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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ok..aaj thoda jaldi aa gyi...hamesha atka deti hu pr is bar nhi atkaungi...qki main khud super excited hu priya ko hosh me lane aur dekhne k liye...is bar to defnatly m rambabu ko ek senti strong aur samjhdar husband k roop me dekhna chahti hu...pita wo kaise bhi ho pr is bar unki biwi k sath glt hua h to he hv to undrstand...maine socha na tha ki ekta itna uljha k rakh degi sabkuchh...m ye to nhi janti ki ye cheeze sahi kaise hongi pr main ye jarur janti hu ki priya ki is bar glti nhi h to rambabu ko uska sath dena padega...beti nalayak nikal gyi to bechari kya kare??akele pala tha na isiliye gadbad ho gyi...lekin pichhli bar bhi to akele hi pala tha pr tab to bht achhi thi...khair...m abhi pihu ko koi importance nhi dena chahti jab sudhar jayegi tab dekhenge ki uska kya karna h...dekhte hain ekta kya karti h...main jra pati patni ki undrstanding aur bttr kar du...taki beech me bachhe bhi na aa sake..qki bachho ki bhi ek hadh hoti h..wo ma bap k beech me to aa sakte hain par pati patni k beech me to unke liye bhi jagah nhi hoti...aur ye bachho ko pta bhi hona chahiye aur samjhna bhi chahiye...khair...ek aur bat..rambabu ne darling kya keh diya logo k to muh khun lag gya har koi yhi bolta phir rha h...huh jab darling hosh me thi tab darling nhi sherni dikhti h...ab behosh h to bada pyar aa rha h...hattt...

Moving on update hope u all like it...

Part 71...

"last priya k sath kaun tha"

ram priya ki taraf dekh rha hota h priya ram ki taraf ram ko samjh hi nhi aa rha hota h ki react kaise kare...wo ek lambi sans leta h aur kehta h...

Ram...aah priya aaj tumhare "mr.kapoor" k sath tumhare mr.kapoor ki jindgi laut aayi...tum soch bhi nhi m kitni bechaini se ye sunna chahta tha...aaj mujhe tumhari har bechaini bebasi ka ehsah ho rha h to tumne mehsus kiya hoga un salo me jab m tumhare pas nhi tha aur tab bhi jab m tumhare pas to tha par sath nhi tha...

Priya muskurati h aur ankhe band kar leti h...

Ram...priya...priyaaa...kya hua???..dekho meri taraf ...priyaaa...priyaaa.litsen to me damn it...doctor...doctor...doctoooorr

doctor...what happen mr.kapoor aap itna chilla kyun rhe hain??

Ram...doctor dekhiye na ise kya hua??

Doctor...mr.kapoor apko kya hua h???..ap jante to h ki apki patni ki mentle state kya h...phir bhi..

Ram...are m janta hu lekin aap nhi jante abhi usne mujhe mr.kapoor bulaya...

Doctor...kya???

Ram...ham usne ankhe kholi mujhe dekha bat ki muskurayi aur phir se so gyi...please aap kuchh kariye...

Doctor...ok ok let me handle...

Doctor priya ka checkup karta h...use possitive sign dikhta h...

Doctor...mr.kapoor progress to h pr agar hosh me aayi thi to phir se behosh kyun ho gyi...aap ko achhi tarah yad to h na ki unhone ap ka nam liya??

Ram...aap pagal h kya???..ye bhi koi bhulne ya confuse hone wali bat h...main iski dhadkane sun skta hu to m iski kahi hui bat me cnfuse ho sakta hu??? R u gon mad...??

Doctor...sorry mr.kapoor mera ye mtlb nhi tha...main bas ye kehna chah rha tha ki agar to inhone apka nam liya h to iska mtlb inki yaddasht ko kuchh nhi hua h...ab hame in k next movement ka wait karna padega...

Ram...lekin aap kuchh to kariye m isko aur aise nhi dekh sakta yar

doctor...mr.kapoor peteince to apko rakhna hi padega...achha aap mujhe ye btaiye ki inke sath last kaun tha..

Ram...meri beti pihu...kyun??

Doctor...mujhe lagta h shayad wo hamari madad kar payengi...aap unhe yha bulaiye...

Ram...theek h...

Ram priya ko dekhta rhta h...sochta h shayad phir se uth jaye aur use roke le pr...

Doctor...mr.kapoor sab theek ho jayega...please himmat rakhiye...

Ram..7 salo se whi to rakha h...darr lagta h kahin tut na jaye...

Doctr chala jata h..ram ghar wapas ata h..pari aur mayra asusual bhag k uske pas aati hain...bachpan se unhe yhi to seekhaya gya h...lol...qki humne abhi tak yhi dekha h...khair ram unse thodi bate wate karta h...phir wo myra se kehta h ki ..

Ram...myra m kamre me ja rha hu...pihu di kahan h??

Myra...apne room me papa

ram...theek h use mere room me bhej do...

Myra...kya???

Ram...sunayi nhi diya...??..pihu ko mere room me bhej do...

Myra kuchh bol hi nhi pati h...wo pari se kehti h...pari tune bhi whi suna jo mne suna...??

Pari...han

dono bhag k pihu k kamre me jati hain...

Pihu...areee kya kar h tumdono..??...tufan aa gya h kya??

Pari...di lagta to aisa hi h

myra...nahi bhi aya h to shayad ane wala h

pihu...mtlb

myra...pihu di papa ne apko ...apne...kamre me bulaya h

pihu...kya???sachhiii

myra & pari...han di

pihu...pari mayra agr ye koi prank hua na m tumdono ko jinda nhi chhodungi...

Myra ...cmon di hamari itni himmat ki apse jhuth bole wo bhi papa k bare me...sawal hi nhi uthta...

Pari...han di m waqt se pehle m marna nhi chahti

pihu...shutup pari...yeeesss...m abhi papa se milke aati hu...

Pihu ekdm excited hokar bhagkar ram k room me jati hai aur uske gale lag jati h.ram bhi use pyar se gale lagata h aur forhead pr kiss karta h..

pihu...thank u thank u thanku sooo much papa

ram muskurata h...

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Finallyyy...i m here kafi jyada sochne k bad ...ab m finally m dusre thread ka pehla update dene ja rhi hu...with lots of thoght jo ki waqai main socha na tha...ye pure do weeks m itna sabkuchh hua serial me ki har bar mujhe yhi kehna pada...oh my god..maine socha na tha ki ye dikha dega...mtlb hona to tha yhi sab kuchh lekin bada jaldi jaldi ho gya...

Maine socha na tha ki isha bhaiya ka packup itni jaldi ho jayega...maine socha na tha ki mere sath sath..rampriya bhi isha bhaiya ki itni solid watt laga denge...maine socha na tha ki kartik ki sachhai itni jaldi samne aa jayegi...maine socha na tha ki itni sari frustrations me bhi annivrsry pr raya k itne cute cute scene milenge wo bhi luckly mere soche hue imagination k sath...ufff...this is really enough for me...aur natasha...oh my god...she is really too gud...maine socha na tha...ki rambabu ki chhoti itni badi piyakkad niglegi...pura bottl leke hi chalu ho gyi...aur han ek aur baat maine socha na tha ki itne achhe achhe moment ki bhi watt lagayi ja sakti h bahas karke...ufff...khair...leave it...log to nhi sudhrenge...hame hi apna mind change karna padega...waise bhi kehte hain na... "kuchh to log kahenge..logo ka kam h kehna"...anyways...itne sare mne socha na tha moment k beech bhi maine ek cheez to jarur sochi thi...ki is bar rampriya sath honge hi...aur thank god dono sath h...khair mera sochne ka kam abhi bhi jari h...itne k bad bhi cheeze mujhe hazam nhi ho rhi hain qki ekta ka serial h...kuchh bhi ho sakta h...shayad abhi isha bhaiya gye hi na ho...shayad rampriya ek sath milkr jung to lad le lekin unke samne kuchh aur aisa aa jaye jo unhone bhi socha na ho...shayad kartik glt hi na ho...shayad janvi ka charactr hi chractrless nikal jaye...who knows...ekta kuchh bhi kar sakti h...waise bhi...sharma's k sanskaro ki to cvs ne solid dhajjiya uda di hain...kamine..kabhi tameez se koi kam nhi kar sakte hain...aur nhi to jo bacha khucha rh gya tha wo kasar bhi kartik ko bhaga k nikal li idiots ne...ufff...khair chalo...bht stress hua...ab dekhte hain updats me kya hath lagta h...moving on updates...waise to m bhul gyi hu ki kya chal rha tha aur kaun sa part h ye...i think m isha bhaiya ki baja rhi thi tabse unka packup hi ho gya...lol...khair unko bad me lapetenge...filhal k liye to unke rampriya ne out kar diya h apni life se..are nayi problm aani thi to jgh khali karni thi na...to ek problm ko dusre se exchange kar diya...hehehe...

Part 58...

"ab natasha ki bari "

Ram isha k yha se aa to gya...dono k beech khamoshi bhi thi...but aise to chalne wala nhi h kuchh to karna padega aur obiosly priya hi karegi...priya abhi soch hi rhi thi ki ram se bat kare tab se isha bhaiya khud hi aa gye apni band bajwane...to miya biwi ne socha shadiyo ka season h muft ka dhole mila h to dono ne milke baja dala...lekin what i know...kutte ki dum kabhi seedhi nhi hoti to i know isha bhaiya phir lautenge...khair abhi k liye to sab shotout ho gya...raya ne annivrsry bhi mna li..kartik ka raz bhi khul gya wo kahin chala bhi gya...ab nuts bachi...jiske liye rampriya bht kuchh karne ka scene bna rhen h...priya k pas shipra ka phone aata h wo kartik k bare me btati h ki wo bachhe ko chhod k kahin chala gya h..priya aur dipress ho jati h..wo ram k pas aati h btane pr himmat nhi hoti h...ram ka gusse satwe asman pr...ek to rambabu ki chhoti ka dil toda upr se bhag bhi gya...pr ye bhagna bhi turn twist hi layega...khair adarshwadi bachhe to bigad gaye...ab dekhte hain bigade hue bachhe kya karte hain...

Next morning...priya natasha k kamre me jati h...use jagane k liye...par use sote hue dekh kar whi baith jati h...sochne lagti h ki ye itni jiddi itni arognt thi to ye sudhar gyi aur jispr itna bharosa tha usne itna bada dhokha kar diya...priya ne kabhi nhi socha tha ki uske bhai behen aise nikal jayenge pr now what...???..ab to jo h use accept karna hi padega aur jindgi ko age badhana hi padega...kartik to pta nhi kahan chala gya pr natasha ko sambhalna hoga...priya use bade hi pyar se jagati h...natasha filhal hosh me hai pr sar dard se phata ja rha h...uthte hi sabse pehle bottle uthati h...ek no ki darubaz ho gyi h ek hi din me...khair priya use roke deti h...to wo bhadak jati h...

Priya...natasha ye kya kar rhi ho subah subah...chhodo ise tum...

Natasha...tum kaun hoti ho mujhe rokne wali..

Priya...tumhari bhabhi

natasha...achha ?..to apne bhai ko kyun nhi roka...??

Priya...natasha...i am sorry baby ...bola na hum use saza denge pr tum aise karogi to kaise hoga??

Natasha...kya saza dogi??..usne to meri jindgi saza bna di...chhodo...mujhe peena h...

Priya...nhi m tumhe nhi peene dungi...

Natasha...m peeungi...& nobody will stop me...undrstand

priya...i will...kisi k liye nhi to km se km apne bhai k bare me socho wo kaise jee rhe honge tumhe aise dekh k...tumhe tumhare bhai ki kasam ab tum ek bar bhi nhi piogi...

Natasha ...are yar mujhe chain se koi rhne bhi nhi deta...is ghar me bhi rhne layak nhi...bhai jakhm deta h bhn marham lagane aa jati h...

Natasha uth k fresh hone chali jati h...priya...sochti rhti h ki uske bhai ki ek glti ne use kahan la diya..sare rishte bigad diye...priya apne kamre me jati h...wha ram ko pareshan dekhti h...use to kuchh samjh hi nhi aa rha tha...khair rambabu on the way...to unhone divorce k liye apply kar diya tha..are pr divorce hoga kisse pati to bhag gya h...lol...khair... Natasha taiyar hokar bahar ja rhi hoti h tabhi ram aata h...

Ram...chhoti...kahan ja rhi h

natasha...office ja rhi hu bhai

ram...abhi se office..?..kuchh din aram kar le phir jana...

Natasha...cmon bhai...b brave like me...dekhiye m ekdm normal hu...pls aise jindgi nhi rukti...i am ok...u jst relx...i will handle it..

Ram...pr chhoti...

Natasha...chill bhai...

Natasha chali jati h pr wo bilkul theek nhi rhti h...lo bhai...story likhte likhte promo bhi dikh gya...ufff ye ekta bhi na...i so knew it...suicide jarur karwayegi ye...hattt...nalayak...khair...natasha as shown in promo...suicide attmpt karti h...pr itni asani se to maregi nhi to..ram k pas phone ata h ki uski chhoti i mean..natasha hospital me hain...ram aur priya hospital jate hain...chhoti ki ye halat dekh kar ram out of cntrol ho jata h aur...priya k ghar pahonch jata h aur chillane lagta h ki kahan h kartik m use chhodunga nhi...bla bla...sudhirji aate hain aur kartik k bare me btate hain...ram gusse me bolta h ki kartik ki wajah se phir se chhoti ne jan dene ki koshis h...ram sabko dhamki wgrh deke chala ata h ki wo chhodega nhi kartik ko ...wo kisi bhi kone me chala jaye use wo saza dilwa k rahega..sharma's ko to ab ram hi bacha sakte hain rambabu k gusse se...udhar priya pareshan h ki ram aa nhi rhe hain...idhar natasha ko bhi hosh nhi aa rha h wo kare to kya kare...wo ram ko dekhne k liye...bahar aati h pr thoda wait karke andr chali jati h...jb natasha k room k pas pahonchti h to use hasne ki awaz aati h wo darwaze pr hi ruk jati h...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ufff...ab kya bolu...btao bhala cvs ko kuchh kaho to meri sakshi ko kahin bura na lag jaye iska dar hota h bcz she always appriciate them but in nalayko ko uski bhi kadr nhi h...are yar main manti hu ki wo bht mehna t karte hain hame jo bhi dekhne ko milta h unki wajah se milta h...pr problm ye hai ki wo sirf apna bettr dete hain...actors use best bnate hain..jaise sakshi aur ram pr hum kya karen hame to bestest chahiye hota h...are agr cvs best denge to ram sakshi khud hi use bestest bna denge...ye to mujhko 100 % pta h pr ye nalayak...kya kahu mtlb achha khasa scene tha first kick ka pr chaupat kar diya...pr mujhe abhi bhi chahiye...i want ki ram feel kare first kick pr cvs to bhul hi jate h har cheez udhar pihu ko naraz karke bhul gye idhar kick wala scene bhi bhul gye khair...hum to hai hi apni imagination k ghode daudane k liye...qki option nhi h na hamare pas...khair kuchh na kuchh to karungi hi...filhal update par chalte hain...aaj jyada bakwas nhi karungi qki m bht enrgy wst karti hu bakwas karne me...here u all go with update hope u all like it...

Part 65...

"hum wait kar rhen hain"

han to kahan thi main...ha party me aate hi natasha ki mulakat priya se hoti h

priya...achha hua natasha tum aayi tumhe aur chhotu ko dekh kar mujhe bht achha laga

natasha...aap itna natak kar kaise leti hain???

Priya...mtlb???

Natasha...cmon priya jyada bno mat tumhe apne alawa kuchh nhi dikhta na...mera kartik kis halat me h aur tumhe party karne ki chinta h...kaisi behn ho tum???

Priya...oh tum mujhe bta rhi ho ki m kaisi bhn hu ...aur tum kaisi behn ho jis bhai ne itna sabkuchh kiya tumlogo k liye aur aaj bhi kar rha h uski kitni kadr karte ho tumlog ye to mujhe dikh hi rha h...aur aaj kartik ki bht chinta ho rhi h...m kuchh bolti nhi hu to aisa nhi h ki mujhe kuchh samjh nhi ata h...par theek h main bas itna chahti hu ki aayi ho to enjoy karke jana khud bhi chain se rhna aur hame bhi rhne dena...agr tumhe bhai bhn ke rishte ki itni samjh h to itni ummeed to main tumse kar hi sakti hu...

Natasha kuchh kehti nhi h..lekin priya ko achha nhi lagta h usse itna rudly bat karna pr kya kare kabhi kabhi ye bhi karna padta h...khair..party to achhe se ho jati h..lekin har cheez achhi hogi to kahani me twist kaise aayega to h na rishabh twist lane k liye.:..toh kuchh situation creat hui aur last episode wala scene creat ho gya...waise mujhe bada maza aya jb priya ne kaha ki man to kar rha khinch k ek thappad lagau...hayeee...sunne me itna maza aya socho agr thappad laga diya hota to mera 100gm. Khun to bn hi gya hota...lol...pr ye dono bhi na...dusro k chakkr me khud lad padte hain ...uska bhi lekin apna hi maza h...jo bhi ho precap dekh kar ek ummeed jagi h ki shayad kick wala scene dikha de...qki jaisa scene dikh rha tha usse mujhe yhi laga...na bhi dikhaye to koi badi bat nhi h qki cvs ko to promo aur precap ki watt lagane me maharath hasil h...anyways...i thought phir se kuchh hua hoga jiski wajah se rambabu ko dawao ki jarurat pad gyi...to main aa jati hu precap scene pr...scene kuchh aisa hua hoga ki phir se saumya aur rishbh ne proprty ko bantne ki bat kar di hogi jisse rambabu ki tensn aur bp dono badh gya hoga ..unki bechaini priya se dekhi nhi ja rhi hogi aur wo jo kam nhi karna chahti h wo karne pr majbur ho gyi hogi...

Priya...mr.kapoor itne pareshan hain sirf meri wajah se pr main kya karu agr samne se kuchh kahungi to sunenge nhi qki wo to apne bhai bhno k khilaf kabhi kuchh na to sun sakte hain na soch sakte hain...lekin main unhe aise is hal me chhod bhi nhi sakti...aur shayad wo mujhse bat bhi na kare to main bato se bhi unhe behla nhi sakti...ab to mujhe khud hi meri dushman...i mean in tablets ko mr.kapoor ko dena padega taki unka stress kuchh kam ho sake...chalo priya filhal to option nhi h to tumhe ye karna hi padega...

Priya tablets leke ram k pas aati hai...ram ek bar use dekhta h phir muh pher k baith jata h...waise rambabu ruth jate hain to bade cute lagte hain... ..

Priya...ye tablets le lijiye

ram...nhi chahiye mujhe

priya...mr.kapoor pls...aapko itna stress nhi lena chahiye bp badh jayega...pls le lijiye ye tablets..

Ram...maine kaha na nhi chahiye ...jao tum yha se

priya...theek h m yha rakh deti hu jb marzi hogi le lijiyega...

Ram chori chori use dekh rha tha aur priya ko bhi pta h ki ram use dekh rha h isiliye aur bhi sad wala face bna k dawa rakh rhi hoti h qki janti h ki ram use aise sad nhi dekh sakta h...waise to priya bhi nhi chahti h ki ram phir se in dawaiyo ka aadi bane pr itni tnsn ho gyi h ki kya kiya jaye...khair ram priya ka face dekh k thoda pighal jata h..priya jane lagti h to wo dawa uthata h priya use dekh k dheere se muskurati h aur achanak se bolti h.:

priya...aauuchh...

Ram dawa wgrh chhod k jaldi se priya k pas ata h aur ekdm se ghabra k puchhta h

ram...kya hua???tum theek to ho???...tum baith jao...are bolo na kya hua??...doctr ko bulau kya???

Priya...sshhh...

Priya ram ka hath pakadti h ram priya ki trf dekhta hai...ekdm O TERI wale expression k sath...lol

ram...kya??

Priya ram ka hath apne tummy pr rakhti h...tabhi chhota baby kick karta h...

Ram...aaauuchhh

priya...kya hua??

Ram...are ye to sachhi me mar rha h

priya...han toh mujhe mar rha h na aap kyun chilla rhen hain??

Ram...mtlb tumhe aise kick karta hoga to lagti hogi na...

Priya...han lagti to hai pr wo dard bhi achha lagta h...

Ram...han achha to bht hai...aur isko mehsus karna to aur bhi achha h..

Priya...han aur aapki dant se to achha hi h...

Ram...oh to mera dantna bura lagta h aur mar khana bura nhi lagta

priya...nahi mar khana bura nhi lagta h

ram...theek h to ab se mujhe jb bhi gussa ayega to m baby ko bol dunga ki wo tumhe kick kare...ab to wo meri bat sunega na...

Priya...hhuuhh..how mean ..sorry to bole nhi sakte hain upar se ulti seedhi bate karte hain...

Ram...are sorry kyun bolu???...tum dant khane wala kam karti hu isliye dant khati ho

priya...excuse me...

Tabhi phir se baby kick karta h aur rampriya dono eksath bolte hain...

Rampriya...aauchh

phir dono ek dusre ko dekh kar hasne lagte hain aur gale lag jate hain...

Priya...mr.kapoor

ram...hmm

priya...pihu...abhi bhi naraz h na

ram...han to hogi hi na..tumne dil jo toda h uska

priya...cmon mr.kapoor aap meri bat kabhi nhi samjhte hain aur na hi apni beti ko samjhate hain...

Ram...o meri beti bht samjhdar h tabhi to tumhari bat man li

priya...han wo to mujhe pta h pr aap mana dijiye use mere liye...plss

ram...nhi tumne glti ki h tumhi sudharo

priya...pls mr.kapoor aap mere liye itna bhi nhi kar sakte...main bhi to apki kitni gltiya sudharti hu...pls...pls...pls..mna dijiye na...pls

ram...ok ok...imotionally blackmail karne ki jarurat nhi h main koshis karunga pr promise nhi kar sakta ki wo manegi ya nhi..

Priya...aap koshish to kariye main janti hu wo man jayegi

ram...achha tumhe kaise pta???

Priya...qki wo apne golu papa pr gyi h na to jitni jaldi ruthti h utni hi jaldi man bhi jati h

ram...vry funny...

Priya...hehehe..

Dono ekdusre ki baho me bht khush rhte hain..

Next morning..

Priya kamre me aati h toh ram aur pihu dono gal pr hath rakh kr baithe rhte hain...

Priya...kya ho rha h bhai??..bap beti baithe hue hain bade aram se school nhi jana h kya pihu...??..aur mr.kapoor apko bhi office k liye der ho jayegi...chaliye aplog jaldi jaldi taiyar hoiye..

Pihu...oh mom sunday ko school kaun jata h???

Ram...kya priya tum bhi...aajkl bht bhullakkad hoti ja rhi ho

priya...are aaj sunday hai...mujhe pta hi nhi chala...sach me main ekdm bhullakkad hoti ja rhi hu...achha theek h pr fresh to ho jaiye aaploh

rampihu...ho jayenge...

Priya muskura k wha se chali jati h...bahar rishabh milta h taiyar hokar office ja rha hota h

priya...are rishabh kahan ja rhe ho???

Rishabh...kyun ab ye bhi aap se puchh k ya bta k karna padega

priya...are maine to bas isliye puchha ki aaj sunday h to itni subah subah kahan ja rhe ho...

Rishabh...oh to ab din bhi apki marzi se honge...hadh hoti h hukumat chalane ki

rishabh bol k chala jata h priya ko kuchh samjh nhi ata h...samne saumya khadi hoke muskura rhi hoti h...

Priya...dekha saumya...are kya kaha maine bs yhi na ki sunday ko kahan ja rhe ho ??..to bhadk gya...ho kya gya h is ladke ko

saumya...han bhabhi rishabh ka attitude to mujhe bhi pasand nhi h but kya karu??...lekin apko kisne bola ki aaj sunday h???

Priya...kyun??...mr.kapoor aur pihu ne...

Saumya...hehehe

priya...tum has kyun rhe ho??

Saumya...i am sorry bhabhi mujhe ye to nhi pta ki undono ne aisa kyun kiya pr apko unhone popat bnaya h aaj sunday nhi h sutrday h...

Priya...what???...oh isiliye rishabh bhadk gya...pr indono ne...mujhse jhuth kyun bola???...abhi dekhti hu main...how dare they...

Priya gusse me wapas kamre me aati h wo dono abhi bhi waise hi baithe rhte hain priya samne aake khadi ho jati hai aur gussa k kehti h...

Priya...kya ho rha h ye sab????

Rampihu...sshhh..hum wait kar rhen hain

priya...what???

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Ok...finally again i am here...waise to ekta aur uske cvs ne milke meri soch ki puri mast wali watt laga di h...hayeee..waise to meri koi bat sunte nhi pr nalayko ne sun liya...gadhe kahin k..are maine to sirf apne dil ko dilasa dene k liye bol rhi thi m leti hui sakshi ki ankho se bhi kam chala sakti hu...pr jungliyo ne seriously le liya yar...aisa kuchh bhi nhi h...mujhe jiti jagti bate karti hui sakshi hi chahiye yar...i cnt handle it...yar maine meri so called gud for nothing life ko itna exciting aur happening sakshi k bharose bna rakha h ye logo ko kyun nhi samjh ata.??...khair...sabkuchh itna massy ho gya h ki smjh hi nhi aa rha h kya likhu??..kaise likhu???..pr likhna to padega...wo bhi dhiri k liye qki nalayak ne phon karke bola ki update de do yar kyun pareshan karte ho...hahaha...to lo beta ye tumhare liye...m ye to nhi janti ki m isko kahan leke jaungi pr ye jarur janti hu ki kahin bhi leke jau...sakshi ko to hosh me la ke hi aage badhungi...bht ho gya man liya mne ki 7 sal se behosh h ab mera 7 min bhi use behosh dekhne ka man nhi h...are yar...m bta nhi sakti after leap k itne achhe episode me bhi main ro rhi thi sirf isliye qki mujhe sakshi nhi dikh rhi thi serial me...logo ne behlane ki koshish bhi ki ...ki are yar flashback me aa rhi h..2-4 scene dikhayenge hi...aye mujhko bachha samjha h kya??..bol diya beta ye lollypop h its vry yummy aur m man jau...wooow lollypop...hattt...i want sakshi yar...khair...jab tak sakshi nhi bol rhi h..tab tak uske badle bhi main hi bol leti hu..qki bht din se bola nhi h na...to ek ek se gin gin k badla lena h...sabse pehle to promo ki bat karungi..qki maine socha nhi h ki kahani ko kya aur kaise mode du...pr pehle jra mere pet k arman nikalne do yar...wrna usme dard ho jata h... ..hmmm..to promo me rambabu ne kya bola???..priya utho pihu k ladka dhundhna..huh..kyun rambabu apki jis pihu ke ladke k chakkr me meri priya coma pahonch gyi..us pihu ko ladka hi nhi mila 7 salo me..ho hi nhi sakta uski jawani to neha se bhi pehle phadkne lagi thi...itna ki apni ma ko tana mar diya...ufff..mtlb mujhko ye samjh nhi aya ki jarurat kya thi...itni buri trh se pihu k character ka satyanash karne ki...are bigadte mujhe usse koi problm nhi h kyunki hote hain itne bigde hue bachhe aajkl pr kitne bhi bigde ho...ma se ye dialogue nhi marte ki mujhe kya pta ap dad se pehle...chhhiii...sooo cheap yar...itna ghatiya bnane ki jarurat nhi thi...khair jo kiya so kiya..pr itna sabkuchh bigad k leap kar diya ...hadh h yar...kam se kam pihu ko realise karake aur sabka ek sorry wala programm kara k phir leap karna tha na...khair...hamare pas option sirf serial dekhne nhi dekhne ka h aur hum kuchh nhi kar sakte.:..aur mere pas to sirf dekhne ka hi option h...jab tak sakshi h nhi dekhne ka to sawal hi nhi uthta...khair in sab me sabse impressive betiyo wale dialogus the aur vikram ka sentiness...i know wo thoda over tha but what can i do yar,..mujhse daddy logo ka rona handle nhi hota h..are i am also daddy's doughter na...mere daddy to hamesha bolte hain ki unki betiya unke jaisi hain...aur hamare ghar me ek cheez bht famous h ki betiya bht achhi hoti hain...to mera bhai ekdm chidh jata h..hahaha..are achhi hain to achhi kahi hi jayengi pr bade achhe walo ne betiyo ki puri mst watt laga di...khair humlog isliye nhi bigde qki humlogo ko bina puchhe hi mummy ki love story sunni pdti h...aur mushkil pta h kya???..uske boyfrnd bhi kaun??..mere daddy...ab bolo kya bigde humlog...??..

Pr na insab me rambabu ki sabse badi glti ye rhi ki bekar hi mna kar diya lovestory sunane ko..are unko to pta hi nhi h kitna maza ata h sunne me...anyways apart of joke:...but seriously cvs ne itna ghatiya turn diya story ko na ki wo sirf mere jaise log hi nigal payenge samjhdar log to logic hi dhundhte rh jayenge...khair..100 bat ki ek bat main janti hu...ki kisi bachhe ko ye haq nhi diya gya h ki wo apne ma bap se aise sawal kare...theek h na har kisi ki life me secrats hote hain..agr nhi btaya to tum charactr pr sawal utha do ye to kahin se hajam nhi hota...agar ma bachhe ko sirf paida karke bhi chhod de to bhi bachha uske 9 mahine apne andr rakhne aur jeevan dene ka ehsan hi jindgi me kabhi nhi utar sakte to aise sawal to kisi bhi trh mafi k layak nhi h..m hamesha manti hu ki betiya sensitive hoti h qki wo dard takleef mehsus kar sakti h pr ladko se m ummeed nhi karti qki unhe ye dard dekh k hi mehsus karna hota h to wo agr uski kadr na bhi kare to ek bar chalta h aur agr koi ladka ma bap ki takleef samjhta h to m use dil se achha insan samjhti hu..pr aajkl to ladkiyo ki sensivity ka mujhe bhi doubt h...anyways...

Ufff...kitna bakwas karti hu main...pr m kya sochti hu ki yha wha faltu me messi karne se achha h ki khud ki hi post messi karo...dusro k sath bahas kar ekdusre ko galt btane se behtr h ki khud jo kehna keh lo jinhe sunna hoga sun hi lenge...nhi sunna hoga to aage badh jayenge..ek akhri bat pihu se...are yar...mujhe us book ka nam janna tha...how i missed that..jisme ye likha h ki is umar me sab aise hi karte hain aur karna hi chahiye...meri wo umar bhi beet gyi aur mne itni badi apportunity mis kar di agr wo book hoti to shayad m bhi cnvience ho jati ki is umar me sabhi yhi karte h...hayee hum to us umar me ladko se ladte hi rh gye...i jst hate all this yar...mujhe samjh nhi ata ki ajkl k youth ko ho kya gya??? Deemag me sirf kachra hi bhara h ya kuchh kam ki cheeze bhi h...bheed ki taraf chalne se aap kuchh nhi kar sakte bheed k sath chal kar bhi alag makam pr pahonchiye to apke chalne ka kuchh matlb h...ye kyun dekhte ho ki dusro k pas kya h??..ye dikhao na ki tumhare pas kya h jisse dusre seekh sakte hain...aur aajkl ka so called love trend...zindagi me isse aur kuchh mile ya na mile pr jindgi hi nhi milti chain se jeene ko...pyar karne aur nhi karne me sirf ek soch ka fark hota h...lekin nibhane k liye ek ke sath kai jindgiyo ko daw pr lagana padta h...shaukh ya dikhawe k liye pyar kar lena ki yhi trend h is sooo cheap & i really hate hi logo ne pyar k mayne hi chaupat kar diye hain...khair...aaj ki gnration k liye meri bate obiously bakwas hain wo ek kan se sunenge aur dusre tak jane bhi nhi denge qki beech me deemag ata h na...agr atak gya to unke hatho ek achha kam ho jayega na...ok hatao jo apno ki nhi sunte hain meri kya sunege..mujhe bas is bat ka dar lagta h ki jo hamare parents ne hame diya use hum tod kar naye ruls bna rhe jiska result defntly achha nhi ho rha h to jo hum set kar rhe hain next gnration k liye to hame kitne bure result milenge...bhai jo hum trend set karenge wo aage wale bhi to todenge..to kaise pale jayenge yar bachhe...shiittt..anyways...back on track...to nalayko ne priya ko behosh kar rakha h...u know what i want...ki priya sab bhul jaye...khas kar k pihu ko...nalayak..uski hi wajah se bina glti k saza mil rhi h priya ko...yhi hota h yar bachhe to glti karke chale jate hain pichhe rh jate hain ma bap family wale saza bhugtne k liye...kyun aajkl k bachho ki soch aisi ho gyi h q nhi dekh pate hain ki unki gltiyo ka dusro pr kya asar pad rha h ya pad sakta h...chalo chhodo logo mere sudharne se koi nhi sudhrne wala h pr i defnly want & request to today's generation ki please kuchh bhi karne se pehle apne sath jude logo k bare me jarur soche..sirf trend aisa h ,...aisa soch k jindgi na jiye...sirf pyar nhi hoga to bhi jindgi rukegi nhi..aap pyar dena seekhenge to pyar apko bhi milega hi...pr jaruri nhi h ki pyar sirf boyfrnd girlfrnd se hi milta h...duniya me bht pyar h aur har pyar khubsurat h...pehle apno ko pyar do to dusre khud tumse pyar kar lenge...ufff...ye bht senti ho gya but m sachhi bht hurt hio jati hu jb bachhe ma bap se jyada kisi aur ko imp de dete hain aur ulte seedhe kam kar dete hain:...khair sabki apni life jo jaise chahe barbad kare...m isse jyada senti nhi hona chahti...chalo update pr...aur main priya ko hosh me lane ja rhi hu...qki m use aise nhi dekh sakti...

Ok now seriously moving on updates...

Part 70

"kab tak soti rhogi"

main wha atak gyi thi jo priya ko ram se apna nam sunna tha...aur rambabu yha atak gye hain qki pichhle sat salo se wo yha aate hain isi ummeed me ki priya uthegi aur unhe mr.kapoor keh k bulayegi..mr.kapoor ko bilkul andaza nhi tha ki nam nahi sunne ki tadap unhe is tarah mehsus karni padegi...ram ko bas yhi lag rha tha ki kab priya uth jaye aur kahe ki "mr.kapoor aap bht thak gye na meri neend khulne ka intezar karte karte"

zindagi ek aur bar 7 sal aage badh chuki h...lekin ram k liye aaj bhi whi ruki h jis mod se ye bichhde the...aaj bhi ram whi usi jagah usi trh khade hokar priya ko pukar rha h pr priya sun nhi rhi h...shayad apna badla le rhi h usne bhi bht pukara tha par ram ne nhi suna...jindgi aisi hi hoti h har mod par badlti h...pr har mod se badhti bhi h...pichhe rh jati h..kuch ankahi ansuni bate...kuchh bemalb bemani rate...bahot sari khamoshiya aur..bhot sari anchahi chahte..ram ki jindgi bhi aisi hi h...bht sari hulchul bht sara shor h aas pas...lekin dil me itni khamoshi h ki aaj bhi wo priya ki dhadkane saf saf sun sakta h...charo tarf bht sare log bht sare rishte lekin dil me sirf ek rishta jo aaj bhi use pura hone ka ehsas karata h...chahe wo kitna bhi dur chala jaye pr ek parchhai aaj bhi uska pichha nhi chhodti...use tanha nhi chhodti aur wo h uski priya...jo bhale hi pichhle 7 salo se hosh me nhi h par ram ke har pal me sirf whi h...aaj 7 sal bad ram sirf ek khyal se darta h ki agar priya ki neend kabhi khuli nhi to wo usse wo sari bate kaise karega jo use kehni h...use intezar se dar nhi lagta lekin intezar k anjam se dar lagta h...qki jiska wo intezar kar rha h wo uski jindgi h...kahi jindgi ka intezar karne me zindagi hatho se na chhut jaye...

Ram hospital ata h priya se milne...usse bate karta h...use apne bachho ki har chhoti badi updates deta h..

Ram...priya kab tak soti rhogi yar 7 sal ho gye ab to uth jao...

Pr priya use nhi sunti h ram wha se chala jata h...waise to wo har din wha ata h pr is bar jane kyun do din bad aya...shayad kuchh mehsus karna chahta tha...aaj ram priya se kuchh nhi kehta h sirf uske seene pr hath rakh kar uski dhadkano ko mehsus karne ki koshish karta h...pehle to bht tez chalti hain jaise kisi bat se dar gyi ho...magar ram k ehsas k sath dhadkne apni raftar me aa jati h...ram ko jo samjhna tha wo samjh chuka tha...

Ram...dekho priya bht ho gya tumhara natak main samjh gya hu ki tum mujhe mehsus kar sakti ho...mere ek din nhi ane se tum itni bechain ho gyi...socho tumhare is tarah soye rhne se mera kya hal hota h...now m tumhe akhri warning de rha hu...agar tum nhi uthi to main aaj k bad yha nhi aunga...main tumhara rat bhar jagna seh sakta hu pr aise sona nhi...m tumhara chillana bardasht kar sakta hu pr ye khamoshi nhi...tumhe mujhse shikayat thi na ki mere pas tumhara nam lene ki fursat nhi h aaj m shikayat karta hu ki mujhe aaj tumhara nam lene se fursat nhi h tumne mera ye hal kar diya h...mere kan taras gye hain priya mr.kapoor sunne k liye...please mat karo mere sath aisa wrna m kabhi nhi aunga yha...uth jao priya please...

Ram priya k seene pr sar rakh kar rone lagta h...

Priya...mr.kapoor

ram priya ki taraf dekhne lagta h...use apni ankho aur kano par wishwas nhi ho rha tha use lag rha tha wo sapna dekh rha h...

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Sorry frnds...mujhe na yaddasht ghayab karne me bada maza ata h...ek bar rambabu ki ghayab ki thi to ek bar priya ki bhi ghayab karna to bnta h boss..bhai m story me baisd nhi ho sakti na...lol..aur mere pas isse bhi badi ek wajah h..agar seedha seedha hosh me la diya to pihu madm jo sab messiness faila rakha h uska samna priya kaise karegi...kahin phir se wapas coma me na chali jaye...to bttr h ki sab bhula do...ab rhi bat itna jyada bhulane ki...mane pura 20 sal hi ghayab kar diya...are pehle itna nhi ghayab karne wali thi...maine suna tha ki agr do bar accident ho to insan pichhle wale accident me atak jata h..amnesia me...m bhi kar sakti thi..plane crash tak...aur mujhe usse koi problm bhi nhi thi but rambabu ko problm ho jati...agar unse priya apna 5 sal ka bachha mang deti to bechare kahan se late...hayee..serial jarur h pr itna bhi fake nhi h ki bade hue bachhe ko phir se chhota kar diya jaye...to mne socha ki chalo nayi shuruat ki shuruat shuru se karti hu...bachhe wachhe ka jhanjhat hi na rhe...jarurat hogi to phir se c-night mna k le ayenge pihu..serial me itna fake to chalta h...waise bhi jab 20 sal me buddhhe nhi hue to hum itna chance to mar hi sakte hain...waise bhi priya ko bht sare logo se mafi mangni h sab line me khade h ki kab mauka mile aur sab priya ko maf karke uspe ehsan laade...huh...bechari kuchh din coma ki wajah se bach gyi ab kuchh din yaddasht ki wajah se bach jayegi...dekho bachho ki glti ki wajah se ma bap ko kya kya bhugtna padhta h jabki unki koi glti bhi nhi hoti..wo to glt cheeze bhi nhi seekhate apne bachho ko phir bhi glt nateeze jhelte hain...aur ye fact h...anyways moving on update with phir se nayi shuruat par whi purani bat...

Part 73...

"chalo ek bar phir se..."

ram aur doctor dono priya ko dekhne lagte hain...

Doctor...mr.kapoor kya accident se pehle kisi ki shaadi thi...??

Rambabu to abhi tak jhatke me hi the...kahin priya ka sadma rambabu me na ghus jaye...lol...ram kuchh kehne jata h tabhi priya bolti h...

Priya...are kisi ki ??..hamari hi shaadi thi...kal hi to hui...pr main yha kaise aayi??..mujhe kuchh yad nhi aa rha h bas yhi yad aa rha h ki aap buisness trip par ja rhe the...

Tabhi neha aur vikram bhi aa jate hain...

Neha...fattyy idiot tune btaya nhi ki priya hosh me aa gyi h...wo to pihu ne phone kiya to pta chala...

Priya...pihu??..pihu kaun h???

Neha...priya...r u ok??..tum pihu ko puchh rhi ho???..ye to rhi pihu...pari aur myra...

Priya...han lekin ye hain kaun???

Neha ram ki taraf dekhti...ram ekdm bebas type se uski taraf dekhta h...priya bht disturb dikhti h..uski sanse thodi tez chalne lagti h aur sar me dard bhi hone lagta h..doctor sabko rokta h..

Doctor...achha mrs kapoor aap aram kariye...bad me bate karenge..aur aaplog bahar chaliye inhe letne dijiye

sab jane lagte hain to priya ram ko rokti h

priya...mr.kapoor mujhe yha nhi rhna h ghar jana h..plsss

ram...han priya m ata hu formalities wgrh karke phir hum ghar chalenge...tum aram karo...

Sabhi bahar aa jate hain...ram bht disturb rhta h vikram neha ko doctor sab btata h..vikram ram ki halat dekh kar use sambhalta h

vikram...cmon yar priya kam se kam hosh me to aayi..kya fark padta h kaise aayi..

Ram...kya fark padhta h???..wo hamari jindgi k 20 sal bhul gyi h vikram...hamare bachhe...hamara pyar...sab kuchh..main use kya kya samjhaunga aur kaise samjhaunga...bachho ko kya jawab dunga..

Neha...we undrstand fatty par hum sab h na milkar sambhal lenge...doctor aap samjhaiye na ise

doctor...mr.kapoor ye log sahi keh rhe hain...kam se kam mrs.kapoor hosh me to aa gyi hain...hum koshish karenge wo dhere dheere thik bhi ho jayengi par hum sabko bht alrt rhna padega...unke deemag pr bht jyada jor nhi dal sakte qki wo 7 sal coma me rhi hain to koi shock shayad unke liye is bar khatrnak ho jaye...isiliye jaise wo chahe sabko waise hi rhna padega...aur han wo bar bar buisness trip ka nam le rhi thi...

Han darasal jab hamari shadi hui thi to dusre din m buisness k liye usa chala gya tha...aur accident k pehle bhi m buisness k liye london hi ja rha tha...

Doctor...oh to unke deemag me whi rh gya h..lekin hame ye pta lagana hoga ki accident se pehle exactly hua kya tha??...shayad usse hame kuchh

tabhi pihu chilla deti h

ram...kya hua???r u ok??

Pihu...wo chhipkali

ram pihu ko ghurta h...phir doctor k pas wapas ata h...

Ram...doctor kya priya abhi bhi hospital me hi rhegi...??

Doctor.:..nahi aap unhe ghar le ja sakte hain pr abhi kuchh din aur unko undr observation hi rakhna padega...hum uska intezam apke ghar pr hi kar denge aap bas itna khyal rakhiyega ki sab kuchh waisa hi rhe jaisa 20 sal pehle tha...

Doctor chala jata h...ram ekdm helpless sa vikram aur neha ki taraf dekhta h

neha...cmon yar fatty dnt do this..

Vikram...humlog hain na...bas tu yha priya k pas rh hum sab kuchh dekh lenge

ram...nahi mujhe apna kamra theek karna hoga...jaise pehle tha...

Neha...ram...hum kar denge..tu nahi kar payega yar...

Ram...nahi ye mujhe hi karna hoga..

Ram aur bachhe ghar aa jate hain gharwalo ko btaya jata h priya k bare me aur sabko waise hi behav karne ko kaha jata h jaise 20 sal pehle tha...baki sab kuchh to theek tha par bechari saumya ki kya glti h...ek to waise hi uska serial me kuchh kam nhi h upar se...priya bhabhi k chakkr me uski watt lag gyi...na ghar ki rhi na ghat ki...lol..khair uska kya karna h ye priya k ane k bad sochenge...abhi to ek aur problm h...ye ma jo exchange ho gyi hain unka kya excuse denge...ufff...ye priya ki yaddasht k chakkr me kitni kahaniya bnani padengi yar...hadh h...anyways...ram kamre me ata h...kamre ko puri tarah dekhta h...har ek cheez uske ek ek pal k pyar ki gawah h...wo bhi sb kuchh priya ki pasand ka priya ki marzi ka...lekin aaj wo sab bemani ho gya h..zindgi k panne kabhi kabhi aise palat jate hain ki samne ek kora kagaz aa jata h..jispr phir se puri jindgi likhna padta h...kya rampriya milkar is kore kagaz par phir se whi purani zindagi likh payenge???...

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"bade achhe lagte hain...chalo ek bar phir se"

actully mujhe lag rha h ki mera ye track thoda lamba chalega..aur is thread me mujhe serial k bad bakwas karni hoti h ...to m soch rhi hu yha se...isko alag kar du...kya karu bolo????

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hmm...actully yar...mtlb natasha ko alchohlic deekhane ka to mujhe koi sence hi nhi samjh aa rha h...mtlb itna to koi real life me bhi dipress hoke nhi karta wo bhi itni jiddi ladki aur ye sb...hazam nhi hota yar...sumona ka acting skill dikhane tak k liye theek baki koi logic nhi h...khair..ekta ki kis bat me logic hota h?!...i bttr know ki wo rampriya ko ladaye bhidhaye bina manegi nhi...khair cvs k pas akal kitni h ye to hum pehle se hi jante hain to unse kuchh logical ummeed karna to m afford nhi kar sakti...bekar me unki bewkufi ko credit kaun de...anyways...moving on update...

Part 59

"uff tang aa gyi thi m"

priya kamre ki taraf badhti h ki achanak use kisi k hasne ki awaz aati h to wo darwaze pr hi ruk jati h...

Wah nuts man gya tumhe kya drama karti ho..

Nuts...are yar tang aa gyi thi main achha ban ban k...deemag kharab ho gya tha mera puri life chaupat ho gyi thi...achhi bahu...achhi biwi...itna sab karo aur last me logo ki bate suno..ye sab bht jyada ho gya tha mere liye...

Par tumhe ye sab karne ki kya jarurat thi tumhe to sabhi jante the..ki jiddi ho bigdail ho to sudhrne ka natak aur ye sab kisliye???

Nuts ...taki kartik ko apne bas me rakh saku..isliye sudhri thi...lekin wo to ma bap ka chamcha tha...

To bhi tumhari to sunta hi tha...tumse pyar bhi karta tha...tumhari glti maf karke tumhe apna bhi chuka tha...

Nuts...han lekin kitne din tak mera rhta isiliye usko bandhne k liye sudhrna pada tha...

Par phir bhi to tumhara nhi hua...dhokha to de diya usne tumhe...

Nuts...hahaha...usne mujhe dhokha diya???...tum ab bhi nhi samjh paye mujhe shaks..(ufff mujhe is bande ka nam hi nhi samjh ata ...shaks h...sex h...ki kya h...hahaha..aur dekhne me bhi ullu lagta h)..mujhe koi dhokha nhi de sakta...nobody cn cheat natasha kapoor...maine sirf ek teer chalaya aur itne sare shikar kar liye...sharma pariwar ki achhi bahu hone k awtar se kuchh din ki chhutti mili...kartik k sath jo hua usse un dono behno ko sabk mila...ek duniya bhar ko lecture deti phirti h aur mere bhai ko itni takleef di...ab de lecture apne bhai ko...aur dusri...khud kisi layak h nhi aur mujhe seekhati phirti thi...mere bhai ko cheat karne ki himmat ki usne ...theek h mne man liya tha ki mne glti ki pr phir bhi kartik ki ma hamesha mujhe tana marti thi...ab apne bete ko seekhaye..mujhe mere bhai kuchh nhi bol sakte jinko m sabse jyaada pyar karti hu..to kisi aur ki kya aukat h...sabka eksath muh band kar diya..

Shaks...pr kartik to wo bachha ghar le aya...kahin tumhe chhod k us ladki ko bhi le aya to???

Nuts...hahaha...aisa kuchh nhi hoga..m pichhle do dino se ye sab drama kyun kar rhi hu...isiliye to taki log sirf mujhe sune mujhpe wishwas kare..:mera sath de...aur wo bachha bhi mere liye ek tale ki chabhi h...bas tum dekhte jao...ye natasha kaise sabko ghumati h...

Priya ki to kuchh samjh me hi nhi aa rha tha ki sab chakkr kya h...natasha ka ye roop...itni seedhi sadi dikhti thi ye ladki aur sirf apni azadi k liye itna sab kar gyi...lekin wo mr.kapoor se kya kahegi...wo to chhoti k mamle me to kisi ki nhi sunte..aur jo bhi ho...main bat to ye h ki glti to kartik ki hi dikh rhi h...ye sab h kya??...

Ok to mere hisab se logically ye hona chahiye ki ye janvi nam ka trump card natasha ne phenka h...iske teen reason ho sakte hain...ek to wo itni sudhar gyi thi ki life ko enjoy nhi kar pa rhi thi...bina mtlb ki jimmedariyo ka bojh usse bardasht nhi ho rha tha...aur wo apne bhai k samne apni image dubara se kharab karne ka risk nhi le sakti thi...2ra reason ye ho sakta h ki uske sudhrne k bad bhi sharma's kisi na kisi bhane uski gltiyo ka bakhan kar hi dete the...aur teesra reason ye ho sakta h ki uske bhai ko dono behno ne mil k takleef di...ek chhod k chali gyi aur dusri jbrdsti uske gale pad gyi...lol..aur rahi kartik ki bat to uske sath aisa karne ka ye reason dikhaya ja sakta h ki uske andr bht sara guilt rhega to wo natasha ko chhod kar bhi nahi jayega aur hamesha natasha ki mahanta k neeche daba rhega..aur sabse bada fayda ek aur hoga ki natasha ki image bani ki bani rhegi aur use mahan bnne ka ek aur mauka mil jayega aur free ka ek bachha bhi...khair ye to mera logic h...ekta to pta nhi kya kare...

Anyways...priya uljhan me wha se chali jati h...aur ram wha aa jata h...ram ko bht ajeeb lagta h ki chhoti ki aisi halat h aur priya use akele chhod k kahan chali gyi...itni careless kaise ho sakti h...(dekho bhai sau baton ki ek bat ki agar rampriya milke rhenge to unke fans ladenge kaise yar...to fans ko ladne k liye rampriya ko ladna jaruri h...aur ladne ki thodi bht missunderstanding jaruri h...baki to duri chhoti ho ya badi..last me dono ek ho hi jate hain...)...khair...priya aise to nhi manne wali h...wo defntly ab bal ka khal nikalegi...ki kya kab kaise shuru hua??...sara golmal kya h...??..aur idhar rambabu apni chhoti me uljhe hue h...aur chhoti wo to sabki nani h...ek hi jhatke me sabko charo khane chit kar diya...lol...khair chhoti ko discharge mil gya ram use ghar lekar ata h..use uske room me chhod k apne kamre me ata h priya sofe pr sar pakad kr baithi rhti h...

Ram...priya tum yha kyun chali aayi bina btaye??...r u ok???..chhoti ko bhi hospital me akela chhod diya..??

Priya...gharwale to the na wha

ram...han pr tumhe bhi to..

Priya...kyun mujhe koi problm nhi ho sakti h...m kahin apni marzi se aa ja bhi nhi sakti???

Ram...are tum gussa kyun rhi ho???...kya hua???..kuchh problm h...tabiyat theek nhi h????

Priya...wo..i am sorry mr.kapoor...itna sab stress ho gya h upar se...tabiyat bhi theek nhi lag rhi h ..aur koi rasta bhi nhi dikh rha h ...isiliye gussa aa gya...i am vry sorry...m kya karu kuchh samjh nhi aa rha h???..

Ram...kuchh nhi karo filhal tum aram karo ..bad me hum dekh lenge kya karna h ...m gopal kaka se juice lane ko bolta hu

priya...nhi mera man nhi h...

Ram...shutup...janti ho na ki is mamle m main kuchh sununga nhi..juice bhijwa rha hu pee lena main chhoti ko dekh k ata hu...

Ram chala jata h pr priya abhi bhi uljhi hui h...ram ko hurt nhi karna chahti h ...cheeze usko samjh nhi aa rhi h..upar se natasha ka kya kare???...ufff maine to ekta se bhi jyada kam de diya priya ko...bechari ...

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Ok to finally nuts aa hi gyi apne awtar me...its much bttr than piyakkad awtar...i actully dnt like that...mtlb theek h bade ghar k logo ko peena chalta h pr kitna chalta h...chhoti to jan se pyari h na...to rambabu ko dikh nhi rha tha ki jan se pyari kya kar rhi h apni jan k sath...anyways...moral of the story ye h ki finally bigad hi gyi...khair movin g on updates...

Part 60...

"priya yha nhi rh sakti"

ram nuts k kamre me jata h..wo baithi rhti h...

Ram...chhoti tu theek to h

chhoti...han bhai m theek hu ...mujhe mere ghar jana h

ram...lekin itna sab kuchh hone k bad bhi...

Nuts...han...wo mera ghar h aur mujhe whi rhna pls aap le chaliye mujhe wha...

Khair chhoti ki jid k aage rambabu ki chalti kahan h...to chhod aaye wo use wha...phir wha jo natak hua wo to pta hi h...next is what??..rambabu ki chhoti wapas rambabu k pas...priya ko tension ho jati h ki wapas kyun aa gyi priya apne ghar jati h...to shipra sudhir use sab btate hain...priya ko pehle se hi lag rha tha ki natasha aisa hi kuchh karne wali h...isiliye wo darr rhi thi..waise bhi kuchh to use pta hi tha...abhi bate ho hi rhi thi ki police aa jati h aur le jati h shipra sudhir ko priya kuchh kar nhi pati h...ram ko phone lagati h to phone bhi nhi lag rha hota h upar se wo bachha..wo kare to kya kare...kisi trh ram ko phone milta h...ram police station ata h...pr situation kuchh aisi hoti h...ki aaj un logo ki jamant nhi ho pati h...

Ram...priya ghar chalo..m hu na main kuchh karunga...tum pls tension mt lo

priya...mr.kapoor pls..mere ma papa ki koi glti nhi h...kartik ki saza ma papa ko nhi milni chahiye...pls mr.kapoor

ram...priya kuchh nhi hoga...pr aaj to kuchh bhi nhi ho sakta h...sab theek ho jayega...ghar chalo

priya...nhi main kahin nhi jaungi...,m bhi yhi rahungi...

Ram...priya pls..apne bare me nhi to baby k bare me to socho...chalo pls...m hu na...m theek kar dunga...mujhpe bharosa nhi h

priya...h mr.kapoor lekin...

Ram...priyaaa...chalo..

Finally kisi trh ram priya ko ghar le ata h...sath m wo bachha bhi rhta h...jaise hi dono darwaze pr pahonchte hain natasha rok deti hain unhe...

Nuts...isko kyun le aaye aaplog..??..ye yha nhi rh sakta

priya...natasha ye itna chhota sa bachha h kahan chhodte ise..

Nuts...mujhe nhi pta...bas mere ghar me nhi rh sakta...

Ram...chhoti meri bat to sun

nuts...bhai...ye mera ghar h ya nhi

priya...natasha ye tumhara hi ghar h...pr kartik k kiye ki saza sabko nhi di ja sakti h

nuts...di jayegi har kisi ko jo bhi usko support karega...

Priya...hum use support nhi kar rhen hain

nuts...to theek h..ye ghar mera h na tum mujhe support kar rhi ho na to is bachhe ko yha nhi rakh sakti...ya to m rahungi ya ye bachha...agr ye bachha tum nhi chhodogi to tum bhi yha nhi rh sakti...

Ram...chhoti...kya jid h ye...priya ki halat to dekho

nuts...bhai aap meri halat nhi dekh rhe hain..:m to kahin ki nhi rhi sirf iske bhai ki wajah se aur ye us bhai k bachhe ko lekar yha aa gyi...priya yha nhi rh sakti aur na hi ye bachha...isko abhi bahar nikaliye

ram...chhoti...kahan jayega wo bachha...

Nuts..theek h ap bhi inlogo ka hi sath doge na...to main hi chali jati hu...chali kyun jati hu mar hi jati hu na rahungi na problm ko

priya...natasha...pls aisa mt bolo...tum aisa kuchh nhi karogi hum hain na...sab theek ho jayega

nuts...theek h tum chahti ho na ki m aisa kuchh na karu

priya...han

nuts...to theek h...tum abhi yha se jao is bachhe ko lekar...meri wajah se tumhara rishta tha...m khtm ho gyi ab tumhara rishta bhi khtm...jao nikalo yha se...get out...get out...

Ram...chhoti...chhoti...ok..shant ho ja wo nhi la rhi h us bachhe ko tu apne kamre me chal...

Priya ram ko dekhne lagti h...ram use ishara karta h...

Nuts...bhai...isko bolo isko leke jaye...

Ram...theek h wo chala jayega...tu kamre me ja..pls...nhi aa rha h wo is ghar me...

Nuts...priya bhi nhi chahiye mujhe yha

ram...apne bhai pr bharosa nhi h...m bol rha hu na ki wo bachha nhi ayega to mtlb nhi aayega...tu kamre me ja

nuts...ok...but ye dono yha nhi rhne chahiye...

Natasha kamre me chali jati h...priya bhi wapas jane lagti h..

Ram...priya kahan ja rhi ho???

Priya...ma pap k yha

ram...pls yar..tum to aise mt karo

priya...are to aap hi ne to kaha ki ye yha nhi rh sakta

ram...han to ye nhi rh sakta h...tum kahin nhi jaogi ye tumhara ghar h..

Priya...pr itne chhote bachhe ko kahan chhodenge...nhi mr.kapoor...glti kisi ki bhi pr uski saza itne sare beksur logo ko nhi mil sakti..m to kuchh kehne layak hi nhi hu..mere bhai ki ek glti ki wajah se mera pura pariwar safar kar rha h...its not fair mr.kapoor...

Ram...i know priya...ek min ruko...

Ram neha ko phone karta h...

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Sorry phir se thoda late ho gya...actully u know why...main na dhundh rhi ki dusri bar i love u bola to bola kab...??...aur agr bola to pehli bar kab bola tha..??...par mujhe dono me se kisi ka ansr nhi mila...bhai ye to raya ki maya h whi jane...kaise rambabu ko yad ayega...kaise priya yad dilayegi...aur jab yad aa jayega to hame bhi pta chal hi jayega ki actully dusri bar i love u kab bola tha...lol..main to andhere me teer marne ja rhi hu dekhu kahan jata h...enjoy the update...hope u all like it...

Part 67

"I Love u"

priya kamre ki taraf jane lagti h pr sochti hu jati h..ki mr.kapoor ko kya sachhi me nhi yad aya ki aaj kya khas din h...aise kaise wo itna khas din bhul gye...waise to sabki har chhoti badi bat yad rhti h unhe...aur apni hi bat bhul gye???..huh..ye sab meri glti h main hi har bar unhe chhod deti hu isiliye itne careless ho gye hain...ufff...lekin m kyun is bat k bare me itna soch rhi hu...are kitne kam hote hain mr.kapoor ko...kitne busy rhte hain...kitni jimmedariya hain...agr ek din bhul gye to iska ye thode hi mtlb h ki main aise behv karu...(priya sochte sochte ruk jati h) aur wo agr bhul hi gye hain to puchh to rhe hain bechare kab se...maine hi kyun nhi bta diya...isme kya badi bat h...bta deti to unko yad aa jata to shayad wo bhi itne khush ho jate jitni m hu...bekar me unka mood khrab karke chali aayi...chalti hu unke hi pas...yad aya to theek wrna is bar puchha to bta dungi...

Priya mudti h ram k pas wapas aane k liye tabhi neha aa jati h...

Neha...are priya ram ne bola tum kamre me ja rhi thi...main tumhe pahoncha du..pr tum to...

Priya...han han m kamre me hi ja rhi thi...par mujhe thodi pyas lag rhi thi to socha yhi se pani pee k chalu...

Neha...are tum chalo kamre me bht thak gyi hogi m gopal kaka se pani whi manga leti hu..:

priya...ookk (sad hokar)

dono kamre k yha jate hain ...darwaze par..

Neha..priya tum andr chalo main gopal kaka ko pani k liye bol k aati hu

priya...hmmm

neha chali jati h priya darwaza khol k andr jati h..kamre ki light off rhti h

priya...are light kisne off kar rakhi h...pta h ki m aisi situation me hu phir bhi...

Priya light jalati h...andr room me aati h..jaise hi aage badhti h use lagta h pair k neeche kuchh h...wha ek envlp rhta h wo use uthati h...uske andr ek paper rhta h...jispr i love u likha rhta h...aur kahin kuchh nhi...use lagta h mr.kapoor andr hi hain aur unhone hi ye kiya h...

Priya...mr.kapoor...mr.kapooor...r u there???...mr.kapoor...mujhe pta h aap yhi hain...pls:...bahar aaiye...mr.kapooor..

Neha...priya kisse bate kar rhi ho ye lo pani...

Priya...wo...m...bas...tumne mr.kapoor ko dekha???

Neha...han...aaj to bht smart lag rha h...

Priya...areee...mera mtlb h abhi kahan hain wo tumne dekha kya???

Neha...oh...han...bahar hi to h party me...

Priya...achha..

Neha...kya hua????abhi tak nhi yad aaya use...??

Priya...pta nhi...kaha to nhi abhi tak...abhi to mujhse hi puchh rhe the ki kya khas din h

neha...oh ye fatty bhi na kabhi nhi sudhrega...achha suno tum thoda aram kar lo main jra bahr jati hu...jra dekhu to ye dost hamare peechhe kya kar rhe hain...phir aake unki report deti hu tumhe...

Priya...hehehe...ok jao tum jasusi karo m aram karti hu...

Neha chali jati h..priya bistr ki trf badhti h to wha bhi ek packet rakha rhta h pr uspe kuchh likha nhi rhta h bas gift pack rhta h...priya use kholne hi jati h ki...priya aahat sunke mudti h..

Priya...are neha tum itni jaldi...

Priya k hotho par fingr rakh kar ram use chup kara deta h...priya ne socha ki neha aayi h pr is bar ram rhta h

ram...ssshh "I Love u"

priya ram ka hath pakadti h...

Priya...what???

Ram...i love u

priya...kya ho gya h apko???

Ram...i love u

priya...are aur kuchh kahenge

ram...i love u

priya...ufff

ram...are par aaj to yhi khas h na...aaj k din maine tumhe dusri bar i love u kaha tha...

Priya...kisne btaya ye apko???

Ram...excuse me...ye bat maine hi kahi thi apko...to mujhe kisi ko btane ki jarurat nhi h

priya...mtlb apko yad tha???

Ram reply nhi karta h sirf muskurata h...dono ekdusre ko dekhne lagte hain...phir ekdusre ki baho me aa jate hain...joki aajkl thoda aur mushkil h...

Priya...i love u 2 mr.kapoor...

Ram priya k forehead pr kisss karta h...aur dono ekdusre ko aur tightly pakad lete hain...kuchh der waise hi rhte hain...Tabhi achanak priya bolti h...

Priya...jab apko yad tha to apne subah se mujhe itna pareshan kyun kiya???

Ram...aise hi...

Priya...aise hi mtlb???

Ram...are yar pichhle 3 mahine se humdono me koi bahas nhi hui koi ladai nhi hui qki wo hum kar nhi sakte ekdusre ko promise kiya tha...par bina lade tumse mujhse rha nhi jata h...to lad nhi sakta tha to socha thoda irritate to kar hi sakta hu...tochhed rha tha tumhe...

Priya...(gussa k)...dur hatiye...

Ram...kya hua???

Priya...main keh rhi hu dur hatiyeee

ram...aree pr btao to hua kya??

Priya...apko ladna h na

ram...aree to mara mari thode karni h mujhe to bas tease karna tha...

Priya...han to mujhe ruthne to dijiye tabhi to aap manayenge phir m manungi nhi to aap chillayenge phir apke chillane pr main bhi chillaungi phir bahas hogi...aur phir...

Ram...hahaha..bas karooo..how sweet..hum kitne achhe se ekdusre ko jante hain..

Priya...tohhh!!!...

Dono hasne lagte hain aur phir se gale lag jate hain..lekin phir se priya ko kuchh yad aa jata h..

Priya...aree mr.kapoor ye packet me kya h..??

Ram...tum khud hi dekh lo

priya...ok let me check...

Priya bistr se packet ko uthati h...ram priya k peechhe khada rhta h...priya packet kholti h...

Priya...mr.kapoor ye kya h??

Ram...kyun pasand nhi aya..tumhare liye liya h

priya...are par aap ne kab liya???

Ram...hehehe...maine pehle hi le liya tha..aisa ho sakta h ki chhoti kuchh kare aur mera contribution na ho

priya...hmm...are u sure na ki ye apne mere liye liya h...

Ram...ofcourse yar...tumhe meri kisi bat pr vishwas kyun nhi hota h...??

Priya mudhti h ram ki trf dekhti aur muskurati h...ram bhi muskurata h..uske bad priya ram ko ghurti h...ram ko kuchh clear nhi ho rha tha priya ka expression...

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Hmmm..aaj thoda sa kahani me turn twist h...dnt know work karega ya nhi...but public se request h ki please logic mat dhundhna qki m sirf writer hu sirf entertainment janti hu...aur ye typical ekta type dialogue h pr kya karu ghanchakkr bna diya h ekta ne serial ko to is ghanchakkr se koi bhi chakkr nikal gya to meri glti nhi...chalo update karti hu...pasand aaye to tali jarur baja dena...appriciation always give strenght..

Part 72

"jitna kaha jaye utna karo"

pihu bht khush hokar ram k pas aati h aur gale lag jati h...ram bhi use pyar deta h...

Pihu...thank u thank u soo much papa jo apne mujhe is kamre me bulaya..

Ram beech me tokta h...darwaza band kar do

pihu...ji

ram...i said close the door

pihu...ok papa

pihu door band karke aati h...ram bolna shuru karta h

ram...maine tumhe is kamre me bulaya jarur h lekin usse hamare rishte me kuchh fark nhi padega...is kamre me tumhe ane ki na to kabhi izazat thi aur na hi kabhi hogi...lekin mujhe jo bat karni h m wo pari aur myra k samne nhi karna chahta qki hamare rishte ki sachhai sirf hum tak hi rhe yhi achha h...darwaza bhi isiliye band karne ko bola qki bahar myra aur pari thi...wo itna hi janti hain ki tum is kamre me nhi aa sakti unke liye yhi bht h...

(ufff...main nhi janti ki ekta kya karegi pr m pihu ki glti ko nazarandaz nhi kar sakti...m ye to nhi janti ki rambabu ko pihu ki sachhai jan payenge ya nhi...pr meri kahani me rambabu pihu se sirf duniya ko dikhane k liye pyar karte hain lekin wo priya ki halat k liye kahin na kahin pihu ko jimmedar samjhte hain wajah to nhi pta h lekin jo kuchh bhi hua tha wo ye manne k liye kafi tha jo bhi hua agar wo nhi hota to shayad ye sab nhi hota...ye defntly mera logic h...are pihu ko kuchh to ehsas hona chahiye ki uski wajah se do do jindgiya aur unse judi kai jindgiya kharab ho gyi..to pyari pihu k liye m itna to kar hi sakti hu...lol)

pihu..papa...aap

ram...abhi meri bat khtm nhi hui h...tum ek cheez hamesha yad rakhna hamara jo bhi rishta h wo is kamre k bahar h...is kamre me main sirf tumhari ma ka pati hu...aur tum yha sirf isliye ho qki tum meri biwi ki zindgi ho...ek bar maine glti se uski jindgi ka khyal nhi rakha tha to wo mujhse bht naraz ho gyi thi aur m use dobara naraz nahi karna chahta isiliye tumhari har khushi ka khyal rakhta hu main...qki tum jiski jindgi ho na wo meri jindgi h...aur uske liye to main maut se bhi lad sakta hu...

Pihu...papa ye sab kab tak aise chalega???..aap meri bat to suniye...

Ram...mujhe tumhari koi bat nhi sunni h...tum meri bat suno...m nhi janta ki us kya hua tha...pr m itna jarur janta hu ki mujhe meri priya pr pura yakin h...aur m janta hu ki wo glt nhi ho sakti ..rhi tumhari glti ki bat to tumhari glti ho ya na ho lekin jo bhi hua uski wajah se bht sari jindgiya barbad ho gyi...ek to us ladke k sath...aur dusre meri priya ki ye halat...to ye sabkuchh to tab tak aise hi rhne wala h jab tak meri jindgi wapas nhi mil jati..

Pihu...papa

ram...kal hospital jana h tumhari ma se milne...aur wha jitna kaha jaye utna hi karna...main nhi chahta ki tumhari wajah se meri biwi ko koi aur bhi takleef ho..so b carefull...now leave...

Pihu...papa

ram...leave...

Pihu kamre se chali jati h ram ko bura to bht lagta h pihu se aise bat karna qki wo janta h ki pihu priya ki jan h...lekin us waqt ram ne jitni bhi bate jani...sabne jo bhi btaya aur us ladke k sath jo bhi hua usse ram k man me ek darr baith gya h ki kahin waqi in sab k peechhe pihu to nhi...khair filhal uske liye is waqt priya important h...nothing else...

Agle din sab hospital jate hain...doctor pihu ko priya se bate karne ko kehta h...pihu bate karti h pr kuchh khas nhi hota h...phir pari aur mayra bhi milne aati h...kabhi neha vikram kabhi rishabh soumya...ek hafte beet jate hain...ek din fir se ram priya se bate karta h use btata h ki pihu kitni badi ho gyi h uski shadi ka time ho gya h ladka dhundhna h wgrh wgrh...aur uske pas hi teeno betiya khadi rhti hain ram priya ka hath apne hath me liye hota h priya k hath par ram k ansu girte hain...jisse priya chaunk kar ankhe khol deti h...qki wo sabkuchh bardasht kar sakti h pr rambabu k ansu nhi...aur ye main nhi bol rhi hu yar...priya ne hi kaha tha ki wo aise mr.kapoor ko rote hue nhi dekh sakti h...lol..

Ram...priyaaa...priyaaa

priya...mr.kapoor aap ro kyun rhe hain...???

Ram...kuchh nhi...tum kaisi ho???

Priya...main to theek hu..pr yha kyun hu???

Ram...ek min main doctor ko bulata hu...

Pihu...ap yhi rhiye m bula deti hu...

Ram...han please jaldi...priya tum theek ho na...tum sona nhi yar...m doctor ko abhi bula rha hu

priya...are m theek hu mr.kapoor aap aise kyun kar rhe hain??? Aur aap to london ja rhe the na...

Doctor...mr ram what happen..

Ram...doctor dekhiye priya ko hosh aa gya h...

Doctor...oh very good...hello mrs kapoor...kaisi hain aap???

Priya ..main to theek hu pr mujhe yha kyun rakha h??

Doctor...are kuchh nhi bas aise hi...chhota sa acciedent ho gya tha ab aap theek hain...jyada bate mat kariye...

Priya...par mr.kapoor apne btaya nhi aap to london ja rhe the na

ram...han ja rha tha par gya nhi.:..kaise jata tumhe chhod kar..

Priya...whi to mr.kapoor maine bhi socha ki aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain???apni biwi ko itne bade ghar me akela chhod k ja rhe hain..wo bhi shaadi k dusre din..

Sabhi chaunk jate hain aur ekdusre ko dekhne lagte hain...

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Part 62...

"wrna m kuchh nhi kar paungi"

Priya uth kar jane lagti h to ram hath pakad leta h priya ram ki taraf dekhti h...

Ram...priya sab theek ho jayega ..kartik ko kuchh nhi hoga

priya...i hope so mr.kapoor wrna phir main kuchh nhi kar paungi na apke liye na apki behn k liye...aur nahi kisi aur rishte k liye...m natasha ko dekh k aati hu use kuchh chahiye to nahi...

Ram...priyaa...

Pr priya chali jati h...thodi der natasha k pas baithti h use fruits wgrh deti h uske bad bahr jane lagti hai...tabhi ram awaz deta h...

Ram...priya kahan ja rhi ho

priya...sorry mr.kapoor apko bina btaye ja rhi thi...mne dekh liya h natasha theek h...kartik k pas nhi ja rhi hu bas papa ki fikr ho rhi thi to unko dekhne ja rhi thi..pr aap bolenge to nahi jaungi...

Ram...priyaaa tum aise kyun behav kar rhi ho??..it huts me yar...

Priya...hehehe...really???...again i am sorry..theek h nhi jati hu

ram...uff m jane k liye nhi mna kar rha hu infact m khud tumhe wha lekar chalta hu ...wo tumhari family h is waqt unhe tumhari jarurat h...

Priya...lekin mujhe to apki behn ko proove karna h ki m uski side pr hu...to

ram...priya chhoti ki taraf se m sorry bol rha hu...pls aise behav mat karo...

Priya...nahi aap kyun sorry bolenge apki to koi galati hi nhi h...jiski glti h wo sorry bolega...aur glti sirf kartik ki hai...

Ram ko samjh hi nhi ata h ki kaise samjhaye use...are rambau kya samjhayenge aap??...ap to bas ye manaiye ki kartik ko kuchh na ho wrna...phir apki aur apki behn ki to khair nhi qki agr kartik mar gaya to priya ko apna talent dikhane ka solid mauka mil jayega phir to use duniya ki koi taqat nhi rok payegi apne performance ko awards k nominations k liye fix karne se...fir shuru karegi wo dialogue pe dialogue..aur public degi award pr award...to kartik k marne se aur kuchh ho na ho...mere side se to best hone wala h qki meri sakshi ka ek aur jandar awtar mujhe dekhne ko milne wala h...khair...main bhi kahan se kahan chali jati hu...ram priya ko hospital chalne ko bolta h...

Priya...main chali jaungi...bas apki permission chahiye thi...

Ram...pr mujhe sath dena h

priya ram ki taraf dekhti hai aur kuchh nhi bolti h...aur jane lagti h..bahar drivr rhta h ram usse chabhiya le leta h aur khud driving seat pr baith jata h ..priya pehle hi car me baith chuki hoti h to uske pas option nhi h...dono hospital pahonchte hain...wha mahol bht hi jyada khrab rhta h...shipra ro ro k behal h...sudhir ka bp badh rha h...saumya shipra ko sambhalne ki koshis kar rhi h neha bhi h uske sath...vikram rampriya ko aate hue dekhta h to unke pas ata h...wo priya se kuchh kehne jata h pr priya apne papa k pas chali jati h...qki is waqt wo bhi bht akele aur tute hue hain...

Priya...papa aap theek to h???

Sudhir.:..han main theek hu tu apni ma ko dekh usne kya hal bna liya h ro ro k...m is waqt use kuchh nhi keh sakta qki wo ma h...uska dard samjh sakta hu m

priya...aur main apka...m janti hu aap dikha nhi rahen hain pr kitni takleef me hain aap...sab bikhar gya papa aur m kuchh nhi kar pa rhi hu...pr aap tensn mt lijiye...kartik ko kuchh nhi hoga...

Sudhir...priya wo bilkul theek nhi h...chahe wo kitna bhi galat ho mai use marta hua nhi dekh sakta hu...

Priya...papa humme se koi use marta hua nhi dekh sakta..use kuchh nhi hoga...pls aap apne aap ko sambhaliye...wrna ma ko kaun sambhalega...ap jante hain na wo kartik pr jan deti h...pls papa...relax kuchh nhi hoga kartik ko...

Sab thodi der idhar udhar tehlte rhte hain...pta nhi sab kyun timepas kar rhen hain...ya to mar hi de ya bachana h to bacha hi le...are rambabu koi to taqat lagaiye...apko doctrs nhi mil rhen hain...boss ab to biwi k liye kuchh kar dijiye wrna...dhamki yad h na...lol...khair rambabu kai doctors ko cnsult karte hain tabhi doctor aa jata h...

Shipra...doctor sahab mera beta kaisa h...boliye na...mera beta kaisa h

sudhir...shipra ek min mujhe bat karne do...doctor sahab kartik kaisa h..??wo theek to h...aap paiso ki chinta mat kariye...bas aap use theek kar dijiye

doctor...dekhiye...mr.& mrs.sharma m samjhta hu apke halat pr m kuchh nhi kar sakta...i am sorry...

Sabhi hairan ho jate hain...kisi ko kuchh samjh nhi aata h ki kaise react kare??..shipra to ekdm pagal si ho gyi h...priya ek kone me deewar k sahare khadi ho jati h...ram uski taraf badhta h tabhi priya apne ansu ponchhti hai aur wha se jane lagti h...ram uske peechhe peechhe jata h pr wo sunti nhi h...jake car me baith jati h aur chali jati h...ram k peechhe peechhe vikram bhi rhta h...ram vikram ki car lekar priya k peechhe jata h...

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