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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Very sweet update. 😛
Progression of the story is handled very well. You have described Priyas' relationship with each member so well. Love it... small conversations with each member gives a complete picture of this story.. Lovely. 👏 👏

Loved that you have kept Priya still strong and determined to win her husbands love and his heart... Awesome. 😛👏👏

Yes.. for a second,,wanted to bash Ram Kapoor but then again.. i am hoping things will change for better so will hold off my RB mode.. 😆 😆 😆

Last Balcony scene was cute, touching and may be a little sad. As a reader. felt bad for Priya that he does not care.. Again.. very well written. 👏👏👏

Loved it

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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Touching 😭

and i take not wanting to bash Ram back from my last update..😊

he is SO MEAN. What the fork. Implying Priya is used to travel by bus?
Why is the man forgetting that Priya said yes to marrying him for his family's happiness. He is SO rude.. cant even be normal and polite? More punches from me to him

Haha.. ok. now that i have punched him HARD...back to comment.

Loved it how Priya handled the situation and her plan to ignore him. 👏
You have described Priya's time with Sudhir and Shipra so well.

As always.. smile to my face as a reader when you write about Priya and Mithi. Such a beautiful relationship. Bond they share is so heart warming and you write their conversation so well
👏 👏 👏

Thank You

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shreya

@Ramdeewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

very nice thanks for PM

hope ram realises his feelings

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: leena04

ohh great finally Ram ji maan ki baat pata chal hi jayegi awesome will be waiting for it do post soon...

in coming parts you all will get to know Ram's POV also, what is brewing in his heart and mind

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: rampriya7aug
mkl ... iht thread 3 me total kitane parts hai

well I haven't planned it yet let's see all I can say is that its not going to end soon, meri iss SS ko thoda aurl bear karna parega aap sab ko

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: IndYa4u
Very sweet update. 😛
Progression of the story is handled very well. You have described Priyas' relationship with each member so well. Love it... small conversations with each member gives a complete picture of this story.. Lovely. 👏 👏

Loved that you have kept Priya still strong and determined to win her husbands love and his heart... Awesome. 😛👏👏

Yes.. for a second,,wanted to bash Ram Kapoor but then again.. i am hoping things will change for better so will hold off my RB mode.. 😆 😆 😆

Last Balcony scene was cute, touching and may be a little sad. As a reader. felt bad for Priya that he does not care.. Again.. very well written. 👏👏👏

Loved it

thanks for commenting😊, Priya will be strong and this will make Ram understand her, you can bash him if you want, no problem in that😆, thanks for liking

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: IndYa4u
Touching 😭

and i take not wanting to bash Ram back from my last update..😊

he is SO MEAN. What the fork. Implying Priya is used to travel by bus?
Why is the man forgetting that Priya said yes to marrying him for his family's happiness. He is SO rude.. cant even be normal and polite? More punches from me to him

Haha.. ok. now that i have punched him HARD...back to comment.

Loved it how Priya handled the situation and her plan to ignore him. 👏
You have described Priya's time with Sudhir and Shipra so well.

As always.. smile to my face as a reader when you write about Priya and Mithi. Such a beautiful relationship. Bond they share is so heart warming and you write their conversation so well
👏 👏 👏

Thank You

thanks for commenting😊, it suits him the punches😆, mere taraf se bhi do de dena, I can't so you plz do the needful😡, Meethi is the life of Priya and only she can make her calm and smile, keep reading as more RaYa moments are coming up now with Ram's POV

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Ramdeewani
very nice thanks for PM
hope ram realises his feelings

thanks for commenting😊, don't worry he will realize it with time, pleasure is all mine

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

here comes the preview, ENJOY

Priya was giving instruction to Karthik and he was blindly following her. Isi beech yeh dono ne bhi bohot masti kiya, Karthik was cutting veggies where Priya was making the other preparation, as Mishras are total vegeteranian so Priya chose some mouthwatering veggie Chineese dishes. It was almost dinner time and both Karthik and Priya came out from kitchen and made the table ready for dinner.

She sat on the couch and took her laptop and started going through the openings in Hotels, she was actually looking for a job. Priya ne decide kiya tha ke shaadi ke baad woh kaam nahin karegi, she will only dedicate her time to her family lekin woh yeh nahi janti thi ke uska khaali waqt usko aur khaalipan ke khaayi me dhakel rahi hain, jitna waqt woh iss kamre me rahegi utna hi usse apna bojh hone ka ehsaas hoga, she wants to come out from it, so she decided to join somewhere in Mumbai. Priya was going through the openings, she found some of them and mailed them.

Ram - Priya main uss din tumhe hurt nahi karna chata tha, I was actually concerned for my sister and you, main nahi chahta tha ki tum dono bus se travel karo, am sorry

Priya - maine pehele hi aapko kahan tha ki aapko sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahi hain aur aage se plz mere liye concern hone ki zaarorat nahi hain, I can handle myself.

Ram was trying to patch up but Priya wasn't even bothered, now Ram made Priya face him and said, of course I am concerned about you, meri biwi ho tum, you are my responsibility, agar tumhe kuch ho jayega toh...

Ram - tum kyun aisa soch rahi ho?

Priya - jo sach hain main bas wahi kahan hain

Ram - yeh sach nahi hain aur yeh tum bhi janti ho aur main bhi

Priya - main sirf yeh janti hoon ki humari shaadi sirf ek compromise shaadi hain bas aur kuch nahi, na hamare beech koi rishta hain aur nahi kabhi hoga

Ram - yeh sach hain ke hamari shaadi compromise ki hain lekin yeh bhi sach hain ki tum meri dost ho