FF - RaYa - Second Chance overview on pg 149

jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandhyasn
very nice update. ths time u write in hindi I like it very much
comments bhi hindi mein dungi

ring part bahut achha tha. abb ye surprise honga Priya ko jab uuse Ram woh ring pehnayega jo usne pehni thi.

Ram apni behen ki liye itna exite ho raha hai,par apne liye nahi. Ram apne baare mein bhi thoda soch liya karo

rishab-soumya ka part achha tha.

aap sab part ek saat le ja raheho. ram-priya,natasha-karthik aur rishab-soumya.

jaldi se aage ka update do.

thanks for the comment, ab kya kare apne RaYa hain hi aise, apne khushi baad me dikhti hain, waise Priya ka reaction dekhne ka mann mera bhi ho raha hain chalo dekhte hain kya hoga...mujhe laga story ko agar thoda aur interesting kiya jaye toh Rishabh Saumya ko le hi ate hain, am glad that u like it, and yes this time it was in Hindi, I know I don't write good Hindi, if u find mistakes pls feel free to rectify, till then do read and enjoy

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: luvbalh
when comes the next update.
hmm these two na.. priya with price tags and ram with food lol ..
loved it and waiting for another part

thanks for comment, sach me yeh log nahin sudharnewale

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Dsudipa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

sry 4 d late reply

awesome update u written very well

waiting 4 RAYA's roka

thx 4 PM

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..neelanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Awesome update 😊 your wordings are mindblowing 👏 do continue soon... Thanks for PM..

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thanks for ur encouraging comment, I really need it, as far as RaYa are concerned toh inn logon ka boond se kuch nahin honewala, for them ocean is suitable, but still some masti and fun is coming in the way, so wait till that...btw my real name is Ujjaini, what's urs?

Ujjaini very nice name di.. My name is anjali. Am eagerly waiting for the next update..

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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