new: Hum dono hai alag alag updated on 82, note-81 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

671

Views

85.7k

Users

41

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

luvbalh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#41
haaye .. ayesha is out on her own.. dadi is a genius ...

loved part2
vironikajain thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Superbb update...so both re enjoying each others company...aww little raj is so cute..he actually proposed priya nd after knowing about her marriage with ram how he glared at him nd took promise from him..too good
Priya sharing secrets with him nd also likes him.. 😛
Cont soon nd thanx for pm
luvbalh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#43
part 3


its beautiful .. loved it. a true compromise marriage. hopefully raya fall in love ..

BTW this is ur first write up am suprised u penned it so beautiful. ... hope to read more and more...

luvbalh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#44
part 4:

another beautiful part.. ram's heart goes on priya.. hmm what next.. cant wait to read..

priya is so sweet..
luvbalh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#45
part 5 ..

state of cuteness. finally both liked each other and love is on the way i guess..

ur are too good
luvbalh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#46
hey .. please pm me when ever u update..




BALHLOVER thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#47
sry dear for late rly...so swr update.and ram is really so swt and opposite from the main BALH,here he is calm..really like the diff...thank u for the PM.and waiting for the next one...
cloud121 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Wqiting dear pls update soon !!!
SharmiRayaBasu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Talli priya..love it..miss in these days badly..cute update..waiting 4 next..in next update..pm me if it is possible
peeyara thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#50

sorry for being late..i hope this is the big update...do leave ur comment..and pls if u didnt like anything then do notify..i'll be glad

Part 6:

Ram and priya reached the kapoor mansion. An old woman welcome them and performs grah pravesh ceremony. Priya asks ram in gestures k who is she? Ram gestures her to take her blessing, she follows.

Lady: tum apne room me rest karo,mai tumhare liye kuch bhijwati hoon

ram: mere liye coffee aur priya k liye chai, hai na priya?

Priya nods her head in yes. They went to their room.

Priya: what beautiful room!

Ram: tumhe pasand aaya? Agar tum kuch changes karwana chaho toh karwa sakti ho

priya: thank u, but mujhe koi changes nhi karwana...waise manna parega mr.kapoor aapka room toh ladkiyo k room se bhi zyada neat n clean hai.

Ram(with a smile): thank u mrs.kapoor

They freshen up till the coffee come. The servant come with the tray.

Ram: priya ye shankar kaka hai aur kaka ye meri patni priya

shankar: welcome madam

priya: mujhe aapka welcome nahi chahiye

shankar: kyun mujhse koi galti hui hai kya

priya: haan, abhi ram ne aapko mera naam bataya phir bhi aap mujhe madam bula rahe hai, mera naam aapko pasand nahi aaya?

shankar: nahi madam

priya: phir madam

shankar: i am sorry priya beta, priya beta bula sakta hoon na

priya: ye hui na baat, thank u for the welcome

priya excuses herself n makes a call to dadi.

shankar: sir priya bahot achi hai bilkul badi malkin ki tarha

ram: janta ho kaka

shankar leaves n priya sits with ram to hv her coffee

priya: waise ram wo old lady kaun thi?

Ram: wo dai ma hai,jab ma bauji guzar gaye tab se unho ne samhala hai hame,she is like mother to us.

Priya: she is really sweet.

Ram: i know

At dining table:

dai ma: ram tumne dadi ko bataya k tum mumbai pahonch gaye

ram: sorry dai ma mai bhool gaya

dai ma: tumhe kitni bar kaha k dadi k mamle mai laparwahi mat barto, chalo abhi phone karo

priya: uski zaroorat nahi hai dai ma, maine dadi se baat karli hai

ram: par tumne dadi ko kab call kiya

priya: jab shankar kaka chai lekar aaye the

ram: thank u

priya: u r welcome

they finishes their dinner and ram was about to go, priya calls him from the back

priya: ram ek min

ram: bolo

priya: kya kal aap mere saath mandir chalenge?

Ram(coldly): nahi mujhe bahot kaam hai tum dai ma k saath chali jao

priya: par mujhe aap k saath jana hai

ram: sry priya mai nahi aa paonga

priya was about to say sumthng,dai ma signals her to b quiet

priya: theek hai mai khud chali jaongi

ram: thanks, mai study me hoon ek project file study karni hai

ram went to study n priya was helping dai maa

priya: ek baat puchu dai maa(dai maa nods in yes) ram ko mandir k naam se kya hogaya, wo aane k liye mana kyun kar rahe the

dm: kyunki wo bhagwan ko nahi manta

priya: par wahan punjab mai toh aisa nahi kiya unho ne

dm: kyunki dadi thi wahan par,ab baki batein kal subah,sojao ab.

priya says ok but she wanted to know the reason so she went to the study.

At study:

priya: knock knock

ram: priya andar aajao

priya comes inside n asks: aap ko kaise pata mai hi hoon

ram: tumhare alawa na 'no entry' zone me koi nahi ja sakta

priya: yahan kisi ki ko b

Aana allowed nhi hai,sorry mujhe pata nahi tha

Ram: its ok, tumhe sab kuch allowed hai

priya: jab mujhe sab kuch allowed hai toh aap kya mujhe mandir na jaane ki wajah bataenge,only if u want u

ram: theek hai, par yahan nahi terrace par

priya: chale

At terrace:

they both sit on the chairs silently for some time n then ram broke the silence: janti ho priya, mere ma aur bauji ki death kaise hui?

Priya: nahi

ram: ma aur bauji mandir ja rahe the aur raaste mai ek bus driver ki galti ki wajah se unka accident hogaya aur jab wo hospital mai the maine bhagwan se kitna pray kiya k mere ma aur bauji ko bachale par bhagwan ne toh meri suni hi nahi,sunta bhi kaise agar hota toh sunta na,bas tab se mai bhagwan ko nahi maanta,wo mere liye exist hi nahi karta

priya,for the first time was seeing pain in the ram eyes.

Priya(with teary eyes): aap tab kitne saal ke the?

Ram: 16 years

priya: toh aapne poore 16 saal apne parents ke saath spent kiye, apne 16 birthdays unke saath celebrate kiye, aap ke paas apne parents ki bahot saari yaadein bhi hongi

ram: haan bahot saari yaadein hai jinke saath mai apni poori lyf spent kar sakta hoon

priya: phir bhi aap bhagwan se naraz hai, phir mujhe kya karna chahiye

ram(in surprised tone): matlab?

Priya(with a teary smile): matlab ye k aap ke paas toh aapke parents ki 16 saal ki yaadein hai, par mujhe toh apne parents ka chehra bhi theek se yaad nahi

ram(in concerned voice): stop crying priya, tumhare parents toh tumhare saath hai,phir aisa kyun bol rahi ho

priya wiping her tears: wo mere real parents nahi hai,wo mere chacha chachi hai. Meri birth ke kuch din baad meri mom ki death hogayi aur isi sadme ki wajah se papa depression mai chale gaye aur kuch waqt baad unki bhi death hogayi. Jane se pehle unhone meri custody sudhir papa ko de di. Aap jante ho unki yaadon k naam par mere paas kya hai, sirf ngo aur ek flat jahan wo akele kuch tym spent karne aate the...aur jab mujhe ye sab pata chala toh mai hamesha k liye yahan mumbai mai uss flat mai shift hogayi, unhe mehsoos karne

ram: i am so sorry priya,mujhe ye sab nahi pata tha

priya: it's ok

to enlighten the atmosphere,priya says: waise manna parega mr kapoor jo kam koi nahi karsaka wo aapne kardiya

ram: ab maine aisa kya kardiya

priya: aapne mujhe,priya kapoor ko rula diya

ram: i am sorry and says in mind i'll never let you cry

priya: ram kahan kho gaye aap?

Ram: kuch nahi,tum kuch keh rahi thi

priya: pata hai jab god humse kuch cheen leta hai toh wo uske badle hame kuch acha ya behtar deta bhi hai,hame bas usey samajhne aur pehchan ne ki zaroorat hoti hai aur mai janti ho jab aap ye samajh jayenge tab aap khud mandir aayenge. Kya kal aap mere saath ngo chalenge

ram: kyun?

Priya: wo actually ngo pe sab priya matlab mere husband se milna chahte hai, agar aap busy hai toh it's ok

ram mutters: tumhare liye toh mai hamesha free hoon

priya: kuch kaha aapne

ram: nahi toh, kitne baje jaana hai

priya: 3:00 p.m

ram: theek hai, mai pahonch jaonga

priya: ab room mai chale ya raat yahin Bitane ka irada hai

both were going to their room smilingly. Dai ma sees this n says waqai kuch toh baat hai is ladki mai aaj itne din baad ram ko dil se muskurate dekha.

Next day ram wake up early,freshen up n left for the office.

Priya woke up around 9 n finds the room empty. She finds the chit beside her pillow. It reads:

Good morning priya,

mujhe aaj office jaldi jaana tha isi liye tumhe nahi jagaya, agar kuch bhi chahiye ho to dai maa se puch lena

have a good day,see u at 3

priya: good day 2 u too ram

priya freshen up n goes down for breakfast.

After breakfast, dai maa asked her about going to mandir, so priya says she'll manage on her own n leaves for the mandir. While returning back to home,she sees a huge crowd and finds that a lady is scolding a 13 yr old boy. That lady was scolding boy harshly,so priya interrupts: itni buri tarah se kyun daant rahi ho, chota bacha hi toh hai

lady: oh hello, don't interfere, it's none of ur business

priya: toh road pe scene kyu create kiya,traffic jam karadia hai n saying don't interfere

lady: excuse me, maine koi scene create nahi kiya hai

a man from inside the car called the lady saying they r getting late.

Lady: abhi late ho raha isliye jarahi hoon

priya: pls go, tumhe roka kisne hai.

Priya reached home in a foul mood. Dai ma asks her wat happened?

Priya: kuch nahi dai ma ,kisi se jhagda hogaya, wo rehne dijiye aap mujhe ghar dikhaegi?

Dai ma: bilkul

priya was very impressed n surprised to know that ram has decided whole interiors of house.

Priya: maan na padega dai ma ram ki choice best hai

dai ma(indicating towards priya): haan ram ki pasand sach mai achi hai

priya: ye room locked kyu hai?

Dm: kyu ki is room mai koi aata nahi hai,ek min abhi kholti ho n she openr the room.

Priya: wow! Billiards n musical instruments. Kiske hai, ram ke bhai ke honge,hai na?

Dm: nahi ram ke hai, business ki responsibility lene se pehle wo apna kafi waqt yahin par bitata tha

priya smiles n thinks: toh janab ko music mai bhi interest hai, not bad,itne bhi boring nahi hai.

Priya: ab kyu nahi aate ram is room mai?

Dm: beta kaam se fursat mile toh na, is kam ki wajah se wo lunch tak nahi karta

priya: matlab? Shayad bahar kha lete hongey

dm: nahi beta

priya: dont worry ab mai aagayi hoon, ye sab zyada din nahi chalega...dai ma mujhe aaj ngo jana hai toh mai uski tayyari karleti hoo

with that she retards to her room.

Precap: RaYa spending time at NGO

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".