OS:Sadi gali aaja PART 3 on pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: bpatil3

I wonder if ram will realize this ever and teaches his daughter's to first respect their mom.

Good one.👍🏼

thnk u very much
btw wts ur name???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

part 1
wow awesome start of story Peehu's whole truth is out now Ram knows everything even abt Juhi too Awesome... just amezing love it moving on next to see our roaring lion over daayan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

part 2
u wrote all the things which we shouting form so long to CV's gud I felt relax now... seeing Ram's outbrust on Peehu... now eagarly waiting for next do post soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Part 1 and part 2
Awesome updates
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Hola guys

initially i thought i ll post the last part after my exams

bt then i changed my plan




here goes the last bt nt the least chapter of my os

enjoy nd do shower me with ur cmmnts


Pi:dad hum kha jaa rhe hai


Ra:Priya ke paas

usse vaapis laane

Pi:dad mujhe nhi aana plz aap jaaiye na


Ra:kyu kya huaa

dar lag rha hai apni maa se milne se

tab nhi lga jab itna kuch bola tha tune uske baare


Pi:dad i cnt face her


Ra: u will hav to face her

mujhe kuch nhi sunna

ab chalo mere saath aur tum vha sab se maafi maango

Kush Suhaani aur Suhaani aur Priya se khaaske

hope u understnd


Priya s House


ding dong


Priya:Kush dekhna koan hai?


Kush:haa angel aapke liye darwwaza kya mai to sab kuch khol skta hai


Priya:mere Ranbir Kapoor mere SRK dialogue maarna band kr aur darwazza khol


Kush:jaa rha hu angel


Kush opens the door nd is shocked to see Pihu crying nd Ram with anger on his face


(Priya coming towards the door)


Priya:Koan hai Kush


she s also shocked to see Ran nd Pihu


Priya:Kush mai kamre mei hu kuch kaam ho to batana


nd Priya strts goin


Pihu:mumma


Priya stops nd turns back to see her rockstar crying bt she controls herself nd strts going inside


Pihu comes nd stnds infront of Priya


Pihu:mumma m sorry

sorry mumma nd she hugs Priya


this was enough for Priya to break down


now both mumma nd daughter r crying on each others shoulder

they separate after sometime


Pihu:m sorry mumma

mai Juhi maa nhi Juhi Aunty ki baatho mai aakar maine aisa kiya

m sorry mumma


Priya:dekha Pihu teri ek zidd ki vajah s kitno ki zindgi kharaab ho gyi


Pihu:mumma mai sab theek krna chaahti

mumma mai Sammy ko divorce dedungi taaki woh Suhaani se shaadi karle

aur mumma maine aapko kha tha na ki mai Interior Designing krna chaahti thi Swizerland mai phir Swizerland chali jaaungi

aur phir mai apni ek company kholungi interior Designing waali

mai bhi dad ke jaise ek badi businesswomen baungi


Priya:bache tujhe jo krna hai kar

par mujhse vaada kar ki tu aage se apni zidd mai andhi nhi hogi ki tujhe apni zidd ke aage kuh dikhe hi na

aur beta emotions koi khelne ki cheez nhi hai

so Princess promise me ki yeh sab vaapis nhi hoga


Pihu:yes mumma

Pihu waala promise

love u mumma


nd Pihu hugs Priya


Priya:love u to beta


Priya strsts walking towards her room ignoring Ram

bt Ram follows her

Priya is also very well aware of Ram s presence


Priya s room( only the night lamps r on )


Priya s standin by the window

she dnt know y bt tears r nt stoppin


Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor


Ram:Priya


Priya hears him bt doesnt turn around


Ram goes near Priya nd taps on her shoulder


Priya turns around

keeps her head on Ram s chest nd strts cryin


Ram also embraces Priya nd strts caressing her hair to calm her down


after sometym they break their hug bt Priya s sobbing doesnot stop


Ram wipes her tears Priya again clings to Ram nd starts crying


Ram:bas Priya bas tumhe pta hai na mai tumhaara rona nhi handle kr skta

tum muskuraate huee badi achi lagti ho


(Ram remembers Priya s smiling face)


Dil ki Dhadkan Baddi Jaye...Samne Jab Woh Aaye...

Pyaar Issiko Kehte Hain Kya...Koi Yeh Samjayee..

Magar Saache Lagte Hain...

Yeh Dharti...Yeh Nadiya...

Yeh Rehna ... Aur Tummm..


Priya starts smilin


Main Ghoom Jaun Tujhme...Aur Tum Mujhme Yun Kho Jaoo...
Main Baan jau Sargam Aapni...Hoton Se Mujhe Gau...
Bade Aacche Lagte hai...Yeh Sapne...Umeedein...Achaye...Aur Tum...


Ram:I m sory Priya ki maine tumhaara vishwaas nhi kiya
mai Pihu ki zidd ke aage yeh nhi dekh paaya ki tum uski maa ho
aur tum kabhi uska bura nhi chaahogi
I m sorry Priya

Priya:Galti sirf aapki nhi hai Mr Kapoor mai bhi aapko akele chod aayi aisa
mai apni zidd mai yeh bhool gyi ki aap dono baap beti uble huee aloo jaise
jo thnde hone ke liye time to lete hai bt thnde ho jaate hai

Ram:tumne mujhe mota kha

Priya:nhi to mai to compare kr rhi thi

(Priya again starts crying)
maine bahut miss kiya aapko
ek pal mere liye kitna mushkil hai guzaarna aapke begair
kyu jaane diya mujhe aapne
roka kyu nhi
mai bhi paagal hu chali kyu aayi
bahut miss kiya maine aapka

Priya again hugs Ram

Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Ye sahe kayi baar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein




Ram:Priya maine kha na mai tumhaara rona nhi handle kr skta hu
plz yaar rona band karo

Ram wipes Priya s tears

Ram:rote waqt bilkul achi nhi lgti ho

Priya:aapne mujhe maaf kiya na??

Ram:haa meri maa

Priya:meri maa nhi meri Priya

This time Ram embraces Priya

Priya:I love you nd i really really do

Ram:i love you too Priya

after sometime they separate

Priya:maine soch liya hai

Ram:kya?

Priya:dekhiye pehele hum Sammy Suhaani ki shaadi karaaenge
phir Pihu ko Swizerland bhejenge aurrr phirr...(with a naughty grin)

Ram:phir kyaa

Priya:phiiirrr mai aur aap Australia jaayenge
mujhe kuch waqt sirf aapke saath bitaana hai
akele mei
sabse dooo

Ram:your wish my command
to madam Australia jaane ke liye pehele aapko mere saath KM jaana hoga

Priya:to chaliye roka kisne hai


THE END

Hope u all lyked it
do shower me with ur cmmnts

Priya


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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: leena04


part 1
wow awesome start of story Peehu's whole truth is out now Ram knows everything even abt Juhi too Awesome... just amezing love it moving on next to see our roaring lion over daayan...


thnk u for ur ovely comments
btw wts ur name??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: leena04


part 2
u wrote all the things which we shouting form so long to CV's gud I felt relax now... seeing Ram's outbrust on Peehu... now eagarly waiting for next do post soon...


thnk u very mcuh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Part 1 and part 2

Awesome updates
Plz continue soon


thnk u very mcuh
btw wts ur name???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

good and nice ending


thnk u btw wts ur name???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
i am done darling fb pe
but thank u for ur
pm
and sweet update

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