SS**Dard ka Rishta** updated part-8 PG-64

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Hiii brother, sorry for the late comments.
But read all parts. Finally finished it.
Loved the concept and loved the title.
You have enacted Two souls who lost their first love with a killing disease. Their dreams, future everything could have shattered when they left this world mainly from these two lovers.

And in that Sarrow both finds their true love again and they are taking their love to next level.
And I totally agree with Ram's fear, but loved he himself realized it is effecting his darling and coming out of that.

Everything is neatly coined up, superb story.
Keep coming more. Thankyou for the Pms...

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ParusDivs

@ParusDivs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Aweeeiii!!!!!!! 😛 Thanks for the lovely update... ❤️ 😃 u r right, we are expected a baby girl 😊 bt no prblm!!!! 😊 will wait for next time 😉

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

finally you updated 😊

will read 2mrw aur comment ke baare mai sochungi😉😆

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Beautiful update

yeh kya baat hui..ek toh itna late update upar se itna chotu

aur iss baar baby boy de diya...hmm..meine baby girl expect kiya tha

are Ram ji biwi pregnant hai issliye jalebi aur momos sab taiyaar karke rakna chahiye na😆

itne jaldi jalebi kaise bana sakte hai😲

happy Raya ke pyar ki nishani abb aa gaya hai...Ram ka office jana bhi puri tarah se stop ho jaayega😆

continue soon and thanks for PM😊

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Sweet nd lovely update..thanks 4 pm :)

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

lovely part...!!!

beautiful writeup...!!!

jalebi aur momos...😆

finally little golu is here...!!!

contn soon...!!!

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Part 8
awww i loved all the father's feeling get implanned in story so well & intesrting i really liked Priya's cuvring part for Jalebies & Momos awww she i so demanding... awesome update just way too gud they both r awesome together so this time baby boy awww let's see what they keep his name... do post soon waiting..

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Me first.. 😛
Beautifull write up Sagar..- Thank u.. 😊
Ram's restlessness as well as his happiness re nicely shown.. 👏 ⭐️ - Thank u ..😛
Coordination of flashback part through diary nd present is so flowy nd very well maintained.. 👍🏼
Bichara Ram pehle jalebi phir momos.. 😆 ( mujhe pata hai momos jan bhuj kar likha last time ki tarah.. 😡 😆)cute part..- How intelligent u r..😉.. 😆
Yayy finally hitler golu is here.. [:D/] meri wish puri hui..ab teri bhi ho jayegi.. 😉😆 thank u.. -OK.. good u r happy..😉.. btw meri kaun si wish..😕
Loved it.. 🤗

Thanks again for wonderful comments..😛

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: mishraapoorva14
Finally u updated after ages ...very beautiful update...ahha a baby golu this time likes it very much...but was too short...continue soon

Thank u for the comment..😛... Short & sweet is always good..😉