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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Wow what a description of Venice , the city , carnival, architecture, shopping, food and the prestigious cuisine .LIked it..Its like i traveled all these lost my self watching RaYa hi hi ..

How can u describe it so beautifully yaar??..loved it..

I m amazed , there is a matured , skilled writer in U. Kudos.

Unkahi baatoan bahut saare chupe Ehsaas bahar aane lage hai dheere dheere 😉😉

looking farward for more...

Fully RaYa touch..👏👏

Thx for the pM.

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Read full FF of yours...Its really awesome...Loving the way RaYa are falling for each other...Awsome...Please continue soon...Thank u for the PM...

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

THANK YOU ALL for appreciating my work, am humbled and overwhelmed with the comments 😊 🤗 ❤️

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
so swtupdate dear and the Venicetrip is awesome as u described everythingin a well manner.thank u for the information.RAYA is really best couple..I was little bit upset for the late update but it was awesome update and a long one so super happy.but next update soon dear plzzz

will definitely try to update ASAP, sorry to make u wait, btw next update will be on RaYa coming really close to each other 😉

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Am happy that u all liked Venice, Shamavi, sorry but story ki demand thi usi liye thoda track fast forward ho gaya, next RaYa will be in London and love is in the air, enjoy upcoming track

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A. Kishore

@TVserialfreak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

No words to describe this update didi😃..loved the depiction of the gradual comfort levels between Ram and Priya😳...beautifully penned down and will read it once again😳..awesome description of the destinations and gave a visual impact👏👏...Keep rocking👍🏼👍🏼

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Part 24

wow,such a beautiful update

aapne toh hame london pura guma hi diya

love the bonding between raya and neeti and samar

Priya toh talli ho gayi par woh bol kya rahi thi

yeh update toh meetha hai ji aur aap aur meetha update dene wali hai

I am exited.

reading next part...

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Part 25

you penned down beautifully

iss update mein aapne venice bhi guma diya

yes, both are in love, but, Y they are not expressing

so many cute scenes.

continue soon and thanks for PM😊

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

@Sandhyasn

Thanks a lot for the comment, if u don't mind can I call u Sandy?, well izhaar toh aankhon se ho hi raha hain aur raha sawaal karne me toh I request u to read next part then u will understand, so stay hooked. 😉

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
@Sandhyasn

Thanks a lot for the comment, if u don't mind can I call u Sandy?, well izhaar toh aankhon se ho hi raha hain aur raha sawaal karne me toh I request u to read next part then u will understand, so stay hooked. 😉

u can call me sandy😊. toh next part mein raya ke beech mein kuch toh zaroor hone wala hai.

me very exited...continue soon