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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: 00Princess00
whn u r going to update??
Update sooon na

will be soon dear /...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Oneandall
When r u updating Neel????????? Waiting :-)

soonish .. 😉

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: leena04
congrats for new story dear n what a take on... wowoowowowoowo i just loved it some similer kind of story i always want it... awesome... just loving the first part lovely Nuts made plan with rock star n rock the world... Priya still trying her best to win back Ram this is completly loved one thing... but so sad in her guilt she is getting sick day by day so worried for her... n what an end u just put me on fore want get claim until i read next so moving to read next...

Thank you so much leena dear .. Hope you are glowing everyday😉
I'm glad ou liked this ...Yah guilty makes human very sick ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: leena04
wowowowowo emotnal yet painful... this is ur master piece yaar RaYa's love sign Peehu... she is truly rockstar just one word i have speechless ... i felt so bad When Ram didn't even bother to take care of Priya but i m sure in coming updates he will surly gonna do all make for this... so now moving to next reat blossam update...

aWW THANK YOUUU DARLING .. rAYAS MASTER PIECE IS pEEHU ...
yAH in future all is Rams care ..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: leena04
u rocked... just one thing i will say its just u rocked... Ram's helplessness seeing Priya in this state n the most worst part he even Priya never shared or shown this to Ram... OmG from what a mentle tourcher she suffred all this years n yet even suffering just killed my heart... so happy seeing Ram carring for her so much now... finally the time comes where love birds can find thier peace in weach other arms... u just nailed it with ur awesome... words yaar i just was so lost in ur wrriting... now moving to read next update...

Haila loved your feed back ..always gives a energy to recline everything ...

Thank you so much dear you will get many beautiful moments in future too ..Enjoy you read ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: geetharoy999
Oh my goddd how i missed it reee ..
that is just wonderfulll ...all parts i read it in a gooo ...
superb .. fantasticcc ..
plz plz update soon ... can't wait to see what happens..

Hey thank you so much dear .. after longtime .. hope you got the link ..thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Oneandall

Can't wait.. please jaldii 😉 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

It has written in 15 mins span of time ..I couldnt edit it or re read ..Plz bare with spellings ..I know it was too short ..The next part i will try to update soon
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Until than have a beautiful rayalicious dreams ...

PART-5

Special Thanks to Leena ji for the cutest banner.

PART-2, 😉 PART-3 😛 PART-4 😉PART-5 😉 PART-6 😛PART-7 😛 PART-8 😉PART-9😛PART-10 😉PART-11 😉PART-12

He glanced at Priya one last time ...he soo wanted to see all other gifts to ..But he is feeling hungry and its time to her medication also ...
He woke her up ,She lazily opend her eyes to see him ...
Sonedijiye na Plzz...
Oh my god how cute she is looking ...He shakes her up ..Priya utho ...
Its time to take medicines dear...
She opened her eyes tried to get up but starightly falls in his arms...He securely placed her on sitting position ..
Hey you ok ..
Ha Mr.Kapoor just feeling dizzy ,her hands hardly framing her forehead to remove her dizz feeling ..
He pressed gently with his hands ...She rested on head rest ,after few mins she said him ..Im quite ok now ..
Removing his hand from her ,she so wantedly cup her face in those strong arms and let cry all her sorrows but she so neglected by Ram these days she dont want to miss these small things also.so she let go off his hands from her ...
She knows that after she recovered again the" scary silent taunt war " starts between them ...
She gave a sigh relief meanwhile he ordered their food ..Bansikaka came with food trolly ...
Peehu rushed into the room along with Him .She delighted to see her mother ,father closeness and not like before [lol peehu you are a rock star dear ,you know how they are before] ..

Priya streched her arms ..Peehu not wasted a time she climbed ,possesively hugged her ..
Mamma ab thik hai na ..
Ha my baby ..where were you all these time ...
Wo nuts bua took me for shopping ..i just came from there ..
And you know papa gifts ...
Nowhere Ram silenced her with her hands on her mouth ...
Priya was lil bit shocked from this action ..
Ram hurriedly ..Its nothing Priya ...
He leaned down to peehu ,hey rock star it should be surprise for mamma,dont talk anything now ..i will talk with you later ...
Priya know there is something between these two..
And peehu accepted very hapily hearing a surprise from him ...
Both gave Hifi to eachother ...Priya gave a hawww expression ..
Peehu turned to her mother ..Kuch nahi hai mom..Its secret between us ..sorry i can't tell you ..
Ram&Priiya giggled at her answer ..
Ooohh so my baby keeping secrets also ...pulling her cheeks ..
Mamma rubbing her cheek very quickly ...How many times i should tell you mamma ..
dont pull my cheeks ..Its a bad habit ...Uff its paining ...
Ole ole my baby cheek paining ,caressing her cheek ..
Mamma dont touch my cheeks ...
Priya gazed at her husband ..Ram amused the way peehu talked both had a sweet eye lock ..Remebering their falsh back ...

F.b:
Priya rushed to office with fuming eyes ..
Ram was sitting leasurely in a chair and laughing out loud ...
She rushed his side ...

What you were doing ..
Priya im in a meeting ...
Keeping her hands on her waist [Priya's style] Oh so you are in a meeting now ...
Yes ofcourse ...sheepishly scraching his forehead looking behind her ...
Oh i see ..If you are not intrestd in aamir khan movie ,i could have booked vidya bhalan movie ..
But but you told me wait sure i will take you out ..and here here you are laughing out loud ,over you are in a meeting ..
What a businessman Mr.Kapoor..Kam se kam biwi ko sach bathana padega ...Hudd hai ...
She feared hearing a roaring laugh in the room...Ram clutched her she opened her eyes slowly tilted her head where the laugh came from ,she was utterly shocked that was a video conference she totally forgot about that ...
Oh shit they have seen when im fighting with him ..God she looked down not wanting to meet with that business partner ..
Man:Ram you are very lucky enough to have Priya
Ram&Priya confusedly looked at him
If same situation hapend with me ...Don't know what else you could have seen ..
Priya blushed & felt guilty for Ram and her behaviour ...
She slowly said sorry to them ..started walking ...
MAn: wait Mrs.Kapoor ...Poor Ram he asked we can continue tmrw i have some imp work but he doest tell about movie program with you ..
sorry to disturb you guys ..Ram we will contiue this tomorow ..enjoy the day ..He signed out ..
She looked down said "Sorry " MM..Wo..ii ..i didnt see you were in video conference ...
He slid his hands on her waist pulled her near to him ...
Did i say anything jaan ...
So you were not angry my Man ..
No he tilted her head touching her nose ...
She pulled his cheeks ...Ram you were so sweet ...
Priyaaa rubbing his cheek very quickly ...How many times i should tell you Priyaa ..
dont pull my cheeks ..Its a bad habit ...Uff its paining ...
Ole ole my Hubby cheek paining ,caressing his cheek ..
Priya dont touch my cheeks ...
Priya ":Why wont i touch your cheeks ha ...mai aapki biwi hu toh hak bantha hai na ..
Ram: Aha he bites her cheek [naughtily ]...
Priya : Ouch that hurts Ram..Palming her cheek softly ...
Ram: ":Why wont i touch your cheeks ha ...mai aapki pati hu toh hak bantha hai na ..
Both giigled at their convo ...

Peehu is so like you Ram [in her mind]
Oh my god how much peehu reminded me eyevry day priya [thinking in his mind ]
Those words ,actions exactly like him ...God is great ..
Both coming baco to reality when peehu slipped a bowl from the trolly ...
Ram :Rock star kya chahiye aapko ::
oh papa sorry ...
Its ok what you want ..
Kheer ...
He picked a bowl served her kheer ...
He asked priya to drink some water before food ..
Mr.Kapoor im not hungry ...Im ...
He served kichdy to her ,when he about to feed her she asked him..Dijiye ...
she took the plate from him ..When about to touch the food ,she realized some burning sensation stopping to make a fist ...
Still she tried ...Ouchhh what happend..she looked at her hand ..There were some bruises on her hand ,some are showing already dressed up for the bleeding ..
She looked at him ...He took the plate from her ..Relax those were the marks of broken glass ...She remebered the time ..
when she about to drink the milk ,,suddenly she felt the surroundings clousy and fainted with the glass ..Might be it pierced ...

Thats why i want to feed you ..But madam dont want frommy hand ...Feeding a spoon to her
Aisa nahi hai Mr.Kapoor ..wo mai chahithi ki aap bhi hamarae sath ...
Peehu held a spoon near to his mouth ..
Papa khao na ...Priya ,Ram eyes met with their Daughter's eyes ...
Happily threesome had a perfect dinner ...

Edited by luvsakshi - 12 years ago