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Posted: 12 years ago
FIRST OF ALL THANKS FOR PM..,.SUPERB UPDATE ...,BUT THORA RAYA JADDU JAGAO NAA...,,I MEAN THORA RAYA ROMANCE TUH BANTA HAI..,..DANCE TYPE KUCH...,???AND CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NAZIANISAR1

FIRST OF ALL THANKS FOR PM..,.SUPERB UPDATE ...,BUT THORA RAYA JADDU JAGAO NAA...,,I MEAN THORA RAYA ROMANCE TUH BANTA HAI..,..DANCE TYPE KUCH...,???AND CONTINUE SOON...


I also want some romance b/w them but RaYa are not allowing me to do that, let's see if I can pursue them till then enjoy reading and keep commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM..

Very well written RaYa romance with Khana... very good 👏(CVs kabhi nahi sochenge ye)

Jo reet rivaz ki baat aapne uthaayi aaj bhi hamare ghar mein har taraf hota hai yaar...
Hum kitne bhi padh likhe kuch bhi karein logoan ka mind badalana mushkil ho jaata..
waise u r cent percent right no Mom will wish to spoil her children life...

Accha laga aapne iss issue ko uthaaya..hum atleast in vichaaroan ko apne mind se nikaal sakte hai..every human being , every woman has wishes and personal views. Hum in bekaar ki sampradaayoan ki bandhan se mukt ho ke, equal rigths express and act wala right la sakte..
u did it thru dis FF.. 👏👏let all of us do in our life...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thanks for the PM..


Very well written RaYa romance with Khana... very good👏(CVs kabhi nahi sochenge ye)

Jo reet rivaz ki baat aapne uthaayi aaj bhi hamare ghar mein har taraf hota hai yaar...
Hum kitne bhi padh likhe kuch bhi karein logoan ka mind badalana mushkil ho jaata..
waise u r cent percent right no Mom will wish to spoil her children life...

Accha laga aapne iss issue ko uthaaya..hum atleast in vichaaroan ko apne mind se nikaal sakte hai..every human being , every woman has wishes and personal views. Hum in bekaar ki sampradaayoan ki bandhan se mukt ho ke, equal rigths express and act wala right la sakte..
u did it thru dis FF.. 👏👏let all of us do in our life...


I tried to raise my voice and in real life too I do this, this idea struck me when I was penning this particular scene, so I just expressed it, I appreciate if ppl like this initiative if mine and thank u for showering ur appreciation on me, keep reading and take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was having flashbackks of their marriage in season 1...good job keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi everyone, Happy Holi to all of u, wish a colourful day ahead and this Holi brings colours to everyone life and also bring peace and prosperity
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update is on the way, will be in couple of hours, so stay tuned
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Posted: 12 years ago
sry 4 d late reply
fantastic update
mahendi sence was superb
waiting 4 shadi pls update soon
thx 4 PM
wish u happy holi
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Posted: 12 years ago
wish u all a very happy colourful Holi. As promised here comes my next update, hope u all enjoy, finally RaYa will be in the bond of marriage, so here comes shaadi


recap

Dur se Vikram aur Neha yeh dekh kar bada khush hote hain aur Neha kehti hain akhir fatty ko apni khushi mil hi gayi toh Vikram kehta hain, mujhe lagta hain Priya Ram ko samhal legi aur woh sab degi jo woh deserve karta hain.




Next day, the D Day. Aankh khuli toh laga ke roshni ki jhalkiyan aake samne khari ho gayi hain, din char aya tha aur subah bohot khoobsurat thi. Priya apne bistar se uth kar balcony me ake khari huin, subah ke sirf 6:30 hi baje hain par suraj ko dekh ke lag raha hain jaise aaj woh specially Priya ko 'hi' bolne ke liye hi utha hain, aaj se pehle itna achhi morning Priya ko laga hi nahi tha. Waise bhi Priya is an early riser, usse subah subah apna morning walk aur yoga bohot pasand hain, aksar apne papa ke saath nearby park me jati hain aur workout karti hain, she is not a fitness freak bas apne ko thoda sa healthy rakhne ki koshish karti hain. Lekin aaj ka subah kuch alag hi hain, aaj uske jeewan ka sabse bada din hain, aaj woh kisi aur ki hone jaa rahi hain, ek aise rishte me bandhne ja rahi hain jo kehte hain bada hi khoobsurat sa hain. Zindagi ki itne saare saal jin logon ke saath bitaya hain unn logon ko peeche chhor ke age barr jayegi, apna maika chhor jayegi. Apne mata pita ka sanskar aur ashirwaad ko lekar woh ek nayi duniya me jaa rahi hain, apne mann hi mann woh kehti hain mujhe ummeed hain main inn logon ko woh samman aur adar de saku jo mujhe dena chahiye, main Kapoor khandan ki sahi maino me bahu bann payu.


baabul mora naihar chhuto ri jaaye


yehi sochte sochte apne kamre ati hain aur dekhti hain ki Ayesha abhi bhi soo rahi hain toh woh uske paas jake uske baalon ko sehlate hue kehti hain Good Morning, Ayesha pehle kuch nahi bolti par dheere dheere aankhen half open karke


Ayesha ' mmm karti huin apne ladli behen ko tightly embrace karte hue kehti hain good morning di, aap itni jaldi kyun uth gayi, thodi der aur soo jao, waise bhi aaj ke baad toh jiju aapko raat bhar sone nahin denewale, saying this she giggles


yeh sunke Priya ko pehle gussa ata hain phir woh uski kaan pakad leti hain aur kehti hain


Priya ' kitni besharam hain yaar tu, apne di se aise baat karti hain?


Ayesha ' isme besharmi wali kya baat hain di, yeh toh jiju ka haq hain, aur aap aise react kyun kar rahe ho, mann me toh aapka bhi laddoo hi phoont rahe hain sirf bol nahi rahi ho, kyun and she winks.


Ab toh Priya ko solid gussa ata hain aur woh samne padi huin pillow leke Ayesha ko marne hi wali hain tabhi Ayesha bed se jump karte huye room ke middle me aa jati hain aur inn dono ka sibling fight shuru ho jati hain, kuch der baad dono ruk jate hain saas lene ke liye aur ek dusre ko dekh ke hass padte hain, aur tabhi Ayesha aake Priya ko pakad ke ek tight wali hug deti hain, uske embrace me aisa kuchh tha jo Priya ko bhi emotional kar diya toh woh bhi respond ki, ab dono behene thoda Ganga-Jamuna bahane lagti hain, thodi der baad Ayesha kehti hain


Ayesha ' di, will miss u a lot, aap ke bagair kaise rahungi main, kaun meri collegewali stories sunega, kaun mujhe guide karega


Priya tab bhi aankhon me aansoo liye kehti hain ' arre main thodi hi na dur jaa rahi hoon, yehi isi sheher main to hoon, jab milne ka mann kare aa jana aur phone toh hain hi, aur waise main bhi kahan tum logon ke bagair reh paungi, ati jati rahungi na, aur waise madam aap toh kuch dino ke baad foreign chali jayengi higher studies ke liye tab toh hum sab tujhe hi miss karenge, uska kya?


Isi baat pe phir yeh dono ek bara sa tight wala hug kiya aur hass padi.


Isi baton baton me kab 8 baj gaye pata hi nahi chala, Shipraji daudte hue ake bolti hain kya Priya tu bhi, aaj teri shaadi hain, kitne saare rasm hain aur tu abhi tak taiyyar nahi huin hain, ja jake taiyyar hoke neeche aa ja, aur Ayesha beta tu bhi zara taiyyar hoke aa, mujhe help kar. So both the sister now leave to get ready.


Udhar neeche sab taiyyari chal rahi hain, sabse pehle haldi lagwaya jayega dulhe ko phir wohi haldi jayegi dulhan ke ghar, toh aisa hua hain ke Ram aur Karthik beythenge ek room me aur Natasha aur Priya beythegi dusre room me. Dadi, nani, Krishnaji, Shipraji aur Shipraji ke side se rishtedaar yeh sab taiyyar kar rahe hain aur inlogon ke saath saath Ayesha aur uski gang bhi help kar rahe hain, Neha sab bachhon ko naashta karane me lagi hain jo ki ek bohot tough job hain, woh yeh khatam karke phir inn rasomo me shaamil hogi. Vikram, Karthik, Sudhirji aur Rishabh beyth ke baatein kar rahe hain aur Vikram Karthik ka leg pull kar raha hain, tabhi dadi boli yeh Golu kahan reh gaya, abhi tak neeche kyun nahin aya?


Vikram goes to upstairs and see Ram was working on his laptop.


Vikram ' oye kya kar raha hain, chal neeche chal, dadi bula rahi hain?


Ram ' bas 5 minute ek mail send karke chalte hain


Vikram ' Ram tu kabhi nahi sudhrega, aaj teri shaadi hain aur aaj ke din bhi tu kam kar raha hain, chal, ab bohot hua, he literally dragged him, by this time he sent his mail so he closed his laptop and said


Ram ' waise breakfast me kya hain aaj, bohot zoro ki bhukh lagi hain.


(lo kar lo baat, yahan inn janab ki shaadi hain aur inko khaane ki padi hain, waise khane ke ilava inhe kuch dikhta bhi nahi, aur breakfast which happens to be his favourite meal of the day, kaise bhool sakte hain, aap bhi na Ram, hadd hain)


Do dost neeche aate hain. Tabhi dadi bulati hain Ram ko aur kehti hain


Dadi ' oye Golu, kahan tha tu ab tak, sunn aaj sara din tu kuchh nahin khaa sakta, fast karna parega aur iske baad teri haldi ki rasm shuru honewali hain.


Ram who was having demons fighting in his stomach left dumbfounded when he hears dadi, ab dadi ke samne kuch bol toh nahin sakta par bhoonk usse bardasht nahin hota, kya kare?


Bechare ki kismet bhi dekho, tabhi breakfast serve hota hain aur uske favourite aloo ke parathe hain aaj menu me, usse apne upar itna gussa ata hain ke mano sab kuch tod dega, Vikram jo uske saath khara tha, mann hi mann muskura raha tha uski haalat dekh ke aur usse chirate huye kehta hain, dekh itna toh tu kar hi sakta hain na Priya ke liye


Ram kuch bolne hi jaa raha tha tabhi dekha Priya neeche aa rahi hain. Haldi ki rasm me pili saree pehni jati hain toh usne wohi pehena hain, haathon me ek kangan hain, aur gale me ek chain hain locket ke saath, kaano me thode badewale tops hain aur payron me payal hain jiske awaaz bohot meethi hain, koi extra make up nahin sirf aankhon me deep kohl and lips par halka sa lip gloss, baalon ko ek taraf clip se baandhe huin woh neeche aa rahi thi. Ram kuch second ke liye dekhta hi reh gaya, ladkiyan usne apne zindagi me bohot dekhi hain, corporate world me kaam karta hain bohot saare variety of girls dekhe hain (not pinpointing anyone, sorry) lekin Priya ko woh jab bhi dekhta hain alag lagti hain, kuchh toh special hain usme, dekhne me bohot simple hain ordinary hain but she has something which makes her different and out of the crowd.


Priya neeche ati hain aur sab bado ki peyr chhuti hain, Ram tab bhi use dekhe hi jaa raha tha, their eyes meet and she gave a sweet smile to him.


Now everyone was hurrying up as mahurat was passing off, so Ram and Karthik both are taken to the room and haldi ceremony started. Both Karthik and Ram are wearing white kurti and pyjama (and believe me Ram was looking damn s**y in that), so they have to remove the kurti, Karthik toh phir bhi mann gaya par Ram toh beythne ke liye bhi taiyyar nahi ho raha hain, tabhi wahan Neha ati hain aur kehti hain fatty aaj ke din tum sirf sunoge, nahi bologe aur nahi kuch karoge, jo bola jayega wahi karna parega, and she literally made him sit but he wasn't ready to take off his kurti toh ladies log sab uske kurti ke upar se hi haldi lagawa rahe the, sabse zyada Neha ne lagvaya hain aur taang bhi kiya. Ab bari aayi ladkiyon ki toh wahan haldi leke aayi Neha, aur sab hass hass ke Natasha aur Priya ko haldi laga rahe the, Shipraji ke aankh me aansoo the, wahan Krishnaji bhi rok nahin payi apne aansoo. Chalo ab haldi toh ho gayi hain toh sab naha ne ke liye taiyyar ho gaye.


Ab sab naha dhoke neeche aye chure ki rasm ke liye toh woh shuru kiya gaya. Priya ke haathon me chura uske mamaji ne bandha par Natasha ke toh koi mamaji hain nahi, aur reet ke hisaab se yeh mama ka hi hota hain, toh tabhi Panditji ne kaha ki bada bhai yeh kar sakta hain toh yeh rasm Rishabh ne kiya, laal rang ki chude me Priya aur bhi soni lag rahi thi aur uski haathon ki mehendi bhi iss chure ko achhi tareeke se compliment kar rahi thi, iske baad Panditji ne kahan ke ab havan ke liye beyth na parega (guys am not well versed with traditions of Punjabi wedding, thoda bohot dekh dekh ke malum hain par yeh havaan wala rasm hamare, matlab Bengalees ke yahan hota hain, ise hum "briddhhi" kehte hain, yeh rasm ghar ka koi bhi umar me bada, yani papa, bare bhai, chacha ya phir mama kar sakte hain, yeh rasm, both ladka ladki ke ghar me hota hain, am incorporating this here)


Toh Priya ke papa Priya aur Karthik ke liye baythe havaan me aur udhar Natasha ke liye Ram baytha. Ab Ram ke liye yeh karne koi nahi tha, toh uska yeh haavan hua nahi. Haavan ke rituals ka detail me nahi doongi bas sirf itna hi ke haavan kafi time ke baad khatam hua, ab sab thak gaye the aur taiyyari bhi shaadi ke liye karna tha toh baki sab unn kamon me joot gaye sirf jinki shaadi hain woh log rest karne ke liye chale gaye par Ram nahin gaya, ek toh behen ki shaadi hain aur upar se ghar me sab mehmaan aye hain toh woh bhi shaadi ke kaamon me haath batane laga, waise karna toh kuch hain nahi akhir itne bade industrialist ki shaadi hain par phir bhi woh rest ke liye nahin gaya.


First it is his sister's marriage who is like his daughter and on top of that he wanted Sudhirji to be relaxed so he was also eyeing on his part whether the arrangement was done or not, whether he needs anything or not, after all he is such person for whom family comes first and he has admitted that Priya's family is also his family.


Two marriages are going to take place, so two mandaps are being constructed but the timings are different, the first one will be of Karthik and Natasha and second will be of RaYa, the mahurat of first one is around 5:45 PM and second one is around 8:30 PM. The bidaai of Natasha will be from here but Priya's will be from her maayka as this was Priya's only wish so dadi granted that, it will be difficult for both the families as Lalaji ki kothi is bit far from the city but still dadi accepted that and said it is my bahu's wish so Golu has to accept it. No choice Mr. Kapoor!


Its 5 in the evening, Natasha was almost ready with her dress and jewellery, she is looking very pretty in her bridal make up. On the other Karthik was also ready, looking as usual smart in his sherwani, all others were also ready but the only missing thing was baraat, ab bhai shaadi ek hi ghar me hain toh baraat kahan se hogi, but suddenly Vikram, Neha, Rishabh and Saumya came to their room and asked everyone to come down for baraat. Now everyone became dumb as what they are saying? So Rishabh said


Rishabh ' arre bina baraat ke bhi kabhi shaadi hoti hain kya?


Vikram agreeing with his words said, aur woh bhi chhoti ki shaadi me, kabhi nahi, baraat to hogi hi, chalo bhai dulhe raja, baraat jane ka waqt ho gaya hain.


Still everyone were surprised to tabhi Neha ne kaha ki we haver arranged the baraat and we will go to the nearby crossing and come with the baraat.


Everyone were very much happy and all went down and Karthik had to ride the ghodi and they went to the nearby crossing aur bohot dhoom dhaam se naach gaane ke saath baraati banke aaye aur unn logon ka grand welcome hua. Vikram aur Rishabh jo baraatiyon me the woh Lalaji ki kothi pe aake dulhanwale side me chale gaye aur inn logon ka welcome kiya along with Ram. Sab bohot khush the iss idea se aur bohot happy bhi lag rahe the. Sab baraatiyon ka swagat ho gaya par Priya kahin dikhayi nahi di, tabhi Ram ki nazar Priya par pari aur woh dekhta hi reh gaya, Priya was wearing one bottle green saree with matching accessories and this time her hair was in bun, looking extremely beautiful, on the other Ram was also looking superbly handsome wearing one gala band sherwani in blackish violet colour with cream colour churidaar, both look at each other, their eyes met and gave a smile to each other.


Shaadi shuru ho gayi hain aur sab rituals ek ke baad ek ho rahe the, toh tabhi Panditji ne kanyadaan ke liye kanya ki pita ko bulaya ab woh toh hain nahi toh Dadi ne Ram ko kandyadaan ke liye bola, aur dekha jaye toh Ram hi hain chhoti ke pita ki tarah, Ram had tears in his eyes and he did the kanyadaan. Sindoor aur Mangalsutra bhi ho gaya tha, sab ne bado ka ashirwaad le liya and shaadi got over.


Now it was bidaai time toh sab ke aankhon me aansoo the, tabhi Natasha ko Neha ne samhala, Ram Sudhirji ke paas aya aur kahan meri chhoti thodi bachhi hain, par dil ki buri nahi hain, agar usse koi galati ho jaye toh samjhaiyega aur maaf bhi kar dijiyega.


Sudhirji Ram ko kehte hain, u don't have to worry beta, woh meri beti hi toh hain, ek pita hone ke naate usse daant ne ka haq jitna hain utna pyaar bhi dena hain, aakhir main bhi ek pita hoon, apni beti ki bidaai ka dard mujhe bhi hota hain, u don't worry at all. Ram Karthik ke paas ata hain aur kehta hain ke agar chhoti zara sa bhi taang kare toh mujhe aake bataana, saying this he hugged him and then Karthik says jiju, aap befiqkr ho jaiyye aaj se Natasha ki sari responsibilities meri hain and I will see that she doesn't get hurt.


With these such emotional scenes Natasha ki bidaai ho gayi, Dadi and Krishnaji bhi bohot roye, Rishabh teases her but at the end both brother sister hugged tightly and cried.


Bidaai toh ho gayi par abhi ek aur shaadi baki hain toh sab wapaas aa gaye. Priya was in her room wearing her bridal dress, her make up was complete, all jewellery and accessories were worn and now she was ready to go down. She was sitting alone as all were in downstairs with the bidaai and other rituals. Elders asked her to get ready as mahurat was already started. She was thinking about her coming days and suddenly hears Neha's voice who has come to take her down. Neha came and see her


Neha ' aaj toh fatty gaya kaam se, u r looking stunning, iraada kya hain? saying this she winks at her.


Priya blushed to hear this and said aisa kuch nahin hain.


Neha ' ha ha jaisa kuch hain toh woh fatty hi jaane aur tum


Actually Neha was teasing her and Priya was feeling shy to hear that so she was just smiling, by that time Ayesha came there and said arre aap dono yahan kya kar rahe ho, come Panditji is calling for u di, shaadi has started, so now Ayesha and Neha brought Priya downstairs.


The time for Jai mala and first time Ram and Priya come face to face. (Both Ram and Priya wore the same outfit which they wore in their wedding) Both were looking beautiful and handsome. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe kuch der, in fact they forgot to blink also, to tabhi rang me bhang ho gayi and Panditji handed the garland to them, Priya put it on him and then Ram did. Now everyone came to the mandap and shaadi started, all the rituals started, the chanting of mantras, the fragnance of flowers, the music of shehnai, logon ki baatein and moreover the rituals all these make the ambiance a dreamy thing for both, both are realizing that after this moment their lives are going to change forever. Panditji called Sudhirji for kanyaadan, both Sudhirji and Shipraji did that, while doing this Priya had tears in her eyes so as Shipraji, after kanyadaan it was time for gatbandhan so Ayesha did that and Panditji asked them for pheras, first 3 by groom and then 4 by bride, each pheras have their own meaning, these are actually promises taken during the marriage. These promises are essential part of a Hindu marriage. After phera it was the time to put vermillion so Ram put that in her forehead, while putting that some vermillion came on the tip of Priya's nose (which is considered to be very auspicious as people say bride is lucky and she will get all the love and affection from her husband) and then tied the mangalsutra in her neck. Shaadi was complete, both bride and groom took blessings from their elders.


Now it was time for dinner. It is also a custom that after shaadi the bride and groom have to feed each other so everyone turned to the dinning place. Both Karthik and Natasha seated in one place and Ram and Priya on the other. The elders were all enjoying among themselves. Karthik feed Natasha and vice versa on the other RaYa also did that, now Ram is in too much hungry, he can't wait and started to eat, Priya who was so much decked up and feeling bit tired too couldn't have anything properly, seeing this Ram asked what happen, she said nothing as she doesn't have the apetite, Ram smiled in his heart and apne mann me hi bola, apni toh kabhi nahi jamegi and started to eat again.



I hope u all like this, kuch rasm maine aapne aap se include kiya hain, I don't know how much that is relative with Punjabi marriage, so if anyone has any problem please revert back and can also share his/her POV, please don't hesitate to do that, and if u all like it then plz hit the "LIKE" button and please comment also.
Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update yar very beautifully written finally both couples got married
Waiting eagerly whats in store for us next
Cont soon nd thanx for pm

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