RaYa FF - mann ki lagan...ishq hain tumse, updt 139

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: leena04
part 5

awww Priya given herseelf to the person whome she loves endlesly but what he did just moved away saying it was mistake... so hurtful it was not correct for Priya but even Ram never made any promises our told her he loves her but still can't see Priya in pain... might be it was neseccary as Ram now need to realize Priya is only the girl with whome he can settle down in life as she is the only one who can handle Ram like dadi said... whole part was very thochy spi the kangan wala part... & one more thing to clear what ever u wrote it wasn't at all valgur it was wrriten very beuatifully so don't worry i really like the way u wrote it with dignaty... too gud keep updating & post next one soon waiting.. ...

thanks for commenting dear😊...am glad that u liked this part, I just said that because I wanted to know whether my readers liked it or whether they are comfortable with the way story is progressing, with this I also tried to maintain dignity, so I wanted to know whether am doing full justice to it or not, am really touched how my readers reacted with the update and also a big thanks to them for saying such beautiful words as comments⭐️

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: leena04
if u ask suggestion i just wanna say that Priya first should recollect herself from the pain she got from Ram just now & then she should speak out to Ram abt her feeling if still Ram said sorry then she should move on in life for sure i don't want any preggy track as its very comman in any story & seeing ur reply i feel Ram is not gonna realized his love soon so i want Priya to be strong indipendent girl & working hard in same firm where he givng her cariarres imp years & made herself i want her to move on in life i know its not easy but i feel time will heal everything... i want her to be withh Kapoors till wedding as they r lovely ppl don't want their heart to be break too...

thanks a lot for the suggestion, at this point I can only say that Priya will compose and collect herself and will be strong, no matter what happens with her, atleast she will not shatter in front of anyone, not even Ram

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Ofcourse we want it..do u have any doubt kya? 😛 😆

just wanted to ask u all😛

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

preview coming up shortly

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vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

just wanted to ask u all😛

Ok.. 😆
Waiting for preview..

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

here comes the preview, ENJOY

Priya helped Neha to dress up for Mehendi and Sangeet and due to Neha's insistence Priya had to wear the saree which Neha gifted her...Ram kept stfaring at Priya as she was looking very pretty in saree...Krishnaji asked Priya to put shagunwali mehendi on Neha'a hand as she is also family...Neha insisted Priya to put mehendi on her hand...mehendiwali inscribed Ram's name in Priya's mehendi...Rishabh, Natasha along with Vikram's cousin put the stage on fire with their performances...everyone was on stage, enjoying with music except Priya...Priya came in her room and put her hands under water, she doesn't want to keep the mehendi, but by that time mehendi was dried up and colour came out and the name of Ram was well inscribed in her hand, is this any kind of signal from Almighty that RaYa are going to be forever?

with this I completed 50th page of this SS, THANK YOU all to my readers, without yours support and encouragement I wouldn't have come such long way, I wish all your best wishes to continue this SS, so keep reading and commenting😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
here comes the preview, ENJOY

Priya helped Neha to dress up for Mehendi and Sangeet and due to Neha's insistence Priya had to wear the saree which Neha gifted her...Ram kept stfaring at Priya as she was looking very pretty in saree...Krishnaji asked Priya to put shagunwali mehendi on Neha'a hand as she is also family...Neha insisted Priya to put mehendi on her hand...mehendiwali inscribed Ram's name in Priya's mehendi...Rishabh, Natasha along with Vikram's cousin put the stage on fire with their performances...everyone was on stage, enjoying with music except Priya...Priya came in her room and put her hands under water, she doesn't want to keep the mehendi, but by that time mehendi was dried up and colour came out and the name of Ram was well inscribed in her hand, is this any kind of signal from Almighty that RaYa are going to be forever?

ram ki naam ki mehndi on priyas hand...
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update soon

Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago