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Evan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

WoW it was a fab update :-) cont soon:-D

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Am just spellbound dear, it was far far better than perfect...👍🏼 Fabulous update.. I dnt think that i have ever readed a story with so much peace in mind.. Dnt worry dear, take quality time but keep giving as this kind of beautiful update.. Waiting for the next.. Loved it ❤️ 🤗

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kaviya10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Fabulous writing Sneha ji...

very lovely & caring portrayal of Priya is superb...

waiting to see Raya together...

Cant wait for the next update...pls update soon...

waiting waiting

Edited by kaviya10 - 12 years ago

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priyankapatwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

again a fabulous update
I loved it
ur dis ff is indeed wonderful

update soon
luv ya!

xoxo Priyanka <3

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Ek ajeeb sa sukoon mehsus hota hain jab bhi main iska updates padti hoon, so pure and simple, I must say ur descriptions are very well etched out, let me share a secret with u, I don't like very descriptive story but find this one really interesting, Priya is so simple yet very elegant, she is headstrong and modern yet respects her tradition and upbringing, bas zindagi me pyaar ki Kami hain jo Ram usse de dega, I think andar hi andar she is lonely, woh khaalipan Ram Kapoor fill up kar denge and it will be enjoyable to see the couple in their marriage union, continue ASAP

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jatre

@jatre

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

wow!beautiful,amazing,just superb,i have no words.u r an amazing writer.👏

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

amazing there is a purity in ur writing ek sukoon sa milta h parh kr 😃beautiful👏i dont have wordz to describe

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

story and ur dream house is so beautiful but plz may i ask u some thing one think u tell me if priya is that much nice tou uska koi BF nahi means close friend someone like that yaar ram ko Jealous karne ke liye