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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued..

Natasha, Rishab and Karthik are sitting sipping coffee with pakodas..
Nutz: Rishab tu bilkul paagal hai!
Karthik: Haan.. Aur jaise tumn di ko describe kiya.. Agar unhe pata chalgaya toh kaan pakadlethi..
Rishab holding his ears: Accha sorry baba.. Phir bhi kash aisa hota..
Nutz: Bhai ki love story suma raha tha ya apni?
All three of them start gigling..
Karthik.. Looking outside the window the afternoon rain is calm and pleasant.. Cooling the summer air.. Humne to kahaani banaali.. Kash yeh sach hota..
Nutz: I wonder office mein kya horaha hoga..
In the office:
They are sitting and talking..
Ram: Haan.. He gets up and walks out.. Priya follows with files in her hands..
Ram: Kab shuru kare?
Priya: Shaadi ke baad?
Ram: Haan yeh tik rahega..
They both smile and walk along the corridor.. Ram looks at the walls.. They have a lot of pictures of Priya drafting, in the sites.. Talking to a few people.. She wears a simple black pencil jeans.. A blavk shoe, pastel coloured full armed shirts and expensive blazers..
Ram thinking.. Professional look mein bhi wow..
Ram: Aap pehele yeh pointing at the pictures..
Priya: Abhi bhi.. When I work Im professional..
He smiles looking at the floor as she picks up umbrellas kept neatly in a cylindrical stand.. They open the umbrellas.. And walk outside..
Ram looks at Priya.. A smile vreeps his face.. She looks so confident.. Head up with files in one hand and the umbrella in another.. Her hair strands coming over her face because of the wind..
Ram thinking.. Itna kam bolthe hai.. Itni confidence.. In a thoughtful look grinning.. Aisi aurat aaj tak nahi dekha hai..
They reach the car.. Ram opens the door for Priya.. She gets in quickly closing the umbrella.. He shuts the door for her.. And comes and sits beside her..

She opens the window and puts her hand out as Ram starts the car.. The car goes smooth and fast as the roads are clear..

Ram steals glances at her.. Her hand reacts with every drop of water that falls on it.. It was like she was speaking to the rain.. There is a pleasant silence between them.. Ram is enjoying the drive.. While Priya is enjoying the view outside..It slowly stops raining.. They reach KM quickly..

Vik opens the door for them.. They walkin.. They look around.. Everyone is busy decorating the hose and talking over the phone... Priya walks towards the drawing room..She looks at Nutz Karthik and Rishab happily chatting away..She walks towards them..

Priya: Natasha.. Tune kapde aur gehene pasand karli?

Natasha: Mereliye bhi aur aapkeliye bhi bhabi..Rishab hits her hand as Karthik starts giggling..

Priya: Wondering what was happening.. Smile.. Thiking..Bhabi? Yeh teeno itna has kyu rahe hai..

Ram comes in.. Suniye.. Maa hume bularahi hai..

They both leave.. Ram thinking.. Yeh sab pagalon ki tarah has kyu rahe?

Nutz: Baapre.. Rishab tu marwaayega..

Rishab: Laughing.. Kash bhabi hote..

Karthik: Ram sir.. Ram jiju.. Are haan.. Kash aisa hota..

Rishab: Agar Priyaji bhabi hoti toh Bhai kabhi gussa nahi karthe..

They are burst into laughter..

Meanwhile in Krishuji's room..

Ram and Priya enter..

Krishuji: Ram woh aaj Tumhe Rajat aur Jhyothi ki mangni pe jaana hai..

Ram: Are haan.. Mein toh bhul gaya tha..

Vik Neha enter..

Neha: Priyaji.. Unhone aapko bhi bulaaya hai..

Vik: Haan.. Kya aap Ram ki Business partner ke hesiyat se aayengi plz..

Priya smiles.. Jhyothi meri class mate hai..

Vik Neha look at each other feeling embarrassed and smile..

Ram: Huh? maa aap bhi aarahe ho na?

Krishuji: Are nahi.. Mujhe bohot kaam hai.. Aap chaaron chele jao.. Waise bhi late night party bhi hai.. Toh..

Priya: Maa.. Everyone looks at her in awe..Woh meine mitaayi walon ko bulaaya hai.. Aapko joh pasand hai woh mangwaadijiye..

Krishuji: Thankgod.. Mein toh bhulgayi.. Koi baat nahi.. Neha tum priya ke saath tayaar hojao.. Vik Ram jaldi aajao.. Humesha ki tarah TV pe chipak mat jaana.. And hands 2 bags to Ram and 2 bags to Priya..The four of them walk upstairs.. Neha and Priya go to Priyas room and lock the door.. Ram and Vik then enter the room..

Priya's room..

Priya: Neha tum mujhe Priyaji Kyu bulaathi ho..

Neha: Peheli baath yeh hai ki.. Mujhse ek saal badi hai.. Aur Itni badi Architect..

Priya nods in negative and stretches her hand out.. Aaj se hum dono dost hai ok?

Neha: ok.. Mein yahi change karungi. Waise Room sach mein khubsoorat bana di hai tumne..

Priya: Thankyou.. Tik hai.. Mein andar badalke aathi hu..

Ram's room..

Ram comes out of the wash room.. mera hogaya.. Tu bhi badal le..

Vik: Haan.. Tik hai.. Neha aake hum dono ki tie baandlegi..

Ram: Haan.. Thinking.. Jab choti chali jaayegi toh mera te kaun baandega?

Priya's room.. Neha is ready.. Almost and struggling with her choli.. Priya comes out.. In a beautiful dark Green chiffon saree.. Looking elegant..

Priya: mein kardu..?

Neha: haan..

Priya comes behind her and starts tieing the daaga.. Neha looks at her in the mirror.. And says.. Priya.. Tum bohot khubsoorat ho..

Priya: Yeh lo hogaya.. Tum bhi..

Neha turns taking her bindi.. Ek baath puvhu..

Priya swirling her hair into a bun.. Hann kaho..

Neha: Tumne shaadi kyu nahi ki?

Priya puts a stick in her hair.. And says.. Bachpanse mere upar zimmedaariya bohot hai.. Unko nibaate nibaathe kahi apne aap ko bhul gayi..

Neha: Lekin saat saal pehele hi itni famous hogayi aur itna paisa kamaaya.. Par haan sab tumse baat karne se bhi bohot dar the hai..

Priya smiles.. Pata hai.. Chalo..

They come out and look at Ram and Vik struggling with their tie..

Vik: Wah Priyaji.. Aap toh..

Neha: Dekha Priya!

Priya giggles..

Ram is lost thinking.. Itni simple hai.. phir bhi itni khubsoorat..

Vik: Neha tum bhi bohot acchi lagrahi ho.. Ab toda tie baando na..

Neha: Smiles nodding her head.. Comes and starts tieing his tie..

Ram: Are mera bhi.. Jaldi..

Neha: Priya.. Der horahi hai.. Zara fatty ka tie banaado..

Ram looks at Priya as she walks towards him.. She neatly ties a knot.. He straightens his collar and she pulls the tail of the tie..

Ram smiles: Thankyou.. Aap tie bohot acchi baandthi hai..

Priya smiles.. looking at Neha.. Chalo der hoojaayegi..

Vik: Dekho.. unhone itni acchi, intni jaldi.. Aur itni pyaar se baanda.. Aur tum ho ke..

Neha: Woh kya hai na patidev.. Priya Fatty ke tie baand rahi thi.. tumhaari nahi..

Both Ram and Priya look at each other and start giggling.. All three of them look at Priya giggling.. They feel like their heart is smiling.. Her eyes smile as her lips curve into a smile.. She nods her head..

Priya: Chale..

Everyone nods and walk down..


To be continued..

Precap: Engagement and Rishab is hurt..


Sorry for the short update.. Will update soon..

Thankyou for you comments.. I promise there is no bakwaas ke villains and drama here.. Thankyou for your complements..

Enjoy the short updates for now..

Plz do comment and criticize..


Lots of love,

L.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
I love this story. You are writing this very nicely Neha. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
nice story but little confusion
did priya & ram agree 4r marriage & kisi engagement?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
small and cute scene of raya and i love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Oh im sorry if you got confused.. No Ram and Priya did not agree to anything.. The last update was Rishab Natasha and Karthiks imagination!

Will update soon with wonderful RAYA scenes..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: nehaprasad1994

Oh im sorry if you got confused.. No Ram and Priya did not agree to anything.. The last update was Rishab Natasha and Karthiks imagination!

Will update soon with wonderful RAYA scenes..

Love,
L.


Oh I see... That media agitation part was just an imagination :((
I too was confused with your previous update. Ok thanks for clearing the confusion.
We want Ram- Priya to stand together, so plz make it soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Lovely update Neha. But can we get some romantic moments between Ram-Priya soon? Till now the feeling of love is one-sided only from Ram, when will Priya start liking Ram?

Keep going, would love to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
its nice but i am confused
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Fantastic update, priya is so beautiful in ur ff. Kaash ye karthick ,nuts aur rishub ka sapna jaldi se sach ho jaaye..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okie now I am also confused,Priya and Ram marriage announcement was just an imagination ?⭐️ got it.. waiting for the next one..😃

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