OS: Our Love Story Part A & B updated on pg-8 - Page 11

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

Very nice...enjoyed it..thanks fr pm

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

nice update

story ke saat this heading is perfect.our love story 😊

I like the way u presented the story.

bachho ka sawal karna aur Raya ka jawab dena...

aur ideas aate hai toh pesh karo ji muje achhi lagi

thanks for PM😊

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

wow yaar too cute os ..love it ..plz write more ..thank u for ur pm yaar ..

Originally posted by: peeyara

thank u😊

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

Absolutely loved this witty love story! Everyone played their parts like their characters in BALH. Kudos to you for your creativity and for penning it down👏And for sharing with us. Please do write more stories😃

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Its too gud totally hattke liked it very much no pain no sadness only love with total fun..simple bt desi love story nd family story too..enjoyed it very much..waitting 4 ur next writting..thanks i pm

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

next os kab?

😕

Originally posted by: ShazK.123

This was such a sweet love story... Loved Ram being Priya's stalker... It was a very unique love story... I especially loved how Ram and Priya teased each other... Ram's love confession was very cute I could just picture that scene and Priya's love confession was very nice too! ... very cute. Both parts were written beautifully and a beautiful portrayal of a perfect family :-)

It was very nice to read something sweet like this especially considering what is being shown on TV.

Thanks for the PM, and sorry for the late comment! So sad it's finished, even though you gave a long update I still didn't want it to end! :-(

Originally posted by: peeyara

pata nahi 😕, but not this month😊

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

😭

jaldi try karna plzzz