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Alkona

@Alkona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Awesome Update..story is moving very nicely, Am so Glued to the story...these days I come to IF only for this SMH and wait for New PM flashing from you, the moment I enter IF

Priya is behaving normal with all other family members except RAM,May be her insecurity or Guilty feeling...So Excellent way you have portrayed the story, I love your Writing👏...Update soon

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sampa123

@sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

vry nice updt.cntinue soon.n thanks for the pm

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

mm tgnks for pm me yeah at one piont ur correct but dont make it too far seperation its request make it few days pls

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Awesome update dear as usual. Priya - Ape relation is wonderfully described. Actually Priya 's relation with everyone family, friend is expressed well showing the current state of mind of her with her husband. U r sculpting the story not leaving behind even small details.

Sonal is good. His thoughts about his wife are nice to read. Ram blurted out. If Priya could slightly think of it she would get it.

Neel, something might have happened in the recent past so giri gave this name "pathaka" to u. 😆 I think Ram's dialogue to Priya about pathaka is writer's own experience - 100 calls and 100 msgs, ur pestering her for updates, so with that effect the name is given, may be.😆 😆

Priya's nightmare is really painful to read. The duty doctor part was too good. I assumed her to be our Writerji. Really I felt the communication with the patient is so good and sensible.

Priya's expectation for Ram to kiss her and her quick kiss tells a lot about her mind state, how vulnerable she is now.

Now she wants to go to her Maayka, lets see how Ram is going to handle it.

To the writer:

The update is soo enjoyable with its every emotion, so it does not seems as a filler part.

About the relationship, already u r greatly building it up and I m waiting to know what u have in store more.

Thank u for such an wonderful story.

Thanks for the pm.

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
hai hai aap tho history create kar rahe hai...6th thread...awesome..get going...congratulations⭐️

Haaww history creation 😉 well will see .Thank you

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

HI Neel and Girija..

I got to read latest two parts of this FF.

i loved the writing so much.

though i haven't read earlier chapters , but thanks to sandhya she had briefed me onto it. i think i could be able to understand things little.😆😆 (utni samjh daar bhi nhi hoon😆)

well the two parts were really awesome, i think i need to read the whole thing. 😆

Till these days i haven't read this FF bcoz i was scared so many chapters have already been completed almost 5 threads OOOPS , how can i read this big😲. but since i was home last week for almost 4days , was having nothing much to do , was flipping thru IF n found ur thread 5, n read the last part i think. loved it but could not comment, yesterday night again read the next part felt interesting , women problems associated to family life. i got to know few medical terminologies by the two chapters, hopefully will get to know many in future.

i can't comment much on the chapters i read , but i really loved the bond raya share, n priya's worries n hurt , her desperation for child as described by ram .

Oye neel even u got a role here , good yaar😆😆 professor neel glad. I think Neel plays a very important role in priya's life, patakha 👍🏼😆😆

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: armanz
First of all thank you for ending sadness in RaYa life..ofcourse whatever happened isnt a minor thing to forget easily but as it happened they should come out of it and think about future..wahi ke wahi rehgaye tho zindagi ka koi meaning nahi rahegi..Hope Ram will bring Priya out of the trauma very soon.

Thank you for liking it , yah its not minor thing to forget that easily as it happend they should come of it and they will be on the way ... Hope he will bring her back to his old hitler 😆
I dunno why the writer fekt it as filler part but for me I felt it as his first move towards bringing her back..Ape n Sonal came by them selves but Rishab giving mobile on behalf of him, making Neel come to visit her these are subtle things but very much needed ones.

The writer might think bcz of less raya ,yah it is his first move towards bringing her back .yah apesonal came , rishab ,neel everyone s entry is to remove her fear frommingling with the ppl after her incident .

Loved it yaar.Thank you so much

Coming in detail

It was good to read about Priya and Ape's lovely relation..love in between them is heart touching.

Aww thank you so much ,im glad you liked it ..

Priya is hurting herself and Ram by living in the past..Its difficult for her to come out of it soon..hmm will wait for her to forget and smile ..let her recover from her physical wounds first

Yes priya is hurting herself and living in the past , let her physical wounds recover than you will able to read her tantrams ..

Rishab..he is the one guy who can bring smile on Priya's face with his naughty n silly behaviour ofcourse he can make Ram J too same time ..

Rishab 😆he always makes the place lighter with his entry , make priya smile and ram jelous at the same time ..

Neel Oh my Oh my she is patakha and sensitive too..but she was so careful not to bring one word about what has happened and its the best way to help Priya..
😆 In one month the academic year is gonna end and she was .. I so love this Patakha..😉

Neel is sensitive not pathaka 😆yah n one month the academic year gonna end so she applied for leave 😆I too love you baby ..

Priya has taken promise for her..hope she wont be in soup..🤔
Dont know viji , in which soup the writer is going to mix my name 😭😆

Priya..why on earth she wants to avoid Ram..how shall she gets to know what happened?whom she will trust..hmmm

Its a nomal womenly thing that they cannot handle their man if something happend to be like this ,but after some time she get to know ...well any way we will see how she gonna do it ..

The past is haunting her in dreams..she was fine when she was in company..but in sleep who will be with her..solitude will take her to the horrifying past again..so Ram is doing the right thing...love him for his sensible thinking

Yah the past is haunting her in dreams still and she is trying to cop up with the situation ,
in her sleep she is all alone so she is scared to hell , Ram is not at all leaving her ..doing good job as a husband .

The young doc councelled her very well..imagining our writer here..he he but she did a good job..
Lol..I aksed her the same thing ,she said "No comments'"
Lol..yyup loved that part ..

So she has decided to stay away from Ram..hmm lets see he will leave her for how many days..

Awesome..entertaining not a filler..lovely n wonderful job,👏

just continue soon
waiting to read more..
Thx for pm.

Hmm yah she has decided to stay away from Ram

BUt he hasn't desided na

You will get to see the intresting parts in future

stay tuned for future updates ...

Thank you for the lovely comment ..

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: neemalst
congrats
NEELGIRI.. - sounds like NILGIRI"S

😆

Thank you .. we are best friends

so if you combine also i dont have any prob 😉

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
lovely update

Slowly slowly Priya is coming out of trauma...but why she is not speaking to Ram.

Loved Ape-Priya bonding...I loved the entry of Pathaka Girl...Priya wanted some favour from her...Priya ke dimag mein kuch chal raha hai.

loved Priya-rishab part too...like when Rishab handover the chocos and Priya hiding it from Ram. but night she remember about chocos and Ram gave it to her...and she munched and slept..how cute😆

uff her nightmare...its very scary...Doctor gave a nice advice.

She is recovering well and got discharged...but instead of going to KM she decided to stay with her parents...but why Priya is avoiding him so much. Ram sense something is going on her mind.

suspense

At last she is coming back home...waiting to see her in KM😉

thanks for PM and continue soon

Thank you so much ..

Atlast you got time to comment 😆 bahuth busy hogaya aap ...

Ok coming to the update .. yah she is coming out of slowly .. She has some aprehensions being with Ram again so she might be thinking something ..Hope Ram will understand this soon and will give the answer to her 😉

Rishab always love to give her chacos , and he didnt forgot this time too and priya hid it from Ram bcz he might have not allowed her ... Cute na eating chacos in night 😆

Yah very scary night mare ,slowly she is coming out of it .she might think about doctors advice ...

Hmm there is the suspence instead of going to KM she came to sharma's home

sooo to know that we have to wait for next update ...

Thank you so much

will try to give the update may be tomorrow .. If all goes fine 😆

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
super update👏 I felt like it is happening in front of me as in the serial...flow was very good and description is also very nice...
bottom line is I loved it very much...❤️
continue next part ASAP

Aww thank you .. Iam glad you liked it ..

I too feel the same whenever i read this story

thank you for connecting witth the story ..

will try to update the next part soon 😛