OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

dhanyawad. aur style badalne ko koi zaroorat nahi.-- ji bilkul nahi badlenge.. as which i am writing it will grace in Hindi & when u all have no problem then will continue in this style only..😉
badi mushkil se Ram ki dairy haat aayi hai, padna chahti hoon-- chalo phir padhte raho..😉😆

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Ahida

@noya28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

don't have words to describe , u one word coming in mind is beautiful.
continue soon. thanks for pm

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sinalbest

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

@Sagar,

yeh OS, Hindi me shayad iska rup aur nikhar ke aa raha hain, aap ki writing me kahin na kahi ek tehraav hain, sukoon hain, aap lafzon ko ek alag hi dhaang se pesh karte hain jo mujhe bohot achha laga, the concept is very beautiful and fresh one, Ram as writer is unique, am looking forward for next part, continue soon👏

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

The emotions are scripted very beutifully...
Do contn soon...

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Bilkul writer bhi banna chahiye humesha bussinessman kyun..😉
We re loving it.. 😆

Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: noya28
don't have words to describe , u one word coming in mind is beautiful.
continue soon. thanks for pm

Thank u.. U r Welcome.. surely will update soon 😊 😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sonakshi-grp
superb.pls continue..//.

Thank u 😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
@Sagar,

yeh OS, Hindi me shayad iska rup aur nikhar ke aa raha hain, aap ki writing me kahin na kahi ek tehraav hain, sukoon hain, aap lafzon ko ek alag hi dhaang se pesh karte hain jo mujhe bohot achha laga, the concept is very beautiful and fresh one, Ram as writer is unique, am looking forward for next part, continue soon👏

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