'LAW'updt part 20 page 92 28/10/13 update - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxx

u can call me mani😃

i m aiyat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Siacutie

superb intro ram is casavona @ priya luvs him

nice part update soon😃
btw whats ur name?

thank u sia... i m aiyat
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss283

Hey that was very good...
do continue soon...šŸ˜›

i m glad that u like it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First part

Suddenly i woke up at the night and get up from bed and opened my bedroom window. It is late and there isn't a sound. There is that smell of warmth in the air and it is as still as it is quiet. The moon is so bright i have thought it full, but it is a large crescent and sat on the horizon making it a rich deep yellow. There is not any clouds and the sky is that sort of blue/grey colour sprinkled with thousands of stars. I m gazing the stars. Its look so beautiful. Lying on the window wall i m admiring the beauty of the night. Now i m feeling so cool and clam. After some time i move towards my bed and lying on bed. I m trtrying to sleep but whenever i m closing my eyes i see him with a girl. And instantly i open my eyes. i cant tolerate it. Sitting on the bed i i close my eyes a drop of tear  drop from my eyes.. I m feeling so helpless.. Why
 
its hurt like hell
? I cant see him with near any girl but how can i stop him. Have i any right on him? Yes i have right on him, he is my man my love. I cant let him go. i promise myself Ram, i will make u mine. This thought i bring a smile in priyas lips. Again  lying on the bed she drift of a peaceful sleep.

It is 6 Am in the morning Krishna kapoor takes her morning prayer and moving towards the kitchen to make her son 's favorite alo paratha. After finishing her morning chores she calls everyone for morning breakfast. At the dinning table all family member gather for the breakfast.

Few minutes later Ram also joint there. Ma i have to rush now i have very important meeting in the office.
Kirshna : At last take ur breakfast?

Ram: no ma i have  to go now.. we will meet at night bye..
Before disappearing from there Ram quickly give a peek a to his sister cheek.
Natasha : good bhia bye... be a safe journey..


On the way of office Ram calls vikarm to remind him about the meeting.
Vikram : I know yaar its a very important deal for our company. I m also one the way of office.. meet u soon...

Priya wear baby pink color sharee looking as usual gorgeous. She is already in the office. Running here and there to see the last preparation of the meeting. Oh God if we dont get the deal Then Ram will surly fire me...
Priya: jenny u know its very important day for us, i want everything perfect..
Jenny: Dont worry mam, sir will not able to give any complain...

Priya give her a tender smile, when she moves from there bump with a man and fall in his arm... Priya tightly clutch his shirt to stop falling in the floor, when she realize someone holding her she slowly open her eyes and look at the man......

if u like it plz then hit the like button, and give ur valuable comment, its meant a lot to me...😊





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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww poor priya cont soon
Edited by ramsakshiroxxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
loved your start... Priya will win Ram and his true Love...
Got to see How and When?
Edited by haribol79 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Haiyee! Yeh Priya hamesha Ram Ki bahon mein hi kyun girti hai😳...par aise hi toh romance kiya jaata haišŸ‘..next chapter please šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nw dats interesting
ram a casinova dats great
nice work
update soon


xoxo Priyanka <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah..! Something different to read.. Gud going dear and ur english is very gud, dnt worry at all.. Update soon..
Edited by Pinkjali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Very nice Please continue soon

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