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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for the delay everyone.. Here is your bonus for my delay ! Enjoy..

Continued..

Priya puts her hand forward..
Priya: Daadi aapki dawai.. Aur paani.. Everyone is wondering how Priya knows so much about them.. It seemed like had been here before.. She bent down and took the blessing of Daadi and Krishuji..
Krishuji: Priya.. Karthik mujhe maa bulatha hai.. Toh tum bhi kya..
Priya smiles.. Ji maa.. Jaake aathi hu..
Nutz: Chaliye.. She seems very excited.. No one knows where they are headed since Jewellery and clothes are coming home.. But no one seems to be questioning them..
Priya: Maa.. Krishuji turns and looks at Priya.. Who has stopped half way.. Aap sab jaldi khana khalijiye.. Saadi wale jaldi aayenge..
Krishuji: haan beta.. She watches Priya and Nutz leave..
Ram thinking.. Kash ek baar mudke mujhe dekthi.. Priya stops before stepping out and looks at Ram and smiles.. Ram thinking.. Yeh kaise.. Its like she read my mind.. He walks to his room.. He looks at a tray with hot chai.. He sits down.. There are 4 biscuts.. And a chit below the cup.. He picks the cups and takes a sip.. While he unfolds the chit..

Mr. Kapoor..
Aapki dairy galathi se haat lagayi.. Humne aapki aakri kavitha padli..Bura laga hai toh. Hume mauf kijiyega.
Priya.

He smiled.. Yeh jaanthe hue bhi ki mujhe kabhi pata nahi chalega.. Sach bolke maafi bhi maangliya.. Kamaal hai.. Vikram enters..
Vik: Are Ram mujhe abhi phone aaya hai.. The meeting has been Preponed..
Ram: haan toh tik hai.. Kab hai..
Vik: Aadhe ghante mein..
Ram: Tik hai give me 5 minutes.. Ill get ready..
Vik: Tik hai..
Ram gets ready quickly and comes out..
Vik is on the phone..
Vik: Haan Neha.. Tik hai..
And keeps the phone..
Ram: Kya hua..
Vik: Neha Priyaji aur Nutz ke saat hai.. Priyaji ne use yaha shift honeko kaha hai.. Unko kuch madat chahiye tha.. So we are all coming here..
Ram: Are yeh toh bohot acchi baath hai..
They go down stairs while disscussing the needs of their new office..
Everyone seems to be engrossed in the decorations.. The jewellery man had come.. And all his relatives were busy selecting things for themselves..
Ram and Vik walk out and drive away..
Ram: Vik.. Pata nahi kyu. Ek ajeeb si bechaini rehethi hai..
Vik: Achaanak.. Aur waise Ram tu toh humesha gussa kartha tha.. Aaj kal itna khoya khoya sa kyu rehetha hai..?
Ram: Wahi mere bhi samaj mein nahi aarahi hai.. Jab Karthik ka ghar gaya tha.. Toh duniya hi bhuldiya tha meine.. Aisa laga ki kahi aur hi hoon..
Vik: Haan yaar.. Pata hai.. Neha bilkul khamosh hogayi thi.. Chapad chapad band..
Both look at each other and burst into laughter..
They reach.. They cannot see anything but a brick compound and a lot of plants.. There is a small board that reads.. G.O.D.S. F.O.O.T.P.R.I.N.T.S... They walk inside.. Its a beautiful open garden with gazebos of white marble floor and roof.. They see a lot of architects working there.. There is absolute silence.. Everyone seems to be quietly working.. No disturbance.. As the walk accross the pathway.. They see a glass walled building with just one floor.. Its a vast area.. Many people are working with papers and display screens.. It's a hot day.. Ram and Vik are sweaty..
Vik: Are ek office mein itna khaamoshi?
Ram: Ajeeb sa sukoon milraha hai.. Thinking.. Aisa kyu lagraha hai.. Ki koi mujhe keench raha hai?
Vik: Dekh.. Hume waha jaana hai.. And points at a door which reads.. Architect's Head Office.. As they walk closer they hear the sound of instruments.. Someone seems to be playing the veena.. The sound draws them into the room.. They enter without knocking.. They walk through a long lobby..

A woman's voice.. So familiar..
garaj baras pyaasi dharati par phir paani de maulaa..
chidiyo ko daane, bachcho ko gud_dhaani de maulaa..
garaj baras pyaasi dharati par phir paani de maulaa..
Then there is a repeat by a mass of children.. There is a thunder bolt.. it starts drizzling..
They walk to the door.. They are shocked.. Priya is sitting there with the veena.. Neha and Nutz are seated beside her and are repeating along with a buch of kids about 20.. Its a glass studio.. Windows are open And a cool breeze swishes by their faces.. They are drawn into the song..
Priya:
do aur do kaa jod hameshaa...
chaar kahaan hotaa hai?..
She looks at Vikram and Ram..
They are lost in her voice.. She greets them..
She then looks at Ram..
soch-samajh vaalo ko thodi..
naadaani de maulaa...
Ram has lost himself in her eyes.. She seems to drain him off his thoughts.. Neha looks at Vik and smiles.. Vik thiking.. Priyaji aise kuch toh hai.. Sab itna shaanth..
garaj baras pyaasi dharati par phir paani de maulaa.. The drizzling has turned into heavy rains..
All the children quietly get up.. They do namaste to Priya.. Who bows her head as to acknowledge them.. Ram sees that the children are being escorted to another building..
Nutz: Thankyou Priyaji..
Priya: Touching Natasha's cheeks.. Welcome..
Neha: Ab hum dono ko ghar jaana chahiye.. Aap kab aayenge?
Priya: Meeting katam karke aajaaungi.. She looks at Vikram.. Aap bhi inke saat jaayiye.. Itni baarish horahihai.. Toh..
Vik: Ji.. Jaisa aap tik samje..
They leave.. Priya slowly places her veenaon the mat and walks towards Ram..
Priya: Aayiye.. and walks towards her cabin..
Ram follows.. as he enters.. A smile creeps up his face.. Its a neat cabin.. With the same black file he saw in her room and her laptop.. There is nothing but one beautiful painting hung up..
Ram: Ek baat pochu?
Priya: Ji.. kahiye..
Ram: Aap ke ghar hoya office.. Sab itna saaf safedh kyu hai..
Priya smiles.. Aapko bhi safedh pasand hai na..
Ram: Haan..
There is a moment of silence..
An office boy comes..
OB: Maalkin yeh rahi aapki aur sahib ki chai..
Priya: Shukriya..
Ram: Maalkin? With a confused look.. Thinking.. Inki har baath itna ajeeb hai.. Kuch samaj mein nahi aatha..
Priya: Somethings are beyond explaination Mr. Kapoor..
Ram smiles.. He hands a blue file..
Priya: Yeh meine kal dekhliya tha.. Aapki saari farmaayishe.. Hum poori karenge..
Ram is lost.. He is confused.. Thinking.. Is she talking about the project or.. As he is lost..
Priya smiles.. Snaps her fingers in front of him.. Kaha khogaye aap?
Ram: Kuch nahi.. Ek baath kahu? Her hair moves with the wind..
Priya: Haan boliye..
He looks at her eyes.. thinking.. Apnapan.. Sukoon..
Ram: Aap apni tarah se mere naya office design kijiye.. Aapki ghar aur office ne mera dil chugaya.. Toh I would like ki.. And haan maauf kardiya.
Priya smiles. : Ji.. Der hojaayegi.. Ghar pe bohot kaam hai..chale?
Ram: Haan..

To be continued..
Precap: Ram touches Priya in the real sense..


Sorry but things are just horrible now a days.. My sem ends in two weeks.. Ill give nice proper long updates.. Tab tak.. Bear with the short ones.. Sorry..

Lots of love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
sweet update chalo finally he will touch her
the way u describe the place n interiors is fab neha 👏 goood gng
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
wow!amazing ,neha.u r a fab writer.the interiors r described beautifully by u👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
really ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
wonderful lovely
fabulous
I love ur story
n Ofcourse d way u write


all d best with ur semester
update soon


luv ya!


xoxo Priyanka <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
speechless im beyond wordz beautifully decribed the decorations
marvellous if u can pm me plz😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Every time I lost in ur updates, its so serene, yeh Priya itna perfect kaise ho sakti hain, haal abhi se aisa hain, am sure jab pyaar hoga woh bhi bohooot khoobsurat hoga, I am looking forward for the next update, All the Best dear for ur Semester
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Marvelous, each and passing update is giving so many surprizes.. Priya is so beautiful toh uska love kitna beautiful hoga... Waiting for the next, pls update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Damn!! Just not able to find time to write.. Im so sorry.. Ill update tonight I promise.. Bear with me for a while.. Again im so sorry for the delay! I promise todays update will have a bonus!!

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
please jaldi jaldi post karo bahut wait kar liya ...

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