SS**Dard ka Rishta** updated part-8 PG-64

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Ahida

@noya28

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

sad, both lost their first love , but interesting continue soon

thanks for pm.

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow what a story ...nice concept...love it...plz pm dear

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

What an emotional touch up.

story seems great..lets see how it goes further.

I loved ur writing especially the hindi part of it. All the emotions were nicely written.

looking farward.

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
Very sad...-- Yup..
Both lost their first love.--IF they dint loss their first lv they will never meet..😉
Cont soon-- Sure😛
thanks for pm -- u r welcome 😊

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Very emotional write up sagar.. Loved the way of ur writting.. 👏
I can very well feel the pain of loosing someone..but loved that they got second chance from life nd re very happily in love with each other now..
Dard ne inka rishta joda jo ki bahut khas hai or khubsurat hai..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Very nice and emotional update. Liked Priya's character very much. Eager to read more.-- thanks for ur comments..😊
Thank u for the pm-- u r welcome..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: .sangs123.
awesome updt sagar - Thank u..😊
but very short -- Isnt short is good..?😉
expecting long one from next time -- hey basicaly I update from office...😉 so cant update a long one..😆
thanks for pm -- U r welcome..😊
cont soon-- sure..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
your update made me emotional, I can very well understand the suffering of RaYa as I have gone through the same pain, aapno ko kho dena kitna mushkil hain samjhti hoon, ithe update has turned out a very realistic one, in fact I like your OS, continue ASAP

Hey I am glad to read ur comment..😛 I like to show things real.. & some are there who have seen this in their life..

Will surely update soon..😛

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
thanks for PM--- U r Welcome..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: noya28
sad, both lost their first love , but interesting continue soon- Thanks for the comment..😊 will update soon..

thanks for pm.-- U r welcome..