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Thanx for pm. Nice update. Continue soon.
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Awesome ff
i read all 3parts now...
its rely gd
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part 4


vikram's cabin ram sitting on chair


neha and vikram enter


neha : ram tu kya kr raha hain


ram : kya kr raha hu matlab


neha : arre puch rahi hu tuje koi jaruri kam tho nhi hain na


ram : nhi kyu


neha : tho chal hamare sath


ram looking at him vikram


ram : kaha


neha : shopping


ram : hmm kyu main kyu tu ja na apne pati ke sath


neha : ha ussi ke sath ja rahi hu aur tu bhi chal raha hain hamare sath


ram ; nhi yaar neha main nhi aa raha hu tum log javo


neha : ha ek bat bata tu priya se mila


ram looking at her angrily


ram : kyu tuje kya karna hain


neha : agar nhi mila hoga tho mil le na blulau use


ram get up from his chair and said muje kisi priya se nhi milna hain samji


neha and vikram smile and said kyu tuje tho ab roj usse milna padega na


ram : tuje shopping pe chalna hain ya nhi ab


neha : arre tu tho nhi aa raha tha ab kya hua


ram : ha vo main vikram ke liye aa raha hu tere liye nhi kya pata tu vikram ki jeb khali kr degi tho koi


sabhalne vala chahiye na chale ab


neha : ha chalo


ram to vikram tu kaise jhelta hain ise


vikram : kya karu yaar ab jindagi bhar yehi karna hain


ram : main samj sakta hu


vikram : kya samaj sakta hain abhi tu muje nhi samje ga jab teri shadi hogi na tab tu muje samje ga


ram : shadi hmmm ha


neha : tum dono ka kya chal raha hain


ram and vikram kuch nhi


neha : tho chale


vikram : ha


after shopping he appears to be out of way home he got traffic ram to himself what the hell man ye traffic bhi


phele neha ne itna gumaya aur ab ye muje uske sath jana hi nhi chahiye tha pata nhi vikram kaise jata hain


uske sath koi chij pasand hi nhi aati hain ba yahase vaha ghumti rheti hain aage se kabhii nhi jaunga


he look here and there are watches that have his eyes on a girl she was talking someone on the phone that


she was making her face was ever laughing he was watching her like he never seen any girl he was lost in her


beauty her eyes are so beautiful she can talk true to her eyes ram lost in her beautiful eyes her smile make


him crazy her hair flow in air because wind he lost in her he did not even hear the car sound he only see her


one man came his side and sooke him ram irated hoke bolta hain kone hain and seen towared man


ram : kya batmiji hain


man : batamiji main tho aap ko jagaraha hu


ram : kya jagarahain the main kab saya tha


man : so nhi rahe the tho kya kr rahe the kini derse horen baja rah hu sunte hi nhi ho


ram : tho kyu baja rahe the


man : kyu ki hame ghar jana hain


ram : tho javo na muje batake javoge kya


man : main kyu batau aapko main is liye bajaraha tha thakki aap hame side de sake


ram : side and idar udar dhetha hain vaha se traffice kam ho raha tha and said sorry to him


ram he starts the driving


vo fir se usi jaga dhekhta hain jaha cab main vo ladki thi par vaha koi nhi tha vo cab ko follow krta hain ke


kahi vo ladki fir se dhik jaye par use vo nhi milti kya yaar kaha chali gai ab kaha dundu usse agar vo insan nhi


aaya hota tho ab kya kru kaha rheti hogi vo hmm chal ram ghar chal


kapoor mansion


krishana : natasha beta ye ram kaha rge gaya abhi tak aaya kyu nhi


natsha : mom vo neha bhabhi bahi ko apne sath shopping lekar gai hain


dadi : ha tho vo jaldi aane vala nhi hain


all laugh


suudenly ram enter


armarnath : ram tum aa gaye


no response from him he came and sit on sofa


everyone look each other natasha goes and sitbeside him he smileing himself


abhi bhi usi ladkike bare main soch raha hain


natasha : bhai


ram smile


natastha : bhaiii


ram came to his sense and shaout


ram : kone hain


natasha : main hu aapki bhen


ram look at her ha bol kya hua


natasha : muje kuch nhi hua app ye batao aap ko kya hua hain


ram : kya matlab hain muje kya hoga


natasha : mom, dad ,dadi dekho bhai ko khe rahe hain ine khuch nhi hua hain


all smile


krishna : kya bat hain beta


ram : kuch nhi mom


dadi : accha tho muskura kyu raha tha


ram : dadi main kb


natasha : bhai aapko ye tho pata hain ke aap is waqt hain kaha


ram : ha kyu


natasha : pata hain jab aapne jab ghar main enter kiya tab dad ne aap se khu pucha tha


ram look at his dad


ram : kya pucha tha


natasha :iska matlab aap apna dimag kahi chod ke aaye ho ya sirf aap ki body hain yaha


ram : tu chup kr tuje aur koi kam nhi hain kya jab dhekho tang khich thi rheti hain


natasha : arre main tho aapko hosh main la rahi thi


ram main hosh main hi hu samji


krishna : bas karo tum dono ram tume der kaha ho gai


ram : vo neha aur vikrab ke sath gaya tha soppeing pe kitna time lagati hain bichara vikram ki puri jab khali


kr di aur aate waqt traffic main fas gaya tha us ladki ka chera firse uske samne aata hain and he his smile


natasha see he is smile and se


mom aapko nhi lagta jabse bhai ghar aaye hain colgate ki advertisement


ram : tu cup kar


dadi : tum log bas karo ab ye sab aur caho khana khane


nathasha to ram bhai muje pata hain aap aajitna smile kyu kr rahe ho aaj priya se mile the na kya priya aapko


itni pasand aai ki aap usi ke sapne dekh rahe ho and smile


ram ko office main jo bhi hua va sab yaad aa jata hain choti tu ruk main tuje nhi chodne vala hu


ram and natasha ran


natasha : dad bhai ko bolo na


ram : tu ruk main aaj tuje nhi chodne vala


amarnath : kya ho raha hain ruko dono


ram : dad is bolo na ye subha se tang kr rahi hain


natasha ; maine kya kiya hain aap hi muje chida rahe the


amarth : accha calo ab ram chalo ja ke frest ho javo dinner ke liye aa javo


ram ; ok dad abhi aaya ad hit herforhead palyfuly


and goes upwardhis room


priya : ma muje bhok lagi hain jaldi khana do na


shipra : ha ha aa rahi hu


sudhir : tho kaisa tha tuma aajka din


priya : hmm bahot kam tha pura din meeting main busy thi


shipra came with food


priya : wow aaj tho mere pasand ka khana bana hain thanks ma


shipra : hmm mera baccha kitna kam karti ho kuch time apne liye bhi rakh pura din office main padi rhethi


hain


priya : ma muje na sir se na bahot kuch sikhna hain pata hain vo kitne acche hain vo natasha aur mujmain koi


parak nhi karte hainmuje bhi apne beti ki tahraha hi rakh te hain aur vikram sir bhi pata hain do naye projects


aaye hain usmain ek vikram sir kar rahe hain aur une natasha assist kr rahi hain aur dusra ram sir aur unne


main assist karne vali hu ba tho bahot kam hoga mere pass time bhi nhi hoga


sudhir : ha meri beti tho batho busy ho gai hain na apne ma papa ke liya uske pass time hi nhi hain


priya : aisa nhi hain aap dono tho mere liye sabse phele aate ho bad main kam


shipra : smile abhi aise baate kr rahi hain jab kam main lag jati hain tho tuje kuch yaad bhi nhi aata hain


vaise ye ram kon hian


priya : natasha ke bhai hain aaj hi U S se wapas aaye hain muje bahot dar bhi lag rah hain is project se


sudhir : kyu kya hua


priya : main ram sir ko janti nhi hu aur na hi unse mili hu pata nhi unka kam karne ka tarika kaise hoga main


unke sath thik se tho kam ke paungi na


sudhir : meri beti jo bhi kam karti hain bahot man se karti hain aur muje pura yakin hain vo ye bhi aachi


taharaha se pura karegi


shipra : ab apko office office band ho gaya ho tho dnnier kare


priya and sudhir smile ans said ha


kapoor mansion


all sitt for dinner


ram : aaj mere pasand ka khana and said thanks mom thanks dadi


natsha : ha ha kha lo waise do teen mahine ke bad aate ho tho ek baar tho aap ke pasand ka banega hi na


ram : oye tuje jalan ho rahi hain na choti


nathsa : bhaiii dad bolo na


amarnath : ram kyu meri beti ke piche pade ho


ram : papa aapko pata hain choti badi ho gai hain ab iski shadi kr deni chaiye


dadi : oye khotya phele apne liye ladki dhund bad main meri natasha ke bare main soch


ram : dadi


nathasha and amarnath laugh


ram : dad aap bhi aapko tho meri madat karni chahiye


amarnath : na beta dadi thik khe rahi hain shadi tho karni hi padegi accha koi ladki mili


ram ko firse us ladki kiyaad aa jati hain and he smile


ram ; dad itni jaldi


krishana : tume jaldi nhi hain par hame tho hain na


ram : mom ismain na aap logoka hi nuksan hain


dadi : nuksan khesa nuksan


ram : dhekho dadi agar main shadi kr lunga tho mera pura dhan aapki bahu kitharaf hi rahega fir muje uske


sabhi nakhre uthane padege use ghumana firana use shopping ke liye leke jana pura din uske aage picche


rhena padega tho fir main aap logo ko time khese dunga office main bhi khese kam kr paunga vo bar bar


muje phone krgi na tho muje kha raha jayega aur use is thara akela bhi nhi chod sakta na


krishna ,dadi, amar and nathashas mouth waid open


dadi dekho jara ise jara bhi sharm nhi hain apne ma bap ke samne kaisi bate kre ja raha hain ye ladka joru


ka gulam bankar rahega kya tu


ram : vo kya hain na dadi vo mere liye is ghar main aayegi na tho muje hi use khuch rakhna padega na uska


khayal rakhna ade ga tho


dadi : ha ha kisne mana kiya hain tuje par aise sharam kr


krishna : muje koi problem nhi hain tu meri bahu ka jaise khayal rakh na hain rakh sakta hain par tu shadi kr


le bas aur muje kuch nhi chahiye


dadi : krishna tu ye kya


krishna : biji shadi na karne ke bahane bana raha hain vo


dadi : kya


krishna ; ram ham main se kisi ko bhi koi prolem nhi hain isse


ram : kya


amar : ha beta


after the dinner was over everyone retired to their room ram came to his room sat the bed he lies on the


bed & closes his eyes after a few minutes ram suddenly gets up he saw that girl face her smile her eyes came


in fort himuski haasi use sone nhi de rahi hain she make him crazy ye ho kya raha hain ram you need sleep


before she makes you go crazy stop imagining things now saying he again shuts his eyes as he lays down


ram wakes up again ye kya ho raha hain muje jab bhi main apni aankhe band karta hun why the hell do i see


that girl kya main jise dhund raha hu kya ye vahi hain he forces his eyes to shut itself he rolled from one


corner to the other trying to catch some sleep hmmm kya kr rahi ho yaar sone do na plzzz kal muje tume


dhundna bhi tho hain na mom aur dadi se khena padega muje unki bhau mil gai par main tumain dhunduga


kaha hmm koi bat nhi jaise kal mili thi vaise hi kahi na kahi tum muje mil hi javogi and started to think about


her after he finally fell asleep


morning


everyone came for breakfast


amar : ye ram kaha hain abhi tak aaya kyu nhi roj tho jaidi uthta hain


dadi : aa jayega


krishna : pata nhi utha bhi hain ya nhi


dadi : natasha puttar ja dhekh ke aa bhai utha ya nhi


natasha : ok dadi


ram's room


ram is still in his bed


natasha goes toward him and shout bhai... bhai...wake up... are you okay


ram heard a her voice as he opened his eyes suddenly gets up


ram looking at her angry kya hain ye


natasha : aap ko utha rahi thi


ram : accha aise bhi koi uthata hain kya


nathasha : ha tho itni der tak koi sota hain kya


ram : oye main roj jaldi uthta hu samji


natasha : aaj aapko itna der kyu ho gaya


ram : hmm rat ko der se soya tha


natasha : kya kr rahe the itni der tak


ram : vo muje sone nhi de and stop


natasha : kya sone nhi


ram : kuch nhi tu ja agar tere se bat karta rahunga tho aur bhi leat ho jaunga vaise kitne baje hain


natasha : 8


ram : kya tho muje phele kyu nhi jagaya hurriedly gets up n murmers as he moves bathroom


natasha : jaldi aana yad hain na aaj se projects shuru hone vale hain


ram : ha pata hain


on the other hand in sharma house


shipra : sudhir aap ki chai


sudhir : priya kaha hain


shipra : kichan main hain brekfast ready kr rahi hain


sudhir : accha thik hain


priya came with brekfast


priya : gud morning papa


sudhir : gud morning beta


shipra : sudhir aaj aap office nhi ja rahe hain


sudhir : aaj main leat jaunga muje kuch kam hain


shipra : tho priya aaj tho tum kisi project main assist krne vali ho na


priya : ha ma aur muje bahot dar bhi lag raha hain


sudhir : accha tho meri beti darti bhi hain


priya : papa main kisise nhi darti sirf aaj phela din hain na aur main us ram kapoor ko janti bhi nhi hu na tho


bas thoda sa jada nhi


sudhir : ha pata hain yaha dar rahi ho office ja ke sab tumse darege


priya ; kya papa aap bhi


shipra : ha tho sahi tho hain


priya : kya aap bhi main kisi ko darati nhi hu main sirf apna kam karti hu vo bhi puri imandarise


shipra : ha ha hame pata hain chal ab brekfast kr le office jana hain ya nhi nhi tho leat ho jayegi aur dat milegi


tere nye boss se


priya : main kisise dat nhi khane vali hu


shpra : ha datneka department tho tere pass hain na


priya : ha ab brekfast kare


ram came downstair


ram wishing gud morning to everyone


natasha : gud moring bhai


krishana : kya bat hain beta tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na aaj der se uthe


ram : mo main thik hu bas kal der se soya tha


dadi : kyu kya hua office ka kamkr raha tha kya der rat ghar pe oye amar main khana tuje ye tere office ka


kam ghar pe nhi aana chaiye


ram : dadi main office ka kam nhi kr raha tha


dadi : tho fir kya kr raha tha kisi ladkise se tho bat tho nhi kr raha tha na


ram : smile and said arre nhi dadi bas aise hi nind nhi aa rahi thi muje


natasha : dad aap ko nhi lagta kal rat se bahot jada smile kare ja rahe hain muje lagta hain koi ladki vali bat


hain koi miltho nhi gaya


ram : oye choti tu chup kr aaj office main bahot kam karna hain pata hain na


natasha : ha pata hain vikram bhai ke sath and smile


ram tohimself arre yaar main kya kru ye choti tho vikram ke sath hain muje us priya ke sath koi project nhi


karna dad ko kaise mana karu


amar : kya bat hain ram sab thik tho hain na


ram : ha dad sab thik hain


krishana : sab ka ho gaya ya kuch baki hain abhi


amar : ho gaya


krishna : ab nastha kare


ram m natasha and amar smile and said ha


in the office vikram and ram was in ram's cabin and were discussing about some project peon came and said


sir is calling u bothe


ram : vikram yaar plz kuch kar na tu muje us priya ke sath koi kam nhi karna


vikram : arre ismain main kya kr sakta hu ha dad ne tho boldiya hain priya tuje assist karegi


ram : janta hu ab main kya kru


vikram : kuch mat kar dad ne jo bola hain vo tu kar


neha and natasha came


neha : kya ho raha hain


ram : kuch nhi


natasha and vikram smile


neha : arre kya kuch nhi muje lagta hain tu kuch pareshan lag raha hain


ram mije kuch nhi hua hain


natasha : chalo dad ne bulaya hain


vikram : ha chal hamari ek team hain


vikram teke natasha with him


vikram : chal ram


ram give angry look to him ha chal na


neha : kya hua


ram : kuch nhi aise tu yaha kya ke rahi hain vo bhi subha subha


neha : aise hi aa gai ab tu ja na dad ne bulaya hain


ram ha ja rah hu


amarnath's cabin


ram , vikram and standin


ram was tensed and trik main uske sath kaam nahi kar sakta mujhe dard se bat karni hogi


suddenly one sweet voice came behind him


priya : may i come in sir


amarnath : yes priya came


priya enter and stand beside natasha


ram look up toward his dad can't see her


amarnath : tho main tum charo ko isliye bulaya hain kyu ki aaj se tum log is project pe kam kar sako


vikram and natasha tum dono mumbai vala project sabhalo ge ye rahe uski file


vikram and natasha : ok dad


amarnatha : sirf assit nhi karna apne bhai se sekh nabhi hain


natasha : ha dad main sab kuch sekh lungi


amarnath : ram ye tumara project hain aur ismain priya tumain assist karegi


ram : ok dad


anarnath : priya tum ram ko assits kro aur usse sabkukh sekh lena


priya : ok sir


amarnath : tum file dekh lo main jara aata hu muje kam hain and goes out


vikram : tho kare kam


natasha : ha bhai


neha enter and said hi kya ho raha hain


vikram : projects ki file dekh rahe hain


neha : hi priya


priya : hi


neha : tum ram se mili


priya nodded no


neha : ruko main milvali hu


ram : kya kr rahi hain ye ab


neha : ram ye hain priya


ram bina dekhe use hi bol deta hain


priya : hello sir


neha : ram kisi se yese milte hain ladki hain kya sochegi tere bare main


ram ko gusa aa jata hain aur uski taraf dekhta hain


vikram , neha and natasha smile


ram see her she was smile to him


ram kya hain ye muje fir se vo hi ladki kyu dikh rahi hain usne muje pagle bana ke rakh diya hain

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Update Dear
I think that Girl is Priya, without knowingly Ram Fall for her
Ram with His Family Scenes & Priya with her Family scenes are beautiful
When Neha take Priya Name, Ram became irritate
Finally Ram seen Priya
Waiting for this reaction, Continue soon
Thanks For the PM 😊
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Awww very cute part i was laughing when neha n nuts made ram to meet fake priya bichara n now waiting for ram reaction when he ll found that the girl he is dreaming is priya n he is going to work with her hope raya fall for each other soon n pls update soon pls dnt take tym
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nice update😊
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Ram saw a girl i think she was Priya
little banter was cute between Ram and that man
continue soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
i read 4 parts nice story continue soon waiting for next part😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

part 5


ram kya hain ye muje fir se vo hi ladki kyu dikh rahi hain usne muje pagle bana ke rakh diya hain

natasha : bhai ye meri bestfriend hain priya

ram only look at her

natasha : bhai

ram : hmm

natasha : bhaiii

ram come back to his secens

ram : ha yaar tu chilla kyu rahi hain

natasha priya poined her

ram again look at her smile and said hi

priya : hi

suudanly peon come and said to priya amarnath sir calling u

priya excuse herself and left the cabin

vikram : ram agar tume priya ke sath kam nhi karna hain tho thik hain main sir se bat karta hu

ram : maine aisa kab kaha ke main uske sath kam nhi karna chata

vikram : lo kar lo bat kal se kya bole ja raha tha tu

ram : ha par vo tho koi aur thi ek minute ek minute yaar agar ye priya hain toh woh kaun thi

neha : kone

ram : arrey kal mere cabin main aai thi woh

natasha : kone aai thi bhai

vikram : hogi koi iski chane vali jo priya ka nam lekar isse milne chali gai

and there was knock on the door

ram : come in

richa enter with file richa said to natasha mam aap sing baqi hain

ram look at her and said ye kon hai yehi toh tha jo kal meri cabin main aayi thi who is she ?

vikram : ye toh richa hain

ram : kya richa

richa look at natsha and neha

ram :look at her and see she look toward natsha and neha and think ok toh ye in logoka plan tha

richa : mam sing

natsha : ha ha

ram : ha karo sing

natasha: ha kar rahi ho na

after sing richa left the cabin

natasha : accha toh hamin bhi chana chaiye hain bhai

vikram smiles and said ha chalo bahot kam hain

ram look at neha and said aur tum aaj subha subha office main kaise

neha : main toh bas aise hi roj aati jati rheti hu

ok roj ram said

vikram : tum log bate karo muje kam hain main chala

neha and nats shout ham bhi ab chalte hain

ram stop them arre tum dono kaha ja rahi ho

nats : bhai muje bahot kam hain chalo vikram bhai

ram : arre itni bhi kya jaldi hain choti kam toh hota rhega

vikram laugh

tu kya has raha hain tu bhi inke sath mila tha na ram said

vikram : nhi yaar main inke sath nhi toh muje iske bare main kuch pata nhi tha ke ye dono richa ko priya banake tumare cabin main bhejenge muje tho bad main pata chala tha

ram : pata tho chala tha na fir bhi muje bataya nhi pata hain main kitna pareshan tha kal

neha : aur ab kaisa lag raha ahib asil priya kaisi lag

his lips curled into a tiny smile and said tu chup kar aur kya kam tha tuje yaha

neha : arre ham toh majk kar rahe the

natasha : ha bhai sorry ab tho chad do

ram : kyu bada maja aa raha tha na tu logo ko

neha : ha ram kya bhage the tum richa se bach ke

ram : ha tho pata hain main kitna dar gaya tha

neha : arrey bhai vo tho aapko bahot pasand karti hain aur bas milna chati thi toh hamne milva diya bas

vikram : oye bas ho gaya ab kuch kam bhi kar le

natasha : ha bhi ye mera phela project hain

ram : accha abhi tho main tume jane deta hu par bad main tumin dekh lunga

natsha smiles and said ok bhai

vikram : ha ab chal kuch kam karte hain and nats and vikram left

neha : waise ram ye wali priya kaisi lagi tume

ram look at her and said kya kisi lagi

neha : arrey mera matlab ye hain ke tum uske sath ab kam karne main koi problem tho nhi hain na bas

ram : nhi kyu

neha : nhi aise hi agar tumain usse koi problem ho tho ham richa ko tumari assistant bana dege

ram : chup kar

neha : sach main ram kal tumari shakal dekhne layak thi

ram : accha bahot maja aa raha tha na tume

neha : ha

ram tuje na main and run after her neha run and left her cabin

ram to himself kya log hain main chodne wala nhihu kisiko meri bhi bari aayegi tab dekh lena main kya karta hu and turn

suddenly priya come and knock the door ram think she is neha he trun toward her grab her hand and pull her inside in his cabin

ab kaha javogi ha bada maja aa raha tha na tume ab dekho main kya karta hu nad grab her arm

priya landed him her long hair fell on her face her hair flow with air and ram see her face ram look at her and lost in her but she so close to him ram keep staring at priya and mismaraise in her but her eyes closed she look so beautiful

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