RaYa - OS - my love, my life updated page 8

Eram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

they both r restless but ram is golu ka golu hai

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gupta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey, thanx for the PM 😊and it is a treat to read ur FF, specially because it is taken from season 1, raya magic is gone with season 2.

And u have stopped at the wrong time, please continue soon, looking forward to see Priya's reaction or rather outburst😆

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sss283

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

smashing yaar...

pls pls pls continue karo na jaldi

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Sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Tks for PM. Please update soon. You write very well.

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Raya_some

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

wow wow wow just one word wow its awesome pls update soon beautifully updated both the times... 😊 amazing

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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First of all thank u soo much for starting a ss on a fresh note. Part 1 and 2 both were fantastic and outstanding.. Ram ka chilana, priya ka chinta karna, ram ko pyaar ka ehsaas hona, sorry bolna yeh sab khubsurat pal fir jike aur sayad bohat behtar tarike se jike feeling soo happy.. Ur ss is far better than season 1 and balhens.. U write so so well, itna time kyu lagaya apna khudka story start karne main..? Anyways better late than never.. Eagerly waiting for the next, hope u will update it daily or a tleast on every 2nd day..

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Mani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

i am loving the way u write very detailed in expressing too good

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak
<font size="4">Nicely written 👏...this is good even than Season 1's Lohri 😃...thanks for the PM😳 and keep rocking...👍🏼👍🏼</font>

am obliged that u love the Lohri scene, I tried to put up in my own way, all of your comments are helping me write better and encouraging too, next update will be very soon

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
why ending. u have just started the story. we all r enjoying
so please continue

when I started to write I wasn't expecting it will turn to be like this, that's why I said in the beginning that it is neither OS nor SS, and it is definitely not FF, and I also mentioned that it will be in three parts so the last part is on the way, btw thanks for liking, am elated with all the responses.

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: bpatil3
You are brilliant...
keep going...
wht i like the most is 'you write so much of hindi dialogues' and that really sounds good...

let me share a secret with u, my mother tongue is not Hindi, but I somehow manage to speak, read and write Hindi, thanks to serials and my school frnds, so please if u find any wrong words specially the gender one don't hesitate to correct that, and thank u for liking my way of writing

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