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Posted: 11 years ago
very bad yaar.. u ended it on another suspense 😒


Loving it, continue soon ! 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Sandhya meri questiionaire abhi bhi jaari hai../

Viro i m asking a new question only..
how dare rajjo tell tyum tum to Ram , when he is a employee under him?? sorry sandhyya i noticed this point 😛😆
Hospital k register mein priya ka naam nhi tha kya, bcoz previously also she had a check up their, shayad ram bhool gaya😛😆 jaane do sandhya tumhare kehne pe ram ko maaf karidya aur Viro sandhya ko baksh diya😆
baaki comment karoongi, mera aapko Ekta sis kehne ka saarthak hogya, ram ko suit se sherwani pehenaayi, aur aapne rajjo ko bilkul ram ke saaamne k seat pe bitha diya😆(main jaanti thi ye karogi 🤣) aur rajjo OMG itni lambi dialogues, Ye rishta toh theek se sambhaal lo😆😆 , laggta hai energy drink peeya hai😆😆

Driver bechaara kitna studious and honest hai yaar medicine laake car k saath bahar hi khada tha kya??😆

Priya ne letter bhi chod diya, ram ne padh bhi liya, paral changed to Pihu, KK confronted her son, ram still hidden his feelings, restless priya again maseeha Rajjo. sabko free me gyan baant ta hai, jai ho rajjo baba😆😆. sorry bahot zyada khinchaayo hogayi ab aage se nhi hogi😛😛


Very beautiful update,loved the story n portrayal of emotions raging bull ram , hurt priya, angry vikki on his friend's childish behavior, hyper neha as usual, nutz blaming her self, and super happy maa KK.



Thanks for the brilliant progression, beautiful narration and PM too.

chalo abb aapke naye sawalo ke jawab deti hoon
first he was an employee...woh bhi Ram ka nahi tha...Rajat's boss is different.
second...meine jaanbhujkar mention nahi kiya ki Priya same clinic gayi ki different...same gayi hoti toh ram ko shayad pata chal jata...aur Priya clinic gayi zaroor lekin doctor se mili nahi
Driver ki detailing bhi chahiye😲...itna maza aata hai driver ke POV jaanne ka😆...malu iss baar koi loopholes nahi chode hai...tum dono ho na scrutinize karne issliyeOuch
Thanks for comments🤗
Edited by sandhyasn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi 😆
is bar trouble nhi karungi aur na hi koi question puchungi 😆
priya pune chodkar gayi aur ram pune aaya only to know k priya left him 😔
priya note chodkar gayi aur reason tha bhi na usme k wo kyu jarahi hai toh ram ko itna naraz nhi hona chahiye tha 😆
driver toh bada accha aur wafadar hai...poora din apni madam ka wait karta raha 😆
ram ko pata tha k priya clinic gayi hai toh usne clinic pe enquiry kyu nhi ki 😕
present mai shaadi k mandap tak pahonche gaye esha aur ram 😆 but rajat beech mai aagaya..i mean samne aagaya 🤣
now rajat will speak up the truth aur apni dukhi kahanai sunayega 😆
waiting for next update 😛 want to know k rajat kya kya batata hai aur kaise batata hai 😆
yeh part likhte waqt aap kitni careful thi wo update padhkar dikh raha hai 😆 but mujhe reason mai aur malati nhi balke rajat lag raha hai 🤣

thanks for the pm 😛

p.s. aaj subah maine ipl ka "come on, bulawa aaya hai" song dekha...i wanted to post the link for you as ur rajat is dancning in that 😆 but link nhi mila
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

chalo abb aapke naye sawalo ke jawab deti hoon

first he was an employee...woh bhi Ram ka nahi tha...Rajat's boss is different.
second...meine jaanbhujkar mention nahi kiya ki Priya same clinic gayi ki different...same gayi hoti toh ram ko shayad pata chal jata...aur Priya clinic gayi zaroor lekin doctor se mili nahi
Driver ki detailing bhi chahiye😲...itna maza aata hai driver ke POV jaanne ka😆...malu iss baar koi loopholes nahi chode hai...tum dono ho na scrutinize karne issliye
Thanks for comments🤗


Ok sab agreed ..
Mujhe driver ki honesty dekh k maza aa rha hai, aaj kal k drivers aise nhi hota hain😆😕

Well Doctor se nhi mili toh prescription kounsa diya med laane ko?😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!! what a Awesome twist 👏👏👏
Wonderful Update 👏
Hope next update is very emotional & re-union of RaYa,
Waiting for next update & Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

hi 😆

is bar trouble nhi karungi aur na hi koi question puchungi 😆
priya pune chodkar gayi aur ram pune aaya only to know k priya left him 😔
priya note chodkar gayi aur reason tha bhi na usme k wo kyu jarahi hai toh ram ko itna naraz nhi hona chahiye tha 😆
driver toh bada accha aur wafadar hai...poora din apni madam ka wait karta raha 😆
ram ko pata tha k priya clinic gayi hai toh usne clinic pe enquiry kyu nhi ki 😕
present mai shaadi k mandap tak pahonche gaye esha aur ram 😆 but rajat beech mai aagaya..i mean samne aagaya 🤣
now rajat will speak up the truth aur apni dukhi kahanai sunayega 😆
waiting for next update 😛 want to know k rajat kya kya batata hai aur kaise batata hai 😆
yeh part likhte waqt aap kitni careful thi wo update padhkar dikh raha hai 😆 but mujhe reason mai aur malati nhi balke rajat lag raha hai 🤣

thanks for the pm 😛

p.s. aaj subah maine ipl ka "come on, bulawa aaya hai" song dekha...i wanted to post the link for you as ur rajat is dancning in that 😆 but link nhi mila

meine maalu ko bhi explanation diya ki agar Priya same clinic jaati toh ram ko sab pata chal jata...aur enquiry kaise jab Priya ne register hi nahi karwaya aur Doctor se mili bhi nahi.Tongue
Ram ke orders the driver ko ki wahi rehne ka toh kada raha bechara😆
aur jyada flashback keechti toh log kehte I am stretching like a rubber band...toh issliye jyada details nahi diOuch
dhuki kahani😆 haan aur bahut lambi sunayega😡..tum dono ki wajah se😡
P.S. kitna chedoge uss Rajat ko aur muje...are jeene do use😆..muje nahi chahiye koi link😡achha hua nahi mila link...sakshi ka hai toh de do😳
Thaks for comments🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hiii sandyyy
Again I missed it ... Hopefully from next time I will be able to come in first page 😆

Coming to the update ...I so waited for Raya marrige in any way 😉😆
But you stopped at the very point ...
You could have write "BIWI"

"Priya meri BIWI nahi hai Ram"

It could have stronger impact 😆 ..Kyun wife likha 😉

The flshback scene was simply superb ,when Ram called priya , he got switched off and Ram felt some tug in his heart and than driver calll .When Ram read the letter his emotinos ,aguish ,while travelling in train priya's weeping .everything is just potaryed simply awesome.
And in present she said to rajat she dont care and went inside ,hugging her two kids she cried
wah superb scene .I loved it

But i want the next update also ASAP...
abhi chahi ye ..😆If you are not going for the tour ,i could have make you post atleast tomorrow 😆
Chalo thanks for the update ...

I so wanted to give one more gift EKta sister
But controlled as you have to travel na so not posting now ..

If you wont post the next update sooonner
will deffo post your gift here 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm
chaho toh can i post your gift 😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

kyun nahi ho sakte...Ram ka personal driver tha...sunna padega jo kaha

aur prescription zaroori thodi ki pregnancy se related ho...kuch bhi de sakti hai...even Parul ka bhi de sakti hai...He will not question...aur Ram check karta hai toh samaj jaata ki clinic jana ek bahana tha...she already plan to left him...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn


maine kab kaha ki prescription pregnancy ki honi chahiye😲
ok leave it

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