As everybody asked I gave preview of they uniting scene..
He ran to Her ,Taking his life in his arms..He sat there ..He hasn't cared of throns ..Priya is only his matter now .
Priya.. Priyaa.. see I came here ..
Dekh lena Priya .. ek baar ..Please Priya.. ankho kolo our dekho ..
Mai..Aap ki Ram .. One police handed him the water .. Keeping her head in safely his thigh, he showered some water drops on her face ,,,She blinked her eyelids..
He slowly slapped her cheeks .. Dekh Priya ..
Look at me priya .. Please ...once look at me ..Iam here ..His body is raking with his sobs ..
Gazing at the other Side .. Shruthis dekho our tell your friend Iam here .. His tears flowed again
His forehead touched hers , his warm tears made a way to her face ... feeling them she slightly opened her eyes...Ram who was crying badly ...He han't noticed until her wounded hand made a way to caress his cheek ever so weakly .. He jerked ... He opened his eyes raised his head .. Kissing her hand ..
Her lips curved into a weak grin seeing her love of life ..
Don't worry sweety .. See I came .. I came na.. nothing will happen to you .. I will save you baby
She is about to close her eyes again .. Please baby ..Please .. I never ever gonna leave you again ..Please please be with me .. Doctorrr he yelled at his high pitch ...
Her hand still cupped in his grip ,she looked at him with all his love , tears formed in her eyes ,she spelled "I love you "...
Ram : I love you too baby .I love you so much ..I love more than myself and my life..Dont leave me ..I wanted to tell you so many things baby please please I beg of you my love
When she is about to close her eyes again..Hey baby please please look at me .Look atme ..
Will you drink some water ha.. wwater ...Hearing his talk with priya everybody heart is eching .Its so heart wrenching to see a pair like this ..
She nodded her head in a no ..Bah..bahuth ...
Ha sweety . tell me .. Bahuth kya hai .. damn it ..God please let her be safe .. He cringed with pain
Bahuth dard hai ...Her words pierced his heart ..
He taken his revolver again in his hands spread the bullets in Ashwin again until the bullets over .
Kissing her palm again ..I will take you to the hospital now Just be with me They will give pain killer na ..It will subside .Please baby ..I love you .. It will go it will go removing one of thron from her shoulder ..
Note from the writer ..
My pyari readers aIm not hurt by your comments ..I had ust doubt wether you are able to read furthur story or not to confirmation i had given my POV of what i thought ..
We are extremly sorry if your felt BAD or HURT ..
please be patience for some time..You wil get to see RAYA and RAYA only RAYA
I promice .. Thank you so much being with us and your support ..
I just wanna share one incident
Iam watching the movie and got a call from armanz:
I thought some emergency I attended it and she barged me why you write the assaulting part ..I cried reading it ..
I was like shock and surprised ki how much she attached to it ..
Before also I have given msg to Neetu regarding my POV.
After keeping the call i had 3 msgs from the other readers that they are sad to read for it .
and then Neel was like almost jumping on me
Readers may not take it .
so Neel is the responsible for this ..Lol..You bucther her ..
But loved your support and love for our dear RAYA ..i Promice I wont let you down ..
Typing the update bunking my work halfday 😆
From Neel :Sorry guys I think I over reacted .. But seems I thought you people may wont accept
sorr wil continue with the story ..
Choti .. I posted her review on Lakshmi ,movie in this thread .. check it ..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3783171&TPN=25&#p103314397