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mithunacr

@mithunacr

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

hi i always remain a silent reader but today u force me to comment on ur last update and ur note i accept ur point of view and ur update is very realistic. i really like to c strong RAYA. but only one request dont harm the kids. the way u portrait the friendship of Priya and Shruthi is wonderful. Go with ur real story.waiting for the next update😊

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Part - 64.

Ohh...what to say...Horrible Terrific...i dont know. Just my blood is chilled. Good and brave work dear. U wrote it in a way that I m witnessing in front of my eyes and that is more and more terrific.

Will shruthi die? But enough of everything with Shruthi, please keep Priya safe. Even for Shruthi, that bloody Ashwin should not die that easily.

Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm.

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Jyothi

@joemahika

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

yaar sorry to hurt u we didn't mean that we don't like ur story or ur writing itz just that we are shaken and there's no rule that heroine cant hurt or suffer but when it comes to our loved we cant tolerate and coming to our comments hum bas apna dard bayaan kar rahe hain aapko bathana chahte hain ki hum kitna aapki story ko feel kar rahe hain humlog aapke story aur writing se itna affect kyun ho rahe hain aap samajh sakte hain aap samajh sakthe hain isliye itna over reacting comments but truly very neatly penned down almost think that humari aankhon ke saamne horaha hain par kuch kar rahe hain hum and GENUINLY YES pls continue the story as per ur thoughts actually personally mein iss story ko aapki nazar se dekhna chahtha hoon aur dekhna chahtha hoon ki aap ki FF SIRF MERI HO ka meaning aur aap iss story ki jariye se kya kehna chahthe hain so please continue no abrupt ending please cont AND SORRY FOR HURTING U AND WRITER

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luvbalh

@luvbalh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

What is this veggi in between .. I strated eating non veg , my pooja completed 😆

Avuna, ela ala aythe.. em aypotayo cheppu naa bhavi bharath kodi meka sodari sodarulu .. nuvvu pakka veggie fellow ani fix aypoya appudu, califlower n mushroom ok then ippudu nuvvu veggie kadu . chustha HYD vachinappudu test chesta next month 9 th

Yaaayyy Iam eagerly waiting for it actually ..
I will post my review to Ram kappor in twitter tomorrow .

oy ram kapoor actor matrame... he not the director or story writer..

ofcourse for you in WA .. 2 hours movie .. very well designed & described the reality ..
frankly Iam afraid to go but as a Ram kapoor is there we friends gang went ..
surprisingly there were around 100 people were in the hall .. and Than i gave a proud look to my friends 😆😉They don't know about this movie and i didnt tell them Ram kapoor is there .
I just said Its a real incident happened in Ap .. When Ram kapoor appeared Iam grinning like ear to ear got deadly stares from my gang .. pheww .. but i enjoyed ..infact everyone satisfied after seeing it .. bakwas bahuth hogaya ,, chall will give rest of the details in Wa tomorrow ..
Neel isn't allowing me to sleep .. 😆

hmm chudali how was the movie.. MY interest is nagesh, many yers back I saw rockford movie.. I liked it.. nagesh n nanditha das... I like movies those are Of real issues. when i saw the trailer I was like OMG so the documentry I saw is true. I saw a documentry on a womens life who is a Prostitute but she is made so out of revenge on those who raped her. the woman with golden heart. so I wanted to see the movie.. main reason nagesh, ram kapoor next... na friends maa WA group lo naku note pamparu ... must watch movies this summer for molly ani - lakshmi, shadi ka side effects , and humshakal ani ... y RK motu is in ani ..

Loll .. You know how Neel is .. she is very worried and she is upset actually .
as i didnt tell her too this twist ..

yeah i know... idigo ila

I do understand ,Thats why i have a given note .. just saying if they may not like i waill quit ..
KIB ,,... Big KIB wala will surely comes in fututre updates 😉

ippudu em aythe nakenduku naku KIB wala love kavali ante...

I will kill you .. I had sent PM to every one .. you too .. nijamga champestha [courtesy :Neel]

hmmm neel ade cheptunna.. nenu pampe PM's veltunayo ledo kuda telidam la.. I dint get PM from u .. i dont know why

lol .. sure i will give .. if i get the support from the readers ..

That is dependent on her condition after this trauma .. If its not justifible tell me ..
Till now i haven't write abortion in any of story .. if it comes in this don't blame me .please ..

i can take anything but not DOctor's dairies... chala melodramatic ga untayi okka pakka chastunte memu unam anna barosa ichestaru tarwata sorry a ni cheppi vellipotaru .. not to hurt u but my experience. BTW doctors dairies lo Miracles ani part kuda untadi kada.. ani cheyi chalu ..

Will reveal in future updates .. if i wont continue than i wil tell you in WA 😆

ok done ,,,, am happy .waititng for the BIGGG kib update

this is from Neel ante nenu ..

Avuna ! neel ani inka evarunnaru ... mari

Its not nonsence kastha aapputava ..
Yah for your reply it took time .. as i wanted Giri should give for that .. soo lil late ..Now she is asleep i think 😆

meru reply icche apatiki nenu nidra poyanu ... hehehee

Thank you so much dear for supproting ..

Count No -5

5. ah anta pedda message rasanu hmm kani 5 its ok ...

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Just now read the note. Agree with u in every point. Creativity is not always about entertainment alone. Its also about the creator's point, what he/she would like to give the society thru their works. So go for it girl. Let us try to accept the reality so that we take care that our brothers and sons think of a woman with due respect. I feel this should be every woman's responsibility towards the society.

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
NOTE From writer :

Hi guys .. Iam extremly sorry , I love Ram & Priya[RAYA] so much , I love them and I adore them as how much you are liking them ..
I already mentioned you so many times there will be few sad parts .
As everyone try to tell or try to enalyse reagarding one incident to others ..
I also tried to give some imporatant dealings /issues/holdings of life ..
So I have chosen my writing medium [Fan fiction ]To show .How it will be ???
I do know you all are waiting ...I could have written the other part ..
But Iam busy in my professional work and today after work I have gone to watch LAKSHMI movie.
After seeing that .. I felt this part is correct in a way ..

From 63 parts[Even though I took a long break ] You all are with me and with the story ..
Won't you trust me guys for future story .. I hope you will like furthur too ..
As Neel's pleadings were peak this time .. I will try to give Preview ASAP.
Just gimme some time ...and bare with it for now ..
Iam loving to read your genuine feedback ..
I just had doubt ???
If heroine means she should not get hurt ?,[usually everyone thoughts wre like this ]
Even though if she gets hurt also How she moved with it ..I wanna show that
And i want to show our strong Ram & Priya .
Every one life has hardles ... This is the hurdle of the RAYA life .. And they will soon get over with it ..
I had confidence ki you will like the story while its going on ..
But I need your encouragement too guys for that ..
I know likes were very less and Neel is upset 🤢
Even this note also she don't wanna post .bcz there wont b any response .
but i can share my feelings na with you all .. so she is posting ..

Love you guys .. Thank you for being with us ..
I know reality hurts .. but we should face it ..
Any way sorry for making you all sad ..
couldn't help it but had written..
Now it's in your hands ,.. Wether I should continue with the story what I thought ..

Or
Should I reunite them and give it as an end in the next part .
drop your ideas ..
If I get atleast 15 "YES " I may continue this story .. or I will quit with next update giving an fascinating & happy end.

p.s:As I can't unfold the story ,Iam not telling what is my actual story .. If i give the end in next update ..
But as this title" Sirf Meri Ho "end is different and fascinating too but that didn't jell with my ardent readers .either this way or that way priya would always Unharmed ,though there would be some painful momements in my actualy story .
The actual end will be with Neel & me in our selfs .

OH hello...hey kis ne kaha aap ko end karne ko...I did not read this note till now abhi abhi dekhi...😲😲

hum tho utna strong nahi hai per aap tho hai na😛

BALH show mei bhi we say many negative things to some episodes that does not mean that we want the show to end. Isn't it?...It is just that many love RAYA very much that they can't take the reality in fiction that easily specially if that is in our hands...so the replies immediately isa hi aathe hai per thoda time ke baad they think wise and write the comments...(many me meri bhi naam aati hai😉...I am like kiran kher in India's got talent...I just close my eyes can't see the same like in that show)

not only me but every one who read the update ...also have the same issue that's all😛 ...

SORRY if we hurt you with our comments...
aage se acche se comment karenge 😉

inka ninna current poindi correct ga nenu update complete chesi like chese lopu...nenu like cheya leda update ni😲😲😲...ippude chusa velli

Edited by anupam_dil - 11 years ago

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mishraapoorva14

@mishraapoorva14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

ohh yaar..that was such a sad update...that idiot as*** ...plzz dnt let anything happen to priya and also shruti plzz...let priya be safe...but i would lyk u to continue ur version of the story and looking frward to it...but plzzz let priya be safe...continue soon..thnxx fr the pm..!!

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Mani

@Mani-RK

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

i dont know what to write

i will just post what i felt first i found it funny with those dialogues coz most of the dialgoues of telugu mves contain such OTT and masala dialogues from shruti😆(naku inta freedom undi ani anukuntuna anduke am posting it the way i felt) and then some glimpses of arundathi mve that smell thing mainly😆

but that one scene of ashwin doing all that to priya totally changed my mood i felt disgusting di may be such men do exist 😡 this is the reality di i have never came across such incidents in my real life but when the day nirbhaya died i cried a lot the whole day and couldnt even share it with any one i dont know waht was happening to me but i just wanted to cry your story i cried again had tears

The Worst was ram knowing and watching everything that would be hell to him😭 dont want anything to happen to priya and his child and i want you to give hell lot of slaps and cruel punishment to ashwin from ram and law😡

ACP is doing brilliant job di vikram as supporting friend was awesome and raya god save them and

i read your note di leave about likes and comments you have attempted something which ppl cant even think of thats a brave attempt

you know what i havent seen lakshmi trailer because i am not brave enough to watch such scenes and i so want to see the mve but cant dare it di will watch only ram parts once DVD is out

so go on and continue with what u feel as right dont comprimise for anyone i would love to read this

P.S: So giri watched Lakshmi ask her how is the mve and Rams role

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: 123fiza

Dont know what to say..it was a horrifying update 😭
aswin shouldnt get an easy death..he should be punished d way he did to priya n shruti.. 😭 ...rot in hell
plz dont let anything happen to the babies..
poor priya..she is going through the same phase..
ram plz come soon n.save priya..
these crimes r happening in our society..bt aftr reading i felt like it happend to someone dear to me 😭 .. it affected me badly...
characters r very well executed ..thanks fr d pm..cont soon

I know dear .. Its horryfying ..
Ashwin gets what he wants ..
Ram will come to save her ..

The reality is bitter .. Thank you and will cont soon ..