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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Ohhh so both are enjoying their trip in the iland ...
I loved the tortoise part and where she is saying bye to him with a flying kiss..
and than she wants to learn swimming and Ram is very much into it ..
Both are in supernedd but cant confess as they may have barriers still ..
superb update cont soon

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for loving that part, it was really sweet, thoda sa barrier abhi bhi hain but am sure very soon that will fall apart coz RaYa love is much bigger than that

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Thanks for the pm

pleasure is all mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: haribol79
Hi... can't believe you stopped at this point!
now again waiting for 1 whole week for update..
btw it's a lovely update and well written with all the description of the place.. I was almost there enjoying with RaYa and Tortoise..: )

they both want each other and We want the same...

WHEN WILL YOU TOO WANT THE WANT THE SAME ???

WAITING..

thanks for commenting😊, sorry but aage aur kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha toh I stopped. Thanks for loving the part, I always want them to be one but its upto them but now it seems the time has come, let's see, keep reading

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Fab update..
Description of place was beautifull..
Both re enjoying their trip nd re so comfortable with each other specially Priya considering what happened in past..she is not hesitating in opening up infront of Ram, not letting her fear overcome this happiness she is feeling with Ram, fully enjoying..loved it so much
Ram is taking care of her..feeling happy seeing her happy nd gets sad seeing her sad..
How they re coming closer is clear in every scene..in swimming part, tortoise scene( it was so beautifull) , how much comfortable they re in each others proximity, both want each other but Ram needed to confess his love first nd Priya to accept his love..
Progression in their relationship nd their feelings re awesomly described..
Great job..loved it
Thanx for pm..

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the description, Priya is opening but not consciously its Ram who is taking care of her genuinely that leading her to open up, tortoise made them come closer a bit more😉, don't worry Ram will confess only but when that is what we need to know now, let's see, thanks for liking the part, pleasure is all mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
superb hm part..
nice description of the spot as well as Their feelings and all just awesome
thank u for ur pm

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the part, pleasure is all mine, keep reading

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Alkona
Awesome update...keep going👏👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
very very nice update❤️...plz update ASAP...
thank you for pm😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: raynarahman
AWEEE JUST SUPERB MINDBLOWING... NOW WAITING FOR THEIR CONFESSION😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: Raya_some
Eee .. It was a beautiful update .. ur description made me feel like i actually visited the place .. I hope ram speaks his heart soon .. Eagerly waiting .. :) :) :) Continue soon ..

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the description, will continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: chillpc
superb part...!!!!
raya gettng toghether wid little voids...
whch r to b filled...

cute raya moments...

contn soon...
thnx fr the pm...!!! 😛

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the part, will continue soon, pleasure is all mine