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Posted: 11 years ago
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doesnt look like u r writing for first tym😊
it was superb 👏
hope monday ko aisa kuch hi dikha de which i think is near to impossible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@chillpc, @bpatil, @lpsakshi, @D4BALH, @Peeyara,
Thanks for liking my story. I do hope similar thing is shown in BALH, but very doubtful..

@bpatil,

Yes, my intention was to bring in everybody's emotion into play, unfortunately BALH CVs are not doing it, most of the characters in BALH are currently just props.

Edited by ever_smily - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Geetha..sorry for late
Its awesome..the thing i love the most is u have showed the behaviour of everyone in this acc to their char..otherwise in show everybody is behaving out of char..
Emotions re perfectly penned down in it..
Logicall yet fiction thing..
Great job..it doesnt looks like its ur first time.. 👏 👏
Thanx for the pm..
Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome feb... it was ur first write up but didn't look a like i really enjoyed the story so finally Juhi maa went to jail too gud Priya started responding hoping her to be back soon... do write more if u can...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ever_smily


Hey, this is my first ever attempt to write fiction.. If I can write, anyone can write.. Do try your hand in writing..

Alternative to writing fiction was making a post to bash Ram, which I can never ever do how much ever frustrated I am.

At this moment, more than frustration, I actually feel pity for him. Contrary to popular opinion, I feel he has not disrespected or undermined Priya. What I feel is he has undermined and disrespected his own love which is the saddest thing. Strictly my POV

hehe will definitely try... And with regards to bashing I can't bash either priya or ram... Because I just love them so so much that I can't bash them... So I never comment on bashing or any post... Just on the FF OS...
And currently cvs have taken us for a bad ride with such a track... Just hope marriage do not take place... Or else we RaYa fans will b shattered... Btw May I know your name..,, I am Krutika...,,
Edited by kaparikh1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vironikajain

Hi Geetha..sorry for late
Its awesome..the thing i love the most is u have showed the behaviour of everyone in this acc to their char..otherwise in show everybody is behaving out of char..
Emotions re perfectly penned down in it..
Logicall yet fiction thing..
Great job..it doesnt looks like its ur first time.. 👏 👏
Thanx for the pm..


Hi Vironika,

Thank you. Yes, one of my biggest complaint about BALH is that they don't show the true emotions of all characters, most of the characters (Dadi, KK, Rishab, Sowmya and now NeVik too) are just used as props to fill the screen space,

About the emotions, it came automatically once I started writing.. I guess, I feel so strongly for RaYa, it just comes out.

And writing this OS made me connect with the charcters more strongly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04

awesome feb... it was ur first write up but didn't look a like i really enjoyed the story so finally Juhi maa went to jail too gud Priya started responding hoping her to be back soon... do write more if u can...


Thank you.. I too enjoyed writing the story..

I am not a creative person, can't come up with any new plots.. But, I can correct something which is screwed up (just like the current track).


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaparikh1

hehe will definitely try... And with regards to bashing I can't bash either priya or ram... Because I just love them so so much that I can't bash them... So I never comment on bashing or any post... Just on the FF OS...

And currently cvs have taken us for a bad ride with such a track... Just hope marriage do not take place... Or else we RaYa fans will b shattered... Btw May I know your name..,, I am Krutika...,,


I am Geetha.

Same here, I can't bash anyone too. Nice knowing you, Krutika
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ever_smily


I am Geetha.

Same here, I can't bash anyone too. Nice knowing you, Krutika

Hi Geetha, Glad to know u to dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ever_smily



Hi Vironika,

Thank you. Yes, one of my biggest complaint about BALH is that they don't show the true emotions of all characters, most of the characters (Dadi, KK, Rishab, Sowmya and now NeVik too) are just used as props to fill the screen space,

About the emotions, it came automatically once I started writing.. I guess, I feel so strongly for RaYa, it just comes out.

And writing this OS made me connect with the charcters more strongly.



Exactly no consistency in any char nd they use them as mere props these days..
We all feel same..its great u have vent out ur frustration like this nd we re still cribbing..

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