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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

just amazing waiting egrly for next one 👏

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pravinak

@pravinak

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

wow nice update... thanks :) just one doubt before wedding priya texted ram b'cos he din attend her calls he din chk his msgs??

pls continue soon

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Superbb update..
Priya efforts to keep her calm nd composed infront of everyone inspite of pain nd hurt she is going through nd ram's anger nd his thoughts whom he actually angry with re beautifully written.. 👏
Concern of KK, shruti nd priya's parents is genuine nd its good priya asked shruti not to interfere in btw her nd ram as she is married now nd shruti's agreement..true friends 👍🏼
FB part was very nice..nd Ram's care, love( its clear from his fear)nd feeling hurt seeing priya in this state shows with time very soon he will understand her too.. 😛
Cont soon..

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name2saakshi

@name2saakshi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

absolutely awesome update superb love to read more and more soon

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

story is very interesting..

Ram actully loves her. But his ego 😡 this is too much...

y this ego comes in between. but I am sure everything will be alright

He will surely understand and accept Priya from full heart.

I like sudhirji cleared his side.

continue soon and thanks for PM..

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

fantastic update

FB scene was awesome

feeling very sad 4 Priya

waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon

thx 4 PM

Edited by Dsudipa - 12 years ago

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

beautiful part, u have penned down nicely about the emotion of Ram and Priya, liked where Priya asked Shruthi politely but firmly to stay out of the matter, it is really gud and on part of Priya to say such coz kuch baatein hoti hain jinme third party aren't allowed specially when the matter is b/w husband and wife, can completely understand the emotion of a father, very nicely depicted that portion, with this ur shayris are like cheery and cream on the top, continue ASAP👏

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

wow again fab update ..specially I love sudhir's words ..ram is not so bad human ..i love this update as u portrayed flashback's bonding and current situation so well ..thank u for ur PM

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

read chapter 2 and 3 in one go. what can i say they were just fabulous update.. no doubt ur story is awesome but the poems of urs r making it a exceptionaly special one.. i really liked the blend of past and present scenes , not the fb was to long nor the present scenes it was just perfect.. am really liking the raging bull avatar of ram but he is cute.. gr8 work, update soon. and thanks for the pms..

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: shamavi
me first😉
omg u actually updated😲 ab to muje jaldi jaldi type karna padega😆

ram ka fb achha ta yaar itna cute the donon😳 ab kya hoga 😭😭😭 ek mistake ki tum kya janoon ram babu😆

kher i know now raya ka problem solve hone hi wale hain atleast not fully but partially😕 hopefully

but kya hoga

continue soon😊

pehle toh thank u very much 😊

yes g i hv actually updated it on ur demand only 😊

toh aap kab update karne wali ho😉 😆

"wada karz ke barabar hota hai" isiliye maine apna vaada pura kiya now ur turn 😉 😆 😆