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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update dear.. continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ek ma ki emotion aur ek biwi ka guilt, itni achhi tareeke se Hagan kiya hain ke mere pass koi shabd nahi hain hain. It's too touchy and emotional, kaash kabhi Ram ko yeh padne ka mauka mile toh woh samjhenge Priya KIA halat se guzri hain, ek ma ke liye asan nahi hota hain apne bachhe ko akele palna, par Priya ne woh kar ke dikhaya hain...plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Take a bow dear
smashing... mind blowing... touching one
continue next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous ff. Loved it. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1

omg its so awesom snehal i feel like to read it more n more yaar hay... i wish they had shown like this in show too... it is so awesome beyond the world... just amezing... i m really happpy to read this... moving next to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2

OmG snehal i m in love with this SS its so amezing feeling like to read again again... wowoowowowo Peehu is just carbon copy of Ram n its Priya's dairy what an update yaar just loving it... felling like so happy to read it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3
i always wanted to see this side of Priya but never got to see in show but thaks to ur FF we can fee that Priya who is crvaring for her Ram so badly i just loved it yaar awesome... i can't tell u how much i love it... some one plz tweet this to Mitu didi on twwiter so she can take a look on it... now waiting for next part dear do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you all guys for such lovely response as my scheduels are really tight i can not personally comment back on you likes and comments but have read all and beleive me i am just humbled ...

part 4

Peehu ka school ka first day tha aur who bohot khush thi school mein ..use sab kuch red chahiye red bag red water bottle aur mujhe usne aaj red colour ka hi dress pehenaya who bhi jabardasti 'jab se bolne lagi hai itna bolti hai..jaise agar aaj usne nahi bola toh sare words khatam ho jayenge duniya me se'baap re uske sawal ke jawab dete dete thak jaati hoon main ram ..aur madam ko har baat bass janani nahi samajhani bhi hai ..ye aisa kyun wohi answerkyun hai..mango yello kyun hai? Cat ke muchi kyun hai who toh girl hai phir mamma apke muchhi kyun nahi hai?sab ke jawab diye maine lekin usne uch aisa pooch liye ke mujhe jawab dena sujha hi nahi

Haan ram usne mujhse poocha mumma book me sab ke pas mumma papa dono hai tiger ke pas , calf pass, doggy ke pass lekin mere pas sirf mumma hi kyun papa kun nahin'mujhe use batane ki himmat nahi hui ke uske papa se who dur hai uski wajah main hoon aur use papa toh ye jante bhi nahi ke who is duniya mein hai 'uska wajood who tab janenge jab who uski mumma ke jinda hone ka pata lagega'.

Ye guilt ye jhoot ..hamari beti ki umeed se bhari ankhein mujhe din raat andar hi andar khaye ja rahi hai raam 'main apse ye sab share kar rahi hoon toh din jaise taise nikal jata hai lekin raatein bohot tang karti hai ..peehu ke kharate to hai mere pass lekin apki woh bahein nahi hai jo mujhe pure tarah chupale 'sir rakhne ke liye who dil nahi jiski dhadkan main hoon 'mujhe apni taraf khich ne wali wo ankhein nahi jinke nashe me kho ke main sari duniya k bhool jaun..mere saath rat bhar jagne wali garam sanse nahin hain ''

Apko main yaad kar rahi hoon lekin mehsoos karna chahti hoon ''apke saath hamare bacchii ke who saare haseen lamhe jeena chahti hoon kaise, roj raat ko main ek haseen khwab dekhti hoon aap peehu ko aloo paratha khila rahe hai,use sula rahe hain aur who aur aap dono mere do taraf hai apke kharate mujhe neend nahi de rahe fir bhi mujhe who chahiye raam in bechain raaton se mujhe ab azadi chahiye'

Apki beti par apko sara pyar lutate hue dekhna chahti hoon, apko use uske jeevan ken nayepan se aur jeene ke tariko se saliko se wakif kara rahe hai ..ye khwab dekhti hoon jo shayad kabhi sach ho paye'..ham dono aap ke majboot bahoon mein simte hain raam is par mera sapna khatam ho jata hai ''.

Peehu ki school mein who drawing mein sab se aage hai, maths aur English use pasand hai aur uski progress boho acchi hai ..teacher kehti hai she is very bright and geneius for her age '.naturally talented 'who toh us ehona hi than a ram aapki beti jo hai'

Peehu mujhe book shop main naye naye idea deti hai ..meri business sense toh thodi week hai, mana ke mrs.ram kapoor hoon lekin chodiye who sab mr.anjaan se meri baat hoti hi rehti hai bataya tha maine apko unse aaye reply bohot acche hote hai ek conversation yahan likh rahi hoon, main bohot hi disturb thi aur akeli mehsus kar rahi thi lekin usne jo reply diya main hairan thi

Main: mr anjaan duniya mein aisa kyun hota jinse ham sabse jyada pyaar karte hain wohi hamse dur jate hai ya halat aise ho jate hai ki hame majboori mein unse alag hona padta hai'..hum jante hai hum unke bina woh hamare bina jinda rahenge lekin jiyenge nahin phir bhi ham kismat ke haton mein hamari dor de kar kathputli ki tarah nachte rehte hai '..maine bhi kuch aisa hi kiya duniya ka who ek insaan jise main apni saans manti hoon chod aayi use uski bhalai ke liye lekin ab main jee toh rahi hoon lekin jinda nahin hoon

Anjaan: dekhiye miss Sharma yehi naam se fan account mein operate karti hai right..main jyada kuch to nahi keh sakta lekin apne jindagi se mile sabak se yahi bata sakta hoon jise bhi aap pyaar karte hain unki khushi ki wajah banana mein hi apko jeene wajah mil jati hai..kisi ko pyaar karne ke liye uska jinda hona uska hamare samne hona ya saath hona mayne nahi rakhta ..jo mayne rakta hai who ye ki jab tak apki saans hai aap uski khusi ek muskurahat ke liye jeeye ..apki jindagi asaan hogi'..jindagi khatam tab hoti hai jab ham apne andar base uss pyaar ko khatam kar dete hai jo hame hamare pyaar se mila hai 'mere andar mere pyaar ne diya hua dher saara pyraar jinda hai aur woh har din badhta jaata hai kyunki main roj uske pyaar mein use khush rakhne ke liye kuch karta hoon'.

Apke paas apki nanhi si beti hai usme apna jahaan pa kar us par ap apne pyaar ka pyaar luta dijiye dekhiye apko bhi apka pyaar mil jayega 'take care apse baat karke accha laga apka naam muje mere jindagi ki sabse ahem insaan ki yaad dilate hai'thanks MISS.SHARMA'..

Ram ye padha toh main bas rone lag gayi is anjaan insaan ne mujhe dost diya hai 'main aaj apko apne andar khushi ke roop mein jinda rakhti hoon bass ye ehssas ke aap mujhse pyaar karte the aur apne mujhe jo pyaar mere dil me diya rakhne ke liye who hamari beti ke liye aur mere liye khushi hi leke ayega'I LOVE MYSELF kyunki aap mujhse pyaar karte hai aur jis se aap pyaar karte ho main us se nafrat nahi kar sakti '''LOVE YOU RAAM
ram peehu ka school bohot acche se ja raha hai aaj usne aisa kuch banaya jise dekh ke mere andar mujhse hi nafrat karne wali priya ka janam hua woh priya jo mehsoos karti hai ke apko chod ke jana wakt aur halat ke hisab se sahi ho lekin iss priya ke pyaar ke hisab se nahi ...raam aaj fathers day celebration tha aur peehu ne uski khudki aur meri red shirt aut jeans mein ek tasveer banayi lekin papa ki jagah usne ek question mark draw kiya...yeh dekh ke aapki priya aaj sach mein mar chuki hai raam ye itna bada jurm maine kar diya ek beti ke jindagi mein uske pita ki jagah sirf ek sawal hai
main woh drawing dekhke kitni mautein mar chuki hoon pata nahi...maine ye kya kardiya ram apko khush rakh paun iss koshish mein maine apke ke hi hisse ko ap se anjaan rakha aur is kadar anjaan ke woh apni jindagi mein apka na hona ek sawal manti hai...pata nahi ram mujhe ab jinda rehne ka hak hai bhi ya nahi...
ram maine peehu ki woh drwning dekhke apko phone kiya tha lekin apka phone kisi ladki ne uthaaya aur usne khud ko mrs.kapoor bataya ..aaj sade teen saal baad maine jab tay karliya tha ke aapko bata dungi ke aapki priya jinda hai aur apki ek beti hai kismat ne phir wahin lake mujhe khada kiya jahan se maine apke pyaar ke nishani ke saath ye safar shuru kiya tha ...soch rahit thi main akeli nahi hoon lekin bhool gayi ke aaj bhi MAIN AUR MERI TANHAYEEE...
Edited by snehalparab - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Once again it was emotional
i'm touched
poor priya...cant seem to bear her pain...
the words just flowed on their own accord...
will say once again you are an amazing writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks...pihu is such a wonderful girl...the whole part beautifully penned down...

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