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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hi thanks for the PM..

Typical Raya.. and the Priya behind the price tag... lovely..
Rishabh aur Soumya ko bhi yahi milva diya...
good going..

Next??????????????


yeah u r right, Priya will be Priya, in fact I also sometime relate with her, anyways thanks for comment, next update will be tomorrow, till then keep reading
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shamavi

omg ram is too ab duse samaj na chiaye taaa😭 bechari priya koo itna brua laga😭

love stories sab track par hain ab jaldi karp update

nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shamavi

omg ram is too ab duse samaj na chiaye taaa😭 bechari priya koo itna brua laga😭

love stories sab track par hain ab jaldi karp update

update soon.liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
next update is in couple of hours, so stay hooked
Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

next update is in couple of hours, so stay hooked

Okay ji
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Posted: 12 years ago
next part is here guyz, enjoy


recap

Udhar Sharma House me toofan macha hua hain. Shipraji aur Ayesha dono milke Priya ke peeche padi hain, usse kabhi yeh face pack toh kabhi woh cream yeh sab lagvaya jaa raha hain. Priya ko yeh saab bilkul nahi pasand lekin aaj uska ek bhi nahi chalega. Priya had to take day off from her college aur woh yehi soch rahi thi ke isse achha hota ke main college chali jati, kam se kam yeh sab se chhutkara toh milta. Toh udhar Karthik bhi apne office gaya hua hain lekin woh half day karke wapas ayega.


Kapoor Industries Head Office at 5 PM


Vikram barging in Ram's cabin and said ' yaar tu abhi bhi office me hain, chal, jana nahin kya, kya yeh bhi main yaad dilau ki aaj tera roka hain, already 5 baj chuke hain, 7 baje ki muhurat hain, ab uthh.


Ram who was engrossed with the file said bas 5 mins, let me complete this.


Vikram ' nothing doing. Tu chal abhi mere saath, saying this he closed the laptop and snatch away the file and kept it close on the table. He also asked Ram's secretary Jenny that she can leave as Ram is also leaving.


When Ram reached Kapoor Mansion, it was already lit with lights and the hall was looking beautiful with the decorations.


Dadi ' oye golu, yeh koi waqt hain ghar aane ka, teri sagaai hain aaj aur tu ab aa raha hain, 6 baj gaye hain, 7 baje ki muhurat hain, Priya aane hi wali hain, aur peheli hi din tu meri bahu ko intezaar karvayega kya.


Ram who couldn't say anything was left scratching his temple.


Usi waqt Krishnaji aati hain aur kehti hain, Ram jaa jake change karle, maine tere kapde rakhwa diya hain, aur kuchh chahiye toh mujhe ya Bansi ko awaaz de dena.


Ram saying jee ma and leave from there.


Ram came out from washroom and was wearing his clothes. It was a simple peach colour sherwani with churidaar, no stole was there. Ram was looking dashing in that, very simple yet extremely attractive. He came out from trial room and was combing his hair. There was a knock on the door and Vikram came in.


Vikram ' arre tu abhi tak taiyyar nahi hua, chal niche chalte hain.


Ram ' arre Neha kahan hain, aur bacche?


Vikram ' sab neeche hain tu chal to sahi


Ram ' chal


Both Ram and Vikram come to downstairs. Neha come forward and pulled his cheeks in front of everyone and said oye fatty kya lag rahe ho!


Ram was embarrassed with sudden action of Neha and was about to say something'.. there comes whole Sharma family.


Everyone greeted them and all of them touched the feet of dadi, both Priya and Karthik touched the feet of Krishnaji.


Priya, who was wearing a peacock blue saree was looking gorgeous in that. As usual she was not in heavy make up but was looking very elegant. Her hair were open, was wearing kohl in her eyes which was deep but neatly lined, bangles were dangling in her both the hand and a jhumka adorning her ear, instead of putting lipstick she putted gloss on her lips, in one word she was looking very pretty. Ram who was watching her was somehow mesmerized by her simple yet elegant look. Priya was also watching Ram while talking to Neha and was thinking he looks pretty good in designer wear.


Neha as usual was chattering with Priya and both went to Natasha who was seating with Soumya and her other colleagues. Both Natasha and Priya hugged and congratulated each other. Natasha introduced to her colleague to Priya and Neha. Instantly Neha, Priya and Soumya gelled well.


Tabhi panditji aye aur kahe ki muhurat beeta jar aha hain (typical filmy panditji, aage nahi keh sakte the, ab sab harbari ho jayegi, aur iss chakkar me agar saari samhalte samhaalte Priya gir gayi toh?, toh Ram usse pakad lega woh bhi kaske)


Pehle Karthik aur Natasha ki roka hua, ring exchange hue aur shagun bhi. Ab bari ayi apne RaYa ki, toh jab rings ki bari aayi toh Priya ka haath apne haathon me lene waqt Ram ne apne mann hi mann kuch bola aur ankhen bhi band kiya, udhar Priya Ram ko dekh rahi thi aur tabhi usko ring ki upar nazaar gayi, dekha wahi ring hain jo usne shop me pasand ki thi, usse bada ajeeb laga par kuch boli nahi, par ring uski finger me thoda bara hua, ise dekh ke Ram ne apna tongue thoda sa bahar kar diya, ab ayi Priya ki bari toh usne bhi ring pehenaya jo ki ek simple si gold band hain ( the one shown in original, actually guys I love that, so can't help it), lekin woh Ram ke finger me chhoti saabit huin, ab embarrassment ki baari aayi Priya ki, uske saath saath ek aur cheez bhi hua, pehli baar Ram ki haath ko pakda usne kyunki forcefully ring ko jo ghusana tha, yeh dekh ke sab ko haasi ayi aur udhar yeh dono embaraassment ke chalte sirf ek dusre ko aur apne angoothi ko dekhe jaa rahe the.


Roke ki baad sab ne baro ka ashirwaad liya. Tabhi Krishnaji, Shipraji ke gale lag kar boli, samdhanji ab huin Priya humare ghar ki bahu, mubarak ho.


Shipraji bhi gale lag ke boli, aap ko bhi, Natasha huin humare ghar ki.


Dono iss baat pe has pare aur unka saath diya Dadi ne, jo kaha, aree Krishna, tune thoda sa bolne me galti kar di, beshaq Priya humare ghar ki bahu banne jaa rahi hain lekin woh mere liye poti jaisi hain, ek poti jaane ka dukh yeh aake puri kar degi, kyun maine theek kaha na.


Krishnaji ' bilkul beeji, Priya iss ghar aur mere pariwaar ko samhal legi, main janti hoon.


Shipraji who was listening to this, had tears in her eyes; yeh maa ye bhi na khushi ho yah gham aansoo humesha ready rehte hain chalak ne ke liye in ke aankhon se, kehti hain mujhe khushi hain ke Priya ko aap jaise log mile, ummed karti hoon woh aap ka pyaar aur maan dono rakhh payegi.


Sudhirji, on the other hand who was standing near by them also had tears in his eyes, but was having a smile on his face, aakhir pita hain na kahenge toh kuch nahi sirf andar hi andar khush honge yeh soch ke ki uski ladli ke jeevan me khushiyan hi khushiyan dastak dete rahe hamesha.


In the meantime Ram come to Sudhirji and said in a low voice, Papa mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi.


This was the first time Ram called him Papa. (guys, I need to confess here something, in the serial, Ram never called Sudhirji as papa, but I wanted him to say like that here, ek alag sa apnapan lagta hain jab koi kisi rishte ko ek naam deta hain, I hope u guys agree with me)


Sudhirji thoda pareshaan hoke Ram ki taraf dekhte hue kehte hain, bolo beta


Ram Sudhirji ki expression ko pad leta hain aur kehta hain, don't worry papa, koi aisi baat nahi hain na koi problem hain, main bass aapko yeh kehna chahta tha ki aap yeh dono shaadiyon ko leke bilkul stress ya tension mat kijiye, hum sab hain sab kuch manage ho jayega, aap bas befiqr ho jaiye, aur aap ne jo jo socha hain inn do shaadiyon ko leke sirf wahi kijiye, main janta hoon ke beti ki shaadi ma baap ke liye kitna khushi ki baat hain, aap wahi kijiye jo aapke mann me hain, jo jo aapko karna hain aap wahi kijiye, main bhi chhoti ke liye ek baap jaisa hi hoon, jab babuji guzar gaye the tab chhoti bohot bacchi thi, mere liye woh mere bachchi jaisi hi hain isi liye main janta hoon ke ek baap ko apne beti ki shaadi ki khushi kitna mayne rakhti hain, isi liye aap jo bhi karna chahe aap kariye.


Sudhirji ko garv ho raha tha ke unko damaad ke roop me ek aur beta mil raha hain, duniya jhooth kehti hain ke Ram Kapoor heartless, shrewd hain, kisine shayad Ram ke iss roop ko dekha hi nahi. Sudhirji muskurate huye kehte hain ki mujhe koi stress nahi hain kyunki jab mujhe tum jaise damad mil rahe hain toh pareshaani ki toh baat hi nahi hain, aur haan ab tumhe bhi chinta kar ne ki zaarorat nahi hain, Natasha ab humare ghar ki bahu banne jaa rahi hain, main tumse wada karta hoon ke tumhari amanat humare ghar be bohot khush rahegi. With this they both hug each other.


Priya who was watching and listening to this had tears in her eyes, she knows that how much her father wanted her happiness and for her marriage he has lots of plans and ideas but was very tensed. Priya mann hi mann Ram ko thanks karti hain. After hugging when Ram looked forward he saw Priya standing over there and he understood that she has listened all the conversation and also can see tears in her eyes. He immediately understood the situation and gave a smile to her jaise ke keh raho ho ke don't worry, sab theek hoga. Inn dono ki dil ki baatein yeh ek dusre ko bhale hi na kahe par ek dusre ke aankhon me saaf par sakte hain, yeh kaisa rishta hain jo anokha bhi hain aur ajeeb bhi, duniya aise rishte ko koi naam nahi dega par yeh sach hain ki rishta toh bann gaya hain, shayad dil se dil tak ka rishta.

(this particular scene is inspired from one of my favourite VM of Madno by Sonees creation, so thank u to her and am giving the link here guys, do watch it)



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6l6mvy5nuUo

The scene shifts to the hall where everybody was chatting with each other, Vikram aur Neha as usual Ram ki taang kheechne me laga hua hain, Vikram kabhi Neha ka side leta toh kabhi Ram ka, wahan Natasha aur Karthik bhi apne common friendz aur colleagues se baatein kar rahe hain, Soumya aur Rishabh bhi apne aap me gum hain, in logon ki gadi ab dheere dheere raftaar bada rahi hain, kuch nazdeekiyaan aa rahi hain, lekin abhi tak gharwalon ko pata nahi hain, dusri ore, dadi, Krishnaji, Sudhirji, Shipraji aur Priya beyth ke baatein kar rahi hain, bechari Priya inn sab se uth ke jaa bhi nahi paa rahi hain, tabhi achanak Neha aake use rescue karti hain aur kehti hain Priya chalo, tumhe apna bedroom dikhata hoon. Ab Priya ko thoda awkward lagta hain, ek toh pehli baar apne honewale saasural me aayi hain aur ake hi woh apna nahi nahi Mr. Kapoor ka bedroom dekhne jayegi kaisa lagega, woh mana karne jaa hi rahi thi ke tab Krishnaji boli, are ha ha Priya jao dekh lo apna bedroom aur aake mujhe batana agar kuch change karna hain toh, ab high command se permission bhi mil gaya ab toh jana hi parega, toh Ram, Priya, Neha aur Vikram charo aate hain Ram ke room me.


Ram Kapoor ka bedroom: jaisa unka size waisa hi hain bedroom bhi, aur jaisa unka mezajh waisa hi hain, pehli nazar me koi dekh ke kahega hi nahi ke yeh kisi bachelor ka room hain, each and every thing is well placed, Priya room me ate hi sabse pehle uske nazar gaya book shelf par, (arre yaar bachelor ke room me hum ladkiyon ke liye rakhha hi kya hain), woh usi taraf badti hain, tabhi Ram Vikram ko kehta hain ke kya zaarorat thi Priya ko yahan lane ki.


Vikram ' arre tune bhi toh Priya ka kamra dekha tha na toh kya problem hain waise thodi dino baad yeh sirf tera nahi Priya ka bhi kamra hoga, tujhe share karna padega ab har cheez uske saath, aur agar usse koi change chahiye toh woh bhi karna parega.


Abhi tak yeh dono low voice pe baat kar rahe the, ab change ki baat sunke Ram bhadak gaya zor se bola ki change kyun hoga, main koi change wange nahi karnewala.


Priya aur Neha jo book shelf ke samne khare hoke books dekh rahi thi, thoda chauk gayi, Priya ne Ram Vikram ki taraf dekhne lagi.


Vikram Ram ko ease karne laga aur kaha ke tu itna excited kyun ho gaya, change hi toh hain, iske baad toh har roz ek na ek adjustments karne hi parenge, toh uska practice abhi se shuru ho jayega.


Ab Neha scene me utarti hain aur kehti hain Vikram ko ' kyun usse dara rahe ho, dekho kaisa chehra bana kar khada hain, ohh! mera Golu baby, in a teasing tone.


Ram ko ab sach me irritation ho rahi thi, toh usne Neha ko glaring look dete hue kaha, mujhe Golu mat bula, in fact feeling little bit embarrassed in front of Priya.


Tabhi neeche se Krishnaji awaaz ayi aur sab neeche chale gaye.


Dinner was served and everyone was enjoying dinner. Both veg and non veg were there.


Ab jaane ka waqt aa gaya tha toh Shipraji ne kaha ke hum ghar me chhota sa ek puja rakhh rahe hain shaadi ke liye, toh aap log zaroor ayiyega aur haan usi din hum tilak ki rasam bhi kar lenge.


Dadi ' jee theek hain hum sab ayenge, isi bahane apne bahu aur damad se bhi ek aur bar mil lenge.


Both Karthik and Priya touched the feet of dadi and Krishnaji, Ram hugged Karthik and Rishabh shaked hands and hugged Karthik. Finally sagaai was done and everyone were happy.


Sharmas ghar wapas aa gaye, everyone were happy, sab bohot tired bhi the, obviously honge, do do rasme jo hua hain aur itne tam jham me hua hain, khair sabhi aake sofa pe bayth jate hain, toh tabhi Ayesha kehti hain arre itna achha din hain aaj mooh metha toh banta hain na?


Shipraji ' kya matlab hain tera, tune toh mooh meetha kiya tha Kapoor Mansion pe, ab phir se kyun karna hain, aur waise bhi fridge me mithai nahi hain.


Ayesha ' uff ho! Ma tum bhi na, hum logon ka mooh meetha kuch alag style me hota hain, tumhe pata hain na?


Shipraji ' ab itni raat ko kulfi kahan se layenge?


Ayesha ' maine pehle se hi lake rakh diya hain, lati hoon


Ayesha brought the kulfis and everyone was having kulfiwala mooh meetha.


Priya love kulfi toh basically yeh idea usse khush karne ke liye Ayesha ne kiya tha.


Priya was enjoying her kulfi toh tabhi Shipraji aake usse apne kulfi se ek bite khilati hain, ma hain na, humesha aulaad ke khushi me aansoo chalak jati hain, as usual woh Priya ko bohot pyaar se khilati hain, toh yeh dekh kar Karthik kehta hain ke mana di ki shaadi ho rahi hain lekin iss race me di akeli nahi hain main bhi khara hoon toh mujhe bhi toh milna chahiye ek bite, Shipraji haaske usse bhi ek bite deti hain aur Karthik bohot relishly usse khata hain, ab yeh sab dekh ke Ayesha madam ko thoda abhiman hota hain aur woh bachhon ki tarah mooh fula ke bolti hain ha ha khao sab, meri toh kisi ki khayal hi nahi hain, uska aisa chehra dekh ke sab has padte hain, Priya aur Karthik dono milke usse kulfi khilate hain aur khub masti karte hain, yeh scene dekh ke Sudhirji aur Shipraji dono bade emotional ho jaate hain aur dono hi apne aansoo chupate huye hasne lagte hain.


Udhar Kapoor Mansion me sab apne apne room me chale gaye hain. Ram was in his room standing near the window and was in his thoughts. Sochte sochte usse apne ring ki taraf nazar gaya, aur tabhi usse Priya ki chune ka ehsaas phir se hone laga. Zindagi bhi ajeeb karwate leta hain, kise pata tha ki jis ghar me apni behen ka rishta leke gaya tha usi ghar se uska bhi rishta jud jayega woh bhi itna ahem rishta, jis rishte ke bare me woh sochna hi band kar diya tha aaj itne dino baad woh khushiyan dastak de rahi hain uske zindagi me, lekin woh khush nahi hain, ek anjana sa darr ek anjani si ghabrahat usse gher ke rakkha hain, woh kya hain usse khud nahin malum, par ek baat hain jab bhi Priya samne aati hain, mano saari pareshani, darr, ghabrahat nikal jati hain, uski aankhon me ek ajeeb sa therav hain jo ek sukoon sa deti hain, uske muskaan me ek thandak hain mano jaise keh rahi ho ke koi mushkil nahin hain. Apne sagaai ki angoothi dekh kar Ram ko aaj ki sagaai wali incident phir se yaad aa jati hain aur woh muskura deta hain, ek bar usne koshish ki usse apne finger se bahar nikal ne ki, lekin nikli nahi, shayad isse bhi manzoor nahin ke woh finger ke bahar aaye, ek anjaana sa dor bandh gaya hain.


The scene shifts to Sharma House where everybody have retarded to their respective room and Priya was sitting on the seal of her window, one of her favourite place. Raat ki andhere ko dekhti huin door taron ko niharti huin woh bhi apne sagaai wale ring ko dekh rahi thi, ab usse samajh aa raha tha ki Neha ne usse uss din shop me isse pasand karte hue dekha tha. Sach kahe toh usse yeh ring bohot pasand aayi thi par price tag dekhne ke baad uske hosh hi udd gaye the, isi liye aaj jab ise dekha toh usse bohot khushi mili, anjaane me hi sahi par zindagi me pehli baar Ram se koi tohfa mila woh bhi apne pasand ki cheez ka, ise woh hamesha pehen ke rakhhegi aur waise bhi ma kehti hain ke sagaai ki angoothi kabhi utare nahi jaate, ek toh sagai ki ring upar se thoda loose bhi hain toh Priya ne uske upar apna khud ka ek aur ring pehen liya hain, actually use darr tha kahin ring gir na jaye loose hone ke chakkar me, waise Neha ne kahan tha ke jake change kar sakte hain lekin woh nahi mani, ab kya hain kuch baton ke liye dil kabhi raazi nahi hota hain, logically toh baat theek hain, par ----- yeh par hi sab fasat ki jad hain, isse log superstition kehte hain lekin main isse second call kahungi, kabhi kabhi dil kuch aisi baton ki gawaai deti hain jise andekha nahi kar sakte.


Khair dono apne apne soch me doobe hue the lekin unke soch me bhi ek dusre hi the, anjane me hi dono ek dusre ke bare me soch rahe the, aur dono ke hi hoton pe muskaan thi, ab raat bohot ho gaya tha, dono sochte sochte hi sone jaate hain, ab yeh dono toh chale gaye, toh humein bhi chalna chahiye, toh GOOD NIGHT everyone.


guys do watch this VM, am sure u all will like it, I don't know whether am allowed to give the link here but I think this is relevant here, if I have done something unethical here, plz forgive me but I need to do this.

I personally want to say a big thank u to Sonee's Creation for this beautiful VM, and also taking permission from her for this link, guys if anyone knows her pls inform her that I have used her VM in my FF.

Hope u like this part, sorry to make u all wait, please do comment, guyz am not getting enough comments, so should I still continue with it, if yes then please please please comment and if u all like it then hit the "LIKE" button, next update will be on Wednesday, if I get good amount of comments, guys am not forcing anyone but I really think so.





Edited by jineejiggs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful wonderful update
continue soon
one persn only one comment???😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
nearly 2 days to go for Wednesday 😭😭
hope wed comes early😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...i ws eagerly waitng fr this...grt wrk yr...amazng!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
so ring ceremony is done, waiting for more, please send them to dinner also in ur FF, it is like reliving season 1 through this 😊

Loved the update 😊

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