FF : MAIN HUN DEEWANA TERA PART 6 PAGE 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 4
yaaay Ram finally meets with Priya not just this she is the only dream girl of Ram who met her on roads awww what an update u took my heart yaa... I missed so many gud things being away from hear tuly loved this one awesome... update now cant wait to read next moving on for it... btw loved Nats & Neha to teas Am so lovingly its really awesome to read...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowow kaha atka diya yaaar n why so small update Love is in air with RaYa do update next soon plz... n loved how how Priya's truth came from of Ram awesome... too gud but why u stopped writing dear update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6

Ram who was lost in hes thoughts came back to reality with her voice his eyes just to meet hers
I am so sorry muje laga woh n... neha hain I'm sorry

Priya :It's ok sir but

Ram : but what?

Priya : leave me na

Ram : haa

Priya : opaiting toward shoulder

Ram : look at her shoulder give her golu look and free her form his grip and said sorry to her

Priya : it's ok sir and smile

Ram lost in her beauty

Priya call him sir but no respond from Ram

Priya look at him and think ab ine kya hua hain

Ram in lost in his word

I want to tell you that you are beautiful but I don't merely want these words heard I want them felt by you Because you should feel as beautiful as you are It's not just your eyes that make you beautiful and it's not just your hair he though the strokes of light in each strand illuminate everything around youa and it's not just your smile it reminds me to enjoy life instead of focusing on the struggles it bringsa and it's not just your voice which will always always sweep me away from my sorrows and draw me closer to an unexplainabl happiness or even your hands they sing my tension to sleep when I get to hold them It's your heart...what I feel from your heart is what makes you beautiful in my soul and you are so so beautiful...not only in my eyes but in my life...

Priya try to call him but meanwhile Vikram enter his cabin and see Ram and Priya he smile and to himself lagta hain janab ko pyar ho gaya hain kaisi harkate kar raha hain yaar ye Priya kya soch rahi hogi iske bare main

Vikram come toward him and said Ramm and look at Priya and smile

Priya : sir ye Ram sir ko file dena tha par

Vikram smile and said It's ok Priya ye file muje de do main de dunga tum javo tumain kam hoga na

Priya nodded and left from thiere

Vikram look toward Ram but his is own world kya kar raha hain bhai woh chali gai

Ram smile

Vikram : kya bat hain paglo ke tarha smile kar raha hain Ramm

Suddnly Neha enter his cabin see Ram is smiling and said to Vikram baby isse kya hua ye collget ki aad kyu de raha hain

Vikram : muje lagta hain isse pyar ho gaya hain

Neha : accha tumain kaise pata aur kone hain woh ladki

Vikram : muje kya pata

Neha : toh tum kaise khe sakte ho isse pyar hua hain

Vikram : main iss liye khe raha hu kiyuki insan aisi harkate tabi karta hain jab usse pyar hota hain

Neha : kya tumain mujse pyar hua tha toh tum bhi kya aisi harkate karte the ha baby

Vikram : muje nahi pata yaar agar main aisi harkate karta bhi tha ya nahi kyuki muje tumse pyar hua tha na

Neha : kyaaa

Vikram said in low voice kuch nahi dekho isko abhi bhi smile kar raha hain isse phele apne dream se bhahar lawo aur pucho who's the girl ?

Neha : ha main toh bhul he gai nad shout fattyyy

Vikram : arre dhire Neha ye office hain

Neha :ha sorry and look at Ram baby muje toh ab paka yakin ho gaya hain isse pyar ho gaya hain and sook him

sudden jark Ram come back to his scene and see Neha infront of him and Vikram smile and Neha raise an her eyebrow

Ram look hare and there try to search Priya and said kya hua

Neha : kya hua? ye toh hame tumase puch na chaiye

Ram : tu kya pagal ho gai hain arre Vikram sbhal na teri biwi ko

Vikram smlie

Ram look at him kya tu nhi pagal ho gaya hain kya Neha tune mere acche khase dost ko pagal kar diya hain

Neha : ha woh toh pagal hain mere pyar main par tuje kya hua tu kiske pyar main pagle ho gaya hain

Ram : pyar main pagle main kya bat kar rahi ho Neha main kisike pyar main pagle nahi hu samji

Neha : bol na ab natak mat kar

Vikram : ha Ram bol na kone hain woh ladki jaldi bata taki ham teri shadi jald se jald karwa de

Ram : tu bhi arre yaar kya ho gaya hain tum dono ko

Neha : ham ko nahi tumko

Vikram : ha yaar mere dost ko pyar ho gaya hain kya bat hain chal ab bata nahi toh main Dadi aur Ma ko bat dunga phir woh dono he tujse bulwalenge

Ram : arre sach khe raha hu yaar but jab muje pyar ho jayega na toh sabse phele tum dono ko bata dunga ok

Suddnly Nats enter

Nats : kya bat hain kisko pyar ho gaya hain

Ram arre ab ye bhi

Neha : ham dono ka toh ho gaya ab bari hain tere bhai ki usise puch bata he nahi raha hain

Ram smlie and said tum log aise nahi manoge na toh suno muje pyar ho gaya hain

Vikram, Neha and Nats all shout kisse

Ram : ladkise

Neha : nam toh bata

Ram : kyu

Nats : kyu ka kya matlab hain aakhir hame bhi toh pata chal na chahiye na

Ram : she is my life

Neha nam toh bata na akhir hain kone jisne Ram Kapoor ka dil churaya hain

Vikram : kya ham usse jante hain

Ram :muje kya pata par main toh usse janta hu

Vikram : Ram kahi woh woh toh nahi jo maine dekha tha jab hain yaha aaya tha tab

Ram : kone I mean kya dekha tha

Vikram : sabke samne bata du

Neha : iska matlab tumain pata hain woh kone hain

Vikram : ha bhi our na bhi bas guess kar raha hu bata du Ram

Ram : ha bata na par main ja raha hu muje dad se kam hain and move try run from thiere

Suddenly knock on the door everyone turned to see who is coming and see Priya

Vikram look toward Ram he was gazing at her

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Lovely part now pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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poor Ram evryone got chance to tease regarding his lady love but still don't know except Vikram who thinks he is in love with Priya. Do continue soon and thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome part!!
Ram ko love at first sight hogaya!!!
Awesome
Plz continue soon and thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Beautiful update..
Short tha, nxt tym big
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
superb update
waiting for next part
continue soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Good one.. Is bar please updt jldi Dena. N thanks for the pm

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