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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs


thoda sa intezaar aur, bas update ane hi wala hain, raaste me jam me phas gaya hain, ata hi hoga

Ab yhi bta dizeye k rasta kb clear hoga aur update kb milega
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intezaar ki ghadiyan khatam huin, here goes my next part, hope u all enjoy

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Both were in their own world, kahin kashmakash toh kahin aane wali zindagi ke liye aapne
aap se wada, yehi sochte sochte they both drifted into sleep.



Next day was Sunday so Ram was in his study, juggling with figures in the laptop, Vikram came and sit in front of him. Ram looked up to him and saw Vikram has a mischievous smile on his face.


Ram ' ha ha aur has le, tu aur Neha jaan bujhke yeh kiya na ta ki main akele Priya se milu


Vikram ' aur dekh uska result kitna achha aaya hain.



Ram ' tum dono na''.


In the meantime Neha also come to the study and was as ususal in her excited tone said, toh finally humara fatty shaadi ke liye haan bol hi diya.


Ram ' kya yaar tum dono bhi, pata hain kitna ajeeb lag raha tha mujhe.


Neha ' ajeeb lag raha tha ki achha lag raha tha, saying such in her ususal smiling attitude.


Vikram ' chhod na, baat yeh hain ki tune haa kar diya, finally meri yaar ki shaadi hain.


Tabhi Bansi kaka ate hain aur kehte hain Krishnaji sabko hall mein bula rahe hain.


Ram kehta hain ki who bas aa raha hain, Neha and Vikram go downstairs.


In the hall everyone were present, Krishnaji, Dadi, Rishabh and Natasha along with Vikram and Neha.


Panditji aaye hue the aur roke ki tareekh pakki ho rahi thi.


Inthe meantime Ram also came there and Panditji said within 10 days there is a shubh din, usi din roka ho sakta hain and then after 3 months the wedding.


Everyone were happy to hear that but Ram cuts in between and said ma shaadi agar tai tareek me hogi toh mere liye mushkil hoga, I have an important meeting that day and may be for 3 to 4 days I will be out of station too. Krishnaji gets worried to hear that so she decided to talk to Sudhirji and also wanted to ask Priya about her convenience. So it was decided that they are going to Sharma House
today in the evening with Panditji and there only they will decide the date.


Itni jaldi sab kuch ho raha hain Ram ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha, uske chehre pe woh dikh raha tha, toh Vikram mauka dekh ke poonch hi liya, kya baat hain yaar, tu itna confused kyun lag raha hain, darr mat teri shaadi Priya se hi hogi

Ram ' tu chhup kar yaar, ma itni jaldbaazi kyun kar rahi hain mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha hain.



Vikram ' kyun ki woh maa hain, tu chhod yeh sab, tu yeh baata ke teri Priya ke saath se pehli mulaqaat kaisi rahi?


And the two friendz started their own chit chatting.


Krishnaji called Sudhirji and informed that they are going to come in the evening with Panditji to fix the dates of roka and wedding.


In the evening Ram, Vikram, Neha along with Krishnaji and Panditji go to the Sharma House.


Sudhirji was waiting for them.


Everyone came inside and greeted each other. For the first time Ram touched the feet of Sudhirji.



Priya came out and greeted everyone and she touched the feet of Krishnaji. Priya was wearing a light violet colour salwar kameez, had no make up, but still looking very fresh and elegant. Ram was as usual wearing formals along with coat but was looking dashing.


Neha came forward and hugged Priya. Both exchanged some good notes. Suddenly she said to Priya, arre yaar humein apna kamra nahi dikhaogi, Ram is eager to see that, saying such she turned to Ram and gave a mischivieous smile.


Ram was embarrassed but he gave a glaring look to Neha as if he will burn her alive. Nevertheless, Neha will always be Neha so Shipraji asked Priya to take them to her room, so Neha, Vikram, Ram came to Priya's room.


The room was typical a girl room, it has everything in it but it is not very clean, Priya's books and copies were scattered on the reading table, her laptop was on the bed, one of her dress was hanging from the wardrobe's nob, the book shelf has piles of books on them not properly placed.


Neha who was watching this, was smiling at her heart that RaYa Jodi will be splendid, Ram is a cleanliness freak, he can't tolerate anything misplaced.


Priya was actually embarrassed as she wasn't expecting them to come in her room, the thing is that jab who padai karti hain yah phir notes wagera banati hain toh sab book aur sara cheez uska scattered rehta hain, toh jaldi jaldi mein woh theek nahi kar payee. Ab jo hain so hain.

Neha ' arre wah Priya tumhare balcony se toh samne ka view bohot achha dikhta hain.


Saying such both Vikram and Neha come to the balcony and was watching the view. In the meantime Ram who was standing in the middle of the room was thinking yeh kaisi ladki se pala parnewala hain mera, aur udhar Priya soch rahi thi ke kya soch rahe honge yeh log specially Mr. Kapoor mere bare mein. Suddenly Neha and
Vikram both came to the room and said Vikram, chalo hum log bahar jaate hain, inn logo ko thoda privacy dete hain.


Ram aur Priya kuch bole uske pehle hi yeh log bahar chale jaate hain, ab yeh dono ko phir se awkward feel karna shuru ho gaya, inn dono ka problem yeh hain ki yeh dono kahan se shuru kare yeh samajh nahin pate.

But this time again Ram started and asked

Ram ' are u going to bring all these books with you.hain aur kehti hain of course, yeh saare mere hain toh main leke aaungi.


Priya ko Ram ki facial expressions dekh ke bada mazaa aa raha tha, toh tabhi Ayesha ayi bulane unn dono ko.


Both came out. Krishnaji, Ram aur Priya dono ko dekh ke kaha beta hum roke ki date pakki kar rahe hain, agle 10 din me hain koi problem toh nahi hain na?


Priya nodded in negative so as Ram.



Then Krishnaji said to Panditji ab aap shaadi ki tareekh bhi final kar dijiye, toh Panditji ne do tareek batayi, sab ko pehla wala tareek suit kiya jo tha der mahine baad ka, so finally shadi pakki huin. Everyone were happy and was congratulating Ram, Priya and Karthik. Lekin mushkil hua ki agar do shaadi ek hi din me hain aur ek hi mahurat pe toh kaise hoga yeh, ab iske baad wala date
bohot der ho jayegi aur woh fit bhi nahi hoga. Upar se Sudhir aur Shipraji soch rahe the ke do do shaadiyan kaise samhalenge woh log, lekin Priya ke saasural walon ke samne kuch bol bhi nahi paa rahe the. Tabhi Krishnaji boli


Krishna ' agar aap logon koi aitraaz na ho toh RaYa ki shaadi wahi kar sakte hain jahan Natasha ki shaadi hogi. Woh beeji ko Natasha ki shaadi humari purani kothi yani Ram ke dadaji ka jo ghar hain wahin se karne ka mann hain toh agar aap logon koi problem na ho toh main chahoonga mere bete ki shaadi bhi wahi pe ho.


Sudhir & Shipraji were really touched by hearing this.


Shipra ' samdhan ji yeh kaise ho sakta hain hum log kaise wahan se shaadi kar sakte hain woh humari beti ka honewala saasural hain, hum kahin aur manage kar lenge.


Krishna ' ab aap ki beti humari bahu banne jaa rahi hain, toh usse bhi to haq hain apna saasural dekhne ka. Ram ke dadaji jab aye the yahan par tab unhone yeh banaya tha, usi ghar pe Ram ka janam bhi hua tha, uska bachpan waha beeta, aur waise bhi humare ghar ki yeh pehli shaadi hain toh beeji bhi yehi chahti hain, aap
log plz na mat boliye''..main janti hoon Shipraji aap log kya soch rahe hain, beti ki saasural hain, kaise hoga yeh sab, log kya kahenge, lekin yeh bhi toh sochiye shaadi wala ghar hain aur upar se do do shaadi ek hi din me, milke kam karenge toh zimmedari bhi baant jayegi aur samay par sab ho bhi jayega, aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye, sab theek ho jayega.


Sudhirji ' samdhanji meri beti bohot lucky hain jise aap jaise log milenge usse.


Krishna ' nahi samdhiji, hum lucky hain jisse Priya jaisi bahu pane ka mauka mil raha hain, meri ek beti jaa rahi hain lekin dusri aa rahi hain, mujhe bohot khushi hain ki Priya mere ghar ki bahu bann ke aa rahi hain.


Priya who was standing there quietly was listening to this aur apne naam ki tarah aankhen jhukaye huye sharmati jaa rahi thi.


Lekin Ram ko ajeeb lag raha tha, pura mahol uske liye kaafi filmy lag raha hain.


Toh finally yeh tay hua ki shaadi Lalaji ki kothi se hi hogi aur ussi din hogi, pehle Natasha aur Karthik ka hoga aur phir Ram aur Priya ka, aur jitney bhi saare functions hain sab Lalaji ki kothi me hi hogi isi liye shaadi se saat din pehle sab waha shift honge.


Iss khushi mein sabka mooh meetha banta tha toh sabne kiya, Ram haath me mithai leke soong ne hi wala tha ke achanak uski nazar Priya par pari aur dekha Priya usse dekh rahi hain, toh woh phat se khaa liya, udhar Priya ko yeh dekh ke bada mazaa aya, woh kuch boli nahi par ek halki si muskurahat uske hothon pe khil gayi.


Ab shaadi ki baat toh fix ho gaya baki raha roke ki baat, toh woh ceremony toh hoga Kapoor Mansion pe, aur yeh bhi dono ek saath hi hoga.

Sab finalise ho jaane ke baad Kapoors and Shergills leave and Sharmas bid them good bye.


Ab ghar me agar do do shaadiyan ho toh kaam ka pressure automatically bar jata hain, upar se ghar ki badi beti ki shaadi ho toh sone pe suhaaga, itne dino ke baad Priya ka ghar basne jaa raha hain, ma baap ka sabse bada armaan hain ke woh apne gudiya ki shaadi dhoom dhaam ke saath baaje gaaje saath kare, aur ab
jake who sapna inn logon ka pura honewala hain, yeh log kabhi soch bhi nahi sakte the ke Priya ke liye RAM KAPOOR ka rishta ayega par aisa hi hua aur aaj Krishnaji se baat karke ek aur bojh utar gaya, unhe yakeen ho gaya ki Priya ke liye yeh sabse sahi hain, Krishnaji ne saari mushkilen asan kar di.


Udhar KM me sab bohot khush hain, ghar ki bade bte ki shaadi hain, THE RAM KAPOOR ki shaadi hain toh baat toh badi hogi hi na.>

Dadi ' Krishna yeh tune bada achha kiya jo tu Sudhirji ko bola ki Priya ki shaadi bhi wahi se ho. Do do shaadiyaan hogi, upar se beti ki vidaai bhi, kaise kar payenge woh log itna, achha hua jo humare waha se hoga, kam se kam unn logon thoda sa toh rahat milega.

Krishna ' haan beeji yehi soch ke main iss baat ko chhedi wahan pe, aur beeji Priya ka grihapravesh toh waha hi hoga na pehle, toh achha hi hoga.


Dadi ' bas toh ab sab jud jao shaadi ki kaamo me, 10 din baad roka hain, kaam bohot hain, Neha tu ek kam kar tu aur Vikram, Golu ke saath ja kar ring pasand kar le.


Neha ' dadi kya main Priya ko bula loon aakhir ring toh usse hi pehen na hain toh'..


Dadi ' yeh badiya rahega, oye Golu, tu sunn meri baat, meri bahu ke liye ek accha sa ring choose karna


Ram ' dadi yeh sab mujhse nahi hoga, Neha hain na, who kar legi


Dadi ' maine keh diya toh bas keh diya, turning to Neha, main kuch sunna nahin chahti, tum log jaoge aur pasand karoge, theek hain


Neha ko toh sirf bahana chahiye Ram aur Priya ko paas lane ka aur us me usse Dadi ka saath mil jata hain, toh she said, haan dadi aap fikar mat kijiye, fatty ko main le ke jaungi, kyun Vikram and winks to him.


Ram on the other hand giving glaring looks to Neha.


Toh next day plan aisa banta hain ki Neha called Priya and asked her to come with them to choose the ring. Priya kehti hain ke usse thoda der ho jayega kyun ki she has to take extra classes, toh final yeh hua ke everyone are going to meet at 7 in the evening in the jewellery store. Udhar Ram ko yeh sab pasand nahi aa raha hain par kuch keh nahi sakta kyun ki ek toh dadi ka order hain aur dusra uske do pagal atrange dost usse chhodnewale hain nahi. So he gave up and agreed.


Neha go to Priya's college and they both reach the store by 6:30. Instead of waiting for them in the store both decided to have a cup of coffee so they go to the nearby CCD. Woh dono do cup coffee leke baith ti hain. Aaj Priya ne jeans aur kurti pehni hain, wohi halka sa kohl tha uski aankhon me aur lips par gloss tha, hair ek clip se bandha tha aur jaise Priya rakhti hain waise hi tha, and
was wearing watch in her left hand. She was looking a bit tired but as usual looking very simple and pretty. On the other Neha was wearing short kurti with patiala and was as usual in her form. Peechle kuch dino me inn dono me kafi achhi dosti ho gayi hain, Priya basically bohot batuni hain, jo log usse jante hain woh yehi kahenge, actually adat bhi hain, associate professor jo thehri,
par anjaano ke samne thoda chhup ho jati hain par jab Neha uss din ghar pe aayi aur usse baatein ki usse bilkul anjaan nahi lagi woh, uske baton se ek apnapan jhalak raha tha aur Neha ko bhi Priya bohot pasand ayi, waise usse toh baton ka keera kata hua hain already toh uska kuch honewala hain nahi par uske palle par
ke Priya bhi aur batuni ho jaa rahi hain, asal baat yeh hain ke dono ek dusre ke company me kafi comfortable hain aur enjoy karte hain.

Neha ' arre Priya tumne bataya nahi, fatty se tumhari pehli mulaqat kaisi rahi.


Priya ' fatty?


Neha ' ha fatty, ohhh! Actually main Ram ko pyaar se fatty bulati hoon, u know yeh naam usse kaafi suit karti hain.


Priya muskura deti hain aur kehti hain, haan bilkul.


Neha ' toh batayo


Priya ' thoda sa sharmake boli achha tha


Neha ' kitna achha tha?


Priya looking to Neha and understand that she is teasing her.


Neha ' arre tum toh abhi se sharmane lagi


Priya ' chhodo na yeh sab


And they started their usual chit chatting, after some time Neha's phone rang. It was Vikram other side. Both Ram and Vikram have come and they are waiting in the showroom.


So Neha and Priya also finished their coffee and go to the showroom.


guys please let me know whether u all are liking this track or not, I know I am stretching it a bit coz I want it like this way, ab ek dum achanak se shaadi kar dungi toh kaise hoga, par I promise shaadi bhi bohot maze me hoga...and one more thing please do comment, and suggestions are also welcome and if u like it then please hit the "LIKE" button.

NB: I want to apologize for my Hindi, gender me thoda sa problem aap logon ko padne me milega, uske liye sorry and don't hesitate to rectify that, I will be more than glad to do that


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Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
wowww

yaar u r right shaadi is not done in hurry u r taking it beautifully fully enjoying the update.. update now.. raya and shaadiii wowww 😳

continue soon
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys I have given the index over here so from now on wards u ppl will not have any problem
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for being so late to comment.. Mindblowing and heart wining update... Jinee u rocks... I am liking ur ff more bcoz its fresh and very much hatke from the actual balh track... Ram and priya ke dil ke ehsaas itni acchi tarah discribe kiya hai that it feels that raya themselves are writting it... Beautiful, update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
its so beautiful dear i loved it
thank u for pm
i enjoyed it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
beautiful beautiful beautiful
wow so smooth flowing
awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update.
when Ram saw her room , u reminds me of all that scene in BAlH. I loved that scene.
ur FF is going very smoothly. want more raya scenes
continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Very beautifull update
u re not draging it story is moving very smoothly so dont worry nd that lalaji ki khoti mein shaadi wala idea is very nice 👏
Continue soon nd thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update didi👏👏 Keep it up 👍🏼👍🏼...😊...reminded me of BALH Season 1 episodes😃...loved it every bit...sorry for late commenting...😳😳

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