Raya-Adhuri Kahani thread 4 Part 51 page 95 - Page 69

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Simply superb update

will come with my detail comment

aww you ended the story so sad to hear 😭

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Sandyyy .. It started with their unending cute knok jhoks ..

aww talli priya is super cute while making puppy face

and you know what ...While reading Ram making priya undressing her wet clothes ...

I remebered your other Ff Ray love and lost .. in that Ram & Priya first meeting itself Ram chneged the dress for her ofcurse closing his eyes there 😆

But here Pathi hai tho obviously he will loose his control

still he didnt cross his limits ..

Thats so super cute hai na ..

Oh so madam got up in his embrace

super cool .. how cutely he is saying .."priya sone do na " 👏

Lol..she saw his jurtha buton open and her dres changed so she thought He moved ahead ..

Uff why didnt she think that why she didnt remember hmm

But in tat her fault is also not there na

aw Ram didnt take any advanatage baby ... dont cryyy

Ye Ram bhi na .. mrg mrg started his romance

OMG priya said so many to him without knowing actual truth

becharari Ram.. he might have fully upset with this ofcourse hurt too

"mein ghar wapas kaise aayi...mein aapki bahoo mein kya kar rahi thi...mere kapde kisne change kiye..mein nighty mein kaise aayi...kahiye Mr. Kapoor"

Ram could have been hurt so much by hearing from her

hayeee

Ye Ram bhi na he can tell the truth na uff

HMM Ram left in anger and hurt

and after that Ye Neha phone kiya

atleast late tho sahi cal tho kiyaa Godd

Priya came to know all the things one by one

tHank go dshe realised her mistake ... and went to meet him

and Ram asked her .. cant you wait .😆 i had smile hear but love their bantering bhi

Bade achae lagte hai

Priya kissed him and Ram left in shock 😆

So Ram also poured out his heart to her 👏

Both are now in good terms

So Ram dont waanna leave this chance

office mai romance soo good

but Ye Neha bhi na disturb kiya 😆

and Raya milan hogaya in fully terms

now they deserve only happiness

and they were in their love land

superb simply superb

and Aap ne end kiya .😭

Ok this I will share in next comment ..

Such a wonderful journey so far .. and Loved this to the core

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Sandy That was really a verry good story on Raya

This ff is So close to me

You might know how close its to me .

when i saw the end ..i was like felt very bad

how i wil tease you reagrding your hero

how i will ask for your updates

How i will wait for your updates

How i will make you write Romantic updates

How i will ask sometimes to send the update in Pm [unedited version ]

So many things very close to me in this story

Im going to miss all those

Very sad to hear its ending ..

Thank you .. you have told me before otherwise i would have been very upset

I know you have taken up new challenges this time

I hope everything will go smothly

Love you so much

All the very best for your future

May God bless you

Hopefully You will get a time to come witha new story

Hugs

🤗

Originally posted by: jodude

hey di...lovely update...👏

priya misundrstd him...

bechare ram...!!! ...bina nasta k ofc gaye...😆

priya get to know through nuts n neha...

awww!!! priya ram k ofc mai...too cute...😳😉

is neha na galat time pe ayi thi...kuch der baad nahi aa sakti hai kya...?😉😆

beautiful moment missd ...hehehe...😆😆

uhu uhu.😭😭😭...apne story end kar di...not fair...😊

but i hope aap continue kare is story ko...

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Thank you so much u like the story and thanks for comments🤗

agar tumhe bata diya what I planned for parvarish tum definitely kahogi Sandy please don't continue😆...issliye yahi rok rahi hoon...haan agar kabhi time mila toh definitely I will PM u the story😉

thanks once again for this wonderful comments

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Thank you so much Neel🤗 Loves you❤️

haan tum muje yeh saari cheese nahi puch sakti lekin aur bhi baate hai na jo puchti ho uska end toh nahi hai na😆

next story who bhi sunogi toh kahogi ki Sandy rehne do😆

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Ofcourse normal bathan hothe rahthe hai yaar

but this is different na

irritating you for update

asking to send me the updates in pm [ unedited versions ]

You do know i will value the writer feelings

if they are presenting a story means definately they might liked the story line

If i llike it than i will follow

if i dnt like i will quit

but if you means i will tell i didnt like this part you just edit this that 😊 like that i will give suggestion

simpleee

This story line is very beautiful.I liked the story very much.The hated part of priya,the love part of them , the jealous part are all superb. A story with a good start and a good end.beautifully written.

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