OS: Intezaar- 'Saath Saal Baad' LAST PART: Pg 16 (22/11) - Page 13

Originally posted by: ShazK.123

Thank you for reminding me... I had written the update a while ago but forgot to post it. 😆
I will post it once I've edited it... Tonight or tomorrow definitely.
Sorry to keep you waiting 😊

Hellooo 😊 wow, it's been a long time since I posted the previous part... I actually had this last part written a while ago... But forgot to post it and then I was supposed to post it at the start of this week... But I'm so rubbish at keeping promises... Speaking of promises... Here's the edited 😉 version of part 4... The last part of my OS.

Enjoy :-)

A promise has the power to make you feel truly wanted, truly loved, and truly cared for... When someone makes a promise with the authenticity of their heart, with all the love they have- they would try to fulfil it, no matter what obstacles may come their way. But the problem with promises is that once they are made... They're bound to be broken- it's as if there is an unwritten rule, the law of a promise- you must break it once you've made it. Sometimes, the complications of life make it so difficult to keep a promise... Circumstances are such that even though you want to keep and fulfil the promise you made to your lover more than anything... You end up having to break it... unknowingly, unwillingly, unintentionally.

A promise has the power to make you feel loved, but once a promise is broken, the heart is broken... Broken to the extent that only the one who broke it can mend it... With their true love acting as a plaster for a broken heart, and a new promise acting as a pacifier for the pain caused by the previous, broken promise.

As he sat, bored, in the meeting room... Ram constantly checked the time, first he checked his watch and then the clock on the wall opposite him, just to be sure that the time was right... He felt as though time was going way too slow... He found it difficult to concentrate on what anyone was saying. 1 hour and 30 minutes into the meeting and Ram had no clue about what was going on... All he could think about was his Queen, his wife... Mrs Kapoor who was currently sitting in his office alone... Waiting for him as she promised... At least that was what he thought...

Every minute that passed seemed like an hour, all Ram wanted to do was go back to his wife and spend the rest of the day with her... Ram glanced at his watch again... "4:15pm, she's been waiting for me for an hour and 45 minutes... I wonder what she's doing, how she's keeping herself occupied without me... She's all alone in that office"... his thoughts were interrupted as Vikram placed papers in front of him to sign...

"Ram, just sign these papers and the deal will be finalised... And then you can go back to your darling wife" Vikram said.

"Darling kisko keh raha hai tu?" Ram asked possessively... "Meri darling hai, tumhari darling Neha hai... Yaad hai na?" He continued.

"Ram relax... Jaanta hoon, Priya sirf tumhari darling hai... Main toh bas aise hi keh raha tha... " Vikram replied.

Ram and Vikram shared a hearty laugh. Once he signed the papers, he breathed a sigh of relief and quickly said his goodbyes to his new business partners and left the meeting room... Ram walked through the corridor as quick as he could... He had a spring in his walk as he was excited to be returning back to his wife... As he opened the door to his office, he said "Darling, I'm ba..." He stopped as he found his office empty; his eyes scanned the room eagerly looking to set his eyes on his beautiful wife... But she was nowhere to be seen... His heart sank a little... "Priya ne mujhse vaada kiya ke voh mera intezaar karegi, kahaan gaye hogi? Shayad washroom mein... Jenny ko pata hoga..." He thought... He walked towards his desk, sat down and picked up the phone to call Jenny... As he did this, his eyes shifted to the small puddle on his desk... He then saw his diary, noticing that it had been moved... He saw the wet patch... "My baby was crying... Voh roh rahi thi... Lekin kyun?" he thought... "She must have read my diary... That explains why she's not here..." He thought to himself and sighed, putting his head in his hands... slightly angry at himself for leaving her for so long...

He quickly dialled Jenny's number... "Jenny have you seen Priya anywhere? She was waiting for me here while I was in the meeting... But she's not here anymore..." He asked.

"Sir, Mrs Kapoor just left, about two minutes ago..." Jenny responded.

"What do you mean 'she left', did she say where she was going? Didn't you think to stop her? She went out alone..." He said angrily, confused... As much as he was hurt that she didn't fulfil her promise, he was more worried for her... He was worried about where she could have gone alone, and whether she was okay...

"Ram, kya hua? Priya kahaan hai?" Vikram asked, as he entered Ram's office.

"She's gone..." He said, quietly,

"What do you mean 'gone'? Where has she gone?" Vikram asked, in a concerned tone...

"Phirse, mujhe chodke..." He responded, as he huffed, shaking his head from side to side...

"Ram, yahaan kahi hogi... We'll find her, relax... I'll help you look for her..." Vikram replied, trying to calm his friend down.

"No Vikram, I think I know where she'll be... Don't worry, whenever we had arguments here in the office, she would always leave and I would always find her waiting for me in the same place, every time..." He said as he got up from his seat and ran towards the door...

Vikram looked on at his friend, worried about him, but more concerned for Priya's wellbeing.

Ram quickly got into his car, hoping to catch up with her... "She couldn't have gone far... Priya why do you always do this? Weather bhi karab hai... Lagta hai baarish hone vali hai! Hopefully I'll get to her before it starts to rain..." He thought to himself, as he frantically drove to Priya's usual calming down spot.

He parked his car, and got out... He looked around... And began walking to the park... As he walked, he looked at the large tree in the far corner of the park, and saw a figure which resembled his wife from the back... He quickly sent a text to Vikram, letting him know that he had found her... He walked closer to the oldest oak tree in the park... It had large, thick branches... And what was so special about this tree was that there was one extremely thick and heavy branch that extended from midway of the tree... And travelled down, resting on the ground... This was where Priya was sat...

He stood a few feet away from her, admiring her... Priya, unaware of his presence cried and said "kyun? Itna dukh kyun diya aapne mere Ram ko? He deserves so much happiness... Lekin aap ne toh sirf dukh diya Mr Kapoor ko? Why did you bring me into his life... Just to give him pain?" Tears streamed down her face... As Ram heard what she was saying... He walked closer to her... Priya became aware of his presence as she heard a few sticks breaking as he walked towards her... Quickly wiping her tears she turned to him, smiled half- heartedly and then looked down, in an attempt to cover up the fact that she had just been crying.

As soon as he got close to her, he felt a drop of rain fall on his face... Ram quickly took his suit jacket off and wrapped it around her... Covering her head.

He quickly walked her to the car... Priya looked at him, with fear in her eyes... Ram looked at her and said "trust me, you'll be fine... Main hoon na!!" Priya reluctantly sat in the passenger's seat of Ram's chrome Audi TT... As soon as they sat in the car, the heavy raindrops hit the windscreen of his car... Making loud noises... Priya closed her eyes in fear, as events from 7 years ago flashed before her eyes... All she could picture was the accident that stole seven years from her life... She started breathing heavily...

Ram looked at her lovingly, and placed his hand on hers... As soon as she felt the warmth of his touch, she slowly opened her eyes... And looked down at her hand, which was being held possessively by her lover...

She abruptly moved her hand from under his, and looked out of the window at the heavy rainfall surrounding their car...

"Priya... Darling, speak to me. What's on your mind baby?" He asked lovingly, as he wanted her to let go of her tension.

She remained silent... Although he was upset that she was ignoring him, he smiled... Because he knew in due time... She'd respond... She wouldn't be able to ignore him for too long.

Not being able to bear the silence... Ram turned on the radio... "Up next, requested by Vikram, dedicated to his wife Neha... It's Vaada Raha from the film Khakee, It's 4.50pm and you're listening to Radio Mirchi, 98.3FM"

"Typical Vikram... Kitne filmy hai yeh dono" Ram said as he laughed.

The song began playing... Ram's gaze did not wander away from Priya's face... The song kicked in...

*Vaada Raha, pyar se pyar ka... Ab hum na honge juda...*

Priya turned her face towards Ram, looking deep into his eyes... A tear fell from her one... Ram lifted his hand to wipe it...

*Chahe tumhe Kis kadar mera dil, tumko Nahi hai pata*

Priya quickly wiped it away before he had the chance to... And immediately looked away from him.

"This song reminds me baby... Tumne toh vaada kiya ki tum mera intezaar karogi... Bhul gayi kya?" He mocked.

Priya still remained silent... "Never mind darling, hum ab ghar jaa rahe hai, so you can make it up to me later..." Ram said as he started the car, and began to drive in the direction of Kapoor Mansion.

*Ab dhuriya na rahe darmiyan... Kya rang layi vafaa*

"I'm just happy that at least I got to you before it started raining... Pagal hogayi kya? What if I didn't come in time... You'd be sitting in this rain baby... Bimaar hogi toh? Didn't you think once about your health... Abhi abhi teekh hogayi, phirse bimaar hone ka iraada tha? Jaanta hoon, you like being unwell don't you, you like it when I wait on you hand and foot na?... Koi baat nai... I'll do anything for you, even if your 100% healthy." Ram continued speaking in an attempt to get some sort of reaction or response from Priya, but his attempts were in vain... Priya remained silent...

As Ram pulled up to Kapoor Mansion, he signalled for a security guard to come over with an umbrella and escort Priya inside... He watched as Priya walked inside KM, and then got out of the car, and walked towards the door of KM... Even though the walk was short, he still managed to get soaked with the heavy rainfall... So as he walked inside, he walked straight up the stairs and into the Green Room... He called for Gopal Kaka.

"I'm just going to dry up, Priya ko bata do ki voh upar aa jaye... Hum dono yahin dinner karenge... Send the food up in 5 minutes" Ram requested.

Ram looked at his cupboard and thought "biwi ke saath akele dinner kar raha hoon, kurta toh nahi pehen sakta... Yeh black shirt chalega..."

Gopal Kaka immediately went down to tell Priya what Ram has said... Priya silently and slowly walked up the KM stairs... She entered the Green Room and sat down at the end of the bed, placing her head in her hands... As she heard the lock open from the dressing room, she jumped up... And faced the door... Looking on at her husband who was standing in front of her with a towel in his hands, wiping his wet hair... Smiling at her, Priya didn't smile back; she looked down and began fiddling with her ring... Gopal Kaka entered with their dinner and placed the dinner plates on the table.

Ram slowly walked towards Priya with a smile on his face... He took her hand in his, kissed it and then escorted her towards the dinner table... Ram, like a gentleman, took the chair out for her to sit, and then tucked her in... He then sat opposite her, and put food into her plate for her...

They dined in silence... Ram noticed Priya hadn't touched her food; she was just playing with it and remained busy in her own thoughts... Seeing this, he brought his chair closer to her... Took the spoon out of her hand and began feeding her... At first Priya didn't open her mouth... However Ram was adamant...

Once he finished feeding her, he placed the spoon back down, and looked at her hand which was placed on the table... He put his hand over hers.

"Priya! You've been quiet ever since I came to you at the park... What is it baby? What is bothering you so much, so much that you don't even want to speak to me... Have I hurt you darling?" He questioned.

As soon as he asked his last question she looked up at him, they both stared deeply into each other's eyes... Tears threatening to fall from Priya's... She could see that he was searching for answers in her eyes... As Priya closed her eyes tight, tear drops rolled down her cheeks from her eyes... She shook her head in negative so as to let him know that he's not the reason for her being upset.

He put his arm around her and she sunk into him deeply, crying hard into his chest.

"I'm so sorry Ram, I'm so sorry" she pleaded.

"Baby! Stop this... Why are you apologising? You don't need to apologise for anything..." He said. They sat in that position for a few minutes, but were interrupted by a phone call...

"Baby, let me just take this call, I'll be back... You relax okay?" He told her.

Ram walked to the dressing room and closed the door... "Haan Vikram... Yes Priya is fine, she's with me now! But I'm really worried... She's been so quiet since, I think she read my diary... And has read something that has upset her... But she's not telling me what... But don't worry, I'll sort it... She'll be fine" he said before he hung up...

As he opened the door to the bedroom, he noticed the lights had been switched off... The only light shining into the room was that of the bright, full moon... He saw Priya with her back to him, standing by the window... Looking out at the rain... He slowly, quietly but lovingly walked towards her... Wrapping his arms slowly and lightly around her waist, resting his chin on her shoulder... His touch made her come out of her thoughts...

"Baby... Give your mind a break, bohot sochti ho tum... Thoda waqt mere liye hai?" He asked jokingly.

She tried to move away from him, but Ram held her a little tighter... "Priya relax..." He placed a gentle kiss on the exposed flesh by her neck, and removed his hands from around her waist... And held her hands... He slowly brushed his hands up her arms and held her by the shoulders... Priya closed her eyes with his touch...

"Priya... Tum soch bhi nahi sakti ki main kitna kush hoon aaj... Baby, aaj mere office aa kar, mere saath lunch kar ke... Gaadi mein behtna... I'm so proud of you darling." Ram praised her.

Finally after ages, Priya spoke... Saying "Mr. Kapoor..." She turned to face him... She looked deep into his eyes... Ram held both of her hands, and entwined his fingers with hers... As a tear fell from her eye... She continued... "Yeh sab main isliye kar payi, sirf aap ki vajaise... It's all because of you..." She paused for a moment, and then said... "Mr. Kapoor... I don't deserve you." She slowly slipped her hands out from his... Backing away from him, she repeated... "No... I don't deserve you... Main aapko deserve nahi karti..." She shook her head as tears dripped from her eyes, taking further steps away from him...

As she headed for the door, she felt a tug, stopping her in her tracks... Priya struggled to free her hand from his hold... The more she struggled, the tighter his hold became on her wrist.

"Phir se chhod ke jaane ka iraada hai tumhara? Agar hai, toh phir mere paas vaapas kyun aayi? Tumhara vaada ka kya? "Humesha saath nibhaane" ka vaada ko thodogi tum?" He asked.

The tears flowed down Priya's cheeks... She shut her eyes tight in an attempt to block the flow... Wiping her cheeks with her free hand, she turned to face Ram... He still held on to her wrist tight.

"Voh vaada toh maine kab se thod diya tha... Bohot dheer pehle thod diya tha maine, saath saal pehle... Jab maine aapko saath saalon ke liye akela choda... Tab se Mr. Kapoor" she responded, with a constant flow of tears falling from her eyes...

"Let me go Ram. Please, chod do mujhe..." She pleaded.

"Let go? Chod dun? Kaise... Kaise chod dun tumhe hmm? In saath saalon mein maine tumhe chodda? Nahi na? Toh ab kyun choddun? Let me explain one thing to you, and I hope you hear me loud and clear darling... Main tumhe nahi chodd ne vala... If you think I'll let you go... You can get that thought out of your head right now, because I will never let you go... Kabhi nahi!!" He asserted.

He pulled her by her wrist closer to him... And placed his free hand on her arm, just below her shoulder... He firmly gripped her arm... And said "chodd dun tumhe Priya?... Kaise keh sakti ho yeh sab hmm?" His face was a mere inch away from hers... "Pata hai, jab tum coma mein thi na, maine apne aap se vaada kiya... Ki jab tum mere paas vaapas aaogi toh main tumhe phirse kahi nahi jaane dunga! Main yeh vaada nahi thod sakta... Tumko vaade thodne ka shok hai, mujhe nahi... Aur ek minute..." He paused... Till now, tears did not fall from Ram's eyes... But in all this time, they were building up, and all of a sudden the build up of tears flowed out of his eyes... "Kisne kaha ki tumne vaada thoda? Kaise thoda? Saath nibhaaya tumne Priya... Yahaan toh thi tum..." He continued as he placed her hand on his heart... "I kept you here all that time Priya... Wherever I went, you went... Because I kept your heart here with mine... Maan tha hoon ki you weren't by my side... Lekin tum humesha mere saath thi... Toh tum kaise keh sakti ho ki main akela tha Priya?" He said, most lovingly... The change of tone encouraged more tears to flow from Priya's eyes... Seeing her in this state caused Ram to cry even more...

"Tum nahi maan ne vali na?" He questioned, looking deep into her eyes, which were clouded with tears...

She continued to look deep into his eyes, silently... "Priya, I love you dammit... Why can't you just accept that we deserve each other... Tum kaise decide kar sakti ho ke main kya deserve karta hoon aur kya nahi?"

Priya opened her mouth in an attempt to respond... But Ram interrupted... "No, bohot kehdiya hai tumne, aur bohot sun liya maine..." He said as he twisted her arm behind her back...he slowly walked forwards, making Priya walk backwards... Backing her up against the wall... Priya closed her eyes in the process...

He slipped his hands around her waist... She could feel his warmth, she could smell his light fragrance, she could hear his heavy breathing...

Still keeping her eyes closed, knowing if she opens them... The passion in his eyes would make her melt... She said "dusra vaada toh thod diya tha na?"

All of a sudden, his hands slip away from her waist... Cold air hit her body, replacing the warmth of his embrace.

"Ab konsa vaada darling?" He whispered...

"I promised I'd wait for you... Aaj, jab aap meeting mein jaane vale the, maine aapko vaada kiya, ki main aapka intezaar karungi... Voh bhi nahi nibhaaya... Voh vaada bhi thod diya maine" she said quietly... Sobbing in between, making it difficult for her to speak.

"Priya..." He said lovingly... "Intezaar toh kar rahi thi na? Office mein na sahi, lekin tum uss jaga pe intezaar kar rahi thi... Tum jaanti thi ki main aaunga... That's why you went there... You could have gone anywhere else baby, but you decided to go where you knew I'd find you... So baby, you kept that promise..." He said.

"Abhi bhi chod ke jaana chahti ho mujhe baby?... Agar jaana hai... Toh main nahi rokhunga... Lekin itna toh keh sakta hoon ki... If you leave me now baby, you'll be taking my life with you... Tum shayad mere bigair jee sakti ho, lekin main nahi... I can't live without you darling, no... I WON'T live without you... I hope you know that if you walk out of that door now... Tum mere jeene ka vaja bhi leke jaaogi saath... Mar jaunga main tumhare bigair... Nahi jee paunga tumhare bigair... If you walk away from me now... I won't be able to live... Knowing you walked away from our love, knowing you gave up on our love... I'd die a thousand deaths everyday knowing this... So it's better that I just..." Before he could complete his sentence... Priya lifted up her hand and covered his mouth, stopping him from continuing.

Her eyes were fixated on his... As if in planned synchrony, tears fell from their eyes at the same time... Ram leaned his forehead on hers... Smiled and then turned away from her... This time he felt a tug... Stopping him from moving any further... She pulled him back by the wrist... Causing him to turn towards her... She placed one hand on his chest... Gripping onto his shirt... She pulled him closer...

"Kahaan jaa rahe ho aap?" She asked seductively... Biting her lip, yet still in tears.

Ram moved his body closer, resting against hers, he placed one hand on the wall beside her head, and the other slid up her arm... Then slowly his fingers brushed against her cheek... He then slipped his hand into her hair... "Tumhe kya? Tum toh mujhe chod ke jaane vali thi... Toh jao, main tumhe kyun jawab dun?" He responded...

"Mr. Kapoor... You deserve all the happiness in the world..." She said.

"My happiness is with you..." He quickly replied

"You deserve the best..." She said

"You are the best..." He responded

"You deserve someone who will always be here for you..." She said

"You will always be here for me... Right here..." He replied, pointing to his heart.

"I deserve you Priya... Only you" he continued.

With his hand in her hair... He urged her head forward, towards his... Placing a kiss right below her eyes, as if he was kissing away her tears.

"Priya... Tum toh jaa rahi thi na? Ab nahi jaana hai mujhe chod ke?" He asked

"Nahi, kabhi nahi... Main aapko kabhi nahi chod ne vali... Yeh mera vaada hai aapse... Marke bhi main aapko nahi choddungi"

As she said this... He placed his finger on her lips, shushing her- "never say anything like that again... Tum ho, toh main hoon Priya... remember that."

Priya, being in a teasing mood... Taking advantage of this opportunity... She quickly parted her mouth and bit his finger...

"Priya... Yeh kya? Jaanta hoon, tumne acchi thara se khana Nahi kaaya, lekin yeh kya baat hui?" He teased...

This made Priya smile... Seeing Priya smile... Caused his lips to also curve into a smile... He again rested his forehead on hers and whispered... "I love you Priya... Please, don't even attempt to leave me again!"

"I love you too Ram, aur main vaada karti hoon ki main aapko chod ke kahi nahi jaaungi... Aur iss ke baare mein kabhi nahi baat karungi..." She promised.

"Soch lo Priya, phirse vaada kar rahi ho, ek aur vaada handle kar paaogi kya?" He said sarcastically, mocking her.

"Very funny Mr. Kapoor." She said, pushing him off her... She walked away from him, but again, almost as if it was his basic instinct to do so... He grabbed her wrist and pulled her back, causing her to crash into him... This action caused him to back up against the wall.

He noticed her eyes well up with tears again...

"Ab kyun ro rahi ho darling?" He whispered in her ears... He placed both his hands on either side of her face, his thumbs wiping her tears away... "No more tears... Promise me."

"Ek aur vaada?" She said as she laughed through her tears...

Priya rested her head on his chest... And wrapped her arms around him... As if on cue, Ram also wrapped his arms around her... His hands placed on her bare, lower back... They remained in this position for a few minutes... Priya, listening to her favourite sound... His heartbeat... And Ram enjoying this, taking advantage of their current position... He moved his hand up her back... This action sent shivers up and down her spine... He then pulled on her dori... Causing it to untie...

"Aapko sirf yehi aata hain na?" She teased him, remembering the events that occurred that morning.

She lifted her head off his chest; her eyes met his gaze... Seeing the passion in his eyes made her melt... Ram moved his hands on to either side of her hips...

Ram slowly stepped forward, causing her to step back in synchronisation... Each step he took forward caused her to take steps back... As they neared closer to the bed Ram stopped... His hand made its way to her shoulder... While his gaze was fixated on her face... He tugged on her pallu, causing it to drop to the floor. Priya closed her eyes, shying away from him for a split second... Ram smiled at her condition... And then brought his hands to her face... This action caused her to open her eyes again, and stare lovingly into his eyes... Ram stoked her cheeks with the back of his fingers... And then placed soft feathery kisses where he had touched... He then slowly trailed these feathery kisses down to her neck... Gently brushing his nose against the crook of her neck... Causing her to move her head to the side, giving him more access to do as he pleased... His actions caused her to let out a small "Mmm". Hearing this, Ram's heart skipped a few beats... Their breathing became heavier.

Ram understood the effect his mere touch had on her... Playing on this... He brushed his fingers lightly on her hips, teasing her for a few moments. She moved her hands to his chest, gripping his shirt tight... Ram brought his face close to hers, and again began placing kisses on her cheeks... Ram urged Priya to step back. As she took a step back, her legs hit the end of their bed, causing her to lose balance and fall on to the bed... Taking Ram with her...

"Don't tease me Mrs. Kapoor, I'm warning you..." He said.

Priya simply smiled, and then bit her lip... Attracting his attention... Just as she wanted... His gaze was fixated on her lips... He wanted to hold her lips captive between his... But her teeth were doing what was only his right... "Priya... Main pehle bhi bataya tha tumhe... Yeh sirf mera haq hai..." He said seductively... His voice was husky... This created havoc in her stomach... His hand pulled her chin up, towards his face... His mouth lingered over hers for a second... And then he closed the gap.

Their kisses mirrored the actions of their lower bodies. Physically, he was lost in her... and mentally she was lost in him.

The moon shied away, hiding itself behind the clouds... Creating complete darkness in the Green Room... With their act of love, new promises were made, ek aur vaada... Pyaar ka.

Priya purposely turned to the side, with her back facing her lover... Ram adjusted himself closer to her... He placed a soft kiss on her bare shoulder and said "I love you Mrs. Kapoor... I love you so much."

Priya turned to face him; she ran her hand through his hair... And said "I love you too Mr. Kapoor... Aur main vaada karti hoon, ki chahe kuch bhi hojaye... Main humesha yaad rakhungi ki bale hi hum har pal ek dusre ke paas na ho, lekin hum humesha ek dusre ke saath honge... Main vaada karti hoon ki no matter what... We'll always find each other, deep in our hearts.

Ek aur pyaar ka vaada, lekin iss vaade ko humesha nibhaayenge Ram aur Priya... Another promise made... But the special thing about this promise is that they both knew that the law of promises, the "rule" won't apply anymore... This promise was made... Not to be broken, but to be fulfilled... And they had full faith in each other, that they would never break their promises to each other...

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