FF - RaYa - Second Chance overview on pg 149

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.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

fantabulous update dear
loved it to core
all rasms are gud
i loved it
thanks for pm

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nazianisar

@NAZIANISAR1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

FABULOUS UPDATE...CHALO RAYA KI SHAADI TUH HUI...I GUESS NEXT UPDATE KUCH ROMANTIC TYPE KI HO GI...????WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE ...,

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Ananya

@anuraya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Lovely update...shadi was done..!!!all rasams are too gud luv it..waiting for next..cntinue soon..!!!

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ady1218

@ady1218

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Lovely update... eagerly waiting for next part

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

all scenes were well described...loved everybit of it...ita a spcl holi gift for us...keep rocking always ...

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

That was just superb and a on time update... Tumi bengali i didn't knew it.. Thank god atleast in ur ff ayesha is a gud human being.. Chote chote par jo khubsurat scene raya ke aap likhti ho naa is just mindblowing... Raya's relationship is progressing slowly but beautifully, just like real... The way u describe priya's and ram outfit i can clearly imagine them nicely... And wo jo thore bohat bengali rasmo ka tarka punjabi shaadi main lagaya haina akdum phataphati chilo... Ujjaini di u rock... Waiting for the next..

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Well nice updates...waiting 4 next:-)

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
That was just superb and a on time update... Tumi bengali i didn't knew it.. Thank god atleast in ur ff ayesha is a gud human being.. Chote chote par jo khubsurat scene raya ke aap likhti ho naa is just mindblowing... Raya's relationship is progressing slowly but beautifully, just like real... The way u describe priya's and ram outfit i can clearly imagine them nicely... And wo jo thore bohat bengali rasmo ka tarka punjabi shaadi main lagaya haina akdum phataphati chilo... Ujjaini di u rock... Waiting for the next..

thank u so much Anjali. I was a bit hesitant first to write this part but then I thought to give a try, am happy that u liked it, and well said ke Bengali rasm ka tadka Punjabi shaadi me laga, yes and I hope yeh tadke ki swad achha ho...yes am a Bengali, are u?