Os Winning him back p2/pg2 7/12

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Winning him back'

Hi sweeties.. I am Pooja. Writing for the first time. Yesterday's Ram-Vik convo made me think something and I am trying to pen it down. Please tell me how it is. I know it is not the best. This forum has so many amazing writers . but please bare with me. And do like and comment. That means a lot to me'


Part 1

Priya, Neha standing outside the Ram's room. Vikram and doctors are inside the Room. Ram is gaining consciousness.

Dr:- Welcome back Mr. Kapoor. We have removed the bullet. You are absolutely fine. Don't worry at all.

Ram:- Thanks doctor. So when are you discharging me?

Dr:- Sorry sir not so soon. You need complete bed rest for next 48 hrs. So discharge only after that.

Saying this Doctor goes outside leaving two best friends alone.

Ram trying to convince Vikram..

Ram:- Vikram yaar. Please tell them. I have imp case tomorrow. And I have to be there.

Vikram:- Ram no arguments. There is no case important than your life. Just stay here and take rest. Vikram denied his request completely.

Meanwhile outside the Ram's room.

Seeing dr coming out, Neha and Priya goes hurriedly towards them.

Priya: - Dr, Mr. Kapoor kaise hai? Is he alright?

Dr:- Don't worry Mrs. Kapoor. HE is perfectly fine. Just now he woke up. Don't worry. You can meet him.

Priya felt so relieved after hearing it. She thanked doctor and ran towards her life that was lying inside. But she stopped in midway at doorsteps hearing Ram and vikram's argument.

Ram was shouting on Vikram.. "I am going Vikram. Don't try to stop me." Ram tried to remove drip. But Vikram hold his hand and scolded him. "Ram baas kar yaar! Kya bachpana hai. You are hit by a bullet. Don't be so unreasonable. Take rest. You need it."

"Vikram Peehu ke custody ka case hai. I need to be there. I can't let go the opportunity."

"Ram, you have hired the best lawyers in the city for this case. They can handle the situation. And if they can't I will take you personally in the court tomorrow. Trust me. And please now take rest."

Ram looked assured at this. He just lied down and looked at door waiting for Priya.

Priya felt heart pinch hearing a convo. She is feeling lot of guilt. She couldn't take it. "No, I can't face him" she spoke to herself and ran from there. Neha and Rajat looked at her shockingly. Neha couldn't comprehend the reaction. She tried to stop Priya but in vain.

Neha went inside the room. Vikram and Ram looked at her questioningly. Both are expecting Priya to come.

"How are you fatty?" She asked with tears in her eyes. "You pagal.. agar tumhe kuch ho jata to?"

"Par hua nahi na darling. Ab rona band karo. Mai thik hun." Ram said smilingly but his eyes searching for Priya. Neha understood it. But she has no daring to break his heart once again. She was not sure why Priya left so hurriedly. Vikram was about to ask the question but then KK, Somuya and Nuts entered the room. So Vikram stopped in between.

Here Priya standing outside the hospital waiting for auto. Rajat came behind her and looking at her. But she is looking too determined. He could not understand what happened to her in just few mins. She was crying for Ram's life. And when dr told her to meet him she ran from there. What exactly is happening in her mind? He needs to know. He goes near her and tapped her shoulder.

"Priya what happened? "

"Rajat sir aap? Kuch nahi. I am fine. Ghar ja rahhi hun. Peehu akeli hai."

"Ohh.. Tum ram se mile bina ja rahi ho, thoda ajeeb laga. Isliye puch raha hun."

Priya thought for a second.

"Hmm. I will meet him but before that I need to sort few things. Let me ask you the question Rajat Sir. And I want very honest answer."

Rajat looked confused but nod a head," Ok ask Priya."

"Sir, are you in with love me?" Priya asked it too bluntly and directly.

Rajat was too shocked to react. He never expected this way. It was bouncer by Priya and he was not at all prepared. He stammered while answering.

"Priya'. Aisa kyun puch rahi ho? What happened?" He tried to beat around the bush.

But Priya was not in a mood to listen any nonsense. "Sir, please I want honest answer."

"Yes." He said it in lowered voice and Priya closed her eyes in frustration and anger. She knew she has lot many things to mend. Rajat tried to guess the Priya's reaction, but couldn't understand.

"Sir will you please leave me alone? I don't want to be with you." She said in cold voice.

Rajat had no choice than to agree with her. He left from there.

Priya stands there with weight of her own words said to Mr. Kapoor. She couldn't understand herself. What mess she has done!!!! Oh god' How she is going to sort all these things? She just closed her eyes and she saw the face of her man, defeated, hurt and jealous. She was so guilty. She wants to run from all these mess and hug Ram. But she knows first she has to do few things then only she can face Mr. Kapoor. Priya knows whatever she might be doing now, Nothing is comparable to facing bullet for a wife who dumped the man for five years. But she knows she has to try. Ram has shown his love for many times. Now it's her turn to show him that she cares for him. She loves him and she can do anything for him.


Part2 :-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/3330409/os-winning-him-back-p2-pg2-7-12?pn=2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one.. 😊 plss continue it...
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wow fantastic n this is want i want in the show too
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Thanks dear..😳
Will try to update before today's episode.
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Originally posted by: Mahaalwayscool

nice continue soon dear..


Hey thanks dear..
will try to update before episode..
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Originally posted by: -SweetEtika-

Nice one.. 😊 plss continue it...


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Very nice I want this in the show too Please update soon
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wow...
loved the way priya asked rajat if he loves her...
priya kahan chali...ram is waiting...
continue soon...its very interesting
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Thank you sweeties for all likes and comments. Second part is here. Please read it and do like and comment. will try to update next part today itself.

Part 2

Ram and Vikram in Ram's room. Vikram has successfully convinced all family members to go to home. Neha also has gone to home. Ram was eagerly waiting for Priya to come. He thought she might come after all family members. But it was almost half an hour since all have gone. He was not able to understand. He can't believe that she has left him alone again that too in such a situation.

Vikram understood the restlessness of Ram. He himself was not convinced about Priya's behavior. He had asked Neha and was very surprised to hear that Priya has left the hospital. But he can't see Ram so much hurt. He tried to ease the situation.

"Ram, Peehu ghar pe akeli hogi is liye wo gayi rahegi. Aajayegi wo. You don't worry. Take rest."

"Kaun wo?" Ram asked in anger. "I am not waiting for anyone. Jisko meri fikar hai wo saab muje milke chale gaye hai."

"Ram, why are you lying to me? I know you are waiting for Priya."

"No. Now I don't even want to see her face. Let me win the case. After that I don't even want to keep contacts with her." Ram is fuming in anger and frustration.

"Yaar, tu ab itna soch mat. So ja. You need a rest yaar. Please.." Vikram tried to sooth his anger.

"Vikram, ek baat bolu tuze?"

"Hmm bol"

"Tu thik kah raha tha us din. I can understand your feelings about Neha having a child from other person."

"Ram, ab ye kanha se aagya bichme?"

"I can't see Priya getting closer to Rajat. Today she crossed all the limits. In spite of my warning, she danced with that …….. " He couldn't complete the sentence. Picture of rajat keeping hand on Priya's waist flashed in his mind. He was fuming with anger. He can't believe that his Priya could do something like this. She knows he can't handle this. She has experienced it during Ronit Roy fiasco. But still she did it, just to prove him wrong.

"Vikram I need to win this case at any cost." He said it with more determination.

"Ram, don't worry. You will win the case." Vikram said it. Because he knows his friend is in no mood to think rationally. He can understand what ram is feeling.

Both friends sat there thinking about their lives. Both are feeling betrayed. And the person whom they loved the most in their life have betrayed them.

Meanwhile…

Priya reached home, where Sudhir was waiting for her eagerly. Peehu was sleeping peacefully in her room. Priya told Sudhir about health of Ram and told him to go to sleep. Sudhir saw some different determination in Priya's eyes. He felt something is terribly wrong. But looking at situation he decided to keep quite.

Priya goes in Peehu's room, and sees her daughter sleeping peacefully. She wants to hug her and wants to cry her heart out. But she knows if she can't do what she is determined to do this time, she wont be able to face Mr.Kapoor. She is guilty and now she has to prove her love for her man.

She tried to stop her tears but she couldn't and now there is no need also. She is alone and she has to cry. She has to vent out all her emotions, all her fears, all her guilt before morning. She has to be strong for Peehu. She can't let her daughter affected by her fear. She has to make Peehu understand the situation. She has to do it for her. Priya packs Peehu's clothes. She packed all her necessary things, all her books, her toys, everything.

After packing, she takes her diary and started writing. She wrote a letter to her husband. She cried and cried for whole night. Her guilt is eating her. She can't bare the fact that she has misunderstood Ram to this extent. She has to show him that she loves him to the extent that no one in the world can love him. She is too determined. She falls asleep on the writing table itself.

Morning…

Priya woke with sunlight in the room. Actually it was too late. She got up quickly. Her whole body is paining. But she has to ignore it. She has to stand. Because today is the day which is going to determine the fate of lives of two people she loved the most.

Priya completed the morning chores and prepared the breakfast for Peehu, of course her favorite Aalo paratha. She went to Peehu's room and saw her angle snoring just like her golu papa. A small smile touched her lips. She wakes up Peehu.

"Good morning Baccha."

"Good morning Mama. Mamma, aap kanha thi? Maine aapka kitna wait kiya?" she complained cutely.

"Baby, mai aapke papa ke saath thi. Sorry baby. Aage se aapko wait nahi karaongi." She choked while saying this.

"Chalo ab jaldi se tayyar ho jao. Aaj aapko ek surprise hai."

"Kya mama?" hearing surprise Peehu got excited.

"aaj no school. Rockstar will spend her moring with her papa." Priya revealed the surprise.

"Wow Mama.. you are sweetest mama. Papa kab aa rahe he muje pick karne? Mai kya pehenu mama? Hum baher jayenge ya gharpe he rahenge?" Peehu stared her question bank, thrilled with the thought of spending a morning with her papa.

"baccha cool down. Suno meri baat. Dhyan se suno. Aao yanha pe." Priya tried to control the excitement of Peehu. She is feeling like crying seeing her daughter's happiness. But she has to control herself.

She took Peehu in her lap. "Beta suno. Aapke ke papa aapko lene nahi aa rahe hai. Aap nanu ke saath unke paas jaogi. Aapke papa ill hai aur wo hospital mai hai."

"Papa ko kya hua mama? Aapne unko kadha nahi diya kya? She asked worryingly.

"Baccha, papa thik hai. Thodisi chot aayi hai. Aur doctors hai na unko kadha pilane ke liye. To wo jaldi se thik ho jayenge. " she patted her chheks lovingly.

"Aur papa ke apne rockstar ke bahot yaad aa rahi thi. To aap jayenge na unse milne?"

"yes mama." She said excitedly. "Par mama aap nahi aaogi?"

"baccha mera ek jaruri kaam hai. Wo khatam karke mai aajungi. Aap nanu ke saath chale jana. Ok?"

"ok mama.. mai jaldi se tayar hoti hun." She ran hurriedly towards bathroom.

Priya sat there. She has not yet told the real plan to Peehu. She fears that her daughter may refuse. But she has to make Peehu ready for that. She waits patiently till Peehu is getting ready. Meanwhile she called her father and asked him to take Peehu to hospital as she has to attend the case at court. Sudhir agreed immediately.

"Mama, jaldi se breakfast do na. bhook lagi hai."

"ha re mera baccha. Ruko jara. Aati hoon." She took all the bags she had packed in the night and came to kitchen.

"Mama, itne sare bags? Hum kanhi ja rahe he kya? " Peehu asked her.

Priya was not sure how to tell her daughter. She herself was not sure about this decision. But she has to do this. For Peehu's future, for her husband.

"Beta, hum nahi aap ja rahe ho." She said it in shaking voice.

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superb yaar waiting for the next update...and ther will not be any episode airing for three days it would be very pleasant to read ur update very nice keep writing...😃

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