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sahana747

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

⭐️ Very touching and emptional.Thanx for pm.

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shonuz_mom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

It was fantastic. I had tears in my eyes.

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Cat ke muchi kyun hai who toh girl hai phir mamma apke muchhi kyun nahi hai?

I luaghed when i read this line ..super cute
.yeh dekh ke aapki priya aaj sach mein mar chuki hai raam ye itna bada jurm maine kar diya ek beti ke jindagi mein uske pita ki jagah sirf ek sawal hai

It's just out f the world dear...shuld i say anything more ..Love you fr this..

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lalmadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Amazing update Very good flow of emotions I liked it

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rayaBALH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

fab update yaar di aap ki har update bas dil ko chu jaati hai dont know how u manage to do this every time jst love ur updates n u too😊

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Oh good lord!!
U r awesome... U know that right??? I soo love this writeup.. Read all of it at once and im sitting in offce with tears in my eyes... Lol... That was fab... Totally...

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sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

yaar u r too good

very emotional

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

It's tooo touchy and emotional, every time u write the update u make me cry thousand times in ny heart, I can feel Priyas emotion and her guilt for Ram and Peehu, it was indeed a tanhaiyee, an emptiness that created a void in RaYas love life

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Mani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

u r pro in writing emotional scenes truly 👏

i read thru mobile but cudnt comment

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

snehal reallly u have megic in ur hand OMG... the pain of Peehu for not knowing anything abt her papa... the guilte of Priya who kills her 1000 time a day when she saw Peehu without her father ... omg... was so thouchy so emotinal... & what an end Ram moved on ... Priya left again alone n shattrred... kill my heart... u peened down Peehu's emotions so welll i just loved it it was really awesome... out of the world... do connt soon waiting for next...

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