OS: Intezaar- 'Saath Saal Baad' LAST PART: Pg 16 (22/11)

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Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very emotional.part...
Very neatly penned rams emotional turmoil thrgh these 7yrs..

Can jus say thnx fr this beautiful part...

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Birdy91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hey hi shaz...uuuaaa Uuuaaa Rula Diya yaar :-( it was sooo damn emotional...spcly golu(ram) i cant see him like dis yaa .. but buddyy i jst love ur os... sooo touchy,, full of feelings, damn emotional.. n power of a man's love... i adore raya alott... thankyou so much for writing such a bful OS... god bless.. tc :)

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aanchal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

u had written so well loved it
emotion of ram towards priya was real

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vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

First of all a very warm welcome to the forum...

Very emotional write up...
Ram's emotional turnmoil, hurt, pain, love, care, anguish, helplessness..everything single thing is beautifully described.. 👍🏼
Dialogues of Ram nd how his love increased day by day, his routine..superb one..
Very well written..👏
U should cont this..ab itna rulaya toh Priya ko utha ke or khushiyan dhikha ke compensate karo 😉

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angie197

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hey Shaz...this was really very touching...u write very well...please continue soon 😊

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bishop22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: vironikajain
First of all a very warm welcome to the forum...

Very emotional write up...
Ram's emotional turnmoil, hurt, pain, love, care, anguish, helplessness..everything single thing is beautifully described.. 👍🏼
Dialogues of Ram nd how his love increased day by day, his routine..superb one..
Very well written..👏
U should cont this..ab itna rulaya toh Priya ko utha ke or khushiyan dhikha ke compensate karo 😉

Thank you for writing a very emotional and spell-binding OS. You have written it in such a beautiful way that I was able to picture everything.

You have the talent and should continue.

When you said that your hindi will not be so good... I was dreading reading it in hindi as I talk awful long time to diciper it. But as I read on, I was so happy with your style, language and vocabulary used including the hindi, which was very good.

Hope you continue as I am looking forward to reading the next part.

Edited by bishop22 - 12 years ago