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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur ff is good...can u pls pm me whenevr u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...continue soon


xoxo Priyanka <3
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It would be nice if u can just PM me whenever u update the FF, just a request
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nice 1 dear.. continue soon .. cn u plz pm me 4 nxt update???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:2

Thanks for ur overwhelming response. It means a lot to me.Do encourage me in future also...


Here is the next update:-

first Priya reaches hospital...

Nurse:Dr.priya mrs.neha shergil ki halat bahut kharab hoti ja rhi h .Internal bleeding ruk hi nhi rahi h.unka bp bhi fluctuate kr raha h or blood sugar level bhi high h.

Priya:itna sb kuch ho gaya or ap mujhe ab bta rhe h.

Nurse:Dr wo actually

Priya:no more excuses please.come with me

they entersin ICU. Priya gives medication to neha and her condition starts to recover

Priya:sister,keep checking her bp and sugar level in every 2hours and keep me updating...

they came out of the ICU.vikram is standing outside

Vik:Dr wt's abt my wife

Priya:don'tworry mr shergil .condition of ur wife is under control.She is out of danger.we keep her in obsevation for 24 hrs...

Vik:kya m mil sakta hu

priya:abhi wo heavy sedation ki wjh se so rhi h u can go n see her but dont disturb her..

vik:k thanks dr

priya :its my duty

priya leaves for her cabin

on other hand eam reaches hospital and create a great panic

ram:vikram kya hua kaise h neha ab.or ye sb achank

vik:wo neha zid krke drive kr eahi thi and meet with an accident.

ram :dr ne kya kha

vik :she is out of danger now but 24 hrs observation me rakhna pdega

ram:everything would be fine vikram.keep faith in god or dr ne kha na she is out of danger

vik:ha yr u r right

ram:where is dr i would like to meet her

vik:ha wo apne cabin me gai h

priya in her cabin shouting at nurse when ram reaches there and listen to everything

priya:wt the hell u people r triying 2do where r the interns.ap logo ne mazak samjha hua h

intern:sorry for reporting late.mam.but final yr is waiting for u in lecture theater they hv there lecture today

priya:i m just back after taking lecture u people go to ur postings right nowand meet me at 1'o"clock in confrence hall .there r some cases 2be disscused leave now

ram outside the cabin:yaar kitni nkchadi dr h .pta nhi neha ko kaise treat kr rahi hogi .mujhe vik se baat krni hogi.

ram leaves wihout meeting priya

priya comes out and leave for lecture

ram 2vik

ram :pta nhi kaisi dr h kitna chilla rhi thi .na jane pts se kaise deal krti hogi .vik hume neha ko yha se khi or shift krna chahiye

vik : nhi yr she is very kind tujhe kuch galatfhmi hui hogi

ram:acha jo mane apne kano se suna wo galat h.

vik:nhi nhi mane esa kb kha

ram:ek tho yha ye dr or wha choti

vik :choti kya hua nuts ko

ram :wo kisi ldke se pyar krti h

vik:are prob kya h ja baat kr usse

ram :ha maa bhi yhi chahti h.phle neha theek ho gaye phir mil lunga usse.

vik:nhi eam asi baato me jada intzar krna thik nhi h tu abhi mil aa

am:thik h pr agar koi prob ho tho phone krna or us dr ke saath neha ko akele mt chodna

vik:ha ha thik h

ram leaves hospital and decide to meet kartik

and calls natasha

ram:choti main kartik se abhi milna chahta hu

nuts:bhai wo tho aj ghar pr hoga

ram:tu mujhe address de m mil kr ata hu

nuts:bhai ap kartik k ghar jayege

ram :ha kyu koi problem h

nuts:nhi

nuts give addrwss to ram then ram disconnect thee phone and calls viks

ram :yaar tu janta h kartik ek 2BHK appartment me rhta h

vik: tho kya hua tu mil tho le

ram:m ek appartment m kase jaa skta hu

vik:thik h nuts se mna kr de

ram:nhi yr jana tho pdega uske ghar

vik : so best of luck

eam leaves for kartik's appartment and reaches to the location given by nuts

ram thinks:::-lo beta ram paunch gye

he walk out of the car and starts walking inside the building

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ram ask watchman

ram:yeh mr sudhir sharma ka flat

watchman:fourth floor flat no 402 (i dont know the no so giving this)

ram :thanks

ram walk towards lift

watchman :sir lift kharab h

ram:wt

watchman :apko stairs se jana pdega

ram :shit

chal beta ram he starts climbing stairs and start singing

"Bade achhe lgte hain

yeh dharti yeh ndiya yeh raina or .or tum"

(imagine eam singing...lol...)

every one gather outside there flat ram reaches 4th floor and stop singing

everyine stairs at ram

ram:kya hua kbhi gana nhi suna kya

nebhours ignoring rams quesrion and atarts leaving

ram :Kya azeeb log h uff ram beta kha fas gaya

chal beta ab behan k liye ye bhi sahi

ram rings the door bell of sharma house no one is there except kartik

kartik opens the door

kartik:yes

ram :hello I'm Ram kapoor brother of Natasha kapoor.r u kartik sharma

kartik:oh yes sir aayeyeh -2

ram came inside

kartik:sir please hv ur seat

ram :sure,b.t.w. hw r u

kartik:jusr fine

ram:tum tho jante hi ho main yaha kyu aya hu

kartik: sir nuts ki koi galti nhi h sb meri wjh se hi hua h

ram:its k or wse bhi choti ne mujhe sb kych bta diya h

kartiksir m bhi sbko btana chahta tha pr di ka achnk se kam aa gaya tho wo jaldi nikl gyi or is wqt ghar m koi nhi h main jad hi sbse baat kr lunga

ram :main tha baat krne hi aya hu

kartik:if u dont mind m apni family ko khud btana chahta hu

ram:no not at all main chalta hu

kartik: sir chai coffee

ram :nhi nhi phir kabhi .nice ti meet u tk care

ram leaves and again reaches hospital

in kapoor mansion

nuts roaming here and there thinking bhai kartik se milne gye hai kta hua hoga wha pr


in hospital ram thinking itna bhi bura nhi h kartik.lets see

then vik comes out of neha's cabin

ram :vik kaisi h neha

vik:thik h or dr's kh rhe h she is recovering fastor tu kartik se milne gaya tha na kya hua

ram :kuch nhi wo chahta h phle wo apne gharwalo se baat kre

vik:tho thik ha na

ram :kya thik h uski asi halat thi or wo akela gjar pr tha kisi bhi family member ko koi fark hi nhi pdta

vik:esa nhi h bas tu apni family ko.lekr overprotective h

ram : vikram

vik:k fine

ram :wi hitler aye

vik:kon

ram:doctor

vik :wo koi lecture le ehi h aa jayegi

ram:wo itni casual kaise ho skti h main abhi dekhta hu

vik:ram sun tho

but ram dont listen and leave 2meet priya ...



precap:::::::::::Kya milege ram or priya

Kya hogi koi tkrar ya

hogi pyar bhari baat



Do comment...

and stay tunned...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice...
ram did not meet priya still
jaldi milwa bhi do...dono ko😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pehli nazar me toh pyaar hone se raha, takrar hi hongi, aur hono bhi chahiye, jab tak takrar na ho, pyaar ka mazaa nahi ata, gud update, but in next update do make RaYa come face to face, continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update
jaldi milao in dono ko😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for updating late actually bussy in writing an os on raya which is also cming 2dayn hope u like that .now cming 2the next part...

Part:3

priya is taking leture...

just then ram enters the room without permission n again saw priya shouting on the entire class...

ram:How can u behave so casually.My friend is in icu n u r wasting ur time by shouting on others.

priya:xcuse me,who give u the permission to enter in the class.

ram:no one has to give the permission to do aything.I m ram kapoor people take permission from me.is that clear.

priya: its nt ur office Mr kapoor.itsa hospital nu hv2behave accordingly.I don't know ap jaise log yaha ate hi kyu h u better go n meet ur friend jitna samaye yaha kharab kr rhe h atleast meet her.

ram :ab ap mujhe btayegi ki mujhe kya krna chahiye kya nhi.

priya:i m a dr its my work to guide people

ram make ugly faces n leave

priya ralk to the class

priya:next time do read n come otherwise i m nt going 2take ur lectures...

ram ouside the room

ram:pa nhi kisne dr bnaya h kitni arrogant h.god please help her husband pta nhi kaise jhelta hoga ise

then ram goes to meet neha

ram:darling kaisi h . by the way kisne kaha tha drive krne ko.tu tho janti h na ek tum dono hi tho ho mere dost or tum bhi ye sb

neha:fatty...saas tho le lo or kitna datoge ab ho gai galti baba i m sorry

ram:tu na waise

just then priya entersn converse normally

priya:hi mrs shergill,kaisa lg raha h

neha:feeling better doctor

priya:i must say u r very strong

neha is abt to talk bt ram interrupts

ram:ab baate hi krogi ya isw check bhi krogi

priya:oh tho abhi bhi ap yhi h

ram:ap ko nhi lagta ki ap mere kaam m dkhal de rhe h.

ram:dakhal nhi de raha hu apko apka kaam yaad dila raha hu

priya:oh thanks for reminding me .if u dont mind mujhe pts se kuch baat krni h ..can u please wait outside

ram:nhi m nhi jaunga .pta nhi piche se kya kr de .jo bhi baat krni h mere saamne kro

neha:ram please

ram :esi kya baat h is she alright.

priya :ap bahar jayege tho hum check krege..

ram left the room

priya:uff kya antique piece h.my god..

neha:oh sorry dr wo actually thoda overprotective h

priya:koi baat nhi

neha:wt's the matter dr is anything serious

priya:nothing serious just we hv 2 give u an injection that's it. as it pains a lot so we usually give it on thighs..that's why i ask ur friend 2wait outside

neha:oh no problem

priya give inj. to neha n leaves

eam also leaves for office

2days pass neha got discharged n normal life began to start for ram n priya...

one day in sharma house everybody on dining

kartik : mujhe ap logo se kuch baat krni h

sudhir:papa, i lv a girl

ayesha:we know that she is a girl ab boy tho hoga nhi

priya:ayesha...

ayesha :oh sorry...

priya:kon h ,kha rti h ,naam kya h uska

kartik:di wo ek fashion designer h or yhi mumbai me rhti h

shipra:naam bhi tho hoga kuch

kartik:haa... natasha..

sudhir:ok tho family ko bula le.

kartik calls nutz n inform abt the plan

in km

nutz:bhai kartik ka call aya tha. his familt wants 2meet u all

ram: i will talk 2them

ram call sharma house n finalize the meeting

next day evening in sharma house priya was unaware of ram's arival

kapoor's reaches sharma house

everybody get introduced

asusual shipra is over excited on seeing ram

shipra:hi mr ram ap kartik ne tho btaya hi nhi natasha apki behen h

ram:little embarrsed giving a smile

all were dicussing abt various things

then priya enters... without seeing ram she shouted..

priya :ek cup chai milegi

just then ram sees priya

ram :tum yha kartik pure seher me tumhe koi or dr nhi mili

priya :xcuse me ap hote kon or yha kya kr rhe h

ram:tum jada mt bolo apna kaam kro or clti bno

priya:maa ... ye sb kya h

ram shocked on hearing maa from priya

kartik:sir miliye inse ye h dr priya sharma meri bdi behen

ram:kya ye or tumhari behen

kartik :di ye h ram kapoor natasha k bde bhai...



to be continued ...







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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow superb update priya :ek cup chai milegi

just then ram sees priya

ram :tum yha kartik pure seher me tumhe koi or dr nhi mili

priya :xcuse me ap hote kon or yha kya kr rhe h

ram:tum jada mt bolo apna kaam kro or clti bno

priya:maa ... ye sb kya h loved this dialogue😃

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