SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016 - Page 66

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Posted: 11 years ago
Another superb update...
u r awesome...the way u penned down RAM's emotion is oo good..
but missing RAYA's convo..as not so much

waitng for the next..
thank u di for ur pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg...neha is tooo bubly..girl...hahaha..lols...age jake wahi sab kuch karne wala hai.was rofl...baap re...sooo...amazing... update...sometimes... those three magical words r not necessary to confess...different words...n feelings...themselves... confess there heart...but those words r imp...plzz..nxt part abhi agar possible ho to...cnt wait...n it was unexpected... thnks for pm...so lovely nice of u...plzz asap...awesome update.lol again
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

awesm part

Loved Rk dialouge :

Aap ek VIP ke baarein mein soch rahe hain..agar main chala jaaon toh guess how many VVIPs you will lose.

plz update soon


Thank you so much.
Haan that is RK..the MD cant afford losing him.
Updated.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Pleasure is mine.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

HI di😊

I am super late😆i have finished reading all parts at once😛
wow such a lovely story⭐️
neha's radhe shayam halwayi boyfriend🤣for moments i though kya sach mai Neha loves halwayi😆kyunki she acted so calm when priya mentioned about vikram😆
"haddiyon ka doctor"🤣usually people docs that way "aankh ka doctor, dil ka doctor"😆
so it was Neha's n Priya's brain behind all this😛kya planning ki😉
but Priya ne bhi Neha ko accha phansaya with "radhe shyam"😆
aapne aaki story k villain naam se do akshar kam kardiye "at"😉sirf Raj rakha naam😆and i liked it😛
ram jealous of vikram😲vikram se bhi jealous feel kiya🤣kitne questions puche vikram ko
raya scenes were superb, pehli meeting mai hi priya ko suna diya that too without knowing the facts aur phir zabardasti maafi mangi, i mean priya was not ready to listen but ram ne forcefully sorry kaha😆

Natasha is priya's nuts n ram's choti😛liked the lunch date😊
ram was thinking about his chicken😆kaise banayegi priya chicken😆
i guess Raj ka role abhi khatam nhi hua😕dhamki di hai na usne toh may be😕
thank you for the pms😃
and sorry as aap mere buddy list mai nhi hai toh aapko bht problrm huyi hogi pm karne mai😊
and thank you for all the medical terms, now i'll eat my mom's brains to know details of each terms😉😆



Hi Naseem Thank you so much for reading all the parts..

Ha ha she planned everything to keep Priya from learning about her love.. alas Vikram revealed it soon.
How will Priya leave her when she knows this. She too was really worried and concerned how to convince Neha's parents to get a halwayi as daamaad. 😆
Haan haddiyon ka doc 😆
😆 Frankly "at" nikalna waisa kuch socha nahin... just RK se sink hone ke liye Raj Kishen rakha hai, I just hate that "at" guy dont wanna see him any where around Priya... hope u understood 😆
Haan Ram yelled at her for no mistake of her..maafi mangli na jabardasti hi sahi.. 😆
Dont mind if he is J of Neha too in future 😆
Nuts is pyari for RaYa... Chicken ke baare mein abhi decide nahi kiya 😆
Yeah Raj will come again.
No problem gal it was pleasure sending u pms.
Haan khalo unki brain ab...😆
Thanks a tonne for such wonderful comment. Thanks for loving the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Doc,

one more beautiful update from ur side

The way RK confessed his feelings to priya is so simple, but elegant..

in a very decent manner he expressed what he feels for her though he has a fear of rejection..

The words u chose in his confession is totally bang on..

""tum mehfoos ho mere baahon mein"" itn beautiful wordings.. kaha se laate ho yaar.. wo ek sentence mere dil ko chooliya yaar..

He he he neha and injection .. too good.. her dialogues " ha waise bolo na bum pe doge" ha ha ha yeh neha kabhi nahi sudhregi..

vik dialogues too hilarious.. especially wo" chakke me aata ki tarah piss raha hoon yaar, mujhe baksh do thodi der"..
Hass hass ke my mouth is paining..

Doc, amazing writeup from ur side again

but the wait for next update is kiling more and more..

again we hav to wait till next tuesday.. the distance is too long yaar..mann nahi karta itna wait karne ke liye..
kya kare karna padta hai.. aur koi option hi nahi choda hai aapne..
hosake to jaldi dena.. tuesday tak mat tadapana hamein..

hilight of this update is RKs beautiful confession...

chalo.. till next one bye..

Love u Doc...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dediya na..
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Posted: 11 years ago
well written, please keep updating soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Continue soon
Loved it so much...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u for pm
Wonderful writing
Simply superb

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