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Evan

@-evan-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Oye Neha, y dis abrupt halt ❓ kiu kabab mei haddi ban rahi ho? 😆 😔
Plz dear update asap, and yes, a lengthy one this time - pretty please... I can't wait any longer to read Ram's intentions 😉 🤣

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Mani

@Mani-RK

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

that was so sensuous neha update soon na

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Lesha

@nehaprasad1994

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Im sorry everyone! Im really angry after yesterdays episode.. So heres my twist..

Continued..

Ram drags her to the hall.. Shes hurt.. She puls her hand away from his..

Priya: stop it Mr. Kapoor! Mein koi cheez nahi hu.. Holding her arm.. Chup chaap baitiye.. Baath karni thi na.. Baat karenge.. She fumes and walks to her room and locks it..

Ram stands rooted.. He is angry.. He sits with rage in his eyes.. Waiting..thinking.. Had hai.. How can she just walk out on me..

Priya comes neatly dressed in a white kurtha and leggins..her hair let loose..

The door bell rings.. She walks to the door.. She sees soumya and rishab.. Pihu runs and hugs her knees..

Priya looks worried.. She puts her hands on pihus head.. Kya hua baccha.. She looks at soumya for an answer..

Soumya not able to see ram.. bhabi aaj woh bohot ro rahi thi.. Aur bed wet kardiya.. Ayesha ne bohot chillaya.. So change karwaake aapke paas leaayi..

Priya: kya.. Calms down.. Ok.. And signals her that she waill call her in the morning..

They leave and she closes the door.. And lifts pihus head..

Kya hua pihu.. Chalo.. Andar chalthe hai..

Pihu holds her hand tightly.. She stammers ma..mama.. Muj.. Mujhe nahi jaana waha..

Priya looks at pihu.. Giving a fake smile.. Mumma hai na aapke paas.. She takes pihu to the bed.. Pihu goes and slips in.. Priya slips beside her..

Kya hua pihu.. Mumma ko batao..

Pihu: woh.. She stammers and tells her how ayesha scolded her when she went to take water..

Priya has tears in her eyes.. She is unable to see her daughter stammer.. She hugs her tight and a tear escapes her eyes.. Ram watches all this and feels upset and helpless..

Priya tells pihu.. Bacche rote nahi hai.. Mumma hai na aapke paas.. Mumma sab teek kardegi..

Pihu feels safe and cries her heart out..

Priya brushes her fingers through her hair.. Pihu feels better..

Pihu in a soft voice.. Not stammering now..

Mumma mujhe papa ke ghar nahi rehena hai.. Mujhe dubai jaana hai..

Priya: haan pihu.. Hum dubai jaayenge..

Pihu in a chirpy mode: sacchi mumma.. Mein cady didi rajat uncle daijaa aur mumma..

Priya nods.. Lekin pihu.. Hum kuch dino baad jaayenge tik hai?

Pihu: haan mumma..

Priya: abhi tum so jao.. Pihu cuddles to priya and dozzes off as priya strokes her hands on her head..

Meanwhile ayesha calls Ram..

Hes phone is charging.. He picks up..

She starts her (carwala dialougues) how much she is trying but.. Blah blah..

Ram says its ok and keeps the phone..

Priya slowly gets off and tucks her in.. She turns off the light and walks to the door.. Priya closes the dor behind..

Priya is extremely angry with Ram.. She just keeps quite.. She goes to the kitchen and starts making coffee..

Ram comes to her.. He is angry.. Tum samajhthi kya ho apne aap ko..? How could you tell...

Priya: shh.. Pihu sorahi hai.. Aap zara dheere bolenge?

Ram: speaking low but in anger.. Dubai.. Waapis dubai jaarahi ho?

Priya hands him a cup of tea.. And sips hers..

Ram fumes..

Priya: yeh peelijiye aur sojaayiye.. I will watch for a week.. Agar Pihu adjust nahi karpaayi aapke saath.. And just turns away..

Ram: toh kya karlogi.. Meri beti hai woh.. ! Mera bhi haq hai uspar..

Priya: haq.. Just stop it Mr. Kapoor.. Kis haq ke baare mein baath karrahe hai? Usko taqleef pohonchaane ki haq?

Ram : tumhe kya lagtha hai? Mein uski khayal nahi rakhtha?

Priya: haan.. Mujhe yehi lagtha hai.. If you had taken care of her she wouldnt have wet her bed.. And stammering Mr. kapoor.. Aapko pata bhi hai ki iski nateeja kya hosaktha hai?

Ram: tum choti si baat ki itni..

Priya: choti si baat? Ayesha ki behavior..

Ram: ek min tum usko kyu beech mein laarahi ho? Woh bichaari adjust karna charahi hai.. Pihu ke paas aane ki.. Aur tum usse..

Priya: aap ithna defesive kyu horahe hai? Mein toh sirf..

Ram: kya.. Kya prove karna chahthi ho tum.. Aur yeh dubai? Tum meri beti ko mujse alag nahi karsakthi.. Woh meri beti hai..

Priya: Enough! Bohot sunli aapki bakwaas! Humesha aapka pyar, aapki gussa, aapki haq, aapki beti.. Stop it..

Ram: kyu..? Why should I.. Mein apni beti ko janna chahtha hu.. Lekin humesha tum ek tanedaar ki tarah yeh sahi hai yeh galat hai karke interfear kardeti ho.. Tum Pihu ki bhalaayi chahthi ho toh Back off!

Priya: Back off? She gives a sarcastic grin.. Mr. kapoor mein abhi tak chup thi.. Bas.. Bohot hogaya.. Ab meri beti meri paas rahegi..

Ram grips her hand.. Tum aisa kuch nahi karogi!

Priya: pulls her hand off.. Dont touch me! Mein pihu joh chahthi hai.. Wahi karungi.. Kal mein TC lerahi hu..

Ram is shocked! He is furious: Tum abhi bhi meri biwi ho.. Toh tum legally nahi jaasakthi..

Priya: kya biwi? Kaunsi biwi? Just leave..

Ram: bohot hogaya.. Mein tumhe kahin nahi jaane dunga.. And walks to the door..

He opens it.. And leaves closing the door behind him..

Priya is furious.. Thinks.. Enough.. Bohot hogaya.. Aur ayesha.. Tune aaj bohot badi galthi kardi.. Mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi..

She goes and slips into the bed beside pihu..

To be continued..

Hope you all liked it! One more comming up in a few hours..

Love,

Lesha.

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Mani

@Mani-RK

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

i wud hav been happy if we had raya confrontation like this yest but wat to do cv's want drama n suffering of pihu

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Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

waiting next one 😃 y u twist this i dont like it balh kaffi nahi hai hum ka pakkne ke liye😉😃

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sreev12

@sreev12

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

thnx lesha!
lagta hai kal ki epi ki affect OS pe achese hua ... haha

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Mani

@Mani-RK

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

arey yaar atleast u make us happy shw tho gaya

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Lesha

@nehaprasad1994

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Continued..

Ram is down sitting in his car below her apartment..

He feels bad.. He thinks to himself.. Priya ki ek galathi ne sab kuch cheen liya mujhse.. He goes back to the apart ment.. And rings the bell..

Priya opens the door.. Its dark inside..

Priya: seems to have calmed down..aap.. Itni der..? Come in..

Ram: fuming at her as she locks the door..tumhaari ek galathi ki wajah se yeh sab aaj horaha hai!

Priya: hann Mr. Kapoor.. Meine ek galathi ki.. Ek badi galathi.. Aur aap? Aapne koi galathi nahi ki..

Jab Apeksha aapko sach batana chahthi thi..Apni maa par barosa nahi kiya.. Unko sirf nafrat kiya..

Jab meine aapko siddhant ki baarein mein bataaya.. Aapne ulta mujpar chillaya.. Aur gussa dikhaaya..

Jab aapki choti ne galathi ki.. Aapne mere bhai ko jail bhejdi.. Aur gussa dikhaaya..

Jab mein aapko Nihaarika ke baare mein batana chaaha.. Toh aap sunna nahi chahthe the..

Aapki bhai ki galathi wajah se mein jail gayi.. Aur yeh jis ayesha ko defend karrahe hai na.. Uski wajah se mujhe 14 saal ki saza sunaadi gayi..

Aur aapki balaayi ke liye mein sab kuch chodke chaligayi.. Aur jab waapis aayi toh phir gussa kiya..

Aapne bilkul koi galathi nahi ki..

Her eyes were moist.. His eyes brimming.. He just stood rooted.. He had made mistake.. Infact blunders and every single time she had forgiven him.. With no complaints.. Tears trickled down his cheeks.. Priya walked to him and wiped his tears..

Ram huged her tight.. Sobbing.. Im so sorry Priya.. Meine tumhaare saath sirf galat kiya.. Priya couldnt see him like this.. Her heart hurt.. She pats his back.. Lekin aapne pyaar bhi bohot kiya..

Ram still sobbing.. Pyar toh tumne kiya hai.. Im so sorry..

Priya lets him be.. Stroking his hair.. Bas Ram.. Ab sab tik hojaayega..

Priya takes Ram to the couch..

Ram looks at Priya who sits beside him.. Ab mein tum joh kahogi woh karunga..

Priya: Ram.. Pihu ko yaha rehene dijiye.. Aap har din jitna waqt bitaana chahthe hai.. Bita sakthe hai.. Shayad.. Ayesha ko samajnahi paarahi hai Pihu..

Ram: Lekin hum.. ? Looking at her longingly..

Priya looks away.. Ram Ayesha ko ek mauka dijiye.. Shayad.. Woh..

Ram is furious again: ( hehe yeh janaab kabhi nahi badlenge.. Its ok.. ;) ) Ram! Nahi.. Mujhe tumhaare saath rehena hai..!

Priya looks at him.. At his childish demand.. Ram lekin aapki shaadi hogayi hai.. Aur woh aapki patni hai..

Ram sliding closer to her.. Nahi! Kuch shadi nahi hui.. Na paper mein na mandir mein..

Priya is shocked.. She just looks at him calm.. Lekin duniya keliye toh.. And looks away..

Ram in a naughty mood.. Haan.. Lekin agar woh duniya ke samne hai.. Toh tum duniya se anjaan hosakthi ho na..

Priya looks at him.. Matlab..

Ram holds her arms and digs his head into the crook of her neck and places a soft kis.. This sends shivers in her body.. He lifts his head and whispers in her ear.. Tum meri biwi ho.. Aur koi joh bhi soche hume kya.. Hume toh sirf ek dusre se matlab hai.. And kisses her ear lobe..

She smirks.. Thinking.. Aapne mujhe itna tadpaaya.. Ab mein aapko dikhaathi hu.. Gussa aatha hai na bohot..

She moves her hand on his back seductively.. It sends shockwaves in his body.. She digs her left hand in his hair and pulls his head back..

Priya speaking seductively: Oh really.. Ram is lost.. In her beautiful eyes.. She moves her lips close to his.. Hisnhands move on her back.. She arches.. She brushes her lips against his.. The touch of Her soft lips drives him to another world.. Rams lips are dry.. He parts.. He is breathing hard.. He thirsts for her lips.. She moves close to his lips again.. He can feel her breath of his lips.. He swallows dry..

Priya smirks: i told you.. Dont touch me..

Ram looks at her as she backs off.. He pulls her closer.. Nahi..

Priya pulling his head back.. Huskily..kyu aapne hi toh kaha.. Back off.. !

Ram lets her go.. Are bas karo yaar.. Kitna sorry bolu..

Lets go of him and gets up and walks away..she turns back.. Maafi toh maangli.. Ab yeh aapki punishment hai..

Ram: oh.. Ok.. Lekin kum se kum mein tere paas toh sosaktha hu na..

Priya: haan.. Aap aayiye..

Ram follows her.. Pihu is sleeping on one edge.. Priya slips close to her and leaves some space..

Ram slides in.. There is not much space. So he sleeps on his side.. Close to priya.. Priyas back facing him.. Hayye..

Ram in a low voice.. Priya todi move karo na.. Priya move a litlle.. She takes rams hand and puts iton her waist making his palm rest on pihu..

Ram cuddles closer and smiles.. They doze off to sleep happily..

To be continued..