RAYA SS.Custody updtD last part on 148 page

First Previous

Page

113

Next Last

Frequent Posters

jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

I can't imagine in my worst nightmare that Ram can hit Priya, I was shocked to read it, clear the thing ASAP, this is not done, y can't Ram stop taunting to Priya that too in this condition, I want this mess to clear up fast

Quote

sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Heyy Thank you for the quiker responce ..Yah she need a slap for that .. Now they are not in good connections na so he cant end with it a kiss ..so slap has to be needed over here ..
Will update very soonish ..may be tonight or tomorrow morning ...Thank you for liking the update

not tomorrow morning... today nite only...😉

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

every thing about the update was awesome ..
. I felt so bad for raya yaar both love eachother but cant do any thing
awesome update as usual
cant wait to next update update soon

Quote

Sheetal

@Oneandall

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

what can I say dear. Ram slapping Priya or any man slapping any woman for any reason is too much for me to swallow. Guess I feel so strongly about it that even if it is presented in a FF it just tugs my heart string in a really painful way.. don't mind Neel not attacking you in any way...
We all have a topic that irks us beyond comprehension.

B UT

Coming to the remainder of the update. overall the update was nice. but wish the emotionally charged scene could have ended with an emotionally charged kiss instead. ⭐️

Edited by Oneandall - 12 years ago

Quote

taashu11

@taashu11

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

ohh thats super awesome part yaar it reminds me of 5march epi each update of this ff are getting better better and more better what more can i say they are just fab.. ...

dont know what more i can say about your writings... best remains always best no doubts...

Quote

snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

dekho neel if this happens in real BALH we might accept but in your ff my ram shouldnt be this angry and feelinglless yaar slap nahi he would have caught her tight by her arms even that can hurt her but no slap baki update i loved only slap nahi accha laga dear but rest of the update bade acche lagte hai atleast the ice is breaking between them

Quote

leena

@leena04

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

part 8

awww awesome neel what an update just loved it yaar...what u have done in srtarting i just so enjoyed yaar the way Priya were worried n got tears in eyes thinking abt anklats... was so awesome...& then the way Ram made her wear was even mesmarizing his each kiss were so dreamy... but where u end yaar... not happy with slap part reast is just master piece but i guess when i will read next then only after that i can say anything furter so do update soon waiting to read do it soon dear... waiting !!!!!...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote

Dilli

@Dilli4BALH

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

hmm! Love to see twist happening in Fan fictions.. Superb post..

Quote

cloud121

@cloud121

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Wooww...kya mast update h...pleaase jaldi se nxt part bhi update kro na :) thanks for pm dear...

Quote

luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
I can't imagine in my worst nightmare that Ram can hit Priya, I was shocked to read it, clear the thing ASAP, this is not done, y can't Ram stop taunting to Priya that too in this condition, I want this mess to clear up fast

Ujjaini Kabhi kabhi hota hai ...Hmm ok i will clear this thing right now with the next update ..Its coming in a short while ..stay tuned darling ...Hope you will clear your doubts in next update .Thank you so much dear .

Quote

1 ... 25 26 27 28 29 ... 113

RAYA SS.Custody updtD last part on 148 page - Page 27

Related Topics

Explore Topics