RaYa FF mkl...iht thread 4, final part on page 145

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haribol79

@haribol79

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Hi... can't believe you stopped at this point!
now again waiting for 1 whole week for update..
btw it's a lovely update and well written with all the description of the place.. I was almost there enjoying with RaYa and Tortoise..: )

they both want each other and We want the same...

WHEN WILL YOU TOO WANT THE WANT THE SAME ???

WAITING..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Fab update..
Description of place was beautifull..
Both re enjoying their trip nd re so comfortable with each other specially Priya considering what happened in past..she is not hesitating in opening up infront of Ram, not letting her fear overcome this happiness she is feeling with Ram, fully enjoying..loved it so much
Ram is taking care of her..feeling happy seeing her happy nd gets sad seeing her sad..
How they re coming closer is clear in every scene..in swimming part, tortoise scene( it was so beautifull) , how much comfortable they re in each others proximity, both want each other but Ram needed to confess his love first nd Priya to accept his love..
Progression in their relationship nd their feelings re awesomly described..
Great job..loved it
Thanx for pm..

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#303

superb hm part..

nice description of the spot as well as Their feelings and all just awesome

thank u for ur pm

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Alkona

@Alkona

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Awesome update...keep going👏👏

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

very very nice update❤️...plz update ASAP...

thank you for pm😊

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raynarahman

@raynarahman

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

AWEEE JUST SUPERB MINDBLOWING... NOW WAITING FOR THEIR CONFESSION😳

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Raya_some

@Raya_some

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Eee .. It was a beautiful update .. ur description made me feel like i actually visited the place .. I hope ram speaks his heart soon .. Eagerly waiting .. :) :) :) Continue soon ..

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#308

superb part...!!!!

raya gettng toghether wid little voids...

whch r to b filled...

cute raya moments...

contn soon...

thnx fr the pm...!!! 😛

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Sumira

@zeylanica

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#309

Hi Ujjani

Finished reading all the parts and each n every part is just amazing... beautifully penned ... had me hooked all the time ... totally loving the progression in the storyline n the changes both Ram n Priya have shown so far ... Just love it

Waiting for Ram to confess his love ..