FF - RaYa - Second Chance thread 2, note pg 148

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

part 30

wowooowo its smoking hot yaar just feb can't express how much i loved it Ram had so patiance to make Priya his he given her full time to think... when he broke out the truth he broke all the emotions just mind blowing update even loved RaYa's morning romance god bless them & they live like this only ever after... would love see now Sara's face seeing romancing RaYa that what she had missed out in her Life in the name of Ram & how much RaYa lucky to have each other as life partner... so plz do update next soon... waitinggg ggg ggg ggg ggg ggg ggg... ... ... ... ... ... ...

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krunalidivecha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

super post

continue next part soon😳

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

few..!! it was so charge up update man... really u are 10 on 10 writer, weather it is fight or romance u can write anything just flawlessly. the update was hot and beautiful.. raya are one and happy so do i am... thanks for the pm, update soon..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

First of all thanx a ton for early update..but i m super late this time..Nd very sorry for late rply..i guess i m the last one too..
These 2 days has been hell for me but i m happy to be back..
Will read nd comment right away..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Superbly HOT nd Romantic.. It was very beautifully nd aesthetically written..loved it to the core..u re a fantastic writer.. whatever is the situation u write brilliantly with every emotion very well etched in it acc to situation..
The way u have described priya's beauty, ram's confession, their romance, priya's confession, naughty raya in mrng everything is just perfect..
Last line of priya nd calling him by his name was too good..
Now raya has become two body one soul..so looking forward to whats next u have in store for us with their togetherness..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

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sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

awesome update...
way of confession was prfct
cont soon
waiting to read raya daily romance...
sorry for late comment

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Nice update didi...thanks for PM...😳😳😳

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ek din pehle update. aur woh bhi grabbing first place😃🥳
must say just awesome. very very romantic update.
right from the beginning to end U penned down very very nicely.
I like the description of priya's wardrope ,
then the confession of Ram. Priya confess her love in the next morning only😉.
loved the heating argument before love. loved the dialogues specially.
aaj pehli baar aapne Priya ko rulaya nahi aur muje bhi.😃.
aage kya????where is the precap??????😲
continue soon and thanks for PM😊

thank u for the comments, sorry agar maine aapko rulaya, buy this time I make it that, thanks for liking the update

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: shamavi

yahan bhi meri jagah koia ur leliya😭

wow it was just perfect no need to edit.. for me it was just perfect... raya ka realtionship omg.. u made me stay glued to screen...😳 raya was just awesome.. ram became naughty hailaa.. 😳 make him more naughty.. ab asli wla honeymoon bejdoo😆 an request from me samjooo

please continue and update soon😳

areee aapka jagah toh always khaas hain, thanks for liking the update, stay tuned for more RaYa nok jhonk