SS**Dard ka Rishta** updated part-8 PG-64

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Phir se..maine bola tha isse kuch change nhi hoga..😆

ekta ke old serials mein kuch dialogues 3 times hote the as ussi se sab yaad aata tha..😉🤣

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sandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Thanks..😊

Well thats the surprise..😉.. wat do u want..😉.. he r she..😉

sure..😛

hmm...dono de do

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
hmm...dono de do😛

Twins nahi h..😉

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: sinalbest
ekta ke old serials mein kuch dialogues 3 times hote the as ussi se sab yaad aata tha..😉🤣

Lagta hai bahot serial dekhe hai😆 par yaha koi Ekta ka show nhi chal raha toh no use😉🤣

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ParusDivs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: parus
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Will update asap..😉

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Hi Guys.. Sorry for being late again.. Guys will complete this SS soon...😊

After this part only 2 parts are left... Hope u all enjoys these last 3 parts..

Part-8

Ram pacing up & down in hospital lobby... At the same time he is very excited & tensed.. His eyes is showing excitement.. bt his forhead showing his worryness..

he is feeling happy & tensed at the same time.. Its the most awaited moment of his life.. his own flesh will be with him in any moment..

The moment Priya & him is waiting for.. now their wait is almost over.. 😛

He is seeing his watch again & again... he is feeling very restless..

he wants to hear those magical words from dr. that congrtas for being a father .. and moreover he wants to know that his Priya is also fine..

Like every husband .. every father.. he wants his wife & his child to be good.. to be fine..

His eyes is fixed on the door of operation theatre..

He sees a nurse is coming out.. he quickly goes there & asks from her regarding his Priya..

Nurse rpld only .. Sir be calm.. everything will be fine.. & quickly leaves from their.. Ram is unhappy... with her rpl..he wants to see his love.. waiting very eagerly to see their kid..

He slowly comes & sits on bench... & closes his eyes.. suddenly he remembers some best moments of life.. rather all r now his best momonts of life.. as Priya is with him now.. for ever..

He opens his eyes & takes out his diary from his inside pocket of blazer..

Ram opens his diary..

flashback... 3rd september 2013

Aaj Priya ne mjhse pucha ki mjhe kya chahiye.. ..Ek nanhi si pyari Pari.. ya ek natkhat Rajkumar..

Mere liye to jo bhi hoga hamare pyar ka ansh hoga.. Vo pyaar jo ab ek naye mukam par pahuch jaega..

Mein sirf yeh chahta hu ki jo bhi aaye .. vo r Priya ek dam acche ho...

Ha par mjhe abhi ek pyari si pari chahiye.. r phir ek natkhat rajkumar..

par mein yeh bhi janta hu ki Priya ko rajkumar chahiye..

Mere liye sabse badi khushi hi yahi h ki aaj mere pass zindagi mein vo sab h jiski kalpana har insaan karta h..

r bahut jald hamare pass hamara pyaar hoga.. hamara ansh iss duniya mein hoga...

baby.. ur papa is waiting..

Present ...

Ram opens an another date..

Flashback ..

11th september 2013...

Kal raat Priya ne ek bahut ajeeb zidd ki.. mjhe hamesha uski har wish puri karna behad pasand h..

r jb bhi mein uski koi wish puri karta hu.. r uske baad jo smile aati h Priya ke chehre par uss smile ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu mein.. Par Kal raat jo usne bola .. ek sec ke liye mein samajh nhi paya ki kaise uski yeh wish puri karu..

Priya ne raat ke 3 baje Jalebi khane ki wish boli..

Usse kaise samjhata ki itni raat ko jalebi kaha milegi.. R jb bhi Priya itne pyaar se r ek adhikaar se mjhse kuch bolti h to mana nhi kar pata...

R jab raat ko aadhe ghante ghumne ke baad laga ki ab nhi milegi.. to bahut bura lag raha tha ki Priya ko kya bolunga.. R ghar aate waqt yaad aaya ki dadi bhi ghar par banati thi..

to maine bhi kal kitchen mein ja kar laptop on kiya r fir uski mehtod padh kar banayi...

ha ek dam jalebi jaisi shade nhi thi.. par thik dikh rahi thi..

r jab mein bahut excited ho kar Priya ke liye lekar gaya to.. usne jaisi hi kaha ki ab mann nhi h Jalebi khane ka.. to mein udas ho gaya.. r fir Priya ne sirf mere liye ek khayi.. r jab uski aankho mein vo khushi dekhi to bahut accha laga..

par dusre hi Pal jab Priya ne bola ki usse Momos khane h.. 😲

to laga ki hey bhagwan ab subah 5 baje kaha se lau ab yeh.. .. Iss baar maine Priya ko samjhane ki koshish ki.. par nhi kar paya... uski har zidd puri karna mjhe bahut pasand h...parr Priya ko vaise bhi momos kam pasand h.. to aaj kyu khane ka mann hua uska..

Present...

Yeh saare pal zindagi to kitna haseen banate h.. behad khubsurat ho gayi h meri zindagi...

Priya ne aaj vo har khushi di h mjhe..

Ram closes his dairy again... & was restless again ...

He was pacing again in the hospital.. his eyes were fixed on the door of operation theatre... This time again door opens..

Ram's feeling nervous & happy too.. as this time he is expecting good news from doctor...

Doctor comes ... Congartulations Ram.. Priya & ur Baby is fine.. ..

Nurse comes with baby... & handed over to Ram...

Ram asks from his eyes .. .. Nurse says... Sir apka baby boy...

So guys do tell me how many of u like this part.. I knw many of u r expecting Little Angle.. Peehu.. but this time I want Little Golu..

Precap..

zindagi ka har lamha .. khushi lata hai .. to kabhi gam.. lata h..

zindagi ka har lamha kuch deta h.. to kuch leta nhi h...

zindagi ke ek lamhe ne pyaar liya tha.. to ek baar fir diya h..

zindagi ke iss lamhe ne behad khubsurat tofa diya h... ...

Yeh vo tofa h jisse mjhe ek nayi pehchan mili h.. aaj Priya r mjhe dono ko ek nayi pehchan mil gayi..

Kya naam du hamare iss pyare se nanhe mehmaan ko..

Do hit LIKE button if u LIKE it..

And leave ur valuable comments & suggestions..

Sagar..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Me first.. 😛
Beautifull write up Sagar..
Ram's restlessness as well as his happiness re nicely shown.. 👏 ⭐️
Coordination of flashback part through diary nd present is so flowy nd very well maintained.. 👍🏼
Bichara Ram pehle jalebi phir momos.. 😆 ( mujhe pata hai momos jan bhuj kar likha last time ki tarah.. 😡 😆)cute part..
Yayy finally hitler golu is here.. [:D/] meri wish puri hui..ab teri bhi ho jayegi.. 😉😆 thank u..
Loved it.. 🤗

Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago