Aye mota mat kaho mujhe!!"

Priya laughed and then spoke: "Phone kyu kiya?"

Ram: "Buht kuch puchna tha aur kuch kehna bhi tha."

Priya: "Kya?"

Ram: "First of all mae aapko kese bulau...I mean..."

Priya smiled: "Priya kahiye. And singular should do...aap' nahi...'tum'"

Ram: "Thanks Priya!"

Priya felt nice to hear him say her name with so much fondness...wo muskurayi.

Ram: "Tum bhi mujhe kuch b bula sakte ho ...as you please...and singular b

chalega."

Priya smiled: "Polar bear bulau to chalega?"

Ram frowned: "Fir se mota kaha mujhe!!!"

Priya giggled: "Mota kab kaha...chaliye ye chodiye. Aur kya kehna tha apko?"

Ram: "Mae kal parso me bta dunga ghar me. Choti ki bhi aur hamara b."

Priya: "Hmm mae bhi sochti hunk i kab batana theek hoga maa-papa se."

Ram: "Jaldi soch lijiye madam...wese bhi hum dono ne buht saal ganwa diye hain

akele reh kar."

Priya ne jhat se jawab de diya: "But it was worth the wait. Aap mile na"...kehne

ke baad usko buht sharam aa rahi thi...apne haathon se chehra chupa liya and she

bit her tongue, realizing what she said..

Ram was delighted: "Arre wah tareef!! Fir se bolo...please say that again..."

Priya couldn't say anything. Ram hanse jaa raha tha uski baat par.

Priya smiled: "Bas kijiye...glti se kuch nikl gaya muh se."

Ram: "Hmm ok no problem. By the way tumne apne maa se meri tareef me kya kaha

us din? Aaj aunty bol rahe the na ki you praised me!"

Priya blushed: "Maine tareef nahi ki. Maa ne to bas aise hi bol diya apko."

Priya thoda bhaaw khane lagi: "Zyada kuch nahi...bas yahi ki aap theek-thaak

lagte hai."

Ram smiled: "Sir theek-thaak?"

Priya also smiled: "I mean...acche lagte hai"

Ram grinned more: "Sirf accha?"

Priya shied: "Bade...bade acche lagte hai."

Ram could not cut the smile and Priya could not speak a word more. There was a

long silence.

Priya broke the silence and smiled: "Good night"

Ram: "Ek minute ek minute...Priya..." (there was a silence, so Ram knew she was

still on the line)

Ram: "Tumne pucha nahi ki mujhe tum kesi lagti ho.."

Priya smiled: "Mujhe nahi puchna. Abhi sona hai, subah college hai."

Ram: "Hmm to kal sham mile after

your college?"

Priya was uncomfortable: "Nahiii nahi...please...students dekhenge, colleagues bhi

sath me honge..."

Ram took a deep breath: "Oh haan I dint realize."

Priya: "Haan pata chal raha hai par

aapko sochna padega. Aapke status, apke larger-than-life public image...actually

ye sab sochu to mujhe darr lagta hai ki kahi aap jaldbazi me galat decision

nahi le rahe hai. I am...I really am a nobody compared to you...

Ram cut her off: "Wait. Tumhe aise

kyu lag raha hai ki maene galat faisla liya hai? Are jaldbazi me mae koi kaam

nahi karta. Im damn sure you are my lady...my instincts say so, my thoughts are aligned

with my instincts...aur mera dil bhi tumhi ka ho gaya hai. Raha mere status ki

baat... all these years I spent polishing my public image. Luclily everyone has trusted

and appreciated my choices and decisions so far. Ab dekhna...sab they will like

this choice too." And smiled.

Priya heard out each syllable with thorough attention. The words touched her

heart and her soul...even as she was staring at her nails, her mind lost in his

words, his thoughts, in him.

Priya smiled: "Hmm..thanks a lot."

Ram broke the silence after a long

gap and smiled: "Tum kuch nahi kahogi"

Priya smiled: "Ab so jayiye. Good

night."

Ram: "Aree yaar...ye to tumne ab tak

4 baar kaha hai...mujhe ye nahi sun na ab..."

Priya asked him naughtily: "To..to kya sun na h apko?"

Ram smiled: "Ek baar bata do na...kya

tum bhi mujse shadi karogi...mae sach me pasand aaya hun? Can we be couples?"

Priya started playing with the pillow with her left hand: "Is waqt itne sare

sawal nahi puchte. Bye."

Ram pleaded like a kid: "Don't be a spoilsport...btaooo naaa"

Priya: "Nahi mtlab nahi...jo karna hai kijiye."

Ram: "Don't dare me...waha aa jaunga."

Priya smiled: "Rehne dijiye. Wese bhi pata nahi 5 floors chad kar utarne k wjh

se aapne kitne tablets liye honge ghar jaakr. Ab subah tak bistar se bhi bahar

nahi niklenge aap. Ab finally bye, good night, sleep well." and she cut the

call.

Ram muskuraate huwe phone ko dekh raha tha. Priya sone ki koshish kar rahi

thi...sirf koshish thi, par neend kese aati! Karwat badalti rahi. Utne me Karthik

ghar aaya. Priya ko pata tha ki wo dinner date ke baad aaya. He was passing by

her room...

Priya: "Sunn..usko safely ghar tak chod kr aaya na?"

Karthik did not even think before he spoke: "Haan di uske ghar ke andar jaane

tak wait krke fir aaya hun"

Suddenly Karthik realized what he

said...he was shocked...how did she know!!

Karthik: "Di!!"

Priya smiled: "Kal baat karte hai.

Aur haan don't worry ma-papa ko kuch pata nahi h. Sirf mujhe pata hai Natasha

ki baat. Ab jao so jao." And she turned off the lights. Karthik stood there for

a few minutes, usko pata nahi chal raha tha kya bole...fir chala gaya.

It was around 11:10 PM. Priya ki

mobile bajne laga. She was not asleep to call li.

Priya was shocked: "Aap...fir se?"

Ram: "Hmm karna pada. Tumhe sone nahi de sakta na...jab tak wo nahi kahogi jo mae

sun na chahta hun..."

Priya: "Sharam kijiye... ghar me sab so rahe hai. Mae baat nahi kar skti."

Ram smiled: "Tum soyi nahi thi na. And I know aaj neend nahi ayegi itni jaldi."

Priya: "Mae bhi sone hi lagi thi. Aur ab phone switch off kar rahi hun."

Ram smiled: "Ok ok, phone off karo par apne apartment ki lift On karwado."

Priya sprang up from her bed: "Matlab?!!" and she went and peeped outside the

room's window. His car was right in front of it, with parking lights blinking.

Priya panicked: "My God, yaha tak a gaye! Pagal ho gaye hai aap! Please chale

jayiye warna koi dekh lega."

Ram smiled: "Kyu appki road apki private property hai kya? Aur haan..mae 5 tak

ginunga...utne me bol do...warna seedha ghar aa jaunga."

Priya: "Ye kya bachpana hai...just leave from here."

Ram: "ONE"

Priya was adamant: "Zabardasti hai kya!"

Ram: "TWO"

Priya: "We are not teenagers jo aap

aise bachpana kare mere saath.."

Ram: "THREE"

Priya: "Aap samaj kyu nahi rahe hai...koi

dekh lega to kya sochenga?"

Ram: "FOUR"

Now Priya got scared. She knew that he was getting adamant. If he came all the

way home, it was not a big deal for him to come upstairs. She had to stop him.

Priya fumbled: "Rukiye...aap..aap please ginti band kijiye...aur...aur upar mat

aayiye...mae keh dungi."

Ram smiled: "How sweet, ye hui na baat! Pehle baeth jao. Paani piyo...fir araam

se baat karo. Don't worry mae nahi aaunga upar... I promise "

Priya felt better. She obeyed him like a child! Wo pagal zarur laga, par Priya

samaj gayi thi ki aakhir usko itna sataakr isne theek nahi kiya...tabhi Ram ko

aana pada ghar tak.

Priya took the phone and spoke in a low but confident voice: "Mujhe thodi der

pehle tak shaq tha aur darr tha ki aapko mae suit nahi karti... par aapne mere shaq

aur darr ko duur kar diya. To ab mujhe bhi koi etraaz nahi hai aapse shaadi

krne me, Ram. I feel we were destined for each other, isi liye itne saal

intezaar bhi karna pada...hope hamare ghar wale maan jaye hamare rishte ko bhi...aur

Karthik-Natasha ke bhi." Saying so, she cut the call.

Ram was so thrilled. Uska naam first

time liya tha Priya ne...aur uski awaaz me itna mithas tha...Ram to kho gaya tha

kuch pal le liye. But she had already cut the call so he couldn't say anything

to her. Par buht khush tha. Priya felt shy, she was smiling now...yet she

felt awkward...she was simply staring at the phone, sitting on her bed.

After 2 mins, Priya ko ek SMS aaya. She guessed it was from Ram. Usko padte hi

Priya ko shock hua ..."What!! I don't believe this!" was her reaction. She went

again and looked outside the window. The car was still there. She immediately

called up Ram.

Ram took the call and laughed. Priya: "Stop laughing. Aap kaha hai abhi?"

Ram: "Bistar par"

Priya: "Yaha car me kon hai?"

Ram smiled: "Sirf mera driver hai. Night shift me kaam karta hai ...to usko bhej

diya tha bas".

Priya: "Not fair. Aapne jhoot bola ki aap yaha aye hai, fir daraya ki upar aa jayenge..aur...aur

zabardasti bulwaya".

Ram smiled: "All is fair in love and war."

Priya: "Baat mat kijiye mujse. Im angry. I hate you."

Ram ko pata chal gaya tha ki mann hi mann Priya ko accha laga uska drama. He

slowly said: "But I love you!"

Hearing that, Priya's heart melted. Priya: "Sacchi?"

Ram smiled back: "Sacchi mucchi" and cut the call.

<To be continued, comments please> 😛

Thanks,

-Sampa, shipcy n arti

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Posted: 11 years ago
woow..!! superb update...👏
ram charctr is too good yaar..!! i like it..
hahaha...priya was shocked...😆
continue soon..
thnks for the pm..😊
Edited by jodude - 11 years ago
rosinagoor thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful Update
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb n ram's trick worked 👏👏👍🏼

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