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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Just now read the note. Agree with u in every point. Creativity is not always about entertainment alone. Its also about the creator's point, what he/she would like to give the society thru their works. So go for it girl. Let us try to accept the reality so that we take care that our brothers and sons think of a woman with due respect. I feel this should be every woman's responsibility towards the society.



Thank you for understanding ..
creativity is not always entertainment it is painful for writer also no more words as i totally agree with you '
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anupam_dil


OH hello...hey kis ne kaha aap ko end karne ko...I did not read this note till now abhi abhi dekhi...😲😲
hum tho utna strong nahi hai per aap tho hai na😛
BALH show mei bhi we say many negative things to some episodes that does not mean that we want the show to end. Isn't it?...It is just that many love RAYA very much that they can't take the reality in fiction that easily specially if that is in our hands...so the replies immediately isa hi aathe hai per thoda time ke baad they think wise and write the comments...(many me meri bhi naam aati hai😉...I am like kiran kher in India's got talent...I just close my eyes can't see the same like in that show)

not only me but every one who read the update ...also have the same issue that's all😛 ...

SORRY if we hurt you with our comments...
aage se acche se comment karenge 😉

inka ninna current poindi correct ga nenu update complete chesi like chese lopu...nenu like cheya leda update ni😲😲😲...ippude chusa velli




ayyo veena .. we are not hurt for seeing the comments
we got doubt wether you all can able to cop up wth next updates
to clarify that we have given the note ...

Lol .. frankly .. your like also not there at thattime
but as you said previously you dont want to read sad updates
i thought you may not like so didnt ask ... hehe bhale guess chesave .. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishraapoorva14

ohh yaar..that was such a sad update...that idiot as*** ...plzz dnt let anything happen to priya and also shruti plzz...let priya be safe...but i would lyk u to continue ur version of the story and looking frward to it...but plzzz let priya be safe...continue soon..thnxx fr the pm..!!




YYah it was a sad update

hope the girls will be fine soon
Thank you so much for the suport wil try to give update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

i dont know what to write

i will just post what i felt first i found it funny with those dialogues coz most of the dialgoues of telugu mves contain such OTT and masala dialogues from shruti😆(naku inta freedom undi ani anukuntuna anduke am posting it the way i felt) and then some glimpses of arundathi mve that smell thing mainly😆

You felt like that ..but i felt its taunting .. lol .. masala .. you find it masala .. im laughing here .. choti you are such impossible and arundhathi movie .. where you felt it
..

but that one scene of ashwin doing all that to priya totally changed my mood i felt disgusting di may be such men do exist 😡 this is the reality di i have never came across such incidents in my real life but when the day nirbhaya died i cried a lot the whole day and couldnt even share it with any one i dont know waht was happening to me but i just wanted to cry your story i cried again had tears

Yah same with the writer when that nirbaya case happened she cried the whole day .. uff its horrible

The Worst was ram knowing and watching everything that would be hell to him😭 dont want anything to happen to priya and his child and i want you to give hell lot of slaps and cruel punishment to ashwin from ram and law😡

Yes the worst is which Ram is watching and he is help less too .

ACP is doing brilliant job di vikram as supporting friend was awesome and raya god save them and
i read your note di leave about likes and comments you have attempted something which ppl cant even think of thats a brave attempt

Thank you for the support .. Ashwin wil get punished soon ..

you know what i havent seen lakshmi trailer because i am not brave enough to watch such scenes and i so want to see the mve but cant dare it di will watch only ram parts once DVD is out

so go on and continue with what u feel as right dont comprimise for anyone i would love to read this

P.S: So giri watched Lakshmi ask her how is the mve and Rams role



And thank you will write our story ..
Yah even Giri wants to go for movie because of Ram only .. but she is not dar enough to face what actually shows ,, but she told her friend the movie about prostitution and some bitter truths of facts .. so her friends supported her ..
so she gone along with friends ..
se posted her review in facebook page of lakshmi ..
i will ask her and post the link in .. lakshmi movie thread ..


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome writing
Please save both ladies
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MittalKanu

Awesome writing

Please save both ladies
Thanks for the pm



Thank you for the aprecaition
Hope they will be fine ...
Will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


As everybody asked I gave preview of they uniting scene..

He ran to Her ,Taking his life in his arms..He sat there ..He hasn't cared of throns ..Priya is only his matter now .

Priya.. Priyaa.. see I came here ..

Dekh lena Priya .. ek baar ..Please Priya.. ankho kolo our dekho ..

Mai..Aap ki Ram .. One police handed him the water .. Keeping her head in safely his thigh, he showered some water drops on her face ,,,She blinked her eyelids..

He slowly slapped her cheeks .. Dekh Priya ..

Look at me priya .. Please ...once look at me ..Iam here ..His body is raking with his sobs ..

Gazing at the other Side .. Shruthis dekho our tell your friend Iam here .. His tears flowed again

His forehead touched hers , his warm tears made a way to her face ... feeling them she slightly opened her eyes...Ram who was crying badly ...He han't noticed until her wounded hand made a way to caress his cheek ever so weakly .. He jerked ... He opened his eyes raised his head .. Kissing her hand ..

Her lips curved into a weak grin seeing her love of life ..

Don't worry sweety .. See I came .. I came na.. nothing will happen to you .. I will save you baby

She is about to close her eyes again .. Please baby ..Please .. I never ever gonna leave you again ..Please please be with me .. Doctorrr he yelled at his high pitch ...

Her hand still cupped in his grip ,she looked at him with all his love , tears formed in her eyes ,she spelled "I love you "...

Ram : I love you too baby .I love you so much ..I love more than myself and my life..Dont leave me ..I wanted to tell you so many things baby please please I beg of you my love

When she is about to close her eyes again..Hey baby please please look at me .Look atme ..

Will you drink some water ha.. wwater ...Hearing his talk with priya everybody heart is eching .Its so heart wrenching to see a pair like this ..

She nodded her head in a no ..Bah..bahuth ...

Ha sweety . tell me .. Bahuth kya hai .. damn it ..God please let her be safe .. He cringed with pain

Bahuth dard hai ...Her words pierced his heart ..

He taken his revolver again in his hands spread the bullets in Ashwin again until the bullets over .

Kissing her palm again ..I will take you to the hospital now Just be with me They will give pain killer na ..It will subside .Please baby ..I love you .. It will go it will go removing one of thron from her shoulder ..



Note from the writer ..

My pyari readers aIm not hurt by your comments ..I had ust doubt wether you are able to read furthur story or not to confirmation i had given my POV of what i thought ..
We are extremly sorry if your felt BAD or HURT ..

please be patience for some time..You wil get to see RAYA and RAYA only RAYA
I promice .. Thank you so much being with us and your support ..
I just wanna share one incident
Iam watching the movie and got a call from armanz:
I thought some emergency I attended it and she barged me why you write the assaulting part ..I cried reading it ..
I was like shock and surprised ki how much she attached to it ..
Before also I have given msg to Neetu regarding my POV.
After keeping the call i had 3 msgs from the other readers that they are sad to read for it .
and then Neel was like almost jumping on me
Readers may not take it .
so Neel is the responsible for this ..Lol..You bucther her ..
But loved your support and love for our dear RAYA ..i Promice I wont let you down ..
Typing the update bunking my work halfday 😆

From Neel :Sorry guys I think I over reacted .. But seems I thought you people may wont accept
sorr wil continue with the story ..
Choti .. I posted her review on Lakshmi ,movie in this thread .. check it ..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3783171&TPN=25&#p10331439
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Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me firsttt 😳😳 huraayy
yahooo very happy to get a preview
preview is sweet...ram is there to take care of priya
pheww at peace... ram aur goli maaro ashwin ko 😡😡 he deserves nothing better
raya back again
just like you promised ...sweet parts starting ...
love ul di 🤗
damn happy to get preview and being first after ages 😆
waiting for update😃
Edited by sss283 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Poor priya...plz save her..cant see her with so much of pain 😭
ram reached there...painful moment...
cont soon...
di one req aswin should be tortured like hell.plz ..so that i can feel relived..want to read that part...cont soon

Edited by 123fiza - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG..am just u know my heart is heavy reading the preview..Ram's words are bringing tears..Usska pyar really I am out of words.
But her I Love you and Bahuth dard ho raha hai..cant control my tears..
Please save her please.
Ramm...be strong man.
Hope will see their painful reunion..but hope everything will be fine.
Nice preview..Update soon. cant wait more.

Neel kya karu I was like shaking wid anger n tears wen i read the assault part..so call karke chillaya..
Edited by armanz - 11 years ago

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