RaYa - OS - my love, my life updated page 8 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Very nice ff..ple continue


am glad that u liked it but this was an OS, my first attempt to write something with RaYa, and it had 3 parts and its completed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ufff Didi Kya Kahu mae iss OS k baare m.. Haaaye laga hi Nahi apka 1st attempt hain.. Laga ki jaise season 1 live dekh rahi hun... OMG..😳 loved evrybit ot it Jinee... woaaahhuuu Ram ka chillana, gussa karna, priya ka hurt hona, sbse apni hurtness chupana, fir golu ko pyaar ka ehsaas hona, priya ko manana nd finally dere confession.. waaahhh u written it sooo well ne beautifully... Love u for d OS didi.. muaaahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
this was ur first part but so beautifully written
what happened btw raya
why there is some tension btw them
moving to next part
thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
part 2

cute updt dear
so ram is angry but dont know the reason
priya loves ram and ram loves priya
just waiting for their confession
thanks for pm
moving to next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
awesome updt dear
so simple but beautifully writteen
raya confessed their love and became man and wife
so beautiful
thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Birdy91

Ufff Didi Kya Kahu mae iss OS k baare m.. Haaaye laga hi Nahi apka 1st attempt hain.. Laga ki jaise season 1 live dekh rahi hun... OMG..😳 loved evrybit ot it Jinee... woaaahhuuu Ram ka chillana, gussa karna, priya ka hurt hona, sbse apni hurtness chupana, fir golu ko pyaar ka ehsaas hona, priya ko manana nd finally dere confession.. waaahhh u written it sooo well ne beautifully... Love u for d OS didi.. muaaahhh



thanks for liking the OS, I just tried to show my love towards RaYa and this was the first step towards that process am really glad that u liked it, THANK YOU😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

awesome updt dear
so simple but beautifully writteen
raya confessed their love and became man and wife
so beautiful
thanks for pm



thank you for liking this OS, am really humbled, pleasure is all mine

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