FF - RaYa - Second Chance overview on pg 149 - Page 11

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Thanks for the Pm

Originally posted by: Ramdeewani

Thanks for the Pm

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And they started their usual chit chatting, after some time Neha's phone rang. It was Vikram other side. Both Ram and Vikram have come and they are waiting in the showroom.

So Neha and Priya also finished their coffee and go to the showroom.

Ab bhai shaadi THE RAM KAPOOR ki hain toh thhat bhi waisa hi hoga, inn paisewalon ki sirf mehengi cheezon ki shauq hain, woh kaisa hoga usse matlab nahi (don't want to hurt anyones sentiment). Toh jis showroom me yeh log aaye hain woh kaafi mehengi hain. Priya jab andar aa rahi thi tabhi usse laga ke yahan se woh kaise koi ring choose kar payegi, usse hoga nahi, lekin ab wapas bhi nahi jaa sakti, usse kafi awkward lag raha tha. Udhar Ram tab se Priya ko dekhe jaa raha hain, usne actually Priya ko jeans me nahi dekha hain, hamesha salwar kameez me dekha toh iss liye thoda alag dikh rahi hain, actually yun kahen toh to kafi achhi dikh rahi hain.

All of them come to the ring section and was selecting the ring. Priya ring dekhne ke bajaye pehle price tag dekh rahi hain, uska toh bolti hi band ho gayi hain, ek toh itna mehenge mehenge rings upar se ek bhi designs pasand nahi aa rahe hain, sab bohot heavy designs wale hain, Priya ko simple sa kuch dekhne ka mann ho raha tha, toh usne kuch bola hi nahi, waha Neha constantly usse pooche jaa rahi thi aur trial dila rahi thi, who sirf "ha, theek hain" "achhi hain", yeh sab bol rahi thi, toh Neha ko samajh aa gaya use koi bhi ring pasand nahi aa raha hain, toh woh Priya se poochi ke kaisa ring usse pasand hain, Priya kuch nahi boli, kya bolegi woh, uska toh hosh hi udd gaya hain price tag dekh ke. Lekin Neha kahan manne walon me se hain, akhir Priya ko bolna para ke usse simple wali design pasand hain. Neha usse wapas leke gayi aur phir se dekhna shuru kiya, woh dono dekh hi rahe the ke Priya ko achanak se ek ring pasand ayi, bohot simple hain but its very elegant, lekin Priya toh Priya hain, pasand baad me hoga pehle price tag dekhni hain, haad hain yaar sagai ki ring pasand karne ayi hain ya bazaar se aloo, bhindi khareed rahi hain, khair ab iska toh kuch hoga nahi, udhar Neha ne yeh sab dekh liya aur boli agar usko yeh pasand hain toh yeh try karte hain, Priya ne saaf inkaar kar diya aur kaha usse yahan se kuch pasand nahi aa raha hain.

By this time Ram was bored, usse yeh sab bilkul pasand nahi aa raha tha, kya yeh ring choose karne ke chakkar me phaas gaya hai, isse achha hota agar woh business deal ka papers chekh kar raha hota. Vikram and Ram were just watching Neha and Priya and their activities. Vikram ki toh adat ho gayi hain Neha ke saath shopping karte karte lekin Ram ka toh haal hi kharab ho gaya, bechare ko bhook bhi lagi thi, in the mean time yeh do ladies wapas aa gaye.

Vikram – arre ho gayi tum logon ki ring choose?

Neha – nahi, Priya ko kuch pasand hi nahi aya.

Ram now get agitated and in that tone said, kya itne waqt me ek ring pasand nahi aya, toh tum dono kar kya rahe the

Neha – arre fatty, yeh koi sabzi hain kya, sagaai ki angoothi hain, zindagi me ek hi baar hoti hain aur agar uss pe zyada time lage to theek hain, turning to Priya and said, ek kaam karo Priya hum log kal kisi aur showroom me chalte hain.

Priya ko ab bohot bura lag raha hain, ek toh yeh dono uski wajah se yahan aaye aur upar se phir kal aayenge, toh she said, actually kal nahi ho payega Neha, tum ek kaam karo meri aane ki zaarorat nahi hain, tum khud hi ek select kar lena

Neha – arre yaar, aise thode hi na hota hain, tumhari sagaai hain, tum khud hi select karogi.

Priya – kya farak padta hain Neha, tum kar lena, jo bhi tum select karogi mujhe pasand aayegi.

Ram jo sab sunn raha tha, sochta hain yeh kaisi ladki hain apne sagaai ki angoothi bhi kisi aur ki pasand ka pehenegi.

So ab aur kuch karne ko raha nahi, toh everyone was ready to leave. As usual Priya refuses the lift and took the auto and go.

Priya ke jaane ke baad Neha turned towards Vikram and Ram and said chalo, ab yeh dono ko samajh nahi ata kahan chale, so Neha said Priya has already chosen the ring, use hi lene jana hain, now both these guys got confused.

Vikram – pasand kiya hain ka kya matlab?

Neha – arre baba usse ek angoothi pasand aayi thi lekin liya nahi usne, price tag dekh ke rakh di hain.

Ram – price tag dekhne ki kya zaroorat hain, pasand ayi thi toh le lena tha.

Neha – oye fatty tum yeh nahi samjhoge, ab yeh sab chhoro aur chalo.

Threesome again entered the showroom and went to that particular section and asked for that ring. The ring was made of platinum, round in shape and has 9 small diamond studded in it, it looks beautiful and at the same time very elegant.

Neha – I must say Priya ki choice bohot achhi hain.

Ram who saw the ring thought ise aisi ring pasand ayi, its so simple yet beautiful.

Vikram – apni jaisi ring pasand kiya hain Priya ne, simple and elegant.

Ab problem yeh hain ki size ka kya kare, toh Neha ne kahan salesman ko ke woh uske size ka dede, so finally they bought the ring.

On the other Priya come back and was saying such to her parents. Shipraji ko toh bohot tension ho gaya, agar ladkewale itna mehenga ring sirf sagaai pe denge toh woh log kya karenge.

Sudhir – hum apne haisiyat se denge, dekho Shipra, unke barabari toh hum kar nahi sakte lekin jitna ho sake main karoonga, mujhe duniya ko dikhane ki zaroorat hain nahi, isi liye main apne hisaab se dunga aur jahan tak mujhe lagta hain, na Ram ko aur na hi Krishnaji ko bura bhi lagega.

So they fix that they are going for shopping the next day.

Shopping toh ho gayi, roke ke liye sab taiyyariyan ho gayi, Sudhirji apne hisaab se aur apne haisiyaat ke jaise saare cheese kharide, angoothiyan pasand karne me waqt laga kyunki Ram ki size thoda sa teda meda hain, ab Priya ko apne dono ungliyaan milake trial deni pari tab jake usne kharidi ring. Jab khareed rahi thi toh soch rahi thi ke agar yeh fit nahi aya toh kya hoga, isi tension me woh kuch zyada hi bara wala khareed liya. Ab jab pura family shopping pe aye hain toh kulfi treat toh banta hain lekin usse pehle ek ek glass rose syrup bhi pina hain, toh sab treat ke liye Sudhirji ko taang karne lage, yahan tak ki Shipraji bhi, sabko ek saath dekh ke Sudhirji ko bohot achha laga, khaas kar ke Priya ki chehre ki taraf dekh ke, akhir beti apni ghar jaa rahi hain, Priya ki chehre pe ek alag hi muskaan thi, uski aankhen chamak rahi thi, yeh sab dekh ke Sudhirji ko bada achha laga, toh treat khatam hone ke baad sab gadi me baythe aur ghar chale aye.

Roke me sirf 3 din bacche hain aur udhar Kapoor Mansion me jaise dhoom mach gayi hain. bade dino baad iss ghar me khushiyaan dastak di hain, sab bade khushh hain. Natasha ki achhi dost aur colleague Soumya ayi huin hain, usne haali hi me Hyderabad se Mumbai shift huin hain aur Natasha ke saath uska achha khasa dosti ho gayi hain. Soumya ek bohot middle class family ko belong karti hain, mummy papa dono hi Hyderabad me rehte hain, bohot sober aur simple si ladki hain, usse banawati log pasand nahi hain, woh jaisi hain, waise hi dikhati hain, very honest and focused in her work, uski yehi qualities Natasha ko pasand aayi thi, though Natasha is senior to her but they actually gel good together. Natasha ne usse khaas invite kiya hain, roke ke liye woh teen din pehle hi aayi hain aur yehi rahegi ab. Krishnaji aur Dadi bohot khush huye usse milkar.

Dadi – Krishna, yeh ladki badi sanskaronwali hain, aur itne kam samay me humare ghar me bhi kitna ghul mil gayi hain.

Krishna – haa beeji, bachhiyan ghar ki raunak hoti hain, ab jake lag raha hain yeh shaadiyonwala ghar.

Natasha ne toh office se chutti li hain par Soumya have to go, so she was about to leave when suddenly Rishabh also was leaving for office.

Soumya – auntiji, main office jake aati hoon

Krishna – kaise jaogi tum beta?

Soumya – auto se chali jaungi

Tabhi Rishabh jane ke liye nikalta hain.

Krishna – Rishabh, tu ek kaam kar Soumya ko office chhod de.

Soumya – nahi auntyji, main chali jaungi, aap pareshaan mat hoiyye.

Rishabh – its ok, aapke office mere raaste me hi ayega, so I will drop u, don't bother.

Soumya thoda hesitantly kehti hain ok and both leave Kapoor Mansion.

In the car

Soumya – sorry, woh mere wajah se aapko late ho jayga, am really sor…….

Rishabh – aapko sorry kehne ki zaarorat nahi hain, its my pleasure.

Ab dono chuup ho jate hain, Rishabh is driving and Soumya was watching the bygone sceneraies from the side window.

Tabhi Rishabh kehta hain

Rishabh – chhoti ne bataya aap uske saath kam karti hain?

Soumya – jee, actually mujhe sirf 3 mahine hi hue hain Mumbai aaye hue, am actually from Hyderabad.

Rishabh – ok, toh kaisa lag raha hain humara sheher?

Soumya – achha lag raha hain.

Yeh dono baatein karte karte Soumya ke office pohonch gaye. Soumya said thanks to Rishabh and gave a smile to him, on return Rishabh also smiled and said with my pleasure and drove away.

Inn teen dino me yeh dono kafi kareeb aa gaye hain ek dusre ke, kehte hain pyaar ki pehli seeri dosti hain, ab inn dono ke beech dosti ho gayi hain yah dosti se barr kar kuch aur yeh inn dono ko khud nahi malum, sirf dono ko ek dusre ka company achhi lagne lagi hain. Sach hi kahan kisine, na umr ki seema ho yah janmon ka ho bandhan, jab pyaar kare koi toh dekhe kewal mann.

Inn teen dino me jahan Rishabh aur Soumya kareeb aarahe the, wahi Karthik aur Natasha bhi peeche nahi the, un logon ka phone conversation aur barr gaya hain, raat raat bhar yeh love birds sote nahi hain, aaj kal toh jitna saasein lete hain usse zyada aahen nikalti hain inn dono ki. Par humare RaYa ka toh scene hi ulta hain, Ram ko fursaat nahi apni office, meetings, client, presentations se aur Priya ko apne classes se, sagaai hone wali hain zara phone pe baat karo, ek aadh din kahi bahar milo, nahin, yeh inn dono se nahi hoga, yeh dono tehre 60's ke couple, waise kuchh bhi bolo, woh log the bade romantic, uss romance ki toh baat hi alag thi, khair romance baad me hota rehega pehle mulaqaat toh ho jaye.

Yehi hote hote roke ki din aa gayi, subah se dono ghar me chehel pehel barkarar hain. Idhaar Kapoor Mansion me Natasha apni dresses 6^th time trial de rahi thi, aur Soumya dekh dekh ke muskura rahi thi, toh Natasha ko aya gussa.

Natasha – tum kyun itna hass rahi ho? Ek toh mujhe tension ho rahi hain upar se tum, stop giggling

Soumya, ab usse control nahi ho raha tha toh zor se has di aur boli – Natasha yeh tumhara 6^th time hain, chhodo usse, yeh ek dum fit hain, bechare ko thoda aram toh de do

Natasha – yaar its not funny, mujhe darr lag raha hain

Soumya – don't worry yaar, sab theek hain aur aage hoga bhi.

On the other Ram who was in his office was busy with his files, he is not even bothered ke usse aaj ghar pe hona chahiye tha. He is just still anxious about chhoti's engagement baki apne engagement ke liye koi bhi tension yah feeling nahi ho rahi hain.

Udhar Sharma House me toofan macha hua hain. Shipraji aur Ayesha dono milke Priya ke peeche padi hain, usse kabhi yeh face pack toh kabhi woh cream yeh sab lagvaya jaa raha hain. Priya ko yeh saab bilkul nahi pasand lekin aaj uska ek bhi nahi chalega. Priya had to take day off from her college aur woh yehi soch rahi thi ke isse achha hota ke main college chali jati, kam se kam yeh sab se chhutkara toh milta. Toh udhar Karthik bhi apne office gaya hua hain lekin woh half day karke wapas ayega.

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